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教师简介教师简介：金斐义乌市毛店初中

好学义乌·名师云课Module8StoryTimeWriting义乌市毛店初中金斐审核人：义乌市教育研修院陈清伟七年级英语下册·Fairytales（童话故事）FairytalesAllaroundtheworldparentstelltheirchildren

fairytales.stories:children

Inthestories,animalspeopleThestoriesusuallybeginwith:___________excitingOnceuponatime...OnceuponatimetherewasasmallboycalledTom.OnedayTomwantedtogoforawalkinthedarkforest.Hewalkedforashorttimeandthenhepickedsomeflowers.Next,henoticedalittlehouse.Heknockedonthedoorbutnobodyanswered.Heenteredthehouse.Therewasabigtable,abigchair,abigbowlandabigbear.ThenTomlookedatthebowloffoodwithbigeyes.ThebearaskedTom，“Areyouhungry?Trysomeofmyfood.”Tomtriedthefood.Finallytheyweregoodfriends.

Let'sread!whenwhowherewhatresult(结果)whysimplepasttense(一般过去时)/rɪˈzʌlt/

Let'slearn

Tipsoftellingastory:1.factors(要素)：

whenwhowherewhy/howwhatresult2.linkingwords(连接词)：

Once

upon

a

time/Long

long

agoFirstthennextfinallyandbutsobecause...3.tense(时态)：simplepasttense

一般过去时

/ˈfæktə//ˈlɪŋkɪŋ/

Let'stry!

GoldilocksandtheThreeBearsOnceuponatime…therewasalittlegirlcalledGoldilocks.drawnbyXunjiaying

Let'sspeak.看图并用所给单词造句。/ˈempərə/

Thefatherlovedthelittlegirl.Thefatherandlittlegirlplayedgamesinthegarden.Thelittlegirldiedinthesea.

ShechangedintoabirdnamedJingwei.Herfatherwatchedbirdandwasunhappy.Thebirddecidedtofilltheseawithpebbles（小石子）.fill…with…用…填满…/ˈpeblz/

将句子合并并使用顺序连词.如“and,so,but,because,first,next,then和

finally”连贯全文。Onceuponatime,therewasalittlegirlcalledNuwa.HerfatherwasEmperorYanandheloved_______________________________________________________________________________________________________

Let'swrite.OnceuponatimetherewasalittlegirlcalledNuwa.HerfatherwasEmperorYanandhelovedhisdaughterverymuch.Heoftenplayedwithher.Theywereveryhappy.Butoneday,hisdaughterdiedinthesea.ThenshechangedintoabirdnamedJingwei.Thefather

watcheditandhewasverysad.Jingweiwasalsosad.Finally,shedecidedtofilltheseawithpebbles.Onepossibleanswer:Onceuponatime,therewasalittlegirlcalledNuwa.HerfatherwasEmperor(皇帝)Yan

and

he

loved

hisdaughter.Theylivedinapalace(宫殿).They

playedinthegardenandwereveryhappy.Oneday,Nuwa

decidedtogo

totheseaintheboatbut

theweatherwasverybadandsoontheboatwasinpieces.

Shetriedto

swimbutshe

died.Then

Nuwa

changedinto

abirdcalledJingweiand

returned

hometoseeherfather.TheEmperorcried

because

Nuwadied.

Hewatched

thebirdandhewasunhappy.Finally,thebird

decidedto

returntothe

seaand

triedtofill

thesea

with

pebbles.anotherpossibleanswer:/ˈpæləs/

Let'spractice.

从前，森林里住着狐狸妈妈和小狐狸。一天小狐狸饿了，狐狸妈妈去给她找食物，后来发生了什么样的故事呢？请根据图片提示写一则英语小故事。intheforestmotherfoxbabyfoxahunterhungry/ˈhʌntə/Tips:

(1)此篇作文以“讲故事”为主线，以介绍故事的发展为主要内容，在写作过程中始终渗透着本模块的话题——“故事”。我们可确定在写作过程中要运用的主要时态为一般过去时。

(2)实用短语储备：

从前：

在森林里：决定做某事:

匆忙去某地：跑走：

onceuponatimeintheforestdecidetodosth.hurrytosp.runawayOnepossibleanswer:

Onceuponatime,therewasafoxandherbabyintheforest.One

day,thebabywashungryandcried.MotherFoxdecidedtogetsomefoodforherbaby,soshewenttoavillage.Shewassoluckythatshegotachickenandthenshehurriedtoherhouse.Whenshewasnearherhouse,thehuntercame.MotherFoxshouted,“It’sdangerous.Runquickly!”Finally,BabyFoxranawaybutMotherFoxdied.Howdoyoufeelaboutthisstory?从前有个叫司马光的小孩，有一天他跟小伙伴们在院里玩耍。院子里有一口大水缸，有个小孩掉到缸里。别的孩子们一见出了事，哭喊起来。司马光捡起一块大石头，向水缸扔去。水缸破了，缸里的水流了出来，司马光救了这个小孩。请根据所给故事写一篇英语短文,并谈谈你的感受。写作要求：语句连贯，60词左右。提示词汇：

院子

水缸

石头

跌落

扔向B扔A打破

yardawatervatstonefall--fell（过去式）throw--threw（过去式）throwAatBbreak--broke（过去式）【思路点拨】1.梳理所给要点，明确写作思路。(1)写作思路：司马光和小伙伴们玩耍→有个小孩掉进院子里的大水缸→其他孩子哭喊→司马光捡起石头砸向水缸→小孩得救。(2)作文的时态整体用一般过去时，发表自己观点用一般现在时。人称用第三人称。/ja:d//væt//stəʊn//θrəʊ//θru://breik//brəʊk/

2.可用词汇、短语和句型。词汇和短语：从前有一天和......一起玩在院子里掉进哭捡起向......扔......流出救句型：从前，有个叫......的男孩。

onceuponatimeonedayplaywithintheyardfallinto(fellinto)crypickupthrow...at...runoutofsaveOnceuponatime,therewasaboycalled...

Onceuponatime,therewasaboycalledSimaGuang.Oneday,heplayedwithhisfriendsintheyard.Therewasabigwatervatintheyard.However,Achildfellintothewatervat.Otherchildrenbegantocry.Then,SimaGuangpickedupabigstoneand