2023年GRE作文如何准备GRE高分考生告诉你整理

千里之行，始于足下。让知识带有温度。第第2页/共2页精品文档推荐2023年GRE作文如何准备GRE高分考生告诉你整理GRE的高分考生的背后都有着自己的殷勤付出和积累，只有努力才会有回报。两次备考GRE的韩春晓同学有着她独特的（阅历）来共享给大家。

GRE（作文）如何预备GRE高分考生告知你

我也很庆幸遇到了新东方骆彦伟老师，他的课堂节奏快，在课下我整理出了一大本笔记(自己整理笔记为个人习惯，其实老师的讲义就是特别条理清楚的（笔记本），结构设计得一目了然，上课要准时补充就能快速学习消化)。根据老师的分类题材，多刷机经，在考场上就不会有生疏的题目。特殊说一下小作文，肯定要根据老师的（方法）（总结）不同类型的规律错误及其特征，时间充裕的同学肯定确保把题库刷一遍，甚至多遍。大作文我也是刷了一整套题库，不用每篇都写，但是肯定要每一篇都有自己的思路和相应素材，然后着重练习新东方点题班上的重点题目。最重要的是提高打字速度，在备考的过程中要多动手，写思路也尽量用电脑打，就可以一举两得。个人认为，要想得高分就肯定要有充分的说理和举例。

只要时间久，铁杵磨成针。不论是多难的东西，只要自己下功夫，努力的去学习理解，就可以在最终收获胜利。

GRE高分作文的写作结构

InsurveysMasonCityresidentsrankwatersports(swimming,boating,andfishing)amongtheirfavoriterecreationalactivities.TheMasonRiverflowingthroughthecityisrarelyusedforthesepursuits,however,andthecityparkdepartmentdevoteslittleofitsbudgettomaintainingriversiderecreationalfacilities.Foryearstherehavebeencomplaintsfromresidentsaboutthequalityoftheriverswaterandtheriverssmell.Inresponse,thestatehasrecentlyannouncedplanstocleanupMasonRiver.Useoftheriverforwatersportsis,therefore,suretoincrease.Thecitygovernmentshouldforthatreasondevotemoremoneyinthisyearsbudgettoreversiderecreationalfacilities.

这个题目应当算基础类了，首先找结论，然后依次去看指出缘由或者前提，再倒上去分析。

这题的结论就是：Thecitygovernmentshouldforthatreasondevotemoremoneyinthisyearsbudgettoreversiderecreationalfacilities.

得出这个结论是基于这样几个前提：

前提1：居民更喜爱水上运动，证据：Survey

前提2：河水利用率低是由于水质问题，证据：居民的埋怨

前提3：riverusageissuretoincrease，由于dotherivercleanup

从新GRE写作满分（范文）来看，整篇（文章）结构明朗，每段结构也很清楚。传统的5段式，3个反对点。

首段：WhileitmaybetruethattheMasonCitygovernmentoughttodevotemoremoneytoriversiderecreationalfacilities,thisauthorsargumentdoesnotmakeacogentcaseforincreasedresourcesbasedonriveruse.指出结论以及的文章规律证明存在问题，没有（其它）多余的废话。

其次段:Citingsurveysofcityresidents,theauthorreportscityresidentsloveofwatersports先写如何认为，然后写自己的反对，质疑Survey的精确性，加举例，连用了自己的3个假设进行反对。最终还加上觉得怎样才算好的论证。

第三段：Additionally,theauthorimpliesthatresidentsdonotusetheriverforswimming,boating,andfishing,despitetheirprofessedinterest,becausethewaterispollutedandsmelly.也是先写观点(包括他文中的隐含意思或前提);接着自己的反对+进一步绽开;最终能加上认为可行的论证建议是最好的了，这样不会一味批判究竟，段内结构更完整。

第四段：Buildingupontheimplicationthatresidentsdonotusetheriverduetothequalityoftheriverswaterandthesmell,theauthorsuggeststhatarivercleanupwillresultinincreasedriverusage.上一段先批他前提2有问题，再表示即使前提2对，前提3也有问题，这样就是规律结构更好。

分了Iftheriverswaterqualityandsmellresultfromproblemswhichcanbecleaned,thismaybetrue和Ifthequalityandaromaresultsfromthenaturalmineraldepositsinthewaterorsurroundingrock,thismaynotbetrue.结构相当紧密完整;最终一句再次强调的论证问题。

结尾：和开头呼应，强调结论可能正确，的论证有问题(paraphrase)

所以，发觉结论、前提(包括隐含前提)、证据和理出的写作思路很重要很重要，其中隐含的意思也要能够读懂。对主结论的把握、(小)结论的辨识也要弄明白。

GRE写作常用词汇整理

同等甚至更多：

commensurably,orperhapsevenmore;

伴随：

alongwith;keeppacewith;consistentwith;inharmonywith;copewith;inaccordancewith;inconjunctionwith;

serveascatalystwhichwillfoster~;

规律：

reasoning;wayofthinking;lineofreasoning;analysis;

倾向：belessproneto;

在成长路上：

inone’scourseofgrowth;

富人：haves

穷人：have-not

提建议时说需要：

amorecompleteunderstandingof_;

天生的：

bynature;inherited;inherent;intrinsic;inorigin;innate;

供需关系：

supplyanddemand;

GRE写作高分作文分析

题目：

Toomuchtime,money,andenergyarespentdevelopingnewandmoreelaboratetechnology.Societyshouldinsteadfocusonmaximizingtheuseofexistingtechnologyfortheimmediatebenefitofitscitizens.

ImustsaythatIrejectthisstatement.Whileitistruethatweneedtosupportsocietyasmuchaspossiblewithcurrenttechnology,thatdoesnotinanywaymeanthatweshouldstopprogressingsimplybecauseourcurrenttechnologycannothandlealltheproblemswehavebroughttoit.Doesthatmeanthatweshouldsimplyacceptthestatusquoandmakedo?No,Idon’tthinkso.Todosowouldbetantamounttoadoptingafatalisticapproach;Ithinkmostpeoplewouldrejectthat.

Technologyhashelped,andithashurt.Withoutit,wewouldneverhaveourstandardofliving,norqualityofnutrition,expectationofalongandproductivelifespan,andtheunshakablebeliefthatourlivescanbemadeevenbetter.Butithasalsobroughtusuniversalpollution,weaponssopowerfulastobecapableofrenderingusextinct,andtheconsequentfearforoursurvivalasspeciesandasaplanet.Technologyisindeedadouble-edgedsword.Andyet,Istillhavetoargueinitsfavor,becausewithoutit,wehavenohope.

Somemightarguethatwewouldbebetteroffwithouttechnology.Theymightsaythatareturntoalesstechnologicallydrivenapproachtolifewouldhavethebenefitsofreducingstressandallowingustolivesimpler,happierlives,likethoseofourforebears.Suchanideaisseductive,somuchsothatmuchofartandallofnostalgiaaredevotedtoit.Butuponcloserinspection,onerealizesthatsuchamovewouldonlyreturnustoalifeofdifferentkindsofstress,oneoffalsesimplicity,onefraughtwithdanger.Itwouldbealifewithoutantibioticswhereaminorcutcouldprovedeadly.Itwouldbealifewherechildbirthisthemainkillerofwomen,andwhereanemergencyisdealtwithintermsofhoursanddaysinsteadofminutesandhours;alifewheretherearenophonesorcarsorplanesorcentralheating,noprovendrugtherapiestotreatmentalillness,nocomputers.Wouldthisworldreallymakepeoplehappy?

Whatwealreadyhave,wehave.Andsincetheonlywaytomoveisforward,insteadofallowingourselvestobeparalyzedbyfearandworry,weneedtolearnhowtocleanupthepollutionwehavecaused,andhowtodealwithaworldthatfeedsonweaponsandmassdestruction.Doingthesethingsmeanshavingtomoveawayfromtechnologyintoamoredifficultrealm,thatofdiplomacyandcompromise:tomovefromthebullystanceof“IambiggerandbetterandIhavemoretoysandsoIwin”toaplacewhereeveryonewins.

Technologyisthethingthatwillallowpeopletodothat.But,advancedasitis,itisstillinitsinfancy.Wehavetoallowittogrowupandmatureinordertoreaptherealrewardsthatitcanbring.Andthereareevengreaterrewardsaheadofusthanwhattheworldhasalreadyexperienced.Whentechnologyispushedtotheouteredge,thatiswhereserendipitousdiscoveriescanoccur.Thishasbeenseenthroughouttechnologicaladvancement,buttheeasiestexampleisprobablythespaceprogramwhichmadeusthink,reallyhard,abouthowtodothingsinadifferentenvironment.Itgaveustelecommunications,newfabricsandinternationalcooperation.Paramedicaldevices,sothatpeoplecanbetreatedevenastheyarebeingtransportedtothehosptal,areadirectdevelopmentofthattechnology.Noneofthiswouldhavehappenedinthetimeframethatitdidifwehadnotpushedfortechnologicaladvancement.Ifwehaddecidedto“focusonmaximizingtheuseofexistingtechnology”insteadoffoolishlyreachingforthestars,wewouldnothavemadethosediscoverieswhichnowarethebedrockofthe21stcentury.

分析：

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语言：平实的语句完全没有网络流行模板的痕迹，也是很多过了6级的考生通过练习可以达到的水平。

ImustsaythatIrejectthisstatement.

Doesthatmeanthatweshouldsimplyacceptthestatusquoandmakedo?No,Idon’tthinkso.

Technologyhashelped,andithashurt.

Technologyisindeedadouble-edgedsword.Andyet,Istillhavetoargueinitsfavor,becausewithoutit,wehavenohope.

……

当然，这并不意味，在GRE作文考试中，平实的语言比润色后的语言有更多的优势。从这篇作文中，我们可以得到以下两条重要信息：

1、通过记忆大量模板使语言“全副武装”、“气概汹汹”并非高分作文的必要条件，这种方式的弊端在课堂上我们已阐述过。

2、在陈述idea的过程中，体现出criticalthinking才是胜利的关键。我们在课堂上对criticalthinking这一概念做过多次具体的解释，现在请大家一起来体会这一概念在文中的运用。

第一段：

(表明立场)ImustsaythatIrejectthisstatement.(让步)Whileitistruethatweneedtosupportsocietyasmuchaspossiblewithcurrenttechnology,(折回自己立场)thatdoesnotinanywaymeanthatweshouldstopprogressingsimplybecauseourcurrenttechnologycannothandlealltheproblemswehavebroughttoit.

其次段：

(概述科技的两面性)Technologyhashelped,andithashurt.(详细争论科技的贡献)Withoutit,wewouldneverhaveourstandardofliving,norqualityofnutrition,expectationofalongandproductivelifespan,andtheunshakablebeliefthatourlivescanbemadeevenbetter.(详细争论科技的危害)Butithasalsobroughtusuniversalpollution,weaponssopowerfulastobecapableofrenderingusextinct,andtheconsequentfearforoursurvivalasspeciesandasaplanet.Technologyisindeedadouble-edgedsword.(表明已考虑到科技的危害，但是依旧坚持自己立场)Andyet,Istillhavetoargueinitsfavor,becausewithoutit,wehavenohope.

第三段：

(提出反方的立场)Somemightarguethatwewouldbebetteroffwithouttechnology.Theymightsaythatareturntoalesstechnologicallydrivenapproachtolifewouldhavethebenefitsofreducingstressandallowingustolivesimpler,happierlives,likethoseofourforebears.Suchanideaisseductive,somuchsothatmuchofartandallofnostalgiaaredevotedtoit.(通过详细论据反对反方的观点)Butuponcloserinspection,onerealizesthatsuchamovewouldonlyreturnustoalifeofdifferentkindsofstress,oneoffalsesimplicity,onefraughtwithdanger.Itwouldbealifewithoutantibioticswhereaminorcutcouldprovedeadly.Itwouldbealifewherechildbirthisthemainkillerofwomen,andwhereanemergencyisdealtwithintermsofhoursanddaysinsteadofminutesandhours;alifewheretherearenophonesorcarsorplanesorcentralheating,noprovendrugtherapiestotreatmentalillness,nocomputers.Wouldthisworldreallymakepeoplehappy?

第四段：

(在第三段驳论的基础上进一步立论)Whatwealreadyhave,wehave.Andsincetheonlywaytomoveisforward,insteadofallowingourselvestobeparalyzedbyfearandworry,weneedtolearnhowtocleanupthepollutionwehavecaused,andhowtodealwithaworldthatfeedsonweaponsandmassdestruction.Doingthesethingsmeanshavingtomoveawayfromtechnologyintoamoredifficultrealm,thatofdiplomacyandcompromise:tomovefromthebullystanceof“IambiggerandbetterandIhavemoretoysandsoIwin”toaplacewhereeveryonewins.

第五段：

Technologyisthethingthat