读后续写个人成长类-骄兵必败讲义 高考英语作文专题复习

读后续写原题Havingheldtheinterschoolstorytellingchampionshipforthepasttwoyears,Iwastheshiningstarofmyschool.Whenitcametochoosingtherightcandidatetoparticipateinsuchcompetitions,Iwasalwaysthefirstchoice.Naturally,Iwasonceagainselectedtorepresentmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.在过去的两年里，我举办了校际讲故事锦标赛，我是学校里最耀眼的明星。当选择合适的候选人参加此类比赛时，我总是第一选择。很自然，我再次被选中代表我的学校参加今年即将到来的比赛。Uponhearing

thefactthatIwaschosenagain,myclassmatesandfriendsacknowledgedthatIwould

undoubtedly

emergeasthechampionagain.

Consequently,

Ibecameconceited.IwassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.听到我再次被选中的消息，我的同学和朋友们都承认我毫无疑问会再次成为冠军。因此，我变得自负起来。我太骄傲了，以至于忽略了为比赛练习的重要性。Aweekbeforethecontest,myteacherMs.Saraasked,"Selena,wouldyouliketostandinfrontoftheclasstorehearseforthecontest?"Shehadtutoredmeinthepasttwocompetitionsandknewhowimportantpracticewas."Justimagineyouareonthestage

inthepresenceoftheaudience,"sheadded."I'msorry,Ms.Sara,"Ireplied."Ihaveabitofasorethroat".比赛前一周，我的老师Sara女士问：“Selena，你愿意站在全班同学面前为比赛排练吗？”她在过去的两次比赛中都指导过我，知道练习有多重要。她补充道：“想象一下，当着观众的面，你就在舞台上。”。“对不起，萨拉女士，”我回答。“我喉咙有点痛”。ThiswasusuallythelieIwouldtellwhenevermyteacherrequestedmetopracticeinfrontoftheclass.IalwaysfoundexcusestoavoiddoingitbecauseIbelievedthatIwasthebestandthereforethepracticewasunnecessary.Ononeoccasion,IeventoldMs.SaranottoworrytoomuchasIwaswellpreparedforthecontest.Infact,I

dideverythingbutpractice

my

script.Ionlymanagedto

glancebriefly

throughthestorythedaybeforethecontest.Asthebeststorytelleramongthestudentsofthelocalsecondaryschools,Iwastoo

vain

topracticeandexpectedeverythingtobefine.每当老师要求我在全班同学面前练习时，我通常都会说这个谎言。我总是找借口避免这样做，因为我相信我是最好的，因此这种做法是没有必要的。有一次，我甚至告诉Sara女士不要太担心，因为我已经为比赛做好了充分准备。事实上，除了练习剧本，我什么都做了。比赛前一天，我只是匆匆浏览了一下这个故事。作为当地中学学生中最会讲故事的人，我太虚荣了，不敢练习，希望一切都会好起来。Thecontestwasbeingheldinthelocalcommunityhall.Onthedayofthecontest,thehallwaspacked.Myschoolteachersandprincipalweretherealongwithmanyofmyclassmatesandschoolmates.Iwastheeighthcontestantoutoftwentyintotal.Thosewhospokebeforemedidextremelywell.

Onseeing

theirfascinatingandoutstandingperformance,I

begantoloseconfidenceinmyself.Mypalms

sweatedheavily

andIstartedtofeelnervous.比赛在当地社区大厅举行。比赛当天，大厅里座无虚席。我的老师和校长以及我的许多同学都在那里。我是总共二十名参赛者中的第八名。在我之前发言的人都做得非常好。一看到他们迷人而出色的表现，我开始对自己失去信心。我的手掌大汗淋漓，开始感到紧张。Para1:Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.

Para2:

Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.

第1段：很快，就轮到我说话了第2段：最后，比赛结束后公布了结果。

Step1

思考问题Para1：1.我走上舞台时是什么心情？2.我的表现怎么样？出了什么问题？3.老师同学们等的反应？我的状态？4.我的表演如何结束的？Para2：5.结果是什么？6.我的反应？老师们的反应？7.我的领悟？

Step2构思词块和句式，连词成句(文章协同表达也很重要）Para1：1.我走上舞台时是什么心情？2.我的表现怎么样？出了什么问题？心跳加速+大脑空白+不熟悉演讲稿+结巴+声音颤抖+演讲平淡.(非谓语动词+独立主格等)Standing

onstageinthespotlight,Icouldfeel

myheartbeatingfasterthanagallopinghorse

and

mymindgoingutterlyblank.Failingto

familiarizemyselfwith

thespeech,

consequently,I

stammeredafewtimes,

myvoicetrembling,myspeechexpressionless.3.老师同学们等的反应？我的状态？惊讶+难以置信+失望(themoment/instant/second...或on/upondoing...）Themoment

myglancemetmyteacher,myclassmates,myprincipal,

onwhosefacesdisappointmentwasclearlywritten,howIwishtofindaholetohidemyselfaway.4.我的表演如何结束的？（倒装句)匆匆收尾+逃离舞台+十分沮丧HardlyhadIfinishedmylastword

when

Imademy

desperateescape

fromthestage,hastily,

myeyesbrimmingwithtears.Para2：5.结果是什么？6.我的反应？老师们的反应？7.我的领悟？没有得奖+被失落笼罩+垂下眼+躲避大家的眼神

(非谓语，独立主格等）Ididnotwinanyprize--noteven

aconsolationone.

Gloomenvelopingme,I

droopedmyeyes,avoidingthegazearoundme.→老师安慰→看到关心的眼神→羞愧和悔恨眼泪夺眶而出→老师的教导“骄兵必败”

→我的感悟

Suddenly,Ifeltahandonmyshoulder.ItwasMsSara.

Onseeingherconcernedeyes,

tearsofbittershameandregrettrickleddownmyface.“Pridegoesbeforeafall.Neverletarrogance

standinthewayof

yoursuccess”saidMsSara.

Wipingmytearsaway,

Inoddedearnestly,determinedtolearnfromthis

hard-learnedlesson.

Step3连句成篇，书写优美

Para1:

Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.

Standing

onstageinthespotlight,Icouldfeel

myheartbeatingfasterthanagallopinghorse

and

mymindgoingutterlyblank.Failingto

familiarizemyselfwith

thespeech,

consequently,I

stammeredafewtimes,

myvoicetrembling,myspeechexpressionless.

Themoment

myglancemetmyteacher,classmates,

principal,

onwhosefacesdisappointmentwasclearlywritten,howIwishtofindaholetohidemyselfaway.

HardlyhadIfinishedmylastword

when

Imademy

desperateescape

fromthestage,hastily,

myeyesbrimmingwithtears.

(约90词）

Para2:

Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.

Ididnotwinanyprize--noteven

aconsolationone.

Gloomenvelopingme,I

droopedmyeyes,avoidingthegazearoundme.

Suddenly,Ifeltahandonmyshoulder.ItwasMsSara.

Onseeingherc