2024届高考英语复习读后续写练习：在干旱天气中突然遇到了暴风雨

高考英语读后续写语篇练习在干旱天气中突然遇到了暴风雨1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文MotherandIspentmorningscleaningupthedirtthatblewintoourhouse.Mothersaidallthedustwasduetothedrought,notonlyhereinourvillagebutallovertheGreatPlains.Thedirtcoveredeverything.Whenmysister,Amy,andIwalkedtoschool,weworekerchiefs(方头巾)overourmouthssothatwedidn'tbreatheinthedirt.Whentheairqualitywassobadthattheschoolwasclosed,westayedathomeandhelpedMotherputwetsheetsoverthewindows,butthedirtalwaysfoundawayin.LastSunday,therewasnodirtintheair,onlybrightsunshineandaclearbluesky.Afterbreakfast,FatherheadedouttothefarmtocheckonthecattlewhileMotherstarteddoingsomewashing.AmyandIplayedintheyard.Surprisingly,thetemperaturesuddenlydropped.ThenMothershoutedfromthehouse,“Christine,youandAmygetinside,quick,now！”Ilookedtowardsthewestandsawahugeblackcloud.Allthebirdsflewaway.“Amy,gowithMother！”Ishouted，“I'llwarnFather.”4续写原文Amyrantowardsthehouse.Thestormhitsofast,andIbarelysawherclimbthesteps.Inaninstantthedayturnedintonight.Istumbled(绊倒)overourbicyclesleftcarelesslyintheyard.Iscreamed,hopingmyvoicewouldleadFatherback.Thedirtandsandstung(刺痛)myskinlikeathousandbees.Ineededtogettoashelter.Coveringmyfacewithonehand,Imovedtowardsourcarwhichwasparkedintheyardandopenedthedoor.DirtflewinwithmeasIclosedthedoor.Fatherwasstilloutthere!Ineededtohelphimfindthecar.Isearchedthedashboard(仪表板)andfoundtheswitchforthefrontlights.WouldFatherseetheminthedarkness?Washesafe?Ipushedthehorn(喇叭)againandagain,hopingFatherwouldhearit.IpusheduntilIhadnomorestrengthinmyarms.5段首句Para1：Suddenly,Father'sfaceappearedatthewindow.

Para2：Finally,thewindstoppedandthedustbegantosettle.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以天气为线索展开，作者描述了家乡充满灰尘的干旱天气以及暴风雨突然来临时的场景。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Suddenly,Father'sfaceappearedatthewindow.由第一段首句内容“突然，父亲的脸出现在窗口。”可知，第一段可描写作者、父亲以及家人在暴风雨来临时的处境。10续写思路分析Para2：Finally,thewindstoppedandthedustbegantosettle.由第二段首句内容“最后，风停了，灰尘也开始沉淀下来。”可知，第二段可描写风停后家人的团聚。11续写思路分析续写线索父亲进来——询问家人——等待——风停——团聚——自豪12续写素材可用词汇：行为类出现：appeared/turnup到达：reachedthefrontdoor/getto/arrive哭：cried/burstintotears情绪类因为……而自豪：beproudof/takepridein13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Fatherkickedagainstthedoor,openingittoletusout.（句中运用现在分词作伴随状语）[高分句型2]WereachedthefrontdoorjustasMotherandAmycameoutofthehouse.（句中运用as引导的时间状语从句）[高分句型3]Tearsofjoyrolleddownmycheeksbecauseourfamilyhadsurvivedthehorriblestorm.（because引导原因状语从句）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Suddenly,Father'sfaceappearedatthewindow.Iwassurprisedandfeltrelief.Heopenedthedoorandsatnexttome.Hecoughedandwipedhiseyeswithdirtyhands.Thenhepulledmeintohisarms,saying,“Oh,Christine,I'mhappyyou'resafe！”Icouldfeelthetearsrollingdownmydirtycheeks.“WhereareyourmotherandAmy？”“They'reinthehouse，”Isaid.Fatherturnedoffthecar'slightsandwewaitedinthecarforhours.16范文呈现Finally,thewindstoppedandthedustbegantosettle.Dirtpiledupagainstthecarwindows.Fatherkickedagainstthedoor,openingittoletusout.WereachedthefrontdoorjustasMotherandAmycameoutofthehouse.“Youandyourfatheraresafe！”Mothercried.“I'msafethankstoChristine，”Fathersaid.“I'msoproudofher.”Tearsofjoyrolleddownmycheeksbecauseourfamilyhadsurvivedthehorriblestorm.17范文译文突然，父亲的脸出现在窗户边。我很惊讶，也松了一口气。他打开门，坐在我旁边。他咳嗽着，用脏手擦了擦眼睛。然后他把我拉到怀里，说：“哦，克莉丝汀，我很高兴你安全！”我能感觉到眼泪顺着我脏兮兮的脸颊滚落。“你妈妈和艾米在哪里？”“他们在房子里，”我说。父亲关掉了车灯，我们在车里等了几个小时。18范文译文最后，风停了，灰尘开始沉淀下来。车窗上积满了泥土。父亲踢开车门，打开车门让我们出去。就在母