高考书面表达复习指导-课件

高考书面表达复习指导ByMrWang第二节书面表达(满分25分假定你是李华，你的巴基斯坦朋友Khan(属狗）对中国文化兴趣浓厚，他即将过生日。你在购物网站为他购买了一件礼物“狗”，请写一封邮件，告知他查收。内容包括：1.生日祝福;2.属相“狗”的含义；3.物品到达时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。武汉市2018届高三毕业生二月调考WritingStepsStep1审题文体、人称、时态Step2构思要点、用词、造句Step3谋篇书写、分段、排版第二节书面表达(满分25分假定你是李华，你的巴基斯坦朋友Khan(属狗）对中国文化兴趣浓厚，他即将过生日。你在购物网站为他购买了一件礼物“狗”，请写一封邮件，告知他查收。内容包括：1.生日祝福;2.属相“狗”的含义；3.物品到达时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。武汉市2018届高三毕业生二月调考文体：告知信人称：第一人称要点时态:一般过去时一般现在时一般将来时score:21score:23score:24好作文标准句子正确：句子成分、句子结构内容完整：增加细节、120字左右行文连贯：关联词汇、逻辑词汇高级表达：高级词汇、高级句型书写美观：书写整洁、三段排版一、句子怎样才算正确？1.简单句(simplesentence)主+系+表/主+谓+(宾)IamLiHua.Iamwritingaletter.2.并列句(compoundsentence)简单句+简单句IamLiHuaandIamwritingaletter.3.复合句(complexsentence)主句+从句IamLiHuawhoiswritingaletter.二、怎样增加细节？①增加同位语、介词短语Iknowyouwerebornin2006,theYearofDogaccordingtoChinesetradition.②增加非谓语动词短语So,Iboughtatoyforyou,hopingyouwillbeasluckyasadog.③增加状语从句、定语从句、名词从句Dogsareourfriends,ourbestcompanions,aswellasthemostpopularanimalsintheworld,whoareloyaltohumankinds.三、如何使文章连贯？1.表示转折关系：but,yet,however,instead,otherwise，onthecontrary,afterall.2.表示因果关系：since,as,because,so,thus,therefore,asaresult(of),asaconsequence(of).3.表示条件关系：if,unless,onconditionthat,so/aslongas.三、如何使文章连贯？4.表示时间关系：when,while,as,after,before,since,assoonas,themoment,theminute,not…until,nosooner…than,hardly/scarcely…when.5.表示先后顺序：firstly…secondly…finally…,firstofall/aboveall/tobeginwith…what’smore/inaddition…lastbutnottheleast…；ontheonehand,…;ontheotherhand,…;foronething...,foranother三、如何使文章连贯？6.进行举例说明：forinstance,forexample,suchas.7.表达个人看法：inmyopinion/view,asfarasI’mconcerned,asweknow,asisknowntoall/us.8.引出话题：Asfor/tosth.Whenitcomesto(doing)sth...,besides,what’smore,inaddition.9.总结话题：onthewhole,inshort,allinall,ingeneral,inaword.1.使用并列句【原文】Tomstudiedveryhard.Hepassedtheexam.【修改】Tomstudiedveryhardand/sohepassedtheexam.四、如何使用高级表达？2.使用非谓语动词【原文1】Theywentbacktoschool.Theysangandlaughed.【修改1】Theywentbacktoschool,singingandlaughing.【原文2】AfterIhadcollectedtheinformation,Ibegantoresearch.【修改2】Havingcollectedtheinformation,Ibegantoresearch.四、如何使用高级表达？3.使用with复合结构【原文1】Myfathersatinthesofa.Anewspaperwasinhishand.【修改1】Myfathersatinthesofawithanewspaperinhishand.【原文2】AfterIhaddonemyhomework,Iwenttobed.【修改2】Withmyhomeworkdone,Iwenttobed.四、如何使用高级表达？4.使用定语从句【原文1】Weloveourlibrary.Itisagoodplacetostudyin.【修改1】Weloveourlibrary,whichisagoodplacetostudyin.【原文2】IwenttoBeijingyesterday.Isawmanyinterestingthingsthere.【修改2】IwenttoBeijingyesterdaywhereIsawmanyinterestingthings.四、如何使用高级表达？5.使用状语从句【原文】Hegotupearly.Hecouldcatchtheearlybus.【修改】Hegotupearlysothat/inorderthathecouldcatchtheearlybus.四、如何使用高级表达？6.使用名词性从句【原文1】Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.【修改1】Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.【原文2】Asisknowntousall,Chinahasthelargestpopulationintheworld.【修改2】ItisknowntousallthatChinahasthelargestpopulationintheworld.四、如何使用高级表达？7.使用倒装句【原文1】Wecangethighmarksonlyinthisway.【修改1】Onlyinthiswaycanwegethighmarks.【原文2】Although/Thoughheisold,heoftenworkshard.【修改2】Oldas/thoughheis,heoftenworkshard.四、如何使用高级表达？8.使用强调句【原文1】Mybravedogsavedmylittlesister.【修改1】Itwasmybravedogthatsavedmylittlesister.【原文2】Ididn’tgotosleepuntilIhadfinishedmyhomework.【修改2】ItwasnotuntilIhadfinishedmyhomeworkthatIwenttosleep.四、如何使用高级表达？9.使用虚拟语气【原文1】Iamnotabird.Ican’tflyinthesky.【修改1】IfIwereabird,Icouldflyinthesky.【原文2】Youhadn’tfollowedmyadvice,soyoudidn’tpasstheexam.【修改2】

Hadyoufollowedmyadvice,youwouldhavepassedtheexam.四、如何使用高级表达？10.使用套话Howareyourecently?Haven’tseenyousincelasttimewespentaweektogetherinWuhan.I'mwritingtotellyou...Thereasonwhy...isthat...Iwouldbeverygrateful/appreciateitifyou...四、如何使用高级表达？Tip1:晚词优先1.adj.困难的黯然低分词：difficult闪光高分词：challenging2.adj.美丽的黯然低分词：beautiful闪光高分词：attractive/appealing/breathtaking3.v.生气黯然低分词：getangry闪光高分词：beovercome/overwhelmedwithanger五、如何使用高级词汇？Tip2:词组优先1.

v.

使用黯然低分词：use闪光高分词：make(good)useof/takeadavantageof2.adj.

有好处的黯然低分词：beneficial闪光高分词：beof(great)benefit3.v.

影响黯然低分词：affect/influence闪光高分词：haveaneffect/influence/impacton五、如何使用高级词汇？Tip3:具体化优先1.MrWuisagoodteacher.2.Theactivityissuccessful.Theactivitydisplaysourtalentsandenrichesourlives.MrWuisakind,patientandknowledgeableteacher.五、如何使用高级词汇？Whichhandwritingisbeautiful?Whichhandwritingisbeautiful?Whichhandwritingisbeautiful?Whichhandwritingisbeautiful?Handwriting意大利斜体Handwriting衡水体第二节书面表达(满分25分假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim对中国传统节日感兴趣，请向他介绍一下中国的清明节(theTomb-sweepingDay)。内容包括：1.清明节含义;2.清明节活动；3.你的感受。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。HomeworkFestival节日ActivitiesLanternFestival春节TocelebratetheNewyear,wecounteddown(倒数)forit.SpringFestival元宵节Seeingfromthetopofthehill,Ienjoyedthespringouting(