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考研写作4连俊霞北京新东方学校2.2寓意阐明+原因分析段2023Itisblindworshipthatmakesitpossibletodosuchcrazy/unreasonablethingsasthephotosdisplay.Themainreason,Iassume,wouldbethedistortededucationofthepopularcultureleadingtothepervasivenessofthestar-worshipping.Asisshowninthestatisticsofarecentsurveylaunchedbyanon-profitinstitution,theincreaseofteenagers’someoneissoprominentthattheresultcausedbyitmaybeconcludedasfollows.2023/6/25Writing21强调句阐明寓意插入分词做定语3数据论证desire/aspirationsofrespectingeagernesstorespect2过渡阐明原因2.2寓意阐明+原因分析段…Itmaymisleadadolescentstodreamaboutanimmediatesuccess/triumph

ratherthantodedicatetotheirstudy.Anditisoflittlesurprisetofindtheirdisappointmentatlast.107words2023/6/25Writing34成果推导5进一步推导形式主语句二、高分范文得分解密2.2寓意阐明段+举例阐明段（1）五至六句(80-90词)：第一句阐明寓意(承上启下)；第二句阐明如下事例能够证明；第三四句一种事例及扩展；第五六句另一种扩展。详细化——切忌以理说理。（2）注意事项——切忌例子私人化。（3）扩展方式——数据论证、借用常识、引用权威、因果论证、比较论证例中人/例中事behave(s)/occur(s)inthesamewaythat图中人/图中事do(es)inthepicture.2023/6/25Writing42.3寓意阐明+举例阐明段1998(P34)Itseemsreasonablewhenpeoplelaughatthecartoon,butitwouldnolongerbelaughablewhenpeoplefindsimilarthingstakingplaceinourdailylife.1

Recentlythereisatrendofmakingpromisesinvariousfieldsofoursociety.Fromdepartmentsofgovernmenttocommonshoppingcenters,manybusinesseswhosupplyproductsorofferserviceshavemadevariouspromisestotheircustomersorservicereceivers.2

2023/6/25Writing5分词作定语定语从句2.3寓意阐明+举例阐明段Theyasserttheirproductstobeofgoodqualityorpromisetoofferexcellentservice.3

Asamatteroffact,manyofthesebusinessesclaiminthesamewaythat（比较）thehenintheabovecartoonpromisestolayeggs.4ofgreatimportance/significance=important/significantofgreat/littlepossibility=possible/impossibleofgreathelp=helpfulofpoor/outstandingquality2023/6/25Writing6of+n.=adj.比较论证2.3寓意阐明+举例阐明段举例论证常用过渡句：Abundantofexampleswoulddemonstratethephenomenon,whilethefollowingone,Isuppose,wouldsuffice.Hereisanexample.Take…foranexample/instance.…(短语/that主语从句)providesuswithanexcellentexample.Eg.Teenagerssurfingonlineprovidesuswithanexcellentexample.

Thatteenagers,inincreasingnumbers,surfonlineprovidesuswithanexcellentexample.2023/6/25Writing72.4寓意阐明+利弊分析段2023，2023，2023主动中带有悲观，悲观中暗含主动五至六句(80-90词)：第一句阐明寓意(承上启下)；第二句阐明有利有弊；ononehand,第三四句一种优点及扩展；ontheotherhand,第五六句一种缺陷及扩展。优点/缺陷=原因

扩展=举例/数据/权威/常识/成果(五种论证)2023/6/25Writing8论点必须清楚2.4寓意阐明+利弊分析段2023(P35)Fromthecartoon,wecanconcludethatthecartoonistwantstoconveysuchamessage:withthepopularityofcomputers,peoplefromallovertheworldbecomenearerbyusingtheinternettocommunicatewitheachother.1

Meanwhile,peoplealsobecomefarawayfromtheirfriends.2

Allofusacceptthefactthatthedevelopmentoftheinternetbringslotsofconveniencestoourdailylife,forinstance,wecanbuyabookonthenetinsteadofgoingtoabookstore.2023/6/25Writing9套话一句引出“利”ratherthan2.4寓意阐明+利弊分析段Besides,wecancommunicatewithourfriendsonthenetwithoutgoingoutofhome.3Butwecan'tignoretheothersideofthese:thetimewespendwithfriendsorfamilybecomesless.Andwehardlyseethemonceinaweek.Itwillmakeusfeellonelyifwecontinuetousethetoolonthenettotalkwithfriendsinsteadoftalkingwiththemonthephoneorgoingoutwiththem.4158words2023/6/25Writing102.5提议措施段三至四句(50-55词)：第一句过渡词(accordingly,asismentionedabove插入)引出反复论点；第二句改善提议(悲观意义)或提升方式(主动意义)；第三句表白期待成果。改善提议常用体现方式：Itishightimethat…(did)…Itisimperativefor…that…(should)…(3)提升方式常用体现方式：Asenhancingthesenseof…,wewouldbenefitmorefrom…

2023/6/25Writing112.5提议措施段三至四句：第一句过渡词(accordingly,asismentionedabove插入)引出反复论点；第二句改善提议(悲观意义)或提升方式(主动意义)；第三句表白期待成果。(4)表白期待成果常用体现方式：Onlyinthisway/bydoing/byexertingthiscanweboth…andembraceabrightertomorrow.2023/6/25Writing122.5提议措施段2023(P36)——悲观寓义Childeducationhasbecomeoneofthemostpopulartopicsdiscussednotonlybyeducationalexperts,butalsobypeopleinallwalks

oflife.

Thefailureofchildeducationdoesmoreharmtothedevelopmentofoursocietyandourcivilizationthantothechildrenthemselves.Thus,it’shightime

thatparents,educatorsandthegovernmentmade

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toputanendtothissituation.70words2023/6/25Writing13反复观点2.5提议措施段2023(P47紫)——主动寓义Accordingly,itisimperativeforustotakesomemeasurestoenhancethesenseofteamworkinoursociety.Weshouldbearinmindthatteamworkisofgreatsignificancetobothoursocietyandourselves.Everyoneshouldhavetheabilityofteamwork.Onlyinthiswaycanweachievesuccessandonlyinthiswaycanoursocietybecomemoreharmonioustolivein.70words2023/6/25Writing14both三、短文写作篇章分析（1）写作三段论首段——图画描述段中间段1——寓意阐明段+原因分析段中间段2——寓意阐明段+举例阐明段

中间段3——寓意阐明段+利弊分析段尾段——提议措施段（2）篇章构造体现段与段之间过渡——第二段第一句寓意阐明；第三段第一句反复观点段内衔接——多种连接词使用（P6）2023/6/25Writing15悲观寓意类主动寓意类必须使用！！！利弊包括类三、短文写作环节审题——主动还是悲观列提要——三段选择与句型填充（中文处理逻辑思绪）开始写组——注意语法，书写工整检验——拼写、标点、语法、动词（唯一性原则）2023/6/25Writing16图画描述Thereisaboilinghotpot,asisillustratedinthepicture,withvariousingredientsofmulti-cultures,suchasfamousfigureshomeandabroad:BiShengandShakespeare,philosophicalconcepts:ConfucianismandTaoism,performingart:BeijingOperaandSwanLake,andthelike.Thecaptionunderthepictureisthattheculturalhotpotisbothdeliciousandnutritious.59words2023/6/25Writin