江苏省苏州市江苏省外国语学校2023-2024学年高二上学期期初检测英语试题Word版含答案含听力音频及听力原文

第第页江苏省苏州市江苏省外国语学校2023-2024学年高二上学期期初检测英语试题（Word版含答案，含听力音频及听力原文）江苏省外国语学校2023-2024学年高二上学期期初检测

英语科试题

第一部分听力(共两节，满分30分)

第一节(共5小题;每小题1.5分，满分7.5分)

听下面5段对话每段对话后有一个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。

1.Whatwillthemando

A.Sendanemail.B.Callbacklater.C.Leaveamessage.

2.Whendoesthewomanliketoclimbthehill

A.Inthewinter.B.Inthespring.C.Inthesummer.

3.Whatisthemandoing

A.Doingbackmovements.B.Doingexercisesforhisstomach.

C.Watchingthenewexerciseprogram.

4.Whatistheconversationmainlyabout

A.Cleaningtheroom.B.Buyingschoolsupplies.C.Clearingupaschoolbag.

5.Whatdoesthewomansuggestthemando

A.Studyhard.B.Seeadoctor.C.Findapart-timejob.

第二节听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。

听第6段材料，回答第6、7题。

6.Whoisthewoman

A.Awriter.B.Asinger.C.Ateacher.

7.Whathappenedduringtheconcert

A.Theaudienceshoutedloudly.B.Theperformancewasstopped.C.Allthelightswentoutsuddenly.

听第7段材料，回答第8、9题。

8.What’swrongwiththewoman’scomputer

A.Itrunstooslow.B.Ithasabrokenscreen.C.Itcan’tbeusedtotypeatall.

9.Whatwillthemandotomorrowmorning

A.Haveameeting.B.Fixthecomputer.C.Buyaringforthewoman.

听第8段材料，回答第10至12题。

10.Whoisinameetingnow

A.Helen.B.Mr.Smith.C.Mr.Green.

11.Whatisthebuildingacrossfromthespeakers

A.Theofficeblock.B.Thestorehouse.C.Theproductionarea.

12.Whenwasthenewproductionequipmentcompleted

A.Twomonthsago.B.Onemonthago.C.Halfamonthago.

听第9段材料，回答第13至16题。

13.WhowrotetocongratulateJonas

A.Madonna.B.Hiscollegeteacher.C.Madonna’sPRcompany.

14.WherewasMadonnaborn

A.InWashingtonD.C.B.InNewYork.C.InDetroit.

15.WhatdoweknowaboutMadonna’smother

A.Shediedofdisease.B.Shewasanengineer.C.Shetaughtpianolessons.

16.WhathappenedtoMadonnain1978

A.Sheleftcollege.B.Shegotascholarship.C.Shehadasuccessfulcareer.

听第10段材料，回答第17至20题。

17.Whoistheaudienceforthisspeech

A.Adultsintheworkplace.B.Kindergartenstudents.C.Highschoolstudents.

18.Accordingtothespeech,whataremostdriverstodaylike

A.Careful.B.Young.C.Experienced.

19.Whichstateisimprovingthedrivinglaws

A.NewYork.B.California.C.Massachusetts.

20.WhoisJoeyBanks

A.Awell-knownstoryteller.B.Thepersongivingthespeech.C.Ateenagerwhogotinanaccident.

第二部分阅读（共两节，满分50分）

第一节（共15小题：每小题2.5分，满分37.5分）

阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。

A

AsanoldsayinginChinagoes,“ThedaysoftheSanjiuperiodarethecoldestdays.”“Sanjiuperiod”,whichisinMinorCold,referstothethirdnine-dayperiod(thel9thtothe27thday)afterthedayoftheWinterSolstice(冬至).TherearemanydifferentcustomsrelatedtoMinorColdinChina.

Eatinghotpot

DuringMinorColdpeopleshouldeatsomehotfoodtobenefitthebodyanddefendagainstthecoldweather.Winteristhebesttimetohavehotpotandbraisedmuttonwithsoysauce.Butitisimportanttonoticethattoomuchspicyfoodmaycausehealthproblems.

Eatinghuangyacai

InTianjin,thereisacustomtohavehuangyacai,akindofChinesecabbage,duringMinorCold.TherearelargeamountsofvitaminsAandBinhuangyacai.Ashuangyacaiisfreshandtender,itisfitforfrying,roastingandbraising.

Eatingglutinousrice(糯米饭)

Accordingtotradition,theCantoneseeatglutinousriceinthemorningduringMinorCold.Cantonesepeopleaddsomefriedpreservedpork,sausagesandpeanutsandmixthemintotherice.

Eatingvegetablerice

Inancienttimes,peopleinNanjingtookMinorColdquiteseriously,butastimewentby,thecelebrationofMinorColdgraduallydisappeared.However,thecustomofeatingvegetablericeisstillfollowedtoday.Thericeissteamedandisunspeakablydelicious.Amongtheingredients(原料),aijiaohuang(akindofgreenvegetable),sausagesandsaltedduckarethespecialtiesinNanjing.

21.WhatdoweknowaboutMinorCold

A.ItreferstotheWinterSolstice.B.TheSanjiuperiodisinthisperiod.

C.Itlaststwenty-sevendays.D.Itmarksthefirstdayofwinter.

22.HowdotheCantoneseeatglutinousrice

A.Theyfryandtoastit.B.Theyeatitfordinner.

C.Theymixitwithmanyotherthings.D.Theysteamitwithsoysauce.

23.Thistextmaybetakenfromthe________column(栏目)ofanewspaper.

A.travelB.cultureC.fashionD.science

B

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,IwasonafamilyvacationinWashingtonDC.Ifoundtherewasahomelessmandownthestreet.

Onourfinaldayinthecity,whenmyparentswentforaneveningwalk,Iwentoutofourhotelroomandrandownthestreettothehomelessman.

Helookedatme,surelynotexpectinganythingfromamiddleschoolgirl.Iaskedhimwhathewantedtohavefordinner.Hereplied"Breadandwater".Iranintothestoreandboughtabigbagofbreadandabottleofwater.Iranbackwithasmileonmyfaceandhandedthebagandthebottletohim.Hissmilehasbeeninmymindeversince.

Icamebacktothehotelroomandwhenmyparentsreturned,mydadtoldmehehadastoryforme.HeaskedifIrememberedthehomelessmandownthestreetfromourhotelandIshylynodded.Hethentoldmeastory.Astheywerereturningfromtheirwalk,theysawthehomelessmanwassharingabagfulloffoodwithotherhomelesspeoplearound.Theywereallsmilingandlaughingastheyate.

IsmiledatmydadbutIhavenevertoldhimtothisdaytheotherhalfofthestory.Tilltoday,Istillhaven'tforgottenthatman'ssmilebutIwishIhadthecouragetodothismoreoften.Onesmallkindactioncanbeginarippleeffect(连锁反应)ofkindness.Soplease，shareasmileanddosomethingkindforthepeopleinneed.

24.WhydidtheauthorgotoWashingtonDC

A.Tovisitherparents.B.Togoonavacation.

C.Todosomeshopping.D.Tomeetwithfriends.

25.Whentheauthorwenttoseethehomelessman,herparents________________

A.werehavingawalkB.werestayinginthehotel

C.hadgonebackhomeD.wereinafoodstore

26.Itcanbeinferredfromthepassagethat_________________

A.homelessmenusuallyliveahappylifeB.theauthor'sfatherwasproudofher

C.theauthorkeptasecrettoherparentsD.theauthorwaspaidbackbythehomelessman

27.Thestoryinspiresthereadersto_______

A.helpthoseinneedB.seekfortheirdreams

C.valuewhattheyhaveD.facedifficultiesbravely

C

In1969,watchingthelandingofApollo11ontheMoononTVfromhisparents’farminCanada,ChrisHadfieldwasamazedandexcited.Onthatday,atonlynineyearsold,Chrismadethemostimportantdecisionofhislife:Hewasgoingtobeanastronaut.

Therewasn’tevenatrainingprograminCanadatobecomeanastronaut;butChriswasdetermined.Hespentagreatdealoftimestudyingandfixingengines.AfterschoolhejoinedtheCanadianarmywherehelearnedtoflymanydifferenttypesofplanes.ChrisdidalotofresearchfortheNationalAeronauticsandSpaceAdministration(NASA)intheUnitedStatesandhadspecialtraining.Finally,in1995,herodehisfirstrocketintospace.

ChrisbecamethefirstCanadianastronauttowalkinspace,andwentonanumberofspacemissionsthroughouthiscareer.Themostmemorablewashisfive-monthstayontheInternationalSpaceStation(ISS)ascommander,betweenDecember2023andMay2023.HepostedonsocialmediathousandsofphotosofEarthandvideosofhimselfexplaininghowthingsworkinzerogravity.Hisfollowerscouldwatchhimsleeping,brushinghisteeth,washinghishands,orpreparing“space”snacksinzerogravity,whichturnedhimintoasocialmediaphenomenon.

Today,Christravelstheworldgivingtalksabouthiswork.Heoncesaid,“Decideinyourheartofheartswhatreallyexcitesandchallengesyou,andstartmovingyourlifeinthatdirection.Everydecisionyoumake,fromwhatyoueattowhatyoudowithyourtimetonight,turnsyouintowhoyouaretomorrow.Lookatwhoyouwanttobe,andstartsculptingyourselfintothatperson.Youmaynotgetexactlywhereyouthoughtyou’dbe,butyouwillbedoingthingsthatsuityouinaprofessionyoubelievein.Don’tletliferandomlykickyouintotheadultyoudon’twanttobecome.

28.WhatledChristomakeuphismindtobeanastronaut

A.Thelifeonhisparents’farm.B.Hisabilitytoflyvariousplanes.

C.Apollo11’slandingontheMoon.D.Hispassionforstudyingengines.

29.WhichofthefollowingwasbestworthrememberingaboutChris’career

A.ServingintheCanadianarmy.B.WorkingascommanderontheISS.

C.ReceivingalotoftrainingfromtheNASA.D.BeingthefirstCanadianastronauttowalkinspace.

30.WhatmadeChrispopularinthemedia

A.Thespacetasksheconductedinhislife.B.Thepicturesandvideoshepostedonline.

C.Hisstrongdeterminationtopursuehisdream.D.HisgreatcontributionstoCanada’sspaceindustry.

31.WhatcanwelearnfromChris’wordsinthelastparagraph

A.Courageiswhatittakestoovercomedifficulties.B.Opportunitiesgohandinhandwithchallenges.

C.Fromsmallbeginningscomegreatendings.D.Thesecretofsuccessliesinthefirmaim.

D

Pressyourfingersintothebackofyourhead,justaboveyourneck.Ifyoufeelasmallbonybump(突起),youmayfindevidenceofhumanevolution(进化):itcouldbeyourbodyrespondingtocommonsmartphoneuseinthe21stcentury.

Accordingtoarecentstudy,publishedinScientificReports,moreyoungpeoplehavebonybumpsatthebaseoftheirskulls,rightabovetheneck.Medicalprofessionalscallthemenlargedexternaloccipitalprotuberances(EEOPs,枕外隆突).

AustralianhealthscientistDavidShahar,theauthorofthestudy,toldtheBBCthathe’sseenmoreandmorepatientswithEEOPsoverthepasttenyears.TogetherwithotherresearchersfromtheUniversityoftheSunshineCoast,Australia,theyexamined1,200skullx-raysfrompeopleaged18–30.Theyalsomeasuredthebumpsandnotedeachperson’sposture.Theyfoundthatoneinfourpeoplehaddevelopedthesegrowths.Thisledtotheirtheorythatsmartphonesarethecause.

Accordingtotheirresearch,lookingdownatourphonesaddsstressontothetopofourspines(脊柱).Topreventdamagetoourspines,Shaharbelievesourbodiesaddfreshbonybumptohelpreducetheextrastress.

MostoftheEEOPsmeasuredjustafewmillimeters.However,severalsubjectswerefoundwithEEOPsaslargeas30mm.

Inhisreport,Shaharsaidtheresults“highlightedtheneed”forprevention.Inotherwords,weneedtochangeourposturewhileusingourphones.

Manypeopleassumeourbonesaresolidandunmovingoncewereachadulthood.Inreality,theyarealiveandcoveredwithbloodvessels(血管),whichallowsthemtodevelopinuniquewaysforeachperson.

AsidefromEEOPs,othernoticeablerecentchangesinhumanbodiesincludeshrinkingjaws,narrowerelbowsandgenerallysmallerskeletons.Thehumanbodyisadaptingtomodernlife,sowhoknowswhatpeopleinthefuturemightlooklike

32.WhatdidtherecentstudyfindaboutEEOPs

A.Theygrowonone’sneck.B.Theycanleadtomanyhealthproblems.

C.Theymaystopgrowingwhenyoureach30.D.Theyoccuramongmoreandmoreyoungpeople.

33.WhatisthemaincauseofEEOPsaccordingtotheresearchers

A.Extrastress.B.Agingbones.C.Geneproblems.D.Smartphoneuse.

34.WhichofthefollowingwouldShaharprobablyagreewith

A.EEOPsareactuallybeneficialtoourspines.

B.EEOPsincreasethestressonourspines.

C.Youngpeople’sbonesadaptinsimilarways.

D.Youngpeopleshouldexercisetoimprovetheirposture.

35.What’sthewritingpurposeofthetext

A.Topersuadereaderstoprotecttheirspines.

B.Toshowsomerecentchangesinhumanbodies.

C.ToexplainwhyhumanbodiesdevelopEEOPs.

D.Torecommendsomehealthyhabitsofusingphones.

第二节（共5小题：每小题2.5分。满分12.5分）

阅读下面短文，从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。

Ifyoudonotuseyourarmsoryourlegsforsometime,theybecomeweak;whenyoustartusingthemagain,theyslowlybecomestrongagain.Everybodyknowsthis,andnobodywouldthinkofquestioningthisfact.

____11____Whensomeonesaysthathehasagoodmemory,hereallymeansthathekeepshismemoryinpracticebyexercisingitregularly,eitherconsciouslyorunconsciously.Whensomeoneelsesaysthathismemoryispoor,hereallymeansthathedoesnotgiveitenoughopportunitytobecomestrong.____12____Oneofthemexerciseshisarmsandlegsbyplayingtennis,whiletheothersitsinachairoramotorcarallday.

Ifafriendcomplainsthathisarmsareweak,weknowthatitishisownfault.Butifhetellsusthathehasapoormemory,manyofusthinkthathisparentsaretoblame,orthatheisjustunlucky,andfewofusrealizethatitisjustasmuchhisownfaultasifitwashisarmsorlegsthatwereweak.____13____Butallofuscan,ifwehaveordinarybodiesandbrains,improveourstrengthandourmemorybythesamemeans—practice.

Haveyouevernoticedthatpeoplewhocannotreadorwriteusuallyhavebettermemoriesthanthosewhocan____14____It'sbecausethosewhocannotreadorwritehavetorememberthings.Theycannotwritethemdowninalittlenotebookandtheyhavetorememberdates,timeandprices,names,songsandstories,sotheirmemoryisbeingexercisedthewholetime____15____

A．Whyisthis

B．Whatdoyouthinkofit

C．Someoneelsesaysthatheispoorinhealth.

D．Thepositionisexactlythesameasthatoftwopeople.

E．Soifyouwantagoodmemory,practiceremembering.

F．Notallofuscanbecomeextremelystrongorextremelyclever.

G．Yetmanypeopledonotseemtoknowthatthememoryworksinthesameway.

第三部分语言运用（共两节，满分30分）

第一节（共15小题：每小题1分，满分15分）

阅读下面短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。

MyparentsannouncedIwasgettingmyownroom.Iwassoexcited._41_,mynewbedroomwasdowninthedarkbasement,andbasementsarescaryplaceswhenyou’reonlyfiveyearsold.SoIwasalittle_42__untilIknewmygrandmotherwouldlivenexttome.She__43__completelyandofferedtoletmesleepwithher.

Itworkedoutwellforbothofusforawhile.Icouldeven_44_thathersnoring(打鼾)waslovely.Butsoonmyparents_45_,andtheywerenothappy.Theywantedmetolearnto_46bymyself.Ofcourse,Iscreamedandthrewtempertantrums(使性子).Itdidn’t_47.Atlast,Iwentbacktomyownroom.However,Iwasfearful.SowhenI_48_myparentshadfallenasleep,IgotupandwalkedasquietlyasIcouldintoGrandma’sbedroom.

Inthemorning,Grandmashookmeawakeandsaid_49__thatIneededtogetbacktomyroombeforemyparentsgotup.IranbacktomyroomjustintimeasIheard__50__upstairs.Mywonderfulgrandmother_51__mewhilewelivedthere.She52_topatientlywakemeupeverymorningtogobacktomyownbed.Becauseofher,Ineverhadtosleepbymyself.

Ayearlater,wemovedtoadifferenthouse.MymomtoldmethatIwould__53__aroomwithmygrandmother.Iwas_54__!MomsaidIdidn’thavetogotosleep_55__withGrandmaanymore.

41.A.ObviouslyB.UnfortunatelyC.BasicallyD.Thankfully

42.A.puzzledB.curiousC.worriedD.ashamed

43.A.refusedB.understoodC.agreedD.hesitated

44.A.suspectB.explainC.considerD.forget

45.A.gaveupB.keptawayC.brokedownD.foundout

46.A.playB.exerciseC.liveD.sleep

47.A.workB.endC.passD.matter

48.A.confirmedB.declaredC.admittedD.remembered

49.A.confidentlyB.regretfullyC.softlyD.repeatedly

50.A.operationB.movementC.argumentD.situation

51.A.savedB.appreciatedC.adoptedD.challenged

52.A.continuedB.promisedC.longedD.pretended

53.A.decorateB.matchC.shareD.reserve

54.A.calmB.embarrassedC.disappointedD.overjoyed

55.A.speciallyB.flexiblyC.fearfullyD.secretly

第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

Itis(56)(advice)torememberthatjournalistsmayhavedifferentpriorities,(57)wouldinfluencehowtheyreportanevent.Let’stakethetwonewsreportsontheHendersonTowerfire(58)anexample.Wecanseethatthefirstnewsreportpaysmoreattentiontotherescueefforts,(59)thesecondtalksmoreaboutdeathsandinjuries.Whenwereadmorethanonereport,wecometounderstandaneventina(60)(comprehensive)way.

Evenifnewsreportsarewrittenfrombasicallythesameperspective,theymaycontradicteachotherintermsoffactualdetails,aseventsintherealworldareusuallycomplicatedand(61)(constant)changing.Whenwecomeacross(62)(fact)differences,weshouldnotrushtotheconclusionthatoneofthenewsreportsgivesfalseinformation.(63),checkwhenthereportswerewritten.Newsreportswrittenatdifferentstagesofaneventcouldcontaindifferentinformationasnewfactsarebroughttolight.Anotheraspect(64)(worth)ofmentionisthatjournalistsmayapproachinformationtheygetfromresearchorinterviewsdifferently.Supposeemergencyservices’estimatesofthenumberofdeathsvarybetween5and9,journalistsmaychoosetopresenttheminimum,themaximumorsomethinginbetweenintheirnewsreports.Therefore,(65)(check)differentsourcesenablesustodrawamoreinformedconclusion.

第四部分写作（共两节、满分40分）

第一节（满分15分）

56.假如你是李华，你所在的城市要举行运动会，组委会现征集志愿者。请给组委会负责人王先生写一封信，申请成为一名志愿者。要点如下：

1.个人情况；

2.为什么申请当志愿者；

3.你将如何当好这个志愿者。

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；

3.开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearMr.Wang，

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.

Yours,

LiHua

第二节（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I’dhadaratherstressfuldayatwork.Itdidn’thelpthatI’dalsohadanotherargumentwithmyteenageddaughterthatmorning.BythetimeIarrivedhome,Ieagerlyanticipated（期盼）gettingmyeveningwalktoclearmymind.ItwasgettingcloudierandIcouldtellthatrainwascoming.Noproblem.Iwouldbehomelongbeforetheliquidsunshinefell.

Theintensewalkworkedoffmuchofmyenergy.Islowedmypace,butaquickglancedownshockedme.ThecutestJackRussellTerrierhadappearedoutofnowhereandwaskeepingpacebesideme.Iknelttopether,delightedtodiscoverthatherearsweresosoftthatsheremindedmeofmychildhooddog.ShehadthesamecoloringasLucky—whitewithalargeblackspotonherbackandside,brownface,andwhitenose.

“Wheredidyoucomefrom,littleone”Shewasnotwearingacollaroridentificationtags.IrememberedseeingaTerrierwhenIdroveintotheneighborhoodafewhoursearlier.Ithaddarted（突然行进）intothestreetinfrontofmycar,butIhadassumedshelivedinthearea.Shemustbethesamedog.

Icontinuedmywalk,thinkingshewouldfindherwayhomeonherown.Thelittlestraycontinuedtokeeppace,walkingnexttomeasifwewereage-oldcompanions.WhenIlookedaround,Iwasnotsurprisedthat,otherthanthedog,Iwasaloneonthisdreary（沉闷的）night.Theskyhadalreadydarkened.Iwasworried.IfIleftheroutthere,shemightbehitbyacar.IwonderedifIshouldjusttakeherhome.

Thetimingwasironic（讽刺的）.Mysixteen-year-olddaughter,Megan,wantedanotherpet.Ourfamilydog,Daisy,hadslowedconsiderablyinheroldage,andMeganhopedwewouldadoptayounger,livelierdog.Wehadresistedherrequests,sinceshewouldbeleavingforcollegeinacoupleofyears.Besides,MeganandIhadnotexactlyseeneye-to-eyeearlierthatday.Ididn’twantittoseemasifIwasrewardingherafteryetanotherargument.

Theheavensopeningandrainpouring,Imademydecision.Theneighborofferedtogivemeaspareleash（遛狗绳）,andIacceptedgratefully.江苏省外国语学校2023-2024学年高二上学期期初检测

英语科试题

参考答案

听力：1—5BABCA6—10BCAAC11—15BACCA16—20ACBBC

阅读：21-23BCB24-27BACA28-31CBBD27-30DDAC

七选五：36-40GDFAE

完形填空：41-55BCBCDDAACBAACDD

语法填空：

56.advisable57.which58.as59.while60.morecomprehensive

61.constantly62.factual63.Instead64.worthy65.checking

应用文写作：

DearMr.Wang,

MynameisLiHua,ahighschoolstudentinourcity.Knowingthatthesportsmeetingwillbeheldinourcity,Ican’twaittowritetoyoutoapplytobeavolunteer.

Asasportslover,Ihaveageneralideaoftherulesofdifferentevents.Inaddition,Iamalsogoodatcommunicatingwithothersandeagertolendahandtopeopleinneed.Withthespiritofvoluntaryworkrootedinmyheart,IamsurethatIcanbeaqualifiedvolunteeryouneed.IfIamhonoredenoughtobeacceptedasavolunteer,Iwillservetheplayersheartandsoul.

Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.

Yours,

LiHua

应用文写作解析

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为一名志愿者。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文人称：第一人称为主时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时结构：总分法

要点：1.个人情况；2.为什么申请当志愿者；3.你将如何当好这个志愿者。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

ahighschoolstudent；thesportsmeeting；can’twaitto；applyto；volunteer；ageneralidea；events；inaddition；begoodat；communicatewith；beeagerto；lendahand；inneed；rootin；qualified；honoredenough；heartandsoul；lookforwardto；hearfrom等

第三步：连词成句

1.MynameisLiHua,ahighschoolstudentinourcity.

2.Knowingthatthesportsmeetingwillbeheldinourcity,Ican’twaittowritetoyoutoapplytobeavolunteer.

3.Asasportslover,Ihaveageneralideaoftherulesofdifferentevents.

4.Iamalsogoodatcommunicatingwithothersandeagertolendahandtopeopleinneed.

5.Withthespiritofvoluntaryworkrootedinmyheart,IamsurethatIcanbeaqualifiedvolunteeryouneed.

6.IfIamhonoredenoughtobeacceptedasavolunteer,Iwillservetheplayersheartandsoul.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

as；inaddition；also；and；if等

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。在范文中使用了较多句型，如：MynameisLiHua,ahighschoolstudentinourcity.使用了同位语；Knowingthatthesportsmeetingwillbeheldinourcity,Ican’twaittowritetoyoutoapplytobeavolunteer.使用了现在分词作状语；Iamalsogoodatcommunicatingwithothersandeagertolendahandtopeopleinneed.使用了and连接的并列句；Withthespiritofvoluntaryworkrootedinmyheart,IamsurethatIcanbeaqualifiedvolunteeryouneed使用了with伴随状语和that引导的宾语从句；IfIamhonoredenoughtobeacceptedasavolunteer,Iwillservetheplayersheartandsoul.使用了if引导的条件状语从句等；还使用了一些固定短语：can’twaitto，applyto，begoodat，communicatewith，beeagerto，lendahand，inneed，heartandsoul，lookforwardto，hearfrom等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

读后续写参考范文：

范文（1）

Theheavensopening,andrainpouring,Imademydecision.“HowcouldIleaveyouintheheavyrain”Ismiledatherandthenbrokeintoarun.Asexpected,thelittlestraykeptherpacewithme.Ispedup,wishingtogethomesoon.Sodidshe.Atthecorner,wehappenedtomeetaneighbor.“Iamhappysheisadopted.”hesmiled.Ishotacuriouslookathim.“What”“Isawherseveraltimes.Maybeshewasabandoned.”heexplained.Hiswordssaddenedme.“Nowshehasahome.”Isaid.

Theneighborofferedtogivemeaspareleash,andIacceptedgratefully.IputtheleasharoundTerrier’sneckandmadeasmallknot.Shelookedmorelikemypetdogthanalonelystray.Beforeenteringthehouse,Ipausedatourfrontdoor.“Ismydecisionright”Afterastruggle,Igavemyselfafirm“Yes”andpushedthedoor.Surprisingly,Terrierdartedintothehouse,wagginghertailaroundMegan.“Mom,youreallyunderstandme!”Shesmiledandpickeduphernewplaymate.ItwasthenthatIrealizedthelittlecutedogbuiltabridgebetweenMeganandme.

范文（2）

Theheavensopening,andrainpouring,Imademydecision.Icouldnotleavethisadorableanimaloutintherain.ItlookedlikeMeganwouldgetherdog,andwewouldhaveanewadditiontoourfamily.Ibrokeintoajog,butthelittlestrayneverleftmyside.Asweturnedthecorner,aneighborcalledoutandaskedifIhadadoptedanewdog.Ismiledandtoldherthedogseemedtohaveadoptedme.

Theneighborofferedtogivemeaspareleash,andIacceptedgratefully.ThedogsatcalmlyasIloopedtheleashintoatemporarycollarandplaceditaroundherneck.Together,wejoggedthefinalhalf-milehomeintherain.WhenIopenedthedoor,theTerrierrushedin,ranstraightintoMegan’slapandclaimedherforherown.IwipedawayatearasIwatchedmypreciousdaughterhughernewplaymate.Iknewthenthatwewouldnotonlysurvivethesequarrelsometeenageyears,butthatwewouldlearnandgrowfromthem.

读后续写原文赏析：

Megan’sMia

I’dhadaratherstressfuldayatwork.Itdidn’thelpthatI’dalsohadanotherargumentwithmyteenageddaughterthatmorning.BythetimeIarrivedhome,Ieagerlyanticipatedgettingmyeveningwalk.Havingsometimetomyselfwouldhelpclearmymindandgivemeperspective.

ItwasgettingcloudierandIcouldtellthatrainwascoming.Noproblem.Iwouldbehomelongbeforetheliquidsunshinefell.

Theintensewalkworkedoffmuchofmyenergy.Islowedmypace,butaquickglancedownstartledme.ThecutestJackRussellTerrierhadappearedoutofnowhereandwaskeepingpacebesideme.Iknelttopether,delightedtodiscoverthatherearswereassoftasvelvetbetweenmyfingers.Sheremindedmeofmychildhooddog.ShehadthesamecoloringasLucky—whitewithalargeblackspotonherbackandside,brownface,andwhitesnout.

“Wheredidyoucomefrom,littleone”Shewasnotwearingacollaroridentificationtags.IrememberedseeingaTerrierwhenIdroveintotheneighborhoodafewhoursearlier.Ithaddartedintothestreetinfrontofmycar,butIhadassumedshelivedinthearea.Shemustbethesamedog.

Icontinuedmywalk,thinkingshewouldfindherwayhomeonherown.Thelittlestraycontinuedtokeeppace,walkingnexttomeasifwewereage-oldcompanions.WhenIpickedupmypace,sodidshe.WhenIslowed,sheslowed.Sheneverleftmyside.

WhenIlookedaround,Iwasnotsurprisedthat,otherthanthedog,Iwasaloneonthisdrearynight.Theskyhadalreadyda