新教材人教版英语学案UNIT4HISTORYANDTRADITIONS表达作文巧升格

介绍一个地方描述一个漂亮或者特殊的地方总体上属于介绍事物的说明文。它的要点内容可包括：地理位置、面积、人口、气候状况、著名的地方以及与众不同之处等。时态应以现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。[基本框架]1．开头：介绍该地方的基本信息(位置、面积等)；2．主体：描述该地方的一些具体信息(著名的地方、与众不同之处)；3．结尾：作者对此地点的感受或总结陈述以吸引读者去旅游。[常用词块]1....lies/islocated/issituated＋地点状语某地位于……2....is/lies＋数词＋metresabovesealevel某地海拔为多少米3....issurroundedby...……周围被……环绕4....bevery/quite/extremelycold/hot/warm/dry/humid/sunny/rainy/mild...alltheyearround某地气候终年寒冷/炎热/温暖/干燥/湿热/日光充足/多雨/温和……5....isrichin...，like/suchas...……盛产/富于……像/例如……6....isfamous/well­knownfor...……以……著名7....hasa(long)historyof...……有……年的(悠久的)历史8....dates/goesbackto...……可追溯到……[常用语句]★精彩开头1．Itislocated/liesin...，withanareaof...某地坐落在……面积约……2．Itcoversanareaof...，withahistoryof...某地面积约……有……年的历史。3....，locatedin...andcoveringanareaof...，isoneofChina'smostfamousscenicspots.……位于……面积约……是中国最负盛名的风景观光地之一。4．Thehistoryof...datesbackto...……的历史可以追溯到……5．Ithasbecomethemostpopulartouristattractionsince...从……开始，某地已成为最受欢迎的旅游胜地。★正文佳句1．Therearemanyplacesofinterest，suchas...有许多旅游胜地，例如……2．Youcanenjoy...，whichhasahighreputationbothathomeandabroad.你可以畅游某地，它已享誉海内外。3．With...，...is/areattractingmoreandmoretourists.因为……，……正吸引着越来越多的游客。4．Aninterestingfeatureof...is...……一个吸引人的风景特色是……5．Withitspleasantclimate，richnaturalresourcesandbeautifulscenery，...isoneofChina'smajortouristcities.因其宜人的气候、富饶的自然资源和美丽的自然风光，……是中国最负盛名的旅游城市。6．Atripalong...willenableyoutogettoknow...沿着……旅游，会让你逐渐了解……★余味结尾1....iswellworthvisiting.……非常值得一游。2....isaplaceyouhavetovisitandtheextraordinaryviewwillmakeyouunwillingtoleave.……是一个让人怦然心动的地方，它那令人惊奇的风景会让你留恋忘返。假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Linda今年暑假要来你所在的城市杭州旅游。请根据以下提示，给她写一封电子邮件，介绍一下杭州的基本情况。1．地理位置：中国的东南部，面临东海；2．名胜之地：西湖；3．休闲：划船、漫步、在草坪上野餐；4．变化：高楼大厦。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．电子邮件的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：草坪lawnDearLinda，Iamverygladtoknowthatyouwillcometomycity—Hangzhouthissummervacation.NowI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutit.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LookingforwardtoyourvisitingHangzhousoon.Yours，LiHua[学生习作]DearLinda，Iamverygladtoknowthatyouwillcometomycity—Hangzhouthissummervacation.NowI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutit.①HangzhouliesinthesoutheastofChinaanditfacestheEastChinaSea.ItismostfamousforthebeautifulWestLake，whichhasalonghistorywithalovestory.Duringholidaysoronweekends，peoplelikegoingboatingonthelake，walkinginthewoodsorsittingonthelawntohaveapicnic.GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinHangzhouduringthepastfewyearseq\s\up10(②)andplentyoftallbuildingshavegoneup.③Thelandscapeisverystrikingandlotsoftouristsfromathomeandabroadcometovisititeveryyear.LookingforwardtoyourvisitingHangzhousoon.Yours，LiHua点评：1.①句可改为含有v.­ing结构的句子；2.②处可改为with复合结构；3.③句可变换为so...that...句型。[升格作文]DearLinda，Iamverygladtoknowthatyouwillcometomycity—Hangzhouthissummervacation.NowI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutit.HangzhouliesinthesoutheastofChina，facingtheEastChinaSea.ItismostfamousforthebeautifulWestLake，whichhasalonghistorywithalovestory.Duringholidaysoronweekends，peoplelikegoingboatingonthelake，walkinginthewoodsorsittingonthelawntohaveapicnic.GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinHangzhouduringthepastfewyears，withplentyoftallbuildingsgoingup.Thelandscapeissostrikingthatlotsoftouristsfromathomeandabroadcometovisititeveryyear.LookingforwardtoyourvisitingHangzhousoon.Yours，LiHua假定你是英国学生Harry，有一位中国笔友LiHua想了解一下你的家乡爱丁堡，请你根据提示回复一封电子邮件。爱丁堡苏格兰(Scotland)的首府，政治和文化中心人口约50万面积260平方千米(squarekilometres)地理位置苏格兰的东南部交通公共交通十分便利天气气候温和(mildclimate)旅游最受欢迎的旅游城市之一；古老建筑众多注意：1．词数80左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearLiHua，TodayI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutEdinburghwhichyouaskedaboutinthelaste­mail.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwouldbehappytoguideyouaroundourcityifyouwouldarrangeavisithere.Yoursfaithfully，Harry[参考范文]DearLiHua，TodayI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutEdinburghwhichyouaskedaboutinthelaste­mail.Edinburgh，locatedinthesoutheastofScotland，isthecapitalofScotlandaswellasitspoliticalandculturalcentre.Itcoversanareaof260squarekilometreswithasmallpopulationofaboutfivehundredthousand.Inthecity,youcaneasilygetwhereveryou