上海中考英语作文专题指导

上海中考英语作文专题指导一、中考英语作文写作模式——“四审四注意”写作法“四审”：一审标题文体格式。这样可以为下面的写作，如人称、时态、内容、格式等奠定基础；二审人称。如是以第一人称I或we为主还是以第二人称you或第三人称she,he,it或they为主；三审时态。一般而言，写作时文章应多以现在时（包括一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时和现在进行时）或过去时（一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时）为主，切忌时态混乱；四审内容。如有提示，应尽量按照所给提示来写，不可偏题乱发挥，可将有关内容提炼分解成几句展开叙述，不可遗漏，这是很重要的一点，一般文章按who，when，where，what，how，why等要素展开。“四注意”：一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾，一定要写开头结尾。当然，开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一两句即可，结尾要点题，有所立意；二注意句式要富于变化，不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于单调，否则即使无语言和内容错误也难得高分，如可适当运用if,when,although等状语从句，Ithink/Ihope/Ibelievethat等宾语从句，如用定语从句必须有绝对把握；三注意适当运用连接词，如ononehand,ontheotherhand;what’smore;however等，这样使文章更有层次、更富逻辑性，若语言和内容没问题,做到第二、三项“注意”就很有希望拿组织结构分。四注意善于运用有把握的词汇和句型，尽量运用课本所学词句，坚决避免不正确的“中国式英语”，更不能乱“发明”,一般一篇文章能用8个左右的好短语或句式已很不错。最后需要提醒考生的是，中考作文要取得高分,词数不能太少也不能太多,笔者觉得,以80词左右为宜。另外，书写一定要认真、工整，以免造成不必要的失分。二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析1.时态错误2.时间状语错误3.名词单复数错误4.动词误用5.语态错误________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.关于计划Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Myplanforsummerholiday”.（以“我的暑期计划”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下内容供参考)●Whatareyougoingtododuringthecomingsummerholiday?●Giveatleasttwopoints.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.关于朋友Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Mygoodfriend”.（以“我的好朋友”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下内容供参考)●Whoisyourgoodfriend?●Whatdoyouoftendowithhimorher?●Whydoyouregardhimorherasagoodfriend?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.关于写人Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“MyEnglishteacher”.（以“我的英语老师”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下内容供参考)●WhoisyourEnglishteacher?●Doyoulikehimorher?●Whydoyoulikehimorher?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.关于英语Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“IchangedmywaysoflearningEnglish”.（以“我改变了我学习英语的方式”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下内容供参考)●HowdidyoulearnEnglishinthepast?●WhydoyouchangeyourwaysoflearningEnglish?●HowdoyoulearnEnglishnow?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.关于旅行Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Anunforgettabletrip”.(以“一次难忘的旅行”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下内容供参考)●Wheredidyougo?●Whatdidyoudoduringthattrip?●Whydoyouthinkitisunforgettable?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.关于动物Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Myfavouriteanimal”.（以“我最喜欢的动物”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下内容供参考)●What’syourfavouriteanimal?●Whydoyoulikeitsomuch?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10.关于网上购物Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Onlineshoppingischangingthewayofourlife”.（以“网上购物正在改变我们的生活方式”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下内容供参考)●What’syourviewononlineshopping?●Whatareitsadvantagesanddis-advantages?●Pleasegiveoneortwosuggestionstoyourfriendsiftheyloveonlineshopping.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11.关于学科Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Myfavouritesubject”.（以“我最喜欢的学科”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下内容供参考)●What’syourfavouritesubject?●Whydoyoulikeitbest?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12.关于变化Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Changesinmyself”.（以“我的变化”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下问题可供参考）●Haveyouhadanychangesinyourselfsinceyoucametothemiddleschool?●Whicharethemostimportantchanges?(Giveatleast2examples)●Whatdoyouthinkofthechanges?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13.关于节日Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“TheLanternFestival”.（以“元宵节”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下内容供参考）●DoyouliketheLanternFestivalandwhydoyoulikeit?●WhatdopeopleusuallydoontheLanternFestival?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________B.提示性作文每个人都有自己的梦想，努力坚持终能实现。请根据下图及表格中所提供的信息写一篇文章。【要求】1.所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，可适当发挥；2.介绍Tom，谈谈你的梦想并自拟两点实现梦想的途径；3.文章不少于90词；4.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2015年中考英语总复习专项训练题（六）参考范文A.1.HowtolearnEnglishwellEnglishisveryimportantforus.Everyonewantstolearnitwell.Doyouknowhowtolearnitwell?Herearemyways:Firstly,Ilistentotheteacherandmakenotescarefullyinclass.Ireview/goovermyoldlessonsandpreparemynewlessonsafterclass.Secondly,IlikespeakingEnglishwithmyclassmates,notonlyinclassroom,butalsoontheplayground.It’simportanttoimprovemyspokenEnglish.Thirdly,IkeepadiaryeverydaytopractisemywrittenEnglish.Besides,IoftenreadEnglishnewspapersandmagazinesinordertoenrichmyknowledgeonEnglishculture.2.MyinterestIhaveawiderangeofinterestsandenjoydoingmanythingsinmyfreetime.Iamaloverofreading.Ioftenreadinmysparetime.Ireadmanykindsofbooksandnewspaper.Ilikethestoriesandnewsinthemverymuch.Therearealotofknowledgeandinterestingthingsaswell.Iamalsoamusiclover.Ilikeallkindsofmusic.Ioftenlistentothemusicprogrammesonradio.AlthoughIcan’tsingEnglishsongswell,Ilikethemalot.Ilikesportsaswell.Ioftenplaybadmintonafterclassesintheafternoon.Ioftenruninthemorning.WhenIamdoingsports,Iforgetallmytroubleandworry.Ofcourse,sportscanalsohelpmeinbuildingmybody.Inshort,Ienjoymylifehereinschool.Readingbooks,listeningtomusicanddoingsportsareveryhelpfultomyhealthandmystudies.3.UnforgettablememoriesHowtimeflies!Threeyearspassedinablink.Lotsofmemoriesleftinmyhead.Teachers,classmates,hardworkandaboveallfriendshipstayinmind.Lookingback,Ihavegonethrougheitherthejoyofsuccessorthepainsoffailure.Teachersarefriendlytousinlifeandalwaysstrictwithusinstudy.Classmatesandfriendshelpmesomuch.WiththeirhelpI’vemadegreatprogress.ButI’macarelessboy.AndIalwaysmakemistakeswhichcanbeavoided.Seniormiddleschoollifeisanewbeginninganditgivesmeachancetoovercomemyshortcomings.Asitissaid,“Itisnotourabilitiesthatshowwhatwetrulyare,itisourchoice.”Thetwo-monthholidaywillalsoprovidemethefreedomtothinkoverandmakeupmymindtodoitbetterinthefuture.AndIbelieveIcandoit.4.MyplanforsummerholidayThesummerholidayiscoming.Wewillhaveplentyoftimetoenjoyourselves.ButIthinkweshouldplanthetimecarefully.Wehadbettermakealistofallthethingswewishtodoandtryhardtokeepabalancebetweenworkandplay.Intheholidaywecandomanyactivities.Forexample,wecanplaywithfriends.Wecandodifferentsports.Itisalsomeaningfulforustoworkasvolunteers.Besides,wecandosomereading.Itcanhelpgetuspreparedforthenewterm.Ihopeallofuswillhaveawonderfulholiday.5.MygoodfriendIhaveagoodfriend.HernameisSusan.Sheis14yearsold.She’sfromAmerica.She’satallgirlwithblueeyesandshehaslonggoldenhair.Shelikesdoingsports,especiallyswimmingandrunning.Sheenjoysreadingbooksandlisteningtomusic.What’smore,sheisveryinterestedinChinesehistoryandculture.SosheoftenreadsbooksaboutChina.She’slovelyandfriendly.Shegetsonwellwithherfriends.She’salsohelpful.SheoftenhelpsmelearnEnglish.Withherhelp,ImademuchprogressinEnglish.I’mluckytohavesuchagoodfriend.6.MyEnglishteacherOurEnglishTeacherMsHuang,cametoourschooltwoyearsago.ShehasbeenanEnglishteacherformorethan30years.Sheworkshardandhasbeenamodelteacherformanyyears.Sheiskindandfriendlytousafterclass,butsheisratherstrictwithusinclass.ShealwaysencouragesustospeakandreadmoreEnglish.Sheoftensays,“Practicemakesperfect.”Sheisgoodatteachingandtriesherbesttomakeeverylessonlivelyandinteresting.Sheoftengivesusslideshows,teachesusEnglishsongsandhelpsusputonshortEnglishplays.Sheisnotonlyourteacherbutalsoourfriend.Weallrespectandloveher.Tomorrowsheisgoingtoattendanimportantmeeting,atwhichshewillbegivenamedalforheradvanceddeeds.7.IchangedmywaysoflearningEnglishAsaninternationallanguage,Englishplaysagreatcharacterinourlife.Englishhasbecomemoreandmoreimportanttous.Therefore,IchangedmywayoflearningEnglishsothatIcanimprovemyEnglishability.Inthepast,Ididn’tlistentoEnglishnewsoften.SoIchangedit.IbegantolistentoEnglishsongs.AndIlistenedtothewordsofthesongcarefullyinordertolearnmorewords.EverytimewhenImetthewordswhichIdidn’tknow,Iwouldlookeditupinthedictionary.AndIalwaystriedtorememberitafterlookingitup.Afteramonth,IfoundthatIknewmorewordsthanmyclassmates.IusedtowriteasfewwordsasIcould.Nodoubt,Ichangedit.Withthehelpofmyfriendsandmyteacher,Itriedtowritemorearticles.Finally,Isucceeded.ItookupwritingasahobbyandIwillneverforgetit.I’mgladthatIchangedmywayoflearningEnglish.AndeverythingIchangedwillmakememoreandmoreinterestedinEnglish.8.AnunforgettabletripIwenttoChongqinginJuly22.Itisacitywhichwasbuiltnearmountains.SopeoplecallitMountainCity.InChongqing,IwenttotheRedStoneCentre,toseetheplaceswhichtheprisonerslivedinthepast.Itisaterribleandawfultrip.Therewerealotofdogs,andsoldierswithgunsneartheprisons.Andmostoftheprisonersweregoodmen.Theydidn’twanttotellthebadpeoplewheretheotherpeoplewere.Sotheywereputintotheprison.Theylivedinverysmallhouses.Nogoodfoodtoeat,nogoodwatertodrink.Theyhadonlytwentyminutestostayoutsideperdaybuttheystillsaidnothing.Ithinktheyaretheheroesinthatcentury.Iwillfollowtheirspirit.9.MyfavouriteanimalMyfavouriteanimalisdog.Ilikeitbecauseitcanhelppeopleinmanydifferentways.Many,manyyearsago,dogswerealreadypeople’spets.Theylivedincaveswithpeople.Dogswereverygoodhelpers.Theyguardedthecavesandkeptpeoplesafefromdanger.Nowadays,dogsarealsopeople’spets.Butsomepeopleareunkindtotheirdogs.Theydonotlookafterthemandleavetheminthestreet.Weshouldbekindtodogs.Theyareourfriends.Theycanhelpusdomanythings.Theyhelpthepolicecatchthievesandfindmissingpeople.Theyalsohelpblindpeoplecrosstheroadsafely.10.OnlineshoppingischangingthewayofourlifeAsweallknow,onlineshoppinghasbecomemoreandmorepopularamongpeopleespeciallytheyoungpeople.WecanbuynearlyeverythingontheInternet.Inmyview,onlineshoppinghasalreadychangedthewayofourlife.PeopletendtosurftheInternettobuywhattheyneed.Ithinktheadvantageofonlineshoppingisitsconvenience.Peopleonlysitinthesoftandclickthemouseathometobuywhattheywant.Itcansavepeoplealotoftimeandmoney.Thedisadvantageisthatonlineshoppingisnotalwayssafe.Sometimesyourprivateinformationwillbeletout.Soifyouloveonlineshopping,pleasebecarefulwithyourpersonalinformationandthewebsitesothatyoucanbenefitfromonlineshopping.11.MyfavouritesubjectEnglishismyfavouritesubjectbecauseEnglishisusedwidelyintheworld,especiallyinShanghai,acitywithsomanyforeigners.What’smore,IlikeitbecausemyEnglishteacheriskindandfriendlytome.InordertolearnEnglishwell,IreadEnglishaloudeverymorningandlistentotheteachercarefullyinclass.Afterclass,IoftenwatchEnglishprogrammesandkeepanE