心灵鸡汤读后续写34Lastwords导学案-九24届高三英语一轮复习

34Lastwords一、请根据两个提示句进行故事续写，150词左右。WhatIremembermostvividlywhensteppingintoDad’shospitalroomwastheevidenceofmyownsenses.Thebrightgreenwallsmeanttoberelaxingandthenoiseofthemachineshelpingmyfathertobreathewereallascreamofdesperation.Itookadeepswallowandsaidquietly,“HiDad.”Heturnedhisfacetowardme,andwhatgreetedmewasamanwholookeddecadesolderthanthelasttimeIhadseenhim.“Hi,honey,”hebreathedwithdifficulty.Theinstantoureyesmet,hehadsubmittedtowhatwascoming.WhenIlookedintomyfather’seyes,nowcloudedoverwithpain,Iknewthathewouldneverleavethatbedagain.AndsinceIwasboardingaplaneinsixhours,thiswouldbethelasttimeIwouldgettogazeatthoseeyes.Hewasn’tstrongenoughforsmalltalk.Isimplyheldhishandandletthequiettearsfall.Idon’tknowifhesawthemornot.Finally,whenitwastimetogo,Igotupallmycourage,setasidemyfearsandsaiddeterminedly,“Iloveyou,Dad.”Thosewordshadneverbeensaidinmyfamily.Myfatherneversaidthemtome,anduntilthen,Ineversaidthemtohim.Infact,I’msureIneverheardthemspokeninourstrict,Irish-Catholichousehold.Butmyfearofrejectionwasoutweighed(超过)bymyknowledgethatthiswasmylastchance.AndsoIsaidit.Buthecouldn’tgiveitback.Hisoncedancingeyes,nowmuddyandconfused,lookedaway.“I’mtired,”isallhesaid.“Maybeyoubettergo.”Threedayslater,Isatwithmyninesiblings(兄弟姐妹)planningmyfather’sfuneral.Wehadneverbeenanexpressivefamily,butatthismomentwealternated（交替）betweentensionandrelief,laughterandtears.However,myfather’sdeathwashardestonmyyoungestsisterCaroline,justasophomore（二年级生）inhighschool.Whilewekeptlookingbackon“Dadstories”,shejustsatthere.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Herwordshitme.Whyhadn’tfathersaidthesamewordstome?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、原版品读LastwordsWhatIremembermostvividlywhensteppingintoDad’shospitalroomwastheassaultonthesenses.Thebrightgreenwallsweremeanttobesoothing,buttometheyscreamedofthedesperationoftheinmates.Thenoiseofthemachineshelpingmyfathertobreathesoundedlikethehissingsnakeofdeath.Itookadeepswallowtoquellthenausea.“HiDad,”Isaidquietly.Heturnedhisfacetowardme,andwhatgreetedmewasamanwholookeddecadesolderthanthelasttimeIhadseenhim.“Hi,honey,”hewheezed.Theinstantoureyesmet,Iknewthathehadsurrenderedtowhatwascoming.WhenIlookedintomyfather’seyes,nowcloudedoverwithpain,Iknewthathewouldneverleavethatbedagain.Iwouldneveragainfeelthegripofhishand,neveragainheartheliltofhisvoice.Hewasn’tstrongenoughforsmalltalk.Isimplyheldhishandandletthequiettearsfall.Idon’tknowifhesawthemornot.Finally,whenitwastimetogo,Isummonedallmycourage.Isetasidemyfears.Iresolutelysaid,“Iloveyou,Dad.”Thosewordshadneverbeensaidinmyfamily.Myfatherneversaidthemtome,anduntilthen,Ineversaidthemtohim.Infact,I’msureIneverheardthemutteredinourstrict,Irish-Catholichousehold.Butmyfearofrejectionwasoutweighedbymyknowledgethatthiswasmylastchance.AndsoIsaidit.Buthecouldn’tgiveitback.Hisoncedancingeyes,nowmuddyandconfused,lookedaway.“I’mtired,”isallhesaid.“Maybeyoubettergo.”Threedayslater,Isatwithmyninesiblingsplanningmyfather’sfuneral.Wealternatedbetweentensionandrelief,laughterandtears.Wehadneverbeenanexpressivefamily,buttherewasatangiblesenseofbeingtiredoftherestraint.Hisdeathwashardestonmyyoungestsister,justasophomoreinhighschool.Asweshared“Dadstories”backandforth,shewasunusuallyquiet,butfinallyinanalmostembarrassedwaysaid,“IsawDadrightbeforehedied.Hetookmyhand,lookedatme,andsaid‘Iloveyou,Caroline.’”Herwordshitmelikeabluntforceinstrument.Helovedher.Whyhadn’thesaidittome?FindingoutthatjustadayafterIlefthimhetoldmysister,hisyoungestdaughter,thathelovedher,wasablow.Itwaseasytohidethereasonformytears—afterall,we’djustlostourfather—whowouldbegrudgeachildhergrief?Butnooneknewthetruesourceofmysorrow.I’llalwayswishthatIhadthatmomentwithmyfatheroveragain.IwishIhadsaid,“It’sokay,Dad—youcansayit.”WhatIdohaveisthemomentwithmysister.Dadfoundthecourageandstrength,onhisdeathbed,tosay“Iloveyou.”Ibelieveatleastsomeofthatcourageandstrengthcamefromme.AndIamgratefulthatatthetimewhenhewasmostvulnerable,Igavehimsomethingofsubstance.Somethingthatwouldhelphimtoletgo,andhelpmy15-year-oldsistertoletgoaswell.SoDad,Iwishyoucouldhavesaidittome.ButthanksforsayingittoCaroline.And,bytheway—Idoloveyou.AndIknowyouloveme,too.I.Wordsforunderstanding单词音标词性释义单词音标词性释义vividly['vɪvɪdli]adv.生动地utter[ˈʌtə(r)]vt.说;讲assault[əˈsɔːlt]n.冲击outweigh\o"outweigh"[aʊtˈweɪ]vt.超过soothing[ˈsuːðɪŋ]adj.减轻(痛苦)的rejection[rɪˈdʒekʃən]n.拒绝scream[skriːm]vi.尖声大叫sibling\o"sibling"[ˈsɪblɪŋ]n.兄弟姐妹desperation[ˌdespəˈreɪʃən]n.绝望tension[ˈtenʃən]n.绷紧inmate[ˈɪnmeɪt]

n.同院病人relief[rɪˈliːf]n.宽慰hissing[hɪs]v.发嘶嘶声alternate['ɔːltəneɪt]vi.（使）交替swallow['swɒləʊ]n.咽tangible[ˈtændʒəbl]adj.可感知的wheeze[wiːz]呼哧呼哧地说restraint\o"restraint"[rɪˈstreɪnt]n.抑制,克制surrender\o"surrender"[səˈrendə]vi.投降sophomore\o"sophomore"[ˈsɒfəmɔː(r)]n.(高中)二年级学生cloud[klaʊd]vi.露出(痛苦)神色hit[hɪt]vt.侵袭grip\o"grip"[grɪp]n.紧握;紧抓blunt\o"blunt"[blʌnt]adj.

钝的;不锋利的lilt\o"lilt"[lɪlt]n.抑扬顿挫begrudge\o"begrudge"[bɪˈgrʌdʒ]vt.对……感到不满summon\o"summon"[ˈsʌmən]vt.鼓起grateful[ˈɡreɪtfəl]adj.感激的resolutely\o"resolutely"[ˈrezəluːtlɪ]adv.坚定地vulnerable[ˈvʌlnərəbl]adj.脆弱的短语释义短语释义setaside暂不考虑backandforth来回地letgo放手III.Readtoappreciate:FillintheblanksaccordingtoChinesetranslationsTheinstantoureyes,Iknewthathehadtowhatwascoming.(Action)我们的目光一相遇，我就知道他已经向即将到来的事情投降了。2.Isimplyheldhishandandletthequiettears.(Action)我只是握着他的手，默默流泪。3.Finally,whenitwastimetogo,Iallmycourage.(Action)最后，到了该走的时候，我鼓起所有的勇气。4.Heturnedhisfacetowardme,andwhat______________mewasamanwholookeddecadesolderthanthelasttimeIhadseenhim.(Appearance)他把脸转向我。于是，一个看上去比我上次见到他时老了几十岁的人映入我的眼帘。WhenIlookedintomyfather’seyes,now______________________,Iknewthathewouldneverleavethatbedagain.(Appearance)父亲的眼睛现在被痛苦笼罩着。当我看着它们时，我知道他再也不会离开那张床了。Hisonceeyes,nowand,lookedaway.(Appearance)他那双曾经跳动的眼睛，现在变得浑浊而困惑，看向了别处。Butmyfearof____________wasbymyknowledgethatthiswasmylastchance.(Emotion)但我知道这是我最后的机会，这超过了我对被拒绝的恐惧。Wealternatedbetweenand,and.(Emotion)我们时而紧张，时而放松；时而欢笑，时而流泪。FindingoutthatjustadayafterIlefthimhetoldmysister,hisyoungestdaughter,thathelovedher,wasa.(Emotion)就在我离开他的第二天，他告诉我妹妹─他最小的女儿，他爱她，这对我是个打击。Thenoiseofthemachineshelpingmyfathertobreathesoundedlikethesnakeofdeath.帮助父亲呼吸的机器发出的声音听起来就像死亡之蛇发出的嘶嘶声。(Metaphor)Herwordsmelikeabluntforceinstrument.(Metaphor)她的话像钝器一样击中了我。IV.LanguageinuseApplicationofthekeywords:FillintheblanksaccordingtotheChinesesentences1.随着轮胎发出的刺耳的声音，救护车冲过街角。Theambulanceracedroundthecornerwithitstyres________.她抑制住自己的失望，说：“没关系”。She________herdisappointment,saying,"That’sOK,itdoesn’tmatter."一提到她死去的丈夫，她的脸色就阴沉下来。Atthementionofherdeadhusband,herface________over.长时间的等待实在无聊，我们靠打扑克来解闷儿。Weplayedcardsto________theboredomofthelongwait.母狮子不理会最小的幼师，任由它死去。Thelioness________thesmallestcub,whichdied.她把玻璃杯扔向屋子的另一头，砸在墙上。Shethrewherglassacrosstheroomandit________thewall.“放开我的手，你弄疼我了！”_____________________ofmyhand,you’rehurtingme!他们跟着她，没有说一句怨言Theyfollowedherwithout________asinglewordofprotest.这本书唤起我童年的记忆。Thebook________upmemoriesofmychildhood.Imitationofthescenes：请描写“我”向临终父亲表白爱意的场景。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Key:一、读后续写Whilewekeptlookingbackon“Dadstories”,shejustsatthere.Seeminglyconfusedbyhowthiscouldhavehappened,sheloweredherheadandbitherlips,unusuallyquiet.Recallingtheverymomentstayingwithfatherbeforehisdeathbed,Isigheddeeply,expressingmyfeelingthatfatherhadneverlovedme.AtthistimeCarolinewasnotsoquietthatsherosetoherfeet,sayinginanembarrassedvoice,“IsawDadrightbeforehedied.Hetookmyhand,lookedatme,andsaid‘Iloveyou,Caroline.’”Herwordshitme.Whyhadn’tfathersaidthesamewordstome?Itwasnodoubtablo