中考英语作文复习课件1-人教版

中考英语作文复习中考英语作文复习怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获取高分呢？怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获取高分呢？一、写作要点“一审”即审题。“二写”即列纲。“三连”即连句成文。“四改”即修改润色全文。一、写作要点“一审”即审题。审题：做到三审体裁看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么

时态、人称如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现在时态。

审题：做到三审列纲：做到三思

词汇—>短语—>句式

列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。列纲：做到三思词汇—>短语—>句式连句成文根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用。连句成文文章分3段：综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题

正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话

结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华

文章分3段：综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题修改润色全文做到三查

要点、拼写、语法是否连贯看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。

修改润色全文做到三查要点、拼写、语法是否连贯开头用语：

A.Justaseverycoinhastwosides,carshavebothadvantagesanddisadvantages．

B.Comparedtoletters,e-mailsaremoreconvenient.

C.Opinionsaredividedontheadvantagesanddisadvantagesoflivinginthecityandinthecountryside.

D.Asweallknow,computershaveplayedanimportantrole/partinourdailylife.

E.Whydoyougotouniversity?Differentpeoplehavedifferentpointsofview.

F．Withthedevelopmentofinternet…moreandmorepopular…G.AsastudentK.Asanoldsayinggoes….开头用语：A.Justaseverycoinha句式：1.too...to...Heisveryyoung.hecan’tgotoschool.Heistooyoungtogotoschool.2.so...that...Heisveryclever.Hecanworkouttheproblem.Heissocleverthathecanworkitouttheproblem.Heiscleverenoughtoworkouttheproblem.3.notonly...butalso...4.Ithasmanyadvantages.First,…Besides,…5.However,everycoinhastwosides.Italsobringsusbadinfluences.Ontheonehand,…Ontheotherhand,…句式：1.too...to...连词：连贯句子1)表层次

first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,tobeginwith,tostartwith,whatismore,last,also,andthen,next,besidesAtfirst;atlast;intheend…then/next/afterthat…

when/while/assoonas/not…until…inaddtionfinallyOnonehand....ontheotherhand，each/onecoinhastwosides，连词：连贯句子1)表层次连词：连贯句子2)表转折；but,however,though,although,afterall,inspiteof，fortunately，unfortunately，atthesametime…3)表递近：inaddition,besides,moreover,what`smore4)因果

because,so,becauseof,thanksto,dueto,for,since,owingto,asaresult(of),hence,thus5)例证

forexample,forinstance,suchas连词：连贯句子2)表转折；but,however,th连词：连贯句子6)表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;…havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;sbbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;

表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…;befondof…;beinterestedin…;showgreatinterestin…;loseoneselfin…;putone’sheartinto…;7)总结

AsIsee,Asforme，Asweallknow,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,Ithink...,infact,inaword,inbrief,inconclusion,inshort,insummary,tosumup,连词：连贯句子6)表示利弊的：begood/badfo二、各类作文常用框架1、话题作文，演讲

总-分-总It’sadjforusto…..Ontheonehand,…Ontheotherhand,…What’smore,…Inaword,/Inshort,….二、各类作文常用框架1、话题作文，演讲2、讨论报告，列举不同观点

总-A方-B方-我方-总Recently,wehaveadiscussionabout….Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Athinks….Bthinksdifferently.….Asforme,/Inmyopinion,….AllroadsleadtoRome,wecanchoosethewayweliketo….2、讨论报告，列举不同观点3、写信，建议

总-分-总I’madjtohearthatyou…Hereissomeadviceforyou.Firstly,….Secondly,….Finally,….Inaword,…Ifyou…,youwill…3、写信，建议习作点评Chooseoneofyourhobbiesandwriteanarticlefortheschoolmagazineaboutit.Tellthemagazinereaders.•Whatexactlyyourhobbyis;•Whenandhowyoubecameinterestedinthishobby;•Whyyouenjoyyourhobby;•Aboutyourhopesandplansforthefuture.写作要求：1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。3.词数60-80.习作点评Chooseoneofyourhobbie[学生习作A]Myhobbyisreadbooks.WhenIwassevenyearsold.Ibecameinterestedinreadingbooks.Ilikereadingbooksbecausetherearealotofusefulthingsinbooks.Icanlearnalotofknowledgefrombooks.Booksalsocanteachmehowtobeagoodperson.Booksevencansolvemanyproblemsforme.Iwillreadmoregoodbookstoimprovemyself.①改为readingbooks，动词作表语时应该用动名词。②also的位置应放在can之后。12[学生习作A]①改为readingbooks，动词作表语时[点评]：档次9-11分。①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。③有少量错误。中考英语作文复习课件1-人教版[学生习作B]Myhobbyisreading.Readingbooksisveryenjoyable.WhenIwasyoung,mymotherusedtotellmeastorybefore.Iwenttobedeverynight.ThestoriesweresointerestingthatIalwaysfelttheyweren’tenough.SoIbegantoreadbooksbymyself.LittlebylittleIbecameinterestedinreading.Icanlearnmuchknowledgeandmanyinterestingthingsallovertheworld.WhenIreadbooks,Icanenjoythebeautifulsentences.AtthesametimeIcanimprovemywriting.Iwanttobeawriterinthefuture,soImuststudyhardandreadmorebookssothatmydreamcancometrue.[学生习作B]①开门见山、点题。②真情流露，理由充分。③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次13-14分。①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。①开门见山、点题。高分突破

①文体：记叙文。②要点：what→when→how→why→hopeandplanforthefuture.③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。高分突破①文体：记叙文。三、提高写作的方法1、造句

Letlifebebeautifullikesummerflowersanddeathlikeautumnleaves.

使生如夏花之绚烂，死如秋叶之静美

2、摘录好句、积累名言谚语

三、提高写作的方法1、造句Letlifebebeau学习Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。

Agoodbookisagoodfriend.好书如挚友。

AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。

Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy.凡事总是由难而易。AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。Anhourinthemorningisworthtwointheevening.一日之计在于晨。Confidenceinyourselfisthefirststepontheroadtosuccess.自信是走向成功的第一步。。Doingisbetterthansaying.与其挂在嘴上，不如落实在行动上。

Don'tputofftilltomorrowwhatshouldbedonetoday.今日事，今日毕。Everyminutecounts.分秒必争。

Easiersaidthandone.说得容易，做得难。学习Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。Greathopesmakegreatman.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。Knowledgeispower.知识就是力量。Itisnevertoooldtolearn.活到老，学到老。Neversaydie.永不言败。Nopains,nogains.没有付出就没有收获。Nothingintheworldisdifficultforonewhosetshismindtoit.世上无难事，只怕有心人。

Onecannotputbacktheclock.时钟不能倒转。Onehourtodayisworthtwotomorrow.争分夺秒效率高。

Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。

Readingenrichesthemind.开卷有益。

Romeisnotbuiltinaday.冰冻三尺，非一日之寒。

Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。Failureisthemotherofsucce健康

Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一苹果，不用请医生。

Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.早睡早起身体好。

Healthisbetterthanwealth.健康胜过财富。Healthishappiness.健康就是幸福。

健康

Anappleadaykeepsthedo议论文

Everycoinhastwosides.事物有两面性DoastheRomansdo.入乡随俗。Moneyisn'teverything.钱不是万能的。

Manyheadsarebetterthanone.三个臭皮匠，赛过诸葛亮。

Youcannoteatyourcakeandhaveit.鱼与熊掌，不可得兼。Unityisstrength.团结就是力量。Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.三思而后行。

议论文

Everycoinhastwosides.事句型转换，句式多样性

Tomisastudent.Heis16yearsold.Helikesrunning

Tom,a16-year-oldstudent,likesrunning.句型转换，句式多样性Tomisastudent.T多使用短语

Igotupquickly.

Igotupasquicklyaspossible.

HestudiesEnglishwell.

HeisgoodatEnglish.

HedoeswellinEnglish.多使用短语Igotupquickly.IgotThegirllikesreading.Theprettygirllikesreadingnovels.Theprettygirllikesreadingnovelscarefully.TheprettygirlwhoItalkedtojustnowlikesreadingnovelscarefully.扩写Thegirllikesreading.扩写句子的衔接词

并列关系：and，or，either...or，both...and，notonly...butalso.aswellas转折关系：but，however，yet，although条件关系：if,whether，unless时间关系：when，as，before，after，while，until，since，assoonas因果关系：because，as，since，for，so句子的衔接词并列关系：and，or，either...（一）表示“起”的词/词组：用于开篇引出扩展句。atfirstatpresentfirst（ly）ingeneralinthebeginningonetheonehand…（ontheotherhand）tobeginwithfirstofallgenerallyspeakinginthefirstplaceonthewhole（一）表示“起”的词/词组：用于开篇引出扩展句。（二）有关“承”的常用词语：用来承接上文。after/afterthat/bythistimeafterafewdayscertainlyafterawhilethereforealso/tooforexample/forinstanceatthesametimeBesides/what’smorefromnowoninadditionsecond/secondlyinfactsimilarlyinotherwordssoinparticularsoon

inthesamewaystillthenthird/thirdlymeanwhilemoreoverforanothernodoubtsuchasobviouslylaterofcoursetrulyParticularlyunlike…whatismore（二）有关“承”的常用词语：用来承接上文。inthes（三）有关“转”的常用词语：用来表示不同或相反的意见。

afterallfortunatelyallthesamehoweveranywayinspiteofatthesametimeLuckilybutbythistimethough/althoughnodoubtonthecontraryeventhoughotherwisestillunfortunatelyinfactunlikeasamatteroffactyetespecially（三）有关“转”的常用词语：用来表示不同或相反的意见。no（四）有关“合”的常用词语：用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容。

aboveallasaresultinsumashasbeennotedinsummaryasIhavesaidonthewholeatlastthereforeThuseventuallysurelyfinallytoconcludeinbriefnodoubtinconclusionundoubtedlyinshorttrulyinawordsocertainlyobviouslyallinall（四）有关“合”的常用词语：用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容。Inmylife,Iwillthankmymotherforever.Mymotherisbusyeveryday.shedoeshouseworkandworkshardinthefactory.Iamintrouble,shealwaysencouragesmetoovercomedifficulties.Iamill,shelooksaftermecarefully.Iwillthankmymotherforgivingmelife.Iwillthankherforhelpingme.Ilovemymotherverymuch.

Inmylife,IwillthankmymoInmylife,Iwillthankmymotherforever.Mymotherisbusyeveryday.(But)shedoeshouseworkandworkshardinthefactor