二轮测试(一)作文

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高三二轮英语综合测试（一）

如今，外出旅游的人越来越多。有些物品可能是外出旅游时必备的。现在，请说明你外出旅游时选择以下物品的理由【写作内容】

1、身份证：旅游者必备的最基本的证件；2、相机：记录所看到的东西，带来乐趣；3、手机：联系家人、朋友：4、MP3player：用于旅游途中打发时间。[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。[评分标准]句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。IalwaystakemyIDcard,camera,mobilephone,MP3playerandsomeotherthingswithmewhiletravelling.IthinkanIDcardisabasicandnecessarydocumentfortourists.AcameraisusedtorecordwhatIsee,anditcanbringmealotoffun.Amobilephoneisveryusefultokeepintouchwithmyfamilyandfriends.AndthenanMP3player,Ithink,isalsoveryimportantformetokilltimeduringthejourney.如何写好高考英语作文得高分？

近几年要求“使用较多语法结构和词汇”，因此要想得高分，除了要点和语言准确度以外，还必须在较复杂的句子结构或较高级的词汇上有所表现。句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分，相反“有些错误，但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”，给分档次仍在最高档(21～25分)。1.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词,adj等做状语等［原文1］Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.

［修正］Earlyinthemorning

wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.

［原文2］Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.

［修正］Hearingthebadnews，theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.③由with或without引导的短语。如:Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand.④分词短语。如:

Satisfiedwiththeresult，hedecidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.⑤倒装句。如:

Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.

NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.3.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。［原文1］Hestoppedushalfanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextoffender.［修正］Hestoppedushalfanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.［原文2］Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.［修正］Afterashortrest，wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing，

tellingjokesandplayingchess.5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如:［原文］Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.［修正］Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:［原文］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.［修正］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.读写任务

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

HonestyisoneofthemosttreasuredtraditionalvaluesinChina.Thechildrenaretaughttobehonestwhentheyareveryyoung.Atschoolsthestudentsarealsoinstructedtobehonest.

However,withthedevelopmentofsociety,weoftenhearcomplaintsaboutdishonesty.Reportswiththethemeofdishonestyoftenappearinthemedia.Forexample,somepeopletrytogetrichandliveacomfortablelife.Buttheydonotworkhardhonestly,insteadtheycheatothers.Theysellsomethingquiteordinaryataveryhighprice.Somepeople'sdelayingpayingbacktheloancanserveasanotherexample.Somepeople,includingsomecollegestudents,getloanfromthebank,andpromisetopaywithin,say,3years.However,theydon'tdothat.

Thedishonestpeoplesometimescangetbenefitfromtheirbehaviors.Sosomepeopleassertthatdishonestycanbringpeoplebenefit,whilehonestyonlymakespeoplesuffer.Isthatso?Definitelynot.Itisalwaystruethathonestyisthebestpolicy.Itpaystobehonest.Thecheaterselling"thetreasure"mentionedabovewillsurelybedisclosedandpunishedsomeday.

Onthecontrary,ifhehadbeenhonest,neitherthebuyernorhehimselfwouldhavesuffered.Thepeoplewhodonotreturnmoneyintimewillsoonerorlaterbecomeinfamous,andwillnotgetthemoneyfromothersagain.Ifhehadacteddifferently,hewouldhaveearnedrespectandtrust,meanwhile,thebankwouldnothavesufferedfromloss.

【写作内容】1.以约30个词概括短文的要点。2.然后以约120个词就“诚实”的主题发表看法，并包括以下要点：（1）你对不诚实现象的看法；

（2）诚实的重要性是什么；（3）作为中学生，该如何做一个诚实的人。[写作要求]1.在作文中可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。[评分标准]概括正确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。Thepassagemainlytellsusthatnowadaysmanypeoplearedishonestfortheirownbenefit.Theynotonlyneglectourtraditionalvalues,butalsowanttoescapebeingpunished.Dishonestydoesgreatharmtooursociety.Itcandestroyourgoodrelationshipwithothers,bringinglotsofunstablefactorstothesociety.Sometimes,itmayevenaffectpeople’shealth..Whyshouldwebehonest?Firstly,beinghonestisoneofChinesetraditionalvirtueswhichweshouldcarryforward.Secondly,friendshipisbasedonhonesty.Seeingthatthehonestpersonisreliable,mostofpeoplearewillingtomakefriendswiththem.Thirdly,honestyisveryimportantforustobuildaharmonioussocietyandrealizeou