简式商务报告-(BEC中级写作)

PAGEPAGE4商务报告的结构及常用句型1.Introduction介绍写作背景，阐明报告要讨论的问题。常用句型Theaim/purpose/objectiveofthisreportisto…Thisreportsetsoutto/aimsto…Mr.Xhasaskedmetoreporttoinvestigate/evaluate/study/recommend/analyze/givefeedback/estimate/assess…Asrequestedby/Uponrequestof某人/某部门,Iamsubmittingthefollowingreporton…As某人/某部门requestedonNovember12,Iamsubmittingthefollowingreporton…2.Findings常用句型Accordingtotherecentmarketresearchundertaken/investigation/surveyundertaken/thechartabove/thetable,…….Therecentvisit/investigation/surveyshowedthat……Thetable/chartabovetellsusthat……Fromthechartshown,wefind/learn/noticethat……Thetable/chartaboveshowsthat……3.Conclusion常用句型Itwasdecided/agreed/feltthat…Noconclusionswerereachedregarding…Accordingto/Basedonthefindingsabove,itcanbeconcludedthat……Fromthetableshown,itcanbeconcludedthat……Therefore,itcanbeconcludedthat也可直接陈述结论。4.Recommendations1)写作中注意事项建议必须是建立在结论的逻辑基础上，是结论的合理引申。注意建议的合理性与层次性•言之有据，前后呼应。•言之有理，言之可行。•数码标段，层次分明。2)常用句型注意:recommendation以及recommend后面要用动词原形（虚拟语气）。Wewouldrecommendthat…Itissuggested/recommendedthat…Thefollowingaretherecommendations……Basedontheconclusion/analysisabove,werecommendthat/itcanbeconcludedthat……Withreferencetothefacts/advantagesstatedabove,thefollowingrecommendationscanbemade…Somethingisrecommended.eg,Achangeofattitudeisrecommended.Amoreprofessionalattitudewillneedtobeencouragedthroughtraining.Onthebasisoftheresults,Ihavethefollowingrecommendations:Onthebasisoftheanalysis,itisreasonabletohavethefollowingrecommendations:如果需要进一步拓展，可以描述一下建议实施后可预期的进展或者景象。

解读商务图表信息I．写作注意事项在看图表作文写作时，作者要仔细分析图表的文字说明和数字表述，在完全理解的基础上，对其进行归纳总结，从中发现要说明的问题。语言表达要准确、精炼，用词要恰当，文章要有较强的逻辑性。对图表中给予的繁多的资料数据勿需全部予以描述，而是要选择有典型性，代表性的重点。II.概括图表信息的常用词组和表达方式1．上升趋势toincrease/anincreasetogouptogrow/agrowthtojump/ajumptoleap/aleaptoreachapeak/apeaktosoar/asoartoskyrockettorise/arisetoupsurge/anupsurgetoupswing/anupswing高涨2．下降趋势tocollapse/acollapsetodecline/adeclinetodecrease/adecreasetoreduce/areductiontodrop/adroptofall/afalltogodowntoreachalowpoint/alowpoint3．程度升降程度较大agreatdeal/big/alotmuchclear/clearlyapparent/apparentlyobvious/obviouslyconsiderable/considerablyimportant/importantlydramatic/dramaticallygreat/greatlydrastic/drasticallymarked/markedlyfastquick/quicklyrapid/rapidlyremarkable/remarkablysharp,/sharplysignificant/significantlystrong/stronglysudden/suddenly升降程度较小abitalittlefractional/fractionallygentle/gentlygradual/graduallyhardlylittleslight/slightly/marginallyslow/slowlysmallsteady/steadily4．平稳状态tobehardlychangedtohavelittlechange39.Thegraphprovesthedominanceof…40.Duringthepeakperiodof…,Butduringthepeakperiodof…41.Thediagramunfoldsaclearcomparisonbetween…42.TheUnitedStatesasawholeinfouraspects,namely,***,***,***,***,43.Obviously,ineveryaspect,44.…hadamuchhighergrowthratethan…asawholeduringthatperiod.45.Thenumberof…increasedby%46.Themostrapidincreaseofallthefouraspects…Astotheotherthree,thoughthegrowthrateswerenotsohigh,theywereindeedremarkableandimpressive.47.Thenumberof…droppedby%48.Fromthediagramitcanbesafelyconcludedthat(intheyears)…49.Thereweremanysignificantchanges(inmodesoftransport)50.Thefollowingparagraphswillidentifyanddiscussthetrendsintheaccompanyinggraph.51.Averynoticeabletrendwasthesteadydecreasein…52.Duringthesameperiod,therewasalargeincrease…53.Thisincreasedagain…

例题例题YouworkforMarksReadthefollowingpiechartwhichdemonstratesthelocalfamilyincomeaftertaxes.Usetheinformationinthecharttowriteareportinterpretingthechart,discussingtheprospectsofyourcompany’sinvestmentinthelocalretailmarket,andexplainingtheconclusionyoureachfromtheinformationinthechartandhowthechartsupportsyourconclusion.LocalFamilyIncomeAfterTaxes【范文】ReportonAssessmentoftheLocalPurchasingPowerIntroductionAsrequested,Iamsubmittingthefollowingreportontheassessmentofthelocalpurchasingpower.Asisknown,thepurchasingpoweriscloselyrelatedtothefamilyincome.Soitissensibletolookintothelocalfamilyincomeaftertaxesfirst.FindingsFromthechartshown,wecanfindthatabout70%ofthefamilieshaveanincomeover$5000,whileonlyabout30%ofthefamilieshaveanincomeunder$5000.ConclusionThereforeitcanbeconcludedthatthelocalfamilyincomeisfairlyhigh,andaccordinglythelocalpurchasingpowermustbepotential.Recommendations