高中英语-Continuation Writing教学课件设计

1234ContinuationWritingLearningAims1.Understandthebasicinformationandmainideaofthetext;2.learnhowtocontinuethestory;3.Inferthedevelopmentandending;4.Expressideasinwrittenform;5.learnhowtopolishapassage.What'sthewritingstyleofthepassage?

A.Narration(记叙文)

C.Exposition（说明文）B.Argument(议论文)astorywhenwhowherewhatOnce,whenIwasateenagerinfrontoftheticketcountermyfatherandI;abigfamilyboughtticketsforthecircus......ReadforPlot情节分析语言分析结局预测续写标准续写点评StoryMountainBeginningDevelopmentClimaxLaterDevelopmentEndingA.However,thecoupleweretoldthattheydidn'thaveenoughmoneytobuytickets.B.MyfatherandIboughtticketsforcircus.C.Alovingcoupleandtheireightwell-behavedchildrenalsoboughtticketsforcircus.D...mydadpulledouta$20billanddroppeditontheground.

BCDA

?ReadforLanguage情节分析语言分析结局预测续写标准续写点评①Thefatherandmotherwereattheheadofthepack,standingproudascouldbe.Themotherwasholdingherhusband'shand,lookingupathimasiftosay,“Youaremyknightinshiningarmor.”②Hewassmilingandrespondinginpride,lookingbackatherasiftosay,“Yougotthatright.”⑥Howwashesupposedtoturnandtellhiseightchildrenthathedidn'thaveenoughmoneytotakethemtothecircus?③Theticketladyaskedthefatherhowmanyticketshewanted.Heproudlyresponded,“Pleaseletmebuyeightchildren'sticketsandtwoadultticketssoIcantakemyfamilytothecircus.”⑤Thefatherleanedalittlecloserandasked,“Howmuchdidyousay?”④Theticketladygavetheprice.Theman'swifeletgoofhishand,herheaddropped,andhislipsbegantoshake.Actions动作描写Feelings心理描写EffectiveDialogue有效对话④①②⑥

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prouddisappointedshockedunbelievablesaddesperateBeginningDevelopmentClimaxLaterDevelopmentEndingexpectedgrateful/thankfulexcitedprouddisappointedsaddesperate

?A.Theydidn'thaveenoughmoneytobuyticketsandwenthomesadly.positivehappyB.Theyfinallyboughtticketsandthefamilywenttoseethecircusshowhappily.Paragraph1:Seeingwhatwasgoingon,mydadputhishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20billanddroppeditontheground.Paragraph2:ThatdaymyfatherandIwentbacktoourcaranddrovehomewithoutanytickets.情节分析情感分析结局预测续写标准续写点评Whatwouldmyfathersay?Whatwasthereactionoftheman?Howdidmyfatherexplaintome?WouldIfeelsad?Requirements:1.Cohesiveandreasonableendings.2.Correctspellingandgrammar.3.Goodhandwriting.情感分析情节分析结局预测续写标准续写点评情感分析情节分析结局预测续写标准续写点评

Seeingwhatwasgoingon,mydadputhishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20billanddroppeditontheground.Thenhepickeditupandtappedthemanontheshoulderandsaid,“Excuseme,sir,thisfelloutofyourpocket.”Themanturnedaroundandsawthemoney!Heknewwhatwasgoingon.Helookedstraightintomydad'seyes,tookmydad'shandinbothofhis,squeezedtightlyontothe$20bill,andwithhislipshakingandatearrunningdownhischeek,hereplied,“Thankyou,thankyou,sir.Thisreallymeansalottomeandmyfamily.”

ThatdaymyfatherandIwentbacktoourcaranddrovehomewithoutanytickets.Wedidn'tgotothecircusthatnight.WhenIaskeddadwhyhedidso,Dadsaid,“Mychild,itwas'adesperate,heartbreakingandembarrassingsituationforafather.Surelyhewasn'tbeggingforahandout,butheremindedmeofmyfather,whenIwasyoung."Hepausedforawhile,asifwanderinginhismemory."Weshouldappreciatewhatwehaveobtainedfromlifeandseizeeveryopportunitytohelpothers.Wedidn'tgotothecircustonight,butwedidn'tgowithout.Now,whowantsanicecream?Onepossibleversion:It'salwaysbettertogive