2023届高三英语作文复习读后续写语言升格讲义

2023江阴一中高三复习——读后续写语言升格英语语法在读后续写中有着非常重要的作用。丰富准确的结构、句式对于读后续写起着重句，强调句型，which引导的非限制性定语从句，虚拟语气等，在平时写作中要有意识地加景等的描写，平时要注意积累这方面的词汇和表达。*VariousSentencePatterns:定语从句我不知道该说什么，直到我看到我的队友对我微笑，他们给了我一个信任和期待的眼神。IwasatalosswhattosayuntilIsawmyteammatessmilingatme,whogavemealookoftrustandanticipation.她的三个孩子对妈妈的赞美咯咯地笑着，继续画画，这让拉菲和西斯塔非常困惑。Gigglingattheirmom'scompliment,herthreekidsproceededwiththeirdrawing,whichmadeRafiandSistaratherconfused.在他的耳朵里回荡着哭声和尖叫声，这提醒了他孩子们处于多么危险的境地。Echoinginhisearswerecriesandscreams,whichremindedhimofwhatadangeroussituationthechildrenwerein.名词性从句1.战胜恐惧和实现目标需要决心和乐观 （表语从句）Determinationandoptimismarewhatittakes^toconqueryourfearandaccomplishyourgoal.2.我从这次难忘的经历学到了即使是一个小小的善举也能产生巨大的影响。WhatI’velearnedfromthatunforgettableexperienceisthatevenasmallactofkindnesscanmakeabigdifference. （主语从句，表语从句）我突然明白了帮助别人不仅给别人的生活带来了巨大的改变，而且给我带来了满足感。Itdawnedonmethatnotonlydidhelpingothersmakeagreatdifferencetoothers’life,butitalsobroughtasenseofsatisfactiontome. (主从)等待我的事情出乎我的意料。Whatawaitedmewasoutofmyexpectation.主从)Itiswidelyacknowledgedthat (主从)状语从句他人的自尊。(notuntil时间状语从句)ItwasnotuntilthenthattheyrealizedthatSusanwassoconsiderateandkindthatsheevencaredforother’sself-esteemwhilehelpingothers.(NotuntilthendidtheyrealizethatSusanwassoconsiderateandkindthatsheevencaredforother’sself-esteemwhilehelpingothers. 否定短语放句首倒装句)一对夫妇正巧开车经过，看到我躺在乡间小路上，浑身是血，不省人事。Acoupleweredrivingbybycoincidencewhenspottingmelyingonthecountryroadunconscious,coveredinblood. (bedoing---when )从参考书到基本生活必需品，只要质量好、实用，我们都欢迎。(条件状语从句)Variousobjects(rangingfromreferencebookstobasicnecessities)arewelcomeaslongas/onconditionthattheyareingoodconditionandofpracticaluse.4.不管情况如何，只要我们团结一致，一切都会好起来的。(让步状语从句)Whateverthecircumstanceswere,everythingwouldturnoutfineaslongaswestucktogether.强调句 （Itis/was+被强调部份+that/who+原句剩余部分）就在那时他完全明白了，跑步不是关于输赢而是关于成为一个更好的自己。Itwasthenthathefullyunderstoodthatrunningwasnotaboutwinningorlosing,butaboutbecomingabetterself.Itwasatthismomentthatasenseofprideandachievementoverwhelmedme,whichmademedeterminedtochoosedoctorasmylifelongcareer.从这件小插曲，我们都明白了：我们都知道相互理解和尊重是最重要的。Wealllearnedthatitwasmutualunderstandingandrespectthatmattered/countedmost.我突然意识到，在友谊中，重要的不是受欢迎程度、穿着打扮或发型，而是友善。Itdawnedonmethatitwasnotpopularity,outfitorhairstylethatmatteredinfriendship.Insteaditwaskindness.每次我濒临放弃时，都是我对马歇尔的爱增强了我的决心。EverytimeIwasonthevergeofgivingup,itwasmyloveforMarshallthatboostedmydetermination.感叹句太巧了！Whatacoincidence！一个小小的善举和同情心可以给有需要的人带来多么大的改变！Whatabigdifferenceasmallactofkindnessandcompassioncanmaketothoseinneed!3.我多么后悔自己不够小心。HowIregrettedthatIwasn'tcarefulenough.倒装句So-----that Suchthat 结果状语倒装①我既惊讶又紧张，站在当场说不出话来。SoastonishedandnervouswasIthatIwasrootedtothespot,tongue-tied②我很痛苦，开始在水里挣扎。我没法开口向父亲求助。更糟糕的是，第二波浪来了，把我冲得更远。我绝望地以为我会死在这里。SopainfulwasIthatIbegantostruggleinthewater.Icouldhardlyutterawordtoaskmyfatherforhelp.makethemattersworse,asecondwavecameandwashedmeawayevenfarther.IthoughtindesperationthatIwasgoingtodiehere.③我紧张得心都快跳出嗓子眼了。SonervousdidIfeelthatmyheartalmostjumpedoutofmythroat.④她感到非常羞愧，都能觉得血液涌上脸颊。Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.⑤我感动得哽咽着说了声“谢谢”。SotouchedwasIthatImurmured“Thankyou”inachokedvoice.as/though让步状语从句倒装①虽然这份工作要求高且累人的，还是值得的因为它可以给我带来成就感和满足感。Demandingandtiringasthejobwas,itwasworthwhile(todoit)becauseitcouldbringmeasenseofachievementandsatisfaction!②尽管她很害怕，但她还是冲向Clay，检查了他的伤口给他做了一些简单的急救。Frightenedasshewas,shedashedtoClay,checkedhiswoundandgavehimsomesimplefirstaid.③虽然山姆很后悔也很紧张但他还是设法安慰了汤姆,汤姆颤抖着快要哭了。RegretfulandstressedasSamwas,hemanagedtocomfortwhowastrembling,onthevergeoftears.④尽管我又无助又焦虑，我还是努力让自己镇定下来，朝前游去。HelplessandanxiousasIwas,Imanagedtocomposemyselfandswamforward.⑤她虽然精疲力尽，但还是竭尽全力到达岸边，最终成功了。Exhaustedasshewas,shewenttogreatlengths/wentallouttoreachtheshoreandeventuallymadeit.⑥尽管我很不情愿，但我别无选择，只能承担起我的责任。Reluctant/UnwillingasIwas,Ihadnochoicebuttoshouldermyresponsibility.⑦尽管小狗们又害羞又谨慎，但它们摇摇晃晃地朝我走来，舔我的手指。Shyandcautiousasthepupswere,theystaggeredtowardsmeandlickedmyfingers.否定副词提前倒装句①走出去不仅帮助了那些需要帮助的人，也让我尝到了帮助别人的甜头。Notonlydidsteppingouthelpthoseinneed,butalsoitallowedmetotastethesweetnessofhelpingothers.②我一到家天就开始下雨。NosoonerhadIarrivedhomethanitbegantorain.HardlyhadIarrivedhomewhenitbegantorain.③我刚放了小狗，它们就争先恐后跑向她。HardlyhadIreleasedthepupswhentheyracedeachothertoher.④直到那时，他们才意识到苏珊是如此体贴和善良，以至于她在帮助他人的同时甚至关心他人的自尊。NotuntilthendidtheyrealizethatSusanwassoconsiderateandkindthatsheevencaredforother’sself-esteemwhilehelpingothers.Doing/done +be主语+（其他）在他的耳朵里回荡着哭声和尖叫声，这提醒了他孩子们处于多么危险的境地。Echoinginhisearswerecriesandscreams,whichremindedhimofwhatadangeroussituationthechildrenwerein.地点状语/运动方向的副词位于句首倒装（in,out,up,down,here,there,off,away,outside,inside等）比尔像箭一样飞奔而出OutdashedBilllikeanarrow其他倒装直到那时我才意识到，勇敢才能克服挡路的任何困难。OnlythendidIrealizethatitwasbraverythatcanconquerwhateverdifficultyintheway.分词做状语1.他咬着嘴唇绞尽脑汁，试图找到解决问题的办法，但是徒劳无功。Bitinghislips,herackedhisbrains,tryingtofigureoutawaytoaddresstheproblem,butinvain.2.他每天晚上在床上辗转反侧，与自己的良心抗争。Hetossedandturnedinbedeverynight,wrestlingwithhisconscience.3.他坐在那儿，双手捂着头，痛苦地呻吟着。Therehesat,buryinghisheadinhishandsandmoaningbitterly.4.“对不起，爸爸，太乱了，”Jeff小声说道，惭愧地低着头。“Dad,sorry,itwassuchamess.”Jeffmurmured,loweringhisheadinshame.WhistonHunter眼中的绝望，弯下腰紧紧地拥抱他，安慰他们会安全的。SensingthedesperategleaminHunter’seyes,Whistonbentovertogivehimatightembrace,comfortingthattheywouldbesafe.我拖着疲惫的身躯向前挪动，内心充满了恐惧。Filledwithfright/fear,Idraggedmyexhaustedbodyinchingforward.7.站在队伍的前面，艾米丽感到喉咙紧绷，手心出汗。Standinginfrontoftheline,Emilyfeltherthroattightandherpalmssweating.我迷路了！站在一片荒无人烟之地，我又冷又怕，忍不住瑟瑟发抖。更糟糕的是，我空空如也的肚子开始咕咕直叫/生物在暗中低语，我几乎被吓僵。Standinginthemiddleofnowhere,Icouldn’thelptremblingwithcoldandfear.Tomakemattersworse,myemptystomachstartedtorumble/protest,whichundoubtedlyaddedtomymisery.Withnightfalling,andwindhowling,Iwasalmostfrozenwithfrightbynamelesscreaturesmurmuringinthedark.他低着头坐在地上，休息着酸痛的双腿，揉着酸痛的脚。Withhisheaddown,hesatontheground,restinghisachinglegsandrubbinghissorefeet.茸茸的尾巴。Startledbytheunexpectedstranger,thegraysquirrel,crouchingonthetree,chatteredfiercelyandtrembledhisfurrytail.看到狼群融入森林，我松了一口气，有一种成就感。Seeingthepackmeltingintotheforest,Ibreathedasighofrelief,feelingasenseoffulfillment.12.我深吸一口气，慢慢地走近母狼，心狂跳，手心冒汗。adeepbreath,Islowlyapproachedthemotherwolf,heartpoundingandpalmssweating.13.我笑眯眯地看着他，抓住他的手，塞给他一些钱，足够买一张票和一些食物。Beamingathim,Igrabbedhishand,slippingintohishandsomemoney（enoughtobuyanairticketandsomefood）14.然后那个女人蹒跚地走到临终关怀医院，留下一个悲伤而孤独的身影。Thenthewomanstaggeredtothehospice,leavingbehindasadandlonelyfigure.15.哈利被强烈的好奇心驱使着，几乎无法抑制自己瞥上一眼的冲动。Drivenbytremendouscuriosity,Harryhardlyresistedtheimpulsetocasta鼓起勇气，清了清嗓子，开始背诵他练习过很多次的那首诗。Pluckinguphiscourageandclearinghisthroat,Tomestartedtorecitethepoemhehadpractisedmanytimes.形容词作状语，修饰主句主语1.他们的母亲既震惊又骄傲，幸福地低声说道，“谢谢孩子们。”Shockedandproud,theirmothersaidinasweetwhisper,“Thanks,mykids.”2.他尽可能快地跑着，既担心又焦虑。Concernedandanxious,heranasfastashecould.我对自己头脑简单的行为感到非常后悔，想着错过了彩虹，我又哭了起来。Regretfulformysimple-mindedbehavior,thinkingaboutthemissingrainbow,Iburstintotearsagain.她既不情愿又内疚，不敢看戈麦斯太太的眼睛。Reluctantandguilty,shedidn’tdaretolookintoMrs.Gomez’seyes5.狼对我的靠近感到困惑和害怕，于是向后退去。Confusedandfrightenedatmyapproach,thewolfbacked6.我感恩又感动，向艾米要了他们的电话号码。Gratefulandmoved,IaskedAmyfortheirnumber.7.Speechless,shesmiledradiantlyandgatheredhersonintoherarms.8.到那只凶猛的狼，我吓得呆住了，一动也不敢动。Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.9.乔治边唱边吹口哨，开始走回家，虽然很累，但是心情很愉快。Singingandwhistling,Georgestartedtowalkhome,tiredbutcheerful.独立主格结构1.她的手在颤抖，几乎要哭了。Herhandsshaking/trembling，shewasonthevergeoftears.2.那一刻，我悲痛欲绝，泪水模糊了我的双眼Atthatmoment,Iwasoverwhelmedbygrief,tearsblurringmyeyes.她的眼睛亮了起来，兴奋地闪闪发光，她惊讶地说：“我做我最喜欢的菜？Hereyeslightingupandsparklingwithexcitement,sheutteredinamazement,twodroveeighthours,simplytocookmemyfavoritedish?”男孩中途停下,他的心怦怦直跳,充满了兴奋和期待。Theboystoppedshort,hisheartpoundingwithexcitementandanticipation.5.我的鼻子一酸，试图抑制住眼泪，然而并没什么用。Mynosebeingverysour,Istruggledtofightbacktears,which,however,turnedouttobeinvain.6.脸涨的红红的，心脏怦怦直跳，他跳起来，扯着嗓门大吼道。Bloodrushingtohisfaceandheartbeatingfiercely,heleapttohisfeetandyelledatthetopofhisvoice.她对我露齿而笑,开心的眼睛闪闪发光.Shegrinnedatme,hereyessparkling/twinkling/glitteringwithpleasure.她的眼睛亮了起来，兴奋地闪闪发光，她惊讶地说：“给我做我最喜欢的菜？”Hereyeslightingupandsparklingwithexcitement,sheutteredinamazement,twodroveeighthours,simplytocookmemyfavoritedish?”那一刻，我悲痛欲绝，泪水模糊了我的眼睛。Atthatmoment,Iwasoverwhelmedbygrief,tearsblurringmyeyes.with复合结构做状语我紧紧握着那张纸条，眼泪快要掉下来，一股暖流在我身上蔓延开来。Holdingthenotetightly,Iwasonthevergeoftears,withastreamofwarmthspreadingacrossmybody.“现在没时间给妈妈做早餐。”Jenna哭了起来，遗憾和内疚像无尽的潮水一样淹没了她。“Notimetomakemumabreakfastnow.”Jennacriedwithregretandguiltoverwhelmingherlikeendlesstides.我站在那里，看着它，眼泪顺着脸颊滚落。Istoodthereandstaredatitwithtearsrollingdownmycheeks.4.我冷得瑟瑟发抖，空荡荡的肚子咕咕地叫着。Iwasshiveringwithcold,withmyemptystomachrumbling.她一直盯着手机，直到老师拍了拍他的肩膀她才意识到老师正站在他面前。Withhereyesgluedtothephone,itwasnotuntiltheteacherpattedonhershoulderthatsherealizedteacherstoodinfrontofher.他咬紧牙关，全速奔跑。histeethclenched,heranatfullspeed.7.“但她说要你也给我报酬。”拉菲垂下眼睛说。“ButShesaidtoaskyouforthepayment,too.”Rafisaidwithhereyesdropped.8.他的眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒，难以置信地看着我，一句话也说不出来。Withhiseyessparklingwithexcitement,helookedatmeindisbelief,unabletoutterevenaword.虚拟语气1.没有你的耐心指导，我们不可能取得如此伟大的成就。Withoutyourpatientguidance,wecouldn’thavemadesogreatanachievement.2.没有你的帮助，我们本不可能找到助听器。Withoutyourhelp,wecouldn’thavefoundthehearingaid.3.要不是你及时且专业的急救，我儿子可能很难苏醒。“Haditnotbeenfor/Butfor/Withoutyourtimelyandprofessionalhelp,mysonwouldhavehaddifficultycomingtohimself.”无灵主语时间、地点名词作主语(witness/see)Thefollowingminuteswitnessedtheirjointeffortstocleanupthekitchenandcookbreakfast.情感类名词作主语①巨大的兴奋和惊喜涌上了心头——我冲向那棵树。Greatexcitementandsurprisefloodedin—Irushedtothetree.②一股疲惫和绝望的感觉向他袭来。 Atideofexhaustionanddespairwashedoverhim.③一种不安的感觉涌上心头，我的手指几乎冻僵了。Asenseofanxietycreptuponme,andmyfingerswerenearlyfrozen.④随着他们逐渐消失在远方，一股强烈的满足感涌上我的心头。Astheydisappearedintothefardistancegradually,astrongsenseofsatisfactionpouredintomymind.⑤他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.⑥恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。Fearslowlycreptuponher.⑦他心中涌起一阵恐惧。/恐惧淹没了他。Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.seizegrip,visit,haunt,comeover,wellup,takepossessionof等，就能构成精彩的情感类无灵主语句。连续动作Igrinnedmerrily,racedtothemandembracedthemtightly.一怒之下站起来，冲出房间，狠狠摔门Shestoodinarage,stormedoutandslammedthedoor.3.她冲上前去，跪在地上，把儿子抱在怀里。Shedashedforward,kneltdownandgatheredhersonintoherarms.4.简颤抖着站起来，走向丈夫，扑进他的怀里，在他的肩膀上无法控制地抽泣。Janegottoherfeetshakily,approachedherhusbandandthrewherselfintohisarms,sobbinguncontrollablyonhisshoulders.*读后续写修辞手法比喻OutdashedBilllikean她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.3.她脸上灿烂的笑容像一缕阳光，驱散了我的阴郁。Likearayofsunshine,thebigsmileonherfacesweptawaymygloom.4.这次他没有防御和犹豫，而是像老虎捕猎一样主动出击。Insteadofbeingdefensiveandhesitant,hetooktheinitiativetoattackthistimelikeatigerhuntinghisprey.她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。Sheshookalloverfeelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.凯蒂低下头，感觉坐立不安。她的话在我耳边回响，像看不见的锤子一样,Katieloweredherhead,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.Herwordsechoedinmyearsthatwerelikeinvisiblehammers,strikingmyheartfuriously.我的心往下沉，好像被冷水泼了一样。Myheartsankasifsplashedbycold8.他的话一次又一次地刺进老人的心里。Hiswordsstabbedagainandagainintotheoldman’sheart.7.闪烁的星星眨着眼和芬芳的微风轻轻地抚摸着我的头，仿佛在抚慰我所有的疲惫。Twinklingstarswereblinking/twinklingandfragrantbreezegentlystrokedmyhead,asifcomfortingallofmytiredness.10.刺骨的寒风像狼一样猛烈地嚎叫着，使黑暗更加令人窒息。“爸爸，我们该怎么办?”我紧紧地抱住他，颤抖着。Thebone-chillingwindhowledfiercelylikeawolf,makingthedarknessevenmoresuffocating.“Dad,whatcanwedo?”Ithrewmyarmsaroundhimtightly,quivering.狂风像饿狼一样嚎叫着，他们挤在营地里取暖。狮子的哀鸣声使他们毛骨悚然。Withthefiercewindhowlinglikeahungrywolf,theyhuddledtogetherintheircampforwarmth.Thesoundofthewhininglionsmadetheirhairstandonend.当我的手摸索着寻找任何可以保证我们安全的东西时，我的大脑像闪电一样飞速运转。Mymindracedlikeflashasmyhandsfumbledforanythingthatmightkeepussafe.Atthecrackofdawn,sheracedtowardsthecastlelikeagallopinghorsebutunfortunatelybumpedintoastone,losingherconsciousness.我如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶。Ifeltalumpinmythroat,tearingwellingupinmyeyes.lumpn.肿块隆起 havealumpinyourthroat(因愤怒或情绪激动而喉咙哽住，哽咽)小男孩狼吞虎咽。Theboywolfeddownthefood.Aheavysilenceblanketedtheroom.Athickmisthungoverthetown.我的腿紧张的发软。Mylegsfeltlikejelly/turnedto拟人1.微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。Thebreezegentlykissedhercheeks.2.鹅毛般的雪花在空中飞舞，构成一幅美丽的图画。Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair,makingabeautifulpicture.3.薄雾把他包围起来。Themistswallowedhimup.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。Starswinkedatmeinadarkening6.恐惧把他吞噬了。Fearseized/swallowedhim.7.我气得说不出话来。Angerchokedmywords.夸张1.看到那条蛇，我几乎吓了一跳/吓得我魂不附体Thesightofthesnakemademenearlyjumpoutofmyskin.2.我都快笑死了。Ialmostlaughedmyheadoff.我的血液都凝固了。Mybloodfroze.当我凝视着缆车的边缘时，我的心都提到嗓子眼了。WhenIwasstaringovertheedgeofthecablecar,myheartwasinmythroat.5.当他们告诉我这个消息时，我乐不可支。Whentheytoldthenews,Iwasoverthemoon/ontopoftheworld.动作描写head1.他羞愧地低下了头。Hehung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowedhisheadinshame.2.他们点头同意。Theynoddedtheirheadsinagreement.她怀疑地摇摇头。Sheshookherheadindisbelief.他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。Hescratchedhishead,notunderstandinga5.他耷拉着脑袋，眼泪滴落在大脚上。Hisheaddroopedandtearsfellintohislap.6.Idecidedtogoforawalktoclearmyhead.他只喝了一杯就觉得天旋地转。Hecouldfeelhisheadspinningafteronlyonedrink.Heshookhisheadgentlywithouttakinghiseyesfrommyplane.face1.他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。Abrightsmileappearedon/spreadacross/crossedhisface.2.我给她礼物时，他的脸上焕发出了光彩。Herfacelitup/brightened/glowedwhenIgaveherthepresent.3.他的表情突然严肃起来。Hisfacesuddenlygrewserious.Jack'sfaceflushed/glowedwithembarrassment.Herfacepaledwithfright.eye看到她所做的事，他惊恐地睁大了眼睛。Hiseyeswerewide/widenedwithhorroratwhatshehaddone蒂娜闭上双眼，咬了咬嘴唇。Tinasqueezedhereyesshutandbitherlip.3她直视父亲的眼睛，诚实地回答了他的问题。Shelookedherfatherstraightintheeyeandansweredhisquestiontruthfully.4.她笑了，眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。Shelaughed,hereyesshining/sparklingwithexcitement.5.她试图坐起来，目光紧盯着琼的脸。Shetriedtositup,hereyesfixedonJean'sface.6.他进屋时眼睛扫视了整个房间。Hiseyesscannedtheroomasheentered.7.泪水模糊了她的双眼。Tearsblurredhereyes/vision.mouth1.他捂住嘴偷偷打了个哈欠。Hecoveredhismouthtohidehisyawn.2.我们惊奇地张大了嘴。Ourmouthsdroppedopeninsurprise.3.闻到食物的香味，我开始流口水了。MymouthstartedwateringwhenIsmelledthefood.4.我走进她的办公室时，紧张得心都到了喉咙口。MyheartwasinmymouthwhenIwalkedintoheroffice.hand她耸耸肩，摊开双手说：“我只能告诉你这么多了。”Sheshruggedhershouldersandspreadherhands.“That'sallIcantellyou.”她一边颤抖，一边使劲搓着双手。Sheshivered,rubbingherhandstogetherfiercely.3.他双手抱着坐着。Hesatwithhisheadinhishands.4.他们手拉手沿着小路走。Theywalkedhandinhandalongthepath.finger他打了个响指，侍者跑了过来。Hesnappedhisfingersandthewaitercamerunning.arm1.他们一定会张开双臂欢迎你。Theyaresuretowelcomeyouwithopenarms.2.他正向前跑去，挥舞着手臂。Hewasrunningforward,wavinghisarms.Hestoodtherewithcrossedarms,lookingangry.她双手交叉，盯着他看。Shefoldedherarmsandstaredathim.他伸出一只手，抓住她的手臂。Hereachedoutahandandcaughtholdof/grabbedherarm.6.他们手挽手一起走Theywalkedalongarminarm.7.他向她跑去，双手抱着她。Heranuptoherandput/threw/wrappedhisarmsaroundher.8.他把她拉进怀抱，吻了她。Hepulledherintohisa