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ENGLISHWRITING第1页大体思路第2页细节选材第3页1）name

birthday（age）

looks（hair、eyes、stature。。。）2）朋友：meet名人：family

background、事迹3）common／different4）未来（be

going

to）5）总结写作提要第4页Acompositiontodescribeapersonappearancefigureheighteyes/nose/mouthpersonalitysaninterestingthingbetweenyouandthatpersonyourfirstimpressionabouthim/her第5页WRITEYOURFIRSTIMPRESSIONSABOUTHIMGood/bad?Doeshe/shemakeyouhappy?Doeshe/sheisthefriendyouwant?Doyouwanthim/hertobeyourfriend?Includehim/her第6页FIRST,HIS/HERAPPEARANCE(外貌）APPEARANCE(外貌）1.figure（身材）：fat/thinstrong/thinHewasfullofmeat,fatlikeagyroscope

他满身是肉，胖像个陀螺。

2.height（高矮）：tall/short3.Facialfeatures（五官）：nose、eyes、mouth（big/small)

第7页SECOND,

HIS/HERPERSONALITY(性格）outgoing（外向）/easygoing(脾气随和)Talkative(健谈）/seldomspeak（极少说话）Sporty（爱运动）/lazy（懒惰）第8页

THIRD,ANINTERESTINGTHING

Remember!!Thethingyouchoosemustbeveryspecial,uniqueandmemorable!第9页当然！别忘了多利用高级（好）句式～1）My

best

friend

was

my（best

man、classmate。。。）2）We

had

a

fantastic

time

touring（doing

sth.)NorthandSouthAmerica.3）定语从句4）结尾

Iamveryluckythatheismybestfriend.Whenwearetogether,wehaveareallygoodtime.第10页HIGH-CLASSWRITING(高逼格范文)

Friendship

plays

an

important

role

in

my

life.

My

friend,

Tina

who

is

12

years

old

is

such

an

important

person

in

my

life.

I

love

her

very

much.第11页Although

we

are

good

friends,

we

don’t

have

much

in

common.

I

am

quiet

while

she

is

outgoing,

that’s

why

she

likes

taking

part

in

different

kinds

of

activities

and

has

made

a

lot

of

friends.

Besides,

she

is

a

more

helpful

and

considerate

girl

than

me.

Whenever

I

have

trouble,

she

would

be

very

pleased

to

help

me

and

always

consider

more

about

what

I

think.

第12页

I

do

appreciate

having

such

a

good

friend

whom

I

can

learn

a

lot

from.

A

true

friend

can

really

help

y