高中英语-After Twenty Years教学设计学情分析教材分析课后反思

IILearningactivitiesBeforereading:Whenwereadanovel,weshouldpayattentiontothefouraspects:________,_________.__________,__________.WhilereadingPartone(1-4)Task1:Whatisthesettingofthestory?(When;where;howabouttheweather)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Task2:Thepolicemanmadeafinepictureofaguardian(守护者)ofthepeace.Canyoufindsomesupportingsentencesinthepassage?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Parttwo(5-16)Task1:Canyoudrawaportrayal(画像)forthemanfromthewestaccordingtoparagraph7and11?Task2:Whatistheplotofpart2?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Task3:Whatisthecharacterofthemanfromthewest?Givesupportingdetails.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Task4:WhatisthecharacterofJimmy?Givesupportingdetails.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Partthree(17-29)Task1:Howwastheweatherthen?___________________________________________________________________________Task2:Roleplay.Actoutthedialoguewithyourpartner.Addyourownbodylanguagetomakeyourperformancevivid.Task3:Guesswhathappenednextandgivereasonsforit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Post-reading:DeepthinkingIfyouwereJimmy,whatwouldyoudo?Whetherwillyouchoosetobeloyaltofriendshiporbefaithfultothelaw?Andgiveyourreasons.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________学生为高中二年级学生，刚刚学了外研社版教材第七册第二模块literature。对外国文学比较感兴趣，但是直接读原著的话生词量太大。因此对文本进行了词汇的替换，把较难词汇换成了常用词汇，较难句型进行的简化。这样一来虽然有一定的难度，但是还是可以读下去，并且非常有兴趣。本文为欧亨利的短篇小说《二十年后》，并非选自教材。选此文的想法源自于外研社版教材第七册第二模块literature，本单元为小说，学生们对小说比较感兴趣，小说情节跌宕起伏，大大提高了学生读英文的兴趣。因此选了课外的小说，欧亨利的小说结局往往出人意料，更加吸引学生阅读。简写版：AftertwentyyearsO.Henry(1)Thepolicemanmadehisroundsuptheavenue(沿着大街巡视)inanimpressiveway.Hisimpressivenesswashabitualandnotforshow,fortherewerefewpeoplearound.Thetimewasbarely10o'clockatnight,butstrongwindwithatasteofraininithaddrivenmostpeopleindoors.(2)Thepolicemantesteddoorsashewenttomakesuretheywerelocked.Heturnednowandthentocast(投；投射)hiswatchfuleyesdownthebroadstreet.Theofficer,withhislargeformandconfidentwalk,madeafinepictureofaguardian(守护者)ofthepeace.(3)Hisassignedareawasonewheremostshopsclosedearlyatnight.Nowandthen,apersonmightseethelightsofaliquorstoreoranall-nightsmallrestaurant,butthemajorityofthedoorsbelongedtobusinessownerswhohadalreadygonehomeseveralhoursago.(4)Whenaboutmidwayofacertainblockthepolicemansuddenlyslowedhiswalk.Inthedoorwayofadarkenedhardwarestoreamanleaned,withanunlightedcigarinhismouth.Asthepolicemanwalkeduptohimthemanspokeupquickly.(5)"It'sallright,officer,"hesaid,reassuringly(使人放心地)."I'mjustwaitingforafriend.It'sanappointmentmadetwentyyearsago.Soundsalittlefunnytoyou,doesn'tit?Well,I'llexplainifyou'dliketomakecertaineverythingisallright.Aboutthatlongagothereusedtobearestaurantwherethisstorestands--'BigJoe'Brady'srestaurant."(6)"Untilfiveyearsago,"saidthepoliceman."Itwastorndownthen."(7)Themaninthedoorwaystruckamatchandlithiscigar.Thelightshowedapale,square-jawed(方下巴的)facewithkeeneyes,andalittlewhitescarnearhisrighteyebrow.Hehadadiamond(钻石)pin(别针)inhisscarf,oddly(古怪地)set.(8)"Twentyyearsagotonight,"saidtheman,"Iatehereat'BigJoe'Brady'swithJimmyWells,mybestfriend,andthemostloyalguyintheworld.HeandIwereraisedhereinNewYork,justliketwobrothers,together.IwaseighteenandJimmywastwenty.ThenextmorningIwastostartfortheWesttomakemyfortune.Youcouldn'thavedraggedJimmyoutofNewYork;hethoughtitwastheonlyplaceonearth.Well,weagreedthatnightthatwewouldmeethereagainexactlytwentyyearsfromthatdateandtime,nomatterwhatourconditionsmightbeorfromwhatdistancewemighthavetocome.Wefiguredthatintwentyyearseachofusoughttohaveourdestiny(命运)workedoutandourfortunesmade,whatevertheyweregoingtobe."(9)"Itsoundsprettyinteresting,"saidthepoliceman."Ratheralongtimebetweenmeets,though,itseemstome.Haven'tyouheardfromyourfriendsinceyouleft?"(10)"Well,yes,foratimewewrotetoeachother,"saidtheother."Butafterayearortwowelosttrackofeachother.Yousee,theWestisaprettybigplace,andIkeptmovingaroundprettyfrequently.ButIknowJimmywillmeetmehereifhe'salive,forhealwayswasthetruestandmostloyalfriendintheworld.He'llneverforget.Icameathousandmilestostandinthisdoortonight,andit'sworthitifmyoldpartnerturnsup."(11)Thewaitingmanpulledoutahandsomewatch,thelids(盖子)ofitsetwithsmalldiamonds.(12)"Threeminutestoten,"heannounced."Itwasexactlyteno'clockwhenwepartedhereattherestaurantdoor."(13)"DidprettywelloutWest,didn'tyou?"askedthepoliceman."Youbet!IhopeJimmyhasdonehalfaswell.ButI’vehadtocompetewithsomeverysmartmentomakemyfortune.”(14)"I'llbeonmyway.Hopeyourfriendcomesaroundallright.Areyougoingtoleaveifhedoesn’tshowupexactlyontime?"(15)"Ishouldsaynot!"saidtheother."I'llgivehimhalfanhouratleast.IfJimmyisaliveonearthhe'llbeherebythattime.Solong,officer."(16)"Good-night,sir,"saidthepoliceman,passingonalongthestreet,tryingdoorsashewent.(17)Therewasnowafine,colddrizzlefalling(冰冷的毛毛雨),andthewindbecamestrongerandstronger.Thefewfootpassengersinthestreethurriedsilentlyalongwithcoatcollarsturnedhighandpocketedhands.Andinthedoorofthehardwarestorethemanwhohadcomeathousandmilestofillanappointment,uncertainalmosttoabsurdity(荒谬),withthefriendofhisyouth,smokedhiscigarandwaited.(18)Abouttwentyminuteshewaited,andthenatallmaninalongovercoat,withcollar(衣领)turneduptohisears,hurriedacrossfromtheoppositesideofthestreet.Hewentdirectlytothewaitingman.(19)"Isthatyou,Bob?"heasked,doubtfully.(20)"Isthatyou,JimmyWells?"criedthemaninthedoor.(21)"Blessmyheart!"exclaimedthenewarrival,graspingboththeother'shandswithhisown."It'sBob,sureasfate(命运).IwascertainI'dfindyouhereifyouwerestillinexistence.Well,well,well!--twentyyearsisalongtime.Theoldgone,Bob;Iwishithadlasted,sowecouldhavehadanotherdinnerthere.HowhastheWesttreatedyou,oldman?"(22)"IthasgivenmeeverythingIaskeditfor.You'vechangedlots,Jimmy.Ineverthoughtyouweresotallbytwoorthreeinches."(23)"Oh,IgrewabitafterIwastwenty."(24)"DoingwellinNewYork,Jimmy?"(25)"Moderately(适度地).Ihaveapositioninoneofthecitydepartments.Comeon,Bob;we'llgoaroundtoaplaceIknowof,andhaveagoodlongtalkaboutoldtimes."(26)Thetwomenstartedupthestreet,arminarm.ThemanfromtheWest,hisegotism(自负)enlargedbysuccess,wasbeginningtooutlinethehistoryofhiscareer.Theother,submergedinhisovercoat,listenedwithinterest.(27)Atthecornerstoodadrugstore,brilliantwithelectriclights.Whentheycameintothisglareeachofthemturnedtogazeupontheother'sfaceatthesametime.(28)ThemanfromtheWeststoppedsuddenlyandreleasedhisarm.(29)"You'renotJimmyWells,"hesaidinasharpvoice."Twentyyearsisalongtime,butnotlongenoughtochangeaman'snosefromaRoman(鹰钩鼻)toapug(狮子鼻)."(30)"Itsometimeschangesagoodmanintoabadone,saidthetallman."You'vebeenunderarrest(逮捕)fortenminutes,'Silky'Bob.Chicagothinksyoumayhavecometoourwayandtellsusshewantstohaveachatwithyou.Goingquietly,areyou?That'ssensible.Now,beforewegoontothestationhere'sanoteIwasaskedtohandyou.Youmayreadithereatthewindow.It'sfromPatrolman(巡逻的警官)Wells."(31)ThemanfromtheWestunfoldedthelittlepieceofpaperhandedhim.Hishandwassteadywhenhebegantoread,butittrembled(颤抖)alittlebythetimehehadfinished.Thenotewasrathershort.(32)"Bob:Iwasattheappointedplaceontime.WhenyoustruckthematchtolightyourcigarIsawitwasthefaceofthemanwantedinChicago.SomehowIcouldn'tdoitmyself,soIwentaroundandgotaplainclothesmantodothejob.JIMMY."原版：Thepolicemanonthebeatmoveduptheavenue

impressively.Theimpressivenesswashabitualandnotforshow,forspectatorswerefew.Thetimewasbarely10o'clockatnight,butchillygustsofwindwithatasteofraininthemhadwellnighdepeopledthestreets.一个执勤的警察正沿街巡逻，很认真，他一直都这样认真，并不是做给谁看的。差不多是晚上十点了，街上行人寥寥无几，冷风飕飕地吹着，有种雨水的味道。Tryingdoorsashewent,twirlinghisclubwithmanyintricateandartfulmovements,turningnowandthentocasthiswatchfuleyeadownthepacificthoroughfare,theofficer,withhisstalwartformandslightswagger,madeafinepictureofaguardianofthepeace.Thevicinitywasonethatkeptearlyhours.Nowandthenyoumightseethelightsofacigarstoreorofanall-nightlunchcounter;butthemajorityofthedoorsbelongedtobusinessplacesthathadlongsincebeenclosed.他灵巧地来回转着手里的警棍，每家每户都仔细查看，警觉的目光不时地投向安静的街道，这个警察，身材强壮，昂首阔步，俨然一个和平守护者。附近的街区睡得都早，偶尔能看见一个雪茄店或通宵餐馆还亮着灯，其他的店铺早就打烊了。Whenaboutmidwayofacertainblockthepolicemansuddenlyslowedhiswalk.Inthedoorwayofadarkenedhardwarestoreamanleaned,withanunlightedcigarinhismouth.Asthepolicemanwalkeduptohimthemanspokeupquickly.走到街区中间时，警察突然放慢了脚步，他看见五金店门口站着一个人，嘴里叼着雪茄，没点着，正向他走过去时，这个人立马开口说话了。"It'sallright,officer,"hesaid,

reassuringly.

"I'mjustwaitingforafriend.It'sanappointmentmadetwentyyearsago.Soundsalittlefunnytoyou,doesn'tit?Well,I'llexplainifyou'dliketomakecertainit'sallstraight.Aboutthatlongagothereusedtobearestaurantwherethisstorestands--'BigJoe'Brady'srestaurant.""Untilfiveyearsago,"saidthepoliceman."Itwastorndownthen."Themaninthedoorwaystruckamatchandlithiscigar.Thelightshowedapale,square-jawedfacewithkeeneyes,andalittlewhitescarnearhisrighteyebrow.Hisscarfpinwasalargediamond,oddlyset.“这边没事儿，警官”他确定地说，“我等朋友呢。我们二十年前约好的，听起来有点好笑是不是？你要是想知道这是不是真的，我跟你细说。这家五金店以前是个餐馆，叫‘老乔酒馆’”。“五年前就拆了，”警察说。

店门口的这个人说着，划了根火柴，把雪茄点着，火光映衬下他脸色苍白，方下巴，目光犀利，右眼旁有一道白色的伤疤，领带的别针上镶着一块大钻石，看起来很别扭。"Twentyyearsagoto-night,"saidtheman,"Idinedhereat'BigJoe'Brady'swithJimmyWells,mybestchum,andthefinestchapintheworld.HeandIwereraisedhereinNewYork,justliketwobrothers,together.IwaseighteenandJimmywastwenty.ThenextmorningIwastostartfortheWesttomakemyfortune.Youcouldn'thavedraggedJimmyoutofNewYork;hethoughtitwastheonlyplaceonearth.Well,weagreedthatnightthatwewouldmeethereagainexactlytwentyyearsfromthatdateandtime,nomatterwhatourconditionsmightbeorfromwhatdistancewemighthavetocome.Wefiguredthatintwentyyearseachofusoughtto

haveourdestinyworkedout

andourfortunesmade,whatevertheyweregoingtobe.""Itsoundsprettyinteresting,"saidthepoliceman."Ratheralongtimebetweenmeets,though,itseemstome.Haven'tyouheardfromyourfriendsinceyouleft?"“二十年前的今晚，”他说，“我和吉米威尔斯在这家饭店吃饭，吉米是我最好的朋友，全世界最好，我俩一起在纽约长大，像兄弟一样。那年我十八，他二十。我决定第二天早上就动身去西部，想办法发点财，吉米可不愿意去，他觉得全世界上就纽约最好。然后，我们就约好，二十年以后还在这里见面，不管我们到时候混成什么样，赶多远的路。那时候我们估计二十年后肯定都稳定了，也有钱了，反正不管怎么样，一定会见面。”“听起来挺有意思，”警察说。“我看这时间挺长的，你走了之后你们没联系吗？”"Well,yes,foratimewecorresponded,"saidtheother."Butafterayearortwowelosttrackofeachother.Yousee,theWestisaprettybig

proposition,andIkepthustlingaroundoveritpretty

lively.ButIknowJimmywillmeetmehereifhe'salive,forhealwayswasthetruest,stanchestoldchapintheworld.He'llneverforget.Icameathousandmilestostandinthisdoorto-night,andit'sworthitifmyoldpartnerturnsup."“联系过，有一段时间我们写信，但一两年之后我们就失去联系了。你知道，西部不好混，这些年我就忙着赚钱了。可我知道只要吉米活着，他就一定会来，因为他一直都是世界上最忠诚，最讲义气的朋友。他不会忘的，我千里迢迢赶来，只要能见他一面，就值得。”Thewaitingmanpulledoutahandsomewatch,thelidsofitsetwithsmalldiamonds."Threeminutestoten,"heannounced."Itwasexactlyteno'clockwhenwepartedhereattherestaurantdoor.""DidprettywelloutWest,didn'tyou?"askedthepoliceman."Youbet!IhopeJimmyhasdonehalfaswell.Hewasakindof

plodder,though,goodfellowashewas.I'vehadtocompetewithsomeofthesharpestwitsgoingto

getmypile.AmangetsinagrooveinNewYork.IttakestheWesttoputarazor-edgeonhim."说着他看看表，表上也镶着细细的钻。“还差三分钟十点，”他大声说，“二十年前我们就是十点在这个门口分开的。”“在西部混的不错，是吧？”警察问他。“当然了！吉米能有我一半好就行。他是那种脚踏实地的人，现在肯定也是。为了发财我得天天和一些聪明人竞争，在纽约的时候得本分，到了西部就得精明了。”Thepolicemantwirledhisclubandtookasteportwo."I'llbeonmyway.Hopeyourfriendcomesaroundallright.

Goingtocalltimeonhimsharp?""Ishouldsaynot!"saidtheother."I'llgivehimhalfanhouratleast.IfJimmyisaliveonearthhe'llbeherebythattime.Solong,officer.""Good-night,sir,"saidthepoliceman,passingonalonghisbeat,tryingdoorsashewent.警察晃了晃警棍，向前走了一两步。“我得走了，但愿你朋友一会能来，就等到十点吗？”“当然不，我至少多等他半小时，只要吉米活着，他一定会来。再见，警官！”“晚安，先生，”警察说着，继续挨家挨户地巡逻。Therewasnowafine,cold

drizzle

falling,andthewindhadrisenfromitsuncertainpuffsintoasteadyblow.Thefewfootpassengersastirinthatquarterhurrieddismallyandsilentlyalongwithcoatcollarsturnedhighandpocketedhands.Andinthedoorofthehardwarestorethemanwhohadcomeathousandmilestofillanappointment,

uncertainalmosttoabsurdity,withthefriendofhisyouth,smokedhiscigarandwaited.天空中飘来冷冷的毛毛雨，忽大忽小的风开始猛烈地吹。街上零星的有几个行人，拉着衣领，手插在兜里，沉寂地走过。还有五金店门口，那个千里迢迢来赴约的人，抽着雪茄，等他年轻时候的朋友。Abouttwentyminuteshewaited,andthenatallmaninalongovercoat,withcollarturneduptohisears,hurriedacrossfromtheoppositesideofthestreet.Hewentdirectlytothewaitingman."Isthatyou,Bob?"heasked,doubtfully.

"Isthatyou,JimmyWells?"criedthemaninthedoor."Blessmyheart!"exclaimedthenewarrival,graspingboththeother'shandswithhisown."It'sBob,sureasfate.IwascertainI'dfindyouhereifyouwerestillinexistence.Well,well,well!--twentyyearsisalongtime.Theoldgone,Bob;

Iwishithadlasted,sowecouldhavehadanotherdinnerthere.HowhastheWesttreatedyou,oldman?"

大概等了二十分钟左右，一个高个子，穿着长大衣的人走近了，衣领竖到了耳朵，急匆匆地从街的对面赶来，径直走向这个等待的人。“鲍勃，是你吗？”他将信将疑地问道。“吉米威尔斯？是你吗？”门口的人大声问道。

“哎呦，我的天呢！”后来的人喊着，双手紧握对方的手。“是鲍勃，千真万确，我就知道，只要你活着就一定会来，好好好，太好了！二十年可真不短啊。你变了，鲍勃，要是这饭馆还开着就好了，我们还能在这吃一顿。你在西部怎么样，伙计？”

"Bully;ithasgivenmeeverythingIaskeditfor.You'vechangedlots,Jimmy.Ineverthoughtyouweresotallbytwoorthreeinches."

"Oh,IgrewabitafterIwastwenty."

"DoingwellinNewYork,Jimmy?"

"Moderately.Ihaveapositioninoneofthe

citydepartments.Comeon,Bob;we'llgoaroundtoaplaceIknowof,andhaveagoodlongtalkaboutoldtimes."“好极了！我想要的，现在都有了。吉米，你也变了，我记得你比你前还高了两三英尺。”“我二十岁以后又长个了。”“在纽约还不错吧？吉米。”“凑合吧。在市政府工作呢。你呢，咱们去我知道的一个地方，好好叙叙旧！”

Thetwomenstartedupthestreet,arminarm.ThemanfromtheWest,hisegotismenlargedbysuccess,wasbeginningtooutlinethehistoryofhiscareer.Theother,submergedinhisovercoat,listenedwithinterest.

Atthecornerstoodadrug