《推荐》2021年高考真题和模拟题分类汇编英语专题22书面表达含解析

专题22书面表达

I、2021年高考真题

（2021•全国甲卷•书面表达）

假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。

请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。

邮件内容包括：

1.阐明写信事由；

2.征求建议；

3.表示感谢。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】DearChris,

Wordcamethatourschoolisgoingtoholdaclassmeetingwhosetopicisrelatedto

Chinesetraditionalcustoms.BecausethisactivitywillbepresentedontheEnglish

website,Isincerelywantyoutooffermesomeadvice.

Asfarasweknow,thereisahugeculturaldifferencebetweenChinaandthewestern

countries.Inordertogetmoreclicks,you'dbettertellmewhichChinesecultureyou

westernersprefer.What'smore,ifIwanttodecoratemywebsitewithsomeChinese

elements,whatshouldIdo?KnowingyouareinterestedinChina,Idobelieveyoucan

helpmesolvethesepuzzles.

Ifpossible,youcanreplytomeassoonaspossible.Iwilltakeyouradviceinto

consideration.Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.

Yours,

LiHua

（2021•全国乙卷•书面表达）

你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，

内容包括：

1.分析优势与不足；

2.提出学习建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.题目和首句已为你写好。

【答案］onepossibleversion:

Besmartonlinelearners

Networklearninghasincreasinglybeeanimportantmeansfbrpeopletoacquire

knowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesand

disadvantages.

Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensive

educationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,Wecantaketheinitiativeinour

studybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.

Ofcourse,thesedisadvantagesareasfollows.Facedwithallkindsofinformationon

theinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybe

harmfultoourstudyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassome

imperfections,makingitdifficultfbrusnottobeaffected.

Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesand

disadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿

参赛。

1.词汇积累

充分利用：makefulluseof—>makethemostof

扩宽，丰富：broaden—*enrich

各种各样：allkindsof—*varietiesof

不完美：imperfection—*defect

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesand

disadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.

拓展句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesand

disadvantages,findingaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.

［高分句型1］Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthe

differencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.

（非谓语作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

［高分句型21Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingit

difficultforusnottobeaffected.（现在分词作状语）

n、2021年高考模拟试题

（2021•成都三诊•书面表达）

假如你校英语角正在征集与课外活动有关的短文。请根据以下要点介绍令你印象

最深刻的一次课外活动。

1.时间、地点；2.活动过程；3.你的感受。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

AnImpressiveAfter-schoolActivity

【答案）LastSaturday,ourclassheldameaningfulactivityshowingoursincereconcern

fortheelderlyinthenursinghome.Themomentwewentthere,allofusgotstarted

immediately.Someofuscleanedtheroomsandwindowscarefully,somechattedwiththe

elderlydelightedly,andsomeevensangbeautifulsongs.Thiswonderfulandhappy

momentlastedformorethanfourhours.Atlast,weleftwithfullenjoymentandpride,

promisingmoreregularvisits.Caringforothersisatraditionalvirtueofournation.If

everyonelovesothersunconditionally,wecansurelymakeourcountryabetterplaceto

live.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生介绍令一次令人印象最深刻的课外活动。

1.词汇积累

真诚的：sincere-heartfelt

立即：immediately-^rightaway

开心地：delightedly-happily

快乐：enjoyment—joy

2.句式拓展

运用非谓语动词

原句：Someofuscleanedtheroomsandwindowscarefully,somechattedwiththe

elderlydelightfully,andsomeevensangbeautifulsongs.

拓展句：Someofuscleanedtheroomsandwindowscarefully,somechattingwiththe

elderlydelightfully,andsomeevensangbeautifulsongs.

[高夕）句型1]Atlast,weleftwithfullenjoymentandpride,promisingmoreregular

visits.（运用了现在分词作状语）

[高分句型2]Caringforothersisatraditionalvirtueofournation.（运用了动名词作主

语）

（2021•天津十二区县联考2•书面表达）

你是晨光的李津，你校要举办一个英语特色活动，作为负责人，你给你曾经的外

教Jonathan写一封E-mail,请求他给你一些建议。

1.你举办这个活动的设想（时间、地点、目的、一个活动形式如：英语戏剧表演或

英语图书分享会等）。

2,对外教提两个有关活动设想的具体的问题。词数不少于100。开头已给出，不计

入词数。

DearJonathan,

Howtimeflies!Wehaven'tseeneachotherforalmostoneyearsinceyouwentback

home.

【答案］Onepossibleanswer

DearJonathan,

Howtimeflies!Wehaven'tseeneachotherforalmostoneyearsinceyouwentback

home.IamwritingtoaskforyouradviceonorganizinganactivityfeaturingEnglish,

hopingyoucanhelpmeorganizeasuccessfulevent

I,asthestudentincharge,havemadeaplanthatthisactivitywillbeheldnextmonth

inourschoollibraryintheformofadramapetition.Theaimofthepetitionistoarouse

students1interestinlearningEnglishandliterature.Thestudentswilltakepartinthis

petitionrepresentingtheirclasses.Oneclassoneteam.Whatrsmore,thedramathey

choosecanbeeitherEnglishdramasorChinesedramas,butallshouldbeperformedin

English.Idobelievethispetitioncannotonlyenhancestudents1Englishlevelbutalso

improvestudents*all-toundability.

Mr.Jonathan,doyouthinkmyplanispractical?Canyouremendanydramasthatare

suitableforthehighschoolstudentsinChinatoperform?Iwouldappreciateitalotifyou

couldgivemesomesuggestions.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给曾经的外教Jonathan写一封信，

请求关于英语特色活动的建议。

1.词汇积累（4个以上，含4个）

代表：onbehalfof^represent

提高：improve—>enhance

建议：advise—>remend

感激begratefiil^appreciate

2.句式拓展

简单句变倒装句

原句：Idobelievethispetitioncannotonlyenhancestudents1Englishlevelbutalso

improvestudents*all-toundability.

拓展句：Notonlycanthispetitionenhancestudents1Englishlevelbutalsoimprove

students1all-toundability.

[高分句型1].Idobelievethispetitioncannotonlyenhancestudents'Englishlevelbut

alsoimprovestudents'all-toundability.（强调句）

[高分句型2].Iwouldappreciateitalotifyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions.（if弓|导

的状语从句）

（2021•天津市5月压轴模拟•书面表达）

假设你是晨光李津。为了响应“光盘行动”号召，反对舌尖上的浪费，本学期你校

英语俱乐部开展了主题为“ClearYourPlate”的英语演讲比赛，请你以此为题准备一

篇英文演讲稿参赛。内容包括：

1.同学们平时食堂就餐时浪费严重；

2.呼吁同学们节约粮食；

3.建议。

注意：

1.词数不少于100;

2.开头已给出，但不计入词数；

3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Hello,everyone!Letmetellyousomethingabout“ClearYourPlate”.

【解析】

写作本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“ClearYourPlate”为题写一篇英文演讲

稿来响应“光盘行动”号召，反对舌尖上的浪费。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在完成时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.同学们平时食堂就餐时浪费严重；

2.呼吁同学们节约粮食；

3.建议。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

callon；joinacampaign；eatup；contributeoureffortsto；eatup；haveachanceto；

haveanyeffect；makesure;keepinmind；nomatterwhat；makeadifference

第三步：连词成句

l.Andeveryoneiscalledontojoinacampaign,called“ClearYourPlate",which

requirespeopletoeatupallourfood.

2.Andtherearelotsofthingswecandotocontributeoureffortstoit.

3.Besides,oncewehaveachancetohavemealswithotherpeople,whodon'trealize

theimportance,wecanexplainthepurposeofthecampaignandconvincethemnotto

wastefood.

4.Somemayquestionwhetherthecampaignhaveanyeffect,but,Ithink,onethingwe

shouldkeepinmindisthatnomatterwhatasmalleffortwemake,itdomakea

difference.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系：Besides,and

2.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause（从句），Inspite

of+n/doing,Ontheonehand...,Ontheotherhand...Some...,whileothers...,asfor,

so...that...（供参考）

3.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult（供参考）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清

晰。

（2021•宝地区三模•书面表达）

假定你是李津。你校外籍交换生Henry给你发了一份邮件，想让你为他推荐一种

字典，用来学习汉语，请你用英语给他回复。内容包括：

1.字典名称；

2推荐理由；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearHenry,

Yours,

LiJin

［答案］DearHenry,

PleasedtoknowyourpassionforlearningChinese,I'mwritingtoremendXinhua

Dictionarytoyou.Asanativespeaker,Ibelieveitisahelpfultool,especiallyforthe

beginners.

Firstly,it'soneofthemostwidelyuseddictionariesinChina,notonlyforitswide

rangeofvocabularybutalsoforitspreciseexplanationofeachword.Besides,its

reasonablepriceisundoubtedlyanappealingfactor.

IhopemysuggestionhelpfulandwishyougreatprogressinlearningChinese.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外籍交换生Henry回一份邮件，

为他推荐一种字典，用来学习汉语。

1.词汇积累

高兴的：pleased—>glad

建议：suggestion—advice

止匕夕卜：besides->moreover

学习：learntstudy

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：PleasedtoknowyourpassionfbrlearningChinese,TinwritingtoremendXinhua

Dictionarytoyou.

拓展句：IamverygladtoknowthatyouareenthusiasticaboutlearningChinese,soIam

writingtoremendXinhuaDictionarytoyou.

［高分句型1］PleasedtoknowyourpassionforlearningChinese,I'mwritingtoremend

XinhuaDictionarytoyou.（运用了省略结构）

［高分句型2］Firstly,it'soneofthemostwidelyuseddictionariesinChina,notonlyfbr

itswiderangeofvocabularybutalsofbritspreciseexplanationofeachword.（运用了

短语notonly...butalso…连接句子)

(2021•和平区三模•书面表达)

假设你是晨光高三学生李津。你的美国笔友Tom给你发电了邮件希望了解你的高

三生活。请你给Tom回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括：

(1)高三生活(从学习、娱乐、社会活动中任选二点)；

(2)高三一年中自己最大的感受：

(3)对自己未来的展望。

注意：

(1)词数不少于100；

(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。

DearTom,

Youre-mailreachedmeyesterday,andI

【答案】DearTom

Youre-mailreachedmeyesterday,andIfeltgreatlyhonoredtosharemysenior

lifewithyouhere.Moredetailsareasfollows.

lbbeginwith,asaseniorstudent,lifeisbusyandfulfillingduetotheultimate

goal---CollegeEntranceExamination.Apartfromstudy,Iwouldplayfootballwithmy

friendsafterschoolorattheweekendtogetmyselfrelaxed,whichinturnrefreshesmy

mindandgivesmemuchenergytofulfillbetterresults.

Whatimpressesmemostisthefriendshipformedintheperiod.Ithinkfriendsin

highschoolaremybestfriendsforever,becausetheyknowmealotandwitnessallof

myemotions.

Asfbrmyfuture,I'meagertobeadmittedintoawell-knownuniversity.Thus,I

worksohardfbrit,soImustlearnmoreasIcantofulfillmyself.

Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiJin

【解析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Tom回一封电子邮件，介绍自己

的高三生活。

1.词汇积累

荣幸：privilege—>honor

最终的：culminating/final—»ultimate

目标：target/aim—goal

使恢复：regain/renew—refresh

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Asformyfuture,Tmeagertobeadmittedintoawell-knownuniversity.

拓展句：Asformyfuture,Tmeagertobeadmittedintoawell-knownuniversity,where

Iwillfurtherexploremypotentialandachievemydreamsinthelongrun.

[高分句型1]

Asideofstudy,Iwouldplayfootballwithmyfriendsafterschoolorattheweekendtoget

myselfrelaxed,whichinturnrefreshesmymindandgivesmemuchenergytofulfill

betterresults.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]

Whatimpressesmemostisthefriendshipformedintheperiod.（运用了what引导的主

语从句）

（2021•河东区二模•书面表达）

假设你是李津，最近你收到英国笔友Peter的来信,想就“Howtolivewithpressure^^

的话题和你交流，询问你能否就解决学习和生活中一些问题谈谈自己的体验和感

想。请根据此话题及以下提示写一封回信。

①过去遇到问题时的表现（如心理压力、情绪紧张、心情低落等）。

②介绍你解决压力问题的做法。

③表达你的希望。

注意：1.词数不少于100,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2.必须包含提示内容。

3.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。

DearPeter,

Gladtohearfromyou,I*dliketowriteabouthowtolivewithpressure.

Bestwishes.

Yours,

LiJin.

［答案］Onepossibleversion:

DearPeter,

Gladtohearfromyou.Tdliketowriteabouthowtolivewithpressure.

Firstly,Fdtakemyproblemasanexample.Iusedtofeelpressuredtodowellin

exams.Thepressuremademeoutofbreath.Tomydisappointment,themoreworriedI

wasaboutmystudies,thelessefficientIbecame.SoIrealizeIjusttakepressuretoo

seriously.Secondly,letmetellyouhowtodealwithit.Itrytakingthingseasybytaking

partinvariousactivatesoutofclass,enjoyingmusicandchattingwithmyfriendsabout

funthings.Tomydelight,thisworks.

Pressurecannotbeavoided.Whatcountsishowtodealwithitproperly.SoIdohope

youcanfaceproblemsandpressurebravelyandyourlifewillbefullofsunshine.

Bestwishes.

Yours,

LiJin

【解析】

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李津，最近你收到英国笔友Peter的

来信，想就“Howtolivewithpressure”的话题和你交流，询问你能否就解决学习和

生活中一些问题谈谈自己的体验和感想。要求考生根据此话题及提示写一封回信。

1.词汇积累

有压力：feelpressured—getstressed

担忧：beworriedabout—>beconcernedabout

处理：dealwith—copewith

参力口：takepartin—^participatein

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Iusedtofeelpressuredtodowellinexams.Thepressuremademeoutofbreath.

拓展句：Iusedtofeelpressuredtodowellinexams,whichmademeoutofbreath.

[高分句型1]Tomydisappointment,themoreworriedIwasaboutmystudies,theless

efficientIbecame.（运用了“the+比较级....the+比较级.....”结构）

[高分句型2]SoIdohopeyoucanfaceproblemsandpressurebravelyandyourlife

willbefullofsunshine.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）

（2021•河西区三模•书面表达）

假定你是晨光的学生李律，你正在某国外作交换生，该校的“外国文化”栏目近期将

介绍中国传统文化，校报编辑Jenny给你写信，咨询你的意见。请你给Jenny写封

回信，内容要点如下：

1.你认为最能代表中国文化的是什么?请说明理由；

2.我们应该如何更好地推广中国文化？（至少两点）

3.词数不少于100.

【答案】DearJenny,

Iampleasedtoreceiveyourletter.I'msohappythatthe"ForeignCultures11sectionin

ournewspaperwillremendChinesetraditionalculture.

ThereisnodoubtthatConfuciusisthemostrepresentativesymbolofChinese

culture.Asaphilosopher,ConfuciusnotonlyrepresentsthetraditionalChineseculture,

buthasbeeninfluencingusChinesepeoplesinceancienttimes.Nowadayswecanfind

lotsofConfuciusinstitutesaroundtheworld,whichprovidespreciousopportunitiesfor

theforeignerstolearnaboutChineseculture.

TopromoteChineseculture,wearesupposedtoprovidevariousculturalexchange

activities.What'smore,establishingConfuciusinstitutesallovertheworldisalsoagood

idea.Meanwhile,attractingmoreforeignvisitorstoChinatoexperienceChineseculture

willhaveafar-reachingimpact.

FilbegladifIcouldhelpyou,

Bestwishes.

Yours,

LiJin

【解析】

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给所在某国外的校报编辑Jenny写封

回信，介绍你对中国文化和推广方式的看法。

1.词汇积累

栏目：column—^section

古代：oldtimes一ancienttimes

建立：build—>establish

影响：influence—>impact

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Meanwhile,attractingmoreforeignvisitorstoChinatoexperienceChineseculture

willhaveafar-reachingimpact.

拓展句：Meanwhile,itwillhaveafar-reachingimpactifmoreforeignvisitorsare

attractedtoChinatoexperienceChineseculture.

[高分句型I]NowadayswecanfindlotsofConfuciusinstitutesaroundtheworld,which

providespreciousopportunitiesfortheforeignerstolearnaboutChineseculture.（运用了

which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Asaphilosopher,ConfuciusnotonlyrepresentsthetraditionalChinese

culture,buthasbeeninfluencingusChinesepeoplesinceancienttimes.（运用了not

only...but（also）…连接的并歹（J句）

（2021•北京市3月综合能力测试•书面表达）

假设你是红星高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim给你写信探讨“读书”的话题。请你

给他回信，内容包括：

1.你的阅读经历;

2.你的阅读收获;

3.你对阅读的看法。

注意：1.词数100左右：

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】PossibleVersion1：

DearJim,

I'msogladtoknowthatyoualsolovereadingandIammorethanhappytosharemy

experienceandthoughtsonreadingwithyou.

WhenIwasakid,Ireadpicturebookswithinterestingillustrations.Iwould

unconsciouslyburstoutlaughingorfrownwithconcernaboutthecharacterinthebook.

Laterinlife,Iwasabsorbedintheworldofwords,whereIfoundmyselfseeingtheworld

throughtheeyesofdifferentrolesinthestoriesandIdiscoveredthemysteryofsomany

things,fromthesmallestatomstothevastuniverse.Whilereading,Ievengotanew

insightintomyself.EventhoughIencountereddifficultiessometimes,nothingswayed

myenthusiasmaboutreading.

Frankly,Ihavereallyharvestedalotfromreading.Readingdoesnotonlyprovideme

withencyclopedicknowledgerangingfrombasicprinciplestofarawayouterspace

mystery,butalsoconvincemethatbeingaloneisnotlonely.Withbooksinhand,Fve

reallygotacolorfulworldbelongingtomyself.Throughthatworld,Igetcouragein

timesofchallenge,andIfeelloveandwarmthinthemidstofadversity.Further,Ihave

foundmyrolemodelandagoalIdecidetopursueinmyfuturelife.

Readingisabestfriend.Youneedtotreatitpatientlywithyoursincerelove.Inreturn,

readingwillbringyouawholenewworldtogetalongwith,whichmakesyouaplete

person.

Thisismyexperienceandunderstandingofreading.Whataboutyours?Solooking

forwardtoyoursharing.

Yours,

LiHua

PossibleVersion2：

DearJim,

Howiseverythinggoing?Havingheardthatyouareinterestedinreading,Tm

writingtosharemyreadingexperienceandfeelingswithyou.

Iusedtobeimpatientwithreading.Ioftenskippedsomepartsofastory,whichI

thoughtweren'tattractivetomeatfirst.Asaresult,Igotverylittlebelievingreading

wasn'tsobeneficial.Tosolvethisproblem,Iurgedmyselftoreadcarefullyandtryto

followtheplot.ThenIastonishinglyfoundthatIcouldreadthewholebooksmoothlyand

evenlearnedamorallessonfromit.Thisisbigprogressaswellasgreatrelieftome.

FromthisexperienceIhavelearnedthateveryword“counts”.Besides,Igetan

opportunitytoapproachliteratureandappreciatethebeautyofwords.Itwasthis

experiencethathelpedchangemyreadingattitudeandimprovedmyreadingskill.

Soweneedtopayattentiontoeveryparagraphandreadwithfullpatience,which

allowsustogetthepletemeaningandbetrulyinvolvedandeducated.Readingdeserves

ourpatienceanddeepthinking.

Thisismypointofviewaboutreading.Whatdoyouthinkofit?Iamlooking

forwardtohearingfromyou.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Jim回信探讨“读书”的话

题。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和现在完成时，少量一般现在时。

结构：总分总法

要求：

1.你的阅读经历；

2.你的阅读收获；

3.你对阅读的看法。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

morethan；share...with...；burstout；beabsorbedin；getanewinsightinto；

provide...with...；faraway；rangefrom；inhand；belongto；inreturn；getalongwith；

lookforwardto

第三步：连词成句

1.TmsogladtoknowthatyoualsolovereadingandIammorethanhappytosharemy

experienceandthoughtsonreadingwithyou.

2.WhenIwasakid,Ireadpicturebookswithinterestingillustrations.

3.1wouldunconsciouslyburstoutlaughingorfrownwithconcernaboutthecharacterin

thebook.

4.Laterinlife,Iwasabsorbedintheworldofwords,whereIfoundmyselfseeingthe

worldthroughtheeyesofdifferentrolesinthestoriesandIdiscoveredthemysteryofso

manythings,fromthesmallestatomstothevastuniverse.

5.Whilereading,Ievengotanewinsightintomyself.

6.EventhoughIencountereddifficultiessometimes,nothingswayedmyenthusiasm

aboutreading.

7.Frankly,Ihavereallyharvestedalotfromreading.

8.Readingdoesnotonlyprovidemewithencyclopedicknowledgerangingfrombasic

principlestofarawayouterspacemystery,butalsoconvincemethatbeingaloneisnot

lonely.

8.Withbooksinhand,I'vereallygotacolorfulworldbelongingtomyself.

9.Throughthatworld,Igetcourageintimesofchallenge,andIfeelloveandwarmthin

themidstofadversity.

10.Further,IhavefoundmyrolemodelandagoalIdecidetopursueinmyfuturelife.

11.Readingisabestfriend.Youneedtotreatitpatientlywithyoursincerelove.

12.Inreturn,readingwillbringyouawholenewworldtogetalongwith,whichmakes

youapleteperson.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second...Andthen,Finally,In

theend,Atlast（供参考）

2.表并列补充关系：Further,notonly...but（also）

3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause（从句）,Inspite

of+n/doing,Ontheonehand...,Ontheotherhand...Some...,whileothers...,asfor,

so…that…（供参考）

4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult（供参考）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清

晰，

[高分句型1]WhenIwasakid,Ireadpicturebookswithinterestingillustrations.（when

引导时间状语从句）

[高分句型2]Laterinlife,Iwasabsorbedintheworldofwords,whereIfoundmyself

seeingtheworldthroughtheeyesofdifferentrolesinthestoriesandIdiscoveredthe

mysteryofsomanythings,fromthesmallestatomstothevastuniverse,（where弓|导非

限制性定语从句）

[高分句型3]Frankly,Ihavereallyharvestedalotfromreading.Readingdoesnotonly

providemewithencyclopedicknowledgerangingfrombasicprinciplestofaraway

outerspacemystery,butalsoconvincemethatbeingaloneisnotlonely,（notonly...but

also…连接并列句）

（2021・北大附中三模•书面表达）

假设你是红星高三学生李华。为迎接北京2022年冬奥会，你们下个月将要举办“迎

冬奥做贡献”主题活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内

容包括：

1.活动目的；

2.具体安排；

3.发出邀请。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

HavingknownthatyouareintotheWinterOlympicstobeheldinBeijing,Iam

writingtoinviteyoutoparticipateintherelevantactivityinourschool.

InordertopromotetheOlympicspiritandgetdeeperinsightsintothewintersports,

anactivitythemedon“MakeaContributiontotheWinterOlympics^^willbeheldnext

month,whenaseriesoflectureswillbeopentoeveryone,suchaslecturesonhowto

municatewithpeoplefromdifferentcountriesandwaystoimproveairquality.

Additionally,therewillbemanypetitionsvaryingfromskiingtoskatingsothatyoucan

choosewhicheveryouareinterestedin.

Hopefully,youcaneandenjoytheactivity.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加

你们下个月将要举办“迎冬奥做贡献”主题活动。

1.词汇积累

对...感兴趣：beinterestedin-beinto/becrazyabout

参力口：joinin/takepartin—>participantin

深入了解：makeabetterunderstandingof—>getdeeperinsightsinto

范围从...至...：rangefrom...to...=varyfrom...to...

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Hopefully,youcaneandenjoytheactivity.

拓展句：Isincerelyhopethatyoucaneandenjoytheactivity.

[高分句型1]HavingknownthatyouareintotheWinterOlympicstobeheldinBeijing,

Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateintherelevantactivityinourschool.（运用了that

引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Additionally,therewillbemanypetitionsvaiyingfromskiingtoskating

sothatyoucanchoosewhicheveryouareinterestedin.（运用了sothat弓I导的状语从

句）

（2021•朝阳区二模•书面表达）

假设你是红星高三学生李华。你校将举办主题为“创意点亮校园”学生手工作品展。

请给你校的交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参观展览。内容包括：

1.介绍展览信息（例如：时间、地点、内容等）；

2.询问对方意向。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：手工作品handicraft

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

［答案］Possibleversions1.

DearJim,

Howareyoudoing?I'mwritingtoinviteyoutovisitahandicraftsexhibitioninour

school,whosethemeis"CreativityLightsUptheCampus”.

Theexhibitionaimstoenrichourschoollifeandpromoteourcreativityandhands-on

ability.ItisscheduledtobeheldinthelecturehallfromMay15toJune1.Dozensof

handicraftswithuniquedesignsandvariousthemeswillbeondisplay,suchasclay

sculptures,papercuttingsandsoon.Theyareallcreatedbystudents.Manyworksare

madefromunwantedmaterialsinourdailylife,whichshowshowstudentsturnwaste

intotreasure.Tmsureyouwillbeamazedatthestudents,creativityandimagination.

Wouldyouliketoe?I'mlookingforwardtomeetingyouattheexhibition.

Yours,

LiHua

Possibleversions2.

DearJim,

Howiseverythinggoing?Ourschoolisgoingtoorganizeahandicraftsexhibition

themed"CreativityLightsUptheCampus^^thisweekend.Knowingyouhaveagreat

interestinhandicrafts,Ibelievethisisanopportunitytoappreciatethecreativeworks.

About100handicraftsmadebystudentswillbeondisplayintheschoollecturehall,

eachofwhichisfulloffantasticideas.Youcanfindawidevarietyofworksthatare

suitablefordecoration.Inaddition,theexhibitswillconsistofhandicraftsoftraditional

stylesmethods,whichwillofferyouagreatchancetoexploretheChinesetraditional

culture.Tmsuretheexhibitionisworthavisit.

Itwillbeagreatpleasureifyouetotheexhibition.Iwillbehappytokeepyoupany

andoffernecessaryexplanations.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参

观学生手工作品的展览。

Possibleversions1

1.词汇积累

旨在：aimat—>aimtodo

提升：improve—►promote

计戈ij：beplannedto—>beschedul