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Weibo：Cynthia 描述性句型写作：中文+描述性句型写作：中文+Weibo：Cynthia

+—> —>—>—>细节 相关—>中心词主体youngboy动词runquicklytodash/ruchtomakethefinalspurt宾语thefinishinglinetheendoftherace—>lottery

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【2008着彼此，丢下拐杖 远方Twophysicallyhandicappedyoungsters,supportingeachotherwiththeirstronghands,leavingtheircrutchesbehind,runtothedistance.

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Theolderfather,abandonedbyhisfourchildren,iscryinginthecenterofthefootballfield.

Thetenderflower，exposedtothepouringrainandhorriblelightinganddustywind,fadeTheteachercomesinHesTheteachercomesin，smilingonhiswith dancingonhisface【2005】主体withthefatherlyinginthemiddleofthewiththeeldestsonkickingouthiswiththeotherthreestandingonfrontoftheirgoalstoguard/defend1、therebe...句型+非谓语修 ThereisaThereisayoung1、therebe...句型+非谓语修 ThereisaThereisayoung+Thereisayoungboymakingafinalspurttothe+sweatingall1、therebe...句型+非谓语修 ThereisaThereisayoung+Thereisayoungboymakingafinalspurttothe+sweatingall+with伴随状语：witha witha hangingonhiswitha[shiningandconfident] hangingonhis11、therebe...句型+therebethereisayoungboymakingthefinalspurttothedestination,sweatingallover[tiredandexhausted],witha[shiningandconfident] hangingonhislips.thereisayoungboy,perhapsanathlete,makingthefinalspurttothedestination—theendoftherace,sweatingallover[tiredandexhausted],witha[shiningandconfident]s hangingonhislips.moremoreWeibo：Cynthia —> —>动作：照顾，踢 ，蜷缩，守—>—>细节 相关—>地点 中心词 分类—>三个儿子，一个女儿//子女oldtheagedfathersonsanddaughterfour(…)adultchildrencruel,immoral,irresponsible takecarelookyafootball

踢：kickout—> — ya fierce]footballspecial,odd,ugly, immoralOnthefootball 1WHO:五个人正在进行的一场【奇怪的/的】赛 123 Therearefour(cruelandirresponsible)adultyinga(fierceandspecial)footballmatch[abouttakingcareoftheiragedfather]withtheeldestsonkickingouthiswiththefatherlyinginthemiddleofthe Therearefour(cruelandirresponsible)adult ying(fierceandspecial)footballmatchabouttakingcareoftheiragedfather，withtheeldestsonkickingouthisfather，andtheotherthreestandinginfrontoftheirgoalstodefend,moremoreWeibo：Cynthia ，2009国内汽车市场部分品牌市场份额示意重要细节 相关12中心主讲 Weibo：Cynthia 时间：intheyearof2008anddomesticbrandJapanesecarandAmericanImported主讲 Weibo：Cynthia 2、持平：droptonearbalance轻soar，surge，leap,主讲 Weibo：Cynthia 12、进口车：总体下降（下降或持平—> —> Thereisabarchartshowingthefluctuationofthemarketshareofcertainbrandsinthedomesticauto marketin2008and2009， capturing33%oftheshare,leadingthewiththeJapanesebranddecreasingbyapproxima y10%andAmericanbrandbeingsteady.

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Weibo：Cynthia asifheisembracingthehopeofhisvictoryandhissuccess.asifhewasembracingthehopeofhisvictoryandhisachievement.主讲 Weibo：Cynthia 老父亲被自己子女抛弃 老父亲被自己子女抛弃asifthefatherbecameaasifthefatherprovedtobeheavyasifthefatherwasabandonedbyhisbelovedsonsand 老父亲被自 子女抛弃asifthefatherbecamea

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