新教材高中英语UNIT2HEALTHYLIFESTYLE表达作文巧升格学案新人教版选择性

UNIT2HEALTHYLIFESTYLE描述生活方式本单元要求给编辑写一封描述生活方式的信件，符合正式书信的写作范畴。[基本框架]1．开头(thebeginning)——写信目的2．主体(thebody)——详细介绍自己的生活方式3．结尾(theending)——表达谢意[常用词块]1．bebeneficialto对……有益2．liveahealthylife过着健康的生活3．sortout整理；归类4．5．6．contributeto有助于[常用语句]★精彩开头1．I'mwritingtoyoutotellyousomethingaboutahealthylifestyle.我写信给你是想告诉你一些关于健康的生活方式。2．Iwanttosharesomethingaboutmylifestylewithyou.我想和你分享一下我的生活方式。3．Iamwillingtoofferyousometipsaboutlivingahealthylife.我愿意给你一些关于健康生活的建议。★正文佳句1．Exerciseisbeneficialtoourhealthandwe'dbetterrunforhalfanhoureveryday.运动有益于我们的健康，我们最好每天跑步持续半小时。2．What'smore，weshouldcombinestudywithpleasure.更重要的是，我们应该把学习和快乐结合起来。3.Wecandoalotinourdailylifetoachievethegoalofalowcarbonlife.我们可以在日常生活中做很多事情来实现低碳生活的目标。★余味结尾1．Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanacceptmysuggestion.如果你能接受我的建议我将不胜感激。2．Tryyourbestandyouwillliveahealthierlife.努力吧，你会过上更健康的生活。3．It'ssomethingaboutmydailylifestyle，thanksforyourreading.这是我日常生活的一部分，谢谢你的阅读。假定你是李华，根据下面提示用英语给报社编辑写一封信。内容如下：1．许多青少年不注重健康问题的现象及导致的危害；2．简述你的看法，提出你的建议。注意：1．词数80左右；2．开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearEditor，Asweallknow，healthisveryimportant.Onlywhenwearehealthycanwestudywellandenjoylife.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yours，LiHua【学生习作】DearEditor，Asweallknow，healthisveryimportant.Onlywhenwearehealthycanwestudywellandenjoylife.Manyteenagersdon'tpayattentiontotheirhealth.TheyspendtoomuchtimewatchTV，playgamesandchatontheInternet.Firstly，thismaymakethemtogetnear­sighted.Secondly，theirbodiesbecomeweaker.Thirdly，theywilllosethechancetocommunicatewithothers.Theyshouldplaysomesportsandhaveahealthylifestyle.Bestwishes.Yours，LiHua[点评]1.要点虽然齐全，但内容不够丰富，字数不足80字。2.高级词汇和高级句式的运用太少，句式太简单，且不够多样。3.文中出现了一些简单的语法错误。如spendtime(in)do，makethemtoget等。4.衔接不够顺畅，意义不连贯，未达到预期目的。【升格作文】DearEditor，Asweallknow，healthisveryimportant.Onlywhenwearehealthycanwestudywellandenjoylife.However，manyteenagersdon'tpayanyattentiontotheirhealth.AndtheyspendtoomuchtimewatchingTV，playinggamesandchattingontheInternet，whichisbadfortheirhealth.Firstly，thismaymakethemgetnear­，theirbodiesbecomemuchweaker.Thirdly，theywilllosethechancetocommunicatewithothersfacetoface.Inmyopinion，theyshouldspendlesstimeinfrontoftheTVorthecomputer.Goouttogetmuchexercise，playsomesportsandhaveahealthylifestyle.Bestwishes.Yours，LiHua假如你是中学生李华，请你给某报社编辑写一封信，指出健康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。信的内容需包含以下信息：1．健康的重要性；2．给出健康的方法，如：避免含糖高、脂肪高的食物；摒弃不良习惯；多锻炼等。注意：1．词数80左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearEditor，__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHua【参考范文】DearEditor，Fitnessisfarmoreimportantthananythingelse.Howcanwekeephealthy？Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstly，weshouldkeepabalanceddiet，whichisgoodforourhealth.Weshouldtrytocutoutfoodscontaininglotsofsugarandfat.What'smore，wehavetoquit