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Inaddressingthespecifictaskdirections,a6responsepresentsacogentandwell-articulatedysisoftheissueandconveythemeaningskillfullyArticulatesaclearandinsightfulpositionontheissueinaccordancewiththeassignedtaskDevelopsthepositionfullywithcompellingreasonand/orpersuasiveexamples Conveysideasfluentlyandprecisely,usingeffectivevocabularyandsentencevarietyDemonstratessuperiorfacilitywiththeconventionsofstandardwrittenEnglish(gr r,usage,andmechanics)butmayhaveminorerrorsassignedtask：根据6种题目要求。在另外位置详述。well-focused：重复，用各种方式。1st，lthemwhatyouaregoingto lthem.2nd, lthemwhatyouhavetoldthem.well-organized：分段。开头段，3~4个中间段，结尾段。中间段每一段陈述一个观点。sentencevariety：中文的多样性意味着英文的多样性。写作在一定程度上实际上是翻译。英conventionsofstandardwrittenEnglish：使用标准英文学术写作的语言。在另外位置详述。minorerrors：不可的错误包括：成分残缺；句内逻辑不一致；句内时态不一致。Vagueorlimitedinaddressingthespecifictaskdirectionsand/orinpresentingordeveloapositionontheissueWeakintheuseofrelevantreasonsorexamplesorrelieslargelyonunsupportedclaimsLimitedinfocusand/ororganizationHasproblemsinlanguageandsentencestructurethatresultinalackofContainsoccasionalmajorerrorsorfrequentminorerrorsingr r,usageormechanicsthatcaninterferewithmeaningvague：观点模糊，与well-articulated对立。limited：观点单向，与insightful对立。unsupportedclaim：没有论证。lackofclarity：语言不清，与学术写作规范对立。interferewithmeaning：犯了不可的语言错误。Aspeoplerelymoreandmoreontechnologytosolveproblems,theabilityofhumanstothinkforthemselveswillsurelydeteriorate.Discusstheextenttowhichyouagreeordisagreewiththestatementandexinyourreasoningforthepositionyoutake.Indeveloandsupportingyourposition,youshouldconsiderwaysinwhichthestatementmightormightnotholdtrueandexinhowtheseconsiderationsshapeyourposition.Thestatementlinkingtechnologynegativelywith thinkingysonrecenthumanexperienceoverthepastcentury.SurelytherehasbeennotimeinhistorywherethelivedlivesofpeoplehavechangedmoreAquickreflectiononatypicaldayrevealshowtechnologyhasrevolutionizedtheMostpeoplecommutetoworkinanautothatrunsonaninternalcombustionDuringtheworkday,chancesarehighthattheemployeewillin ctwithacomputerthatprocessesinformationonsiliconbridgesthatare0.09micronswide.Uponleavinghome,familymemberswillbereachedthroughwirelessnetworksthatutilizesalitesorbitingtheearth.Eachofthesecommonoccurrencescouldhavebeeninconceivableattheturnofthe19thcentury.Thestatementlinkingtechnologynegativelywiththinkingysonrecenthumanexperienceoverthepastcentury.SurelytherehasbeennotimeinhistorywherethelivedlivesofpeoplehavechangedmoreAquickreflectiononatypicaldayrevealshowtechnologyhasrevolutionizedtheanMostpeoplecommutetowork thatrunsonaninternalcombustionanDuringtheworkday,chancesarehighthattheemployeewillin ctwithacomputerthatprocessesinformationonsiliconbridgesthatare0.09micronswide.Uponleavinghome,familymemberswillbereachedthroughwirelessnetworksthatutilize litesorbitingtheearth.Eachofthesecommonoccurrences(things)couldhavebeeninconceivableattheturnofthe19thcentury.Thestatementlinkingtechnologynegativelywith thinkingysonrecenthumanexperienceoverthepastcentury.SurelytherehasbeennotimeinhistorywherethelivedlivesofpeoplehavechangedmoreAquickreflectiononatypicaldayrevealshowtechnologyhasrevolutionizedtheMostpeoplecommutetoworkinan thatrunsonaninternalcombustionDuringtheworkday,chancesarehighthattheemployeewillin ctwithacomputerthatprocessesinformationonsiliconbridgesthatare0.09micronswide.Uponleavinghome,familymemberswillbereachedthroughwirelessnetworksthatutilize litesorbitingtheearth.Eachofthesecommonoccurrencescouldhavebeeninconceivableattheturnofthe19thcentury.Thestatementlinkingtechnologynegativelywith thinkingysonrecenthumanexperienceoverthepastcentury.SurelytherehasbeennotimeinhistorywherethelivedlivesofpeoplehavechangedmoreAquickreflectiononatypicaldayrevealshowtechnologyhasrevolutionizedtheMostpeoplecommutetoworkinanautothatrunsonaninternalcombustionDuringtheworkday,chancesarehighthattheemployeewillin ctwithacomputerthatprocessesinformationonsiliconbridgesthatare0.09micronswide.Uponleavinghome,familymemberswillbereachedthroughwirelessnetworksthatutilizesalitesorbitingtheearth.Eachofthesecommonoccurrencescouldhavebeeninconceivableattheturnofthe19thcentury.（这是个虚拟语气）Thestatementlinkingtechnologynegativelywith thinkingysonrecenthumanexperienceoverthepastcentury.SurelytherehasbeennotimeinhistorywherethelivedlivesofpeoplehavechangedmoreAquickreflectiononatypicaldayrevealshowtechnologyhasrevolutionizedtheMostpeoplecommutetoworkinanautothatrunsonaninternalcombustionDuringtheworkday,chancesarehighthattheemployeewill ctwithacomputerprocessesinformationonsiliconbridgesthatare0.09micronsUponleavinghome,familymemberswillbereachedthroughwirelessnetworksthatutilize litesorbitingtheearth.Eachofthesecommonoccurrencescouldhavebeeninconceivableattheturnofthe19thcentury.any7conventionsofstandardwrittenEnglish：时态大多是现在时。Thestatementattemptstobridgethesedramaticchangestoareductionintheabilityforhumanstothinkforthemselves.Theassumptionisthatanincreasedrelianceontechnologynegatestheneedforpeopletothinkcreativelytosolvepreviousquandaries.Lookingbackattheintroduction,onecouldarguethatwithoutacar,computer,phone,thehypotheticalworkerwouldneedtofindalternatemethodsoftransport,informationprocessingandcommunication.TechnologyshortcircuitsthisthinkingbymakingtheproblemsThestatementattemptstobridgethesedramaticchangestoareductionintheabilityforhumanstothinkforthemselves.Theassumptionisthatanincreasedrelianceontechnologynegatestheneedforpeopletothinkcreativelytosolvepreviousquandaries.Lookingbackattheintroduction,onecouldarguethatwithoutacar,computer,orphone,thehypotheticalworkerwouldneedtofindalternatemethodsoftransport,informationprocessingandcommunication.TechnologyshortcircuitsthisthinkingbymakingtheproblemsThestatementattemptstobridgethesedramaticchangestoareductionintheabilityforhumanstothinkforthemselves.Theassumptionisthatanincreasedrelianceontechnologynegatestheneedforpeopletothinkcreativelytosolvepreviousquandaries.Lookingbackattheintroduction,onecouldarguethatwithoutacar,computer,orphone,thehypotheticalworkerwouldneedtofindalternatemethodsoftransport,informationprocessingandcommunication.TechnologyshortcircuitsthisthinkingbymakingtheproblemsThestatementattemptstobridgethesedramaticchangestoareductionintheabilityforhumanstothinkforthemselves.Theassumptionisthatanincreasedrelianceontechnologynegatestheneedforpeopletothinkcreativelytosolvepreviousquandaries.Lookingbackattheintroduction,onecouldarguethatwithoutacar,computer,orphone,thehypotheticalworkerwouldneedtofindalternatemethodsoftransport,informationprocessingandTechnologyshortcircuitsthisthinkingbymakingtheproblemsThestatementattemptstobridgethesedramaticchangestoareductionintheabilityforhumanstothinkforthemselves.Theassumptionisthatanincreasedrelianceontechnologynegatestheneedforpeopletothinkcreativelytosolvepreviousquandaries.Lookingbackattheintroduction,onecouldarguethatwithoutacar,computer,phone,thehypotheticalworkerwouldneedtofindalternatemethodsoftransport,informationprocessingandcommunication.Technologyshortcircuitsthisthinkingbymakingtheproblemstopic的观点相反（However转折）However,thisrelianceontechnologydoesnotnecessarilyprecludethecreativitythatmarksthehumanspecies.Thepriorexamplesrevealthattechnologyallowsfor算是中性的吧，这里convenience就已经转换为褒义词汇，与之前negate呈现对比。。Thecar,computerandphoneallreleaseadditionaltimeforpeopletolivemoreThisefficiencydoesnotprecludetheneedforhumanstothinkfor13句到15句是对句12句的逻辑重复，而这三句之间的关系是逻辑递进。与段落观点However,thisrelianceontechnologydoesnotnecessarilyprecludethecreativitythatmarksthehumanspecies.ThepriorexamplesrevealthattechnologyallowsforThecar,computerandphoneallreleaseadditionaltimeforpeopletolivemoreThisefficiencydoesnotprecludetheneedforhumanstothinkforreasoning是下一句重复上一句的一个部分而展开到另外一个上句没有的概念。经典模式是顶针。13句：科技意味方便；14句：方便意味效率；15句：效率并不阻碍人类思考。这就是句12句：科技并不阻碍人类思考的reasoning。Infact,technology shumanitytonotonlytacklenewproblems,butmayitselfcreatenewissuesthatdidnotexistwithouttechnology.Forexample,theproliferationofauto shasintroducedaneedforfuelconservationonaglobalscale.Withincreasingenergydemandsfromemergingmarkets,globalwarming esaconcerninconceivabletothehorse-and-buggygeneration.Likewisedependenceonoilhascreatednation-statesthatarenotdependentontaxation,allowingrulingpartiestooppressminoritygroupssuchaswomen.Solutionstothesecomplexproblemsrequiretheunfetteredimaginationsofmaverickscientistsandpoliticiansreasoning的部分不是很容易找到明显的对应形式，但通过上述分析，各句的对应部分已However,thisrelianceontechnologydoesnotnecessarilyprecludethecreativitythatmarksthehumanspecies.ThepriorexamplesrevealthattechnologyallowsforThecar,computerandphoneallreleaseadditionaltimeforpeopletolivemoreThisefficiencydoesnotprecludetheneedforhumanstothinkforInfact,technologyshumanitytonotonlytacklenewproblems,butmayitselfcreatenewissuesthatdidnotexistwithouttechnology.Forexample,theproliferationofautoshasintroducedaneedforfuelconservationonaglobalscale.Withincreasingenergydemandsfromemergingmarkets,globalwarming esaconcerninconceivabletothehorse-and-buggygeneration.Likewisedependenceonoilhascreatednation-statesthatarenotdependentontaxation,allowingrulingpartiestooppressminoritygroupssuchaswomen.Solutionstothesecomplexproblemsrequiretheunfetteredimaginationsofmaverickscientistsandpoliticians.topic的观点相反（Inthecontrastto转折Incontrasttothestatement,wecanevenseehow sthehuman彻底topic观点，作者表明自己立场，科技 sthehumanimagination。本段论点。与Considerhowthedigitalrevolutionandtheadventoftheinternethasallowedforanunprecedentedexchangeofideas.21句的逻辑重复。WebMD,apopularinternetportalformedicalinformation,permitspatientstoselfresearchsymptomsforamoreinformeddoctorvisit.Thisexerciseopenspathwaysofthinkingthatwerepreviouslyclosedofftothemedical2322digitalrevolutionandtheadventoftheinternet，2422exchangeofideasWithincreasedinterdisciplinaryin ctions,inspirationcanarrivefromthemostsurprising复了21句的观点：科技 sthehumanimagination。与段落观点相同。JeffreySachs,oneofthearchitectsoftheUNMillenniumDevelopmentGoals,basedhisideasonemergencycaretriagetechniques.Theunlikelymarriageofeconomicsandmedicinehashealedtense,hyperinflationenvironmentsfromSouthAmericatoEasternEurope.technology25句的逻辑重复，即，思想交流如果加上JS是得益于信息才融合两个领域的知识的话，就算是本段的一个比较完整的Thislastexampleprovidesthemosthopeinhowtechnologyactuallyprovideshopetothefutureofhumanity.由上段最后一个例子引出科技解放思想的另一方面——givehope。ok，imagination是说人们有更强的能力去思考，givehope是说人们有更大的胆量去思考。都是“科技没有让人Byincreasingourrelianceontechnology,impossiblegoalscannowbeConsiderhowthelate20thcenturywitnessedthecompleteeliminationofThisdiseasehadravagedthehumanracesinceprehistoricdays,andyetwiththetechnologyofvaccines,thinkinghumansdaredtoimagineaworldofsmallpox.上两句逻辑重复29、28句。以前不能实现的事情->从史前就有的病；科技->；hope->Usingtechnology,battlensweredrawnout,andsmallpoxwassystematicallytargetedanderadicated.好吧，说他runningoutoftime.Technologywillalwaysmarkthehumanexperience,fromthediscoveryoffiretotheimplementationofnanotechnology.Giventhehistoryofthehumanrace,therewillbenolimittothenumberofproblems,bothnewandold,forustotackle.ThereisnoneedtoretreattoaLudditeattitudetonewthings,butratherembraceahopefulposturetothepossibilitiesthattechnologyprovidesfornewavenuesofhumanimagination.下观点就ok。22~7句所说的其实都是一个事情，是说科技改变了人们的生活，这个和科技促进思Surely、infact、asamatteroffact开始的句子，是为了做转折。因为如果是的事实，Discusstheextenttowhichyouagreeordisagreewiththestatementandexinyourreasoningforthepositionyoutake.Indeveloandsupportingyourposition,youshouldconsiderwaysinwhichthestatementmightormightnotholdtrueandexinhowtheseconsiderationsshapeyour首段是Discusstheextenttowhichyouagreeordisagreewiththemendationandexinyourreasoningforthepositionyoutake.Indeveloandsupportingyourposition,describespecificcircumstancesinwhichadoptingthe mendationwouldorwouldnotbeadvantageousandexinhowtheseexamplesshapeyourposition.Discusstheextenttowhichyouagreeordisagreewiththeclaim.Indeveloandsupportingyourposition,besuretoaddressthemostcompellingreasonsand/orexamplesthatcouldbeusedtochallengeyourposition.TakethesafesideGREhasnothingtodowithyourinnercall.需要陈述敌方观点，但不需要论Ifyoucannotbeattheenemy,joinDiscusswhichviewmorecloselyalignswithyourownpositionandexinyourreasoningforthepositionyoutake.Indeveloandsupportingyourposition,youshouldaddressbothoftheviewspresented.墙头草。如果全都会相当难写。Discusstheextenttowhichyouagreeordisagreewiththeclaimandreason,onwhichthatclaimisbased.Discussyourviewsontheandexinyourreasoningforthepositionyoutake.Ideveloandsupportingyourposition,youshouldconsiderthepossibleconsequencesofimplementingtheandexinhowtheseconsequencesshapeyourposition.果经常一样)（circumstance这个词，结果分析多用consequences）例子：Itisprimarilyincitiesthatanation'sculturaltraditionsaregeneratedandp提culturaltraditionspcities-generated-distinctp- city&generate&culturaltraditions：有人、有大量的物质和精神活动，可以产生行为习惯。city&preserve&culturaltraditions：因为各种东西集中，所以有人力、物力、权利保护这些countryside&generate&culturaltraditions：有人，可以产生行为习惯。countryside&preserve&culturaltraditions：稳定性好，利于沉淀。村的劣势~ 人民的精神（例子：新政时给艺术家补贴。boat，例子2：科技的目的是提高效率让人有的空闲时间。破题：是不是效率更高取决于人们如何使用这些科技，是不是让人感觉leisure 思维的前提是继承：继承的原材： *人性的弱点（用于寻求事例：Wealthoutwork/pleasurewithoutconscience/sciencewithouthumanity/knowledgewithoutcharacter（知识没有风骨，即是权力的工具）/politicsThemainbenefitofthestudyofhistoryistodispeltheillusionthatpeoplelivingnowaresignificantlydifferentfrompeoplewholivedinearliertimes.History,asarecordofpastevents,differsfrompresentSocialPoliticalDailyEternalproblemskeepguinghuman,forthenatureofhumanremainsWealthoutwork/pleasurewithoutconscience/sciencewithouthumanity/knowledgewithoutcharacter/politicswithout withoutmorality/worshipwithoutsacrificehistoryiswrittenbythewinner,andthus,thebygonetruth,nomatterhowsimilartoordifferentfrompresentperception,shouldbe,asthemaindutyofhistorians,exploredandexamined.Thevalueofhistoricbuildingsissuesmodernpeopleasenseofculturalidentity,withoutwhich,itishardforthemtofindtheirlocationsinthepsychologicalcoordinatesl