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骨骼—段落

灵魂—主题

血肉—套路

外衣—修辞作文第1页套路/模板

命题形式1：对比观点题型题型总结1）有人以为……;有人以为……;我以为……。2）提出一种现象；不一样见解（有人以为……;有人以为……）;我观点……第2页模板1Nowadays,it’sgenerallyacceptedamongsomepeoplethat_______________(引出一种观点)__________________.Theybelieve_____________(原因)______________.Forinstance,__________________(举例说明)__________________.However,othersbelieveinthemselves.Theythink_________________-(另一种观点)_________.Although__________________,theydonot____________________,fortheybelievethat_________(原因)_____________.Asforme,I’minfavoroftheformer/latteropinion.Because_______________________,weshould____________________.Inaword,___________________.第3页模板2

Whetherornot_____________________haslongbeenadebatabletopic.Todaymanypeoplechooseto_____________________________(引出一种观点)_____________________,fortheythinkthat_________________________(原因)__________________.Buttherearesomeoppositeopinions.Theybelievethattheadvantagesof____________________________outweighalldisadvantagesand_____________________(另一种观点)____________.Themainreasontheythinksoisthat_____________________________(原因)__________________.Anotherreasonisthat____________________________.Inmyopinion,___________________________________.Inthelongrun,____________________________,therefore,_______________(作者观点)_____________.第4页命题形式2：处理办法题型

导言：描述现状、形式、困难，提出问题.

办法：列举说明处理某事方式或处理途径（how为写作重点）.

评价、提议或个人选择。第5页模板1

Withthedevelopmentof___________(问题出现背景),moreandmorepeopleareconcernedabout______________________________/_____isbecomingmoreandmoreimportant.。Soitisofgreatimportanceforusto_______(提出问题)。Ontheonehand,_______（必要性或后果一）。Ontheotherhand,_______（必要性或后果二）。To_______,wehavefiguredoutmanywaysto_______(提出处理措施)。First,__________.Second,_________.Finally,_______.Inaword,________(总结上文)。Tosumup,__________(重申主题)。Itishightimeforusto_________深入强调主题）。Therefore,__________(总结全文)。第6页模板2Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceaproblemthat________________________.Peoplehavefiguredoutmanywaystosolvethisproblem.Firstly________________.Secondly,_____________isanothermeans.Butitalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Ontheonehand,______________.Ontheotherhand,________________.Allinall,thesolutionsmaynotbringtheperfectresult,butaslongaswedoitwithourbrainsandhands,wewillonedayresolvetheproblem.第7页命题形式3：说明利弊题型

模板１：NowadaysmanypeoplepreferA.becauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generallyitsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First,____________________.Besides,_____________________.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat______________.Tomakemattersworse,________________________.Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo________________________________.第8页模板２

Withthedevelopmentofscienceandhumancivilization,manyformerlyunimaginablethingscomeintoreality.Someofthemhavepositiveeffectsonourlife,butsomearedistasteful.Thephenomenonof___________________________isanexampleoftheformer/latterones.Therearemanyfactorsthatmayaccountforit,andthefollowingarethemosttypicalones.First,______________________.Inthesecondplace,__________________________________.Eventually,____________________________________________________________.Thenegativeeffectsonourlifecouldbeseeninseveralways,too.Theapparentexampleisthat______________________________________.Inaddition,_______________.Onthewhole,thephenomenonisoneoftheresultsoftheprogressofthemodernsociety.Thereisstillalongwayforustoimprove_______________________________andmakeourlifemorecomfortable.第9页命题形式4：图表说明题

曲线图（linechart）饼壮图（piechart）柱状图(barchart)图表图(table)第一段：图表描述：所揭示某种社会现象变化发展情况第二段：原因或本源第三段：结论或评述第10页模板1：（两图表进行对比）Thefigureofthefirstgraph/chart/tableshowsthat________________________.Whilethefigureofthesecondgraphshowsthat_____________________________.Therelationshipbetweenthesetwofigureswarnsusthat_____________________.However,therearemanyeffectivemethodsto_____________________________.Forexample,____________________.Atthesametime,__________________________.Inaword,_____________________________.Givenallthesepointsabove,Ithinkthat_______________________________________.第11页模板2:（新事物出现）

Fromthegraph,weknowthestatisticsof_____________________and_________________________.Itcanbeseeneasilythat________________________.Therearemanyreasonsresponsiblefortheinstance,andthefollowingarethetypicalones.Foronething,__________________________.Inaddition,_______________________.Themainreasonisthat__________________________.Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthetrend,andsomeundesiredresultmaycomeoutunexpectedly.Sowhatweshoulddois____________________________.第12页模板3:(发生变化)Itcanbeseenfromthetable/graph/chartthat___________________.Especially,______________.Whyaretheresuchgreatchangesduring_____years?Therearemainlytworeasonsexplaining____