高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导整理课件

高考英语开放式作文

用自己的语言对画面进行简明、清楚叙述

紧承叙述，引出观点（话题）（力求自然、准确）联系实际，摆事实，讲道理（力求深度、力度）综合上文，再申主旨（力求完整、有力）开放作文的四个步骤：起承转合描图----解图----议图----圆图InyourspokenEnglishclass,yourteachershowsyouthefollowingpicture.Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit.Somepeoplelookconfident,butwhattheyactuallyhaveintheirheadisfarfromenough.一篇好的开放性作文什么样的？

Asisshowninthepicture,ahalf-emptybottleisgoingtostickalabelof“full”onitsbody,feelingproudandconfident.Thepictureseemstobereflectingakindofsocialphenomenon.Wemightoftenmeetsomepeoplewholookconfident,tryingtoimpressotherswiththeir“rich”knowledge.However,justlikethebottleinthepicture,whattheyreallyknowisjustalittle.Whattheyactuallyhaveintheirheadisfarfromenough.Asanoldsayinggoes,emptybottlesmaketheloudestnoise.Therefore,it’swisetoenrichourselveswithknowledgeandtrytomakeourheadfull.起承转合描图（结合图）议论如何“起”？1.Asisshowninthepicture,….2.Aswecanseefromthepicture,….4.Inthepicturewecanseethat….5.Fromthepicturewecanseethat….3.Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,….6.Asthepictureindicates,thereis/aresb.doing….….描图如何描图？如何“承”？1.Thepictureseemsto….2.Thepicturetriesto….3.Thepictureconveysamessagethat….4.Itisacommonphenomenoninourdailylife.….5.Itisquiteacommonsceneinthesociety.….6.Suchasituationseemscommoninoursociety.….….图中含义如何表达？如何“转”？1.However,justlikethe…inthepicture,….2.If…,….注意:“转”的方式非常灵活，难以有固定的模式，关键与前文逻辑一致。1、然而，真实的情况是….2、如果不这样,会有啥结果高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）如何“合”？1.Therefore，….结论2.Thus，….3.So….4.Inconclusion，….5.Onlyinthiswaycan….高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）漫画理解作文审图立意三步骤一审细节（抓要点）二审角度（找可能性）三审优选立意（拓展主题句）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）漫画的画面细节漫画的夸张寓意

(与现实的矛盾之处）细节夸张寓意Don’tcopyother’swayofsolvingtheproblem.Doeverythingintherightway.读图与立意细节高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）类型：现象型特点：有人有物要素：人，门，“拉”细节2：汗水代表什么？门呢？“拉”呢？细节1：脸朝外没看标示审图高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）抓细节揭寓意要素：人，门，“拉”门---目标、理想、工作、学习、困难，具体的某一件事等标示“拉”---方法、建议、指令、措施、策略、规则等例：Inmyopinion,thedoorreferstoaproblemneededtobetackled,whilethesign“Pull”isjustlikethesuggestionswecangetinourdailylife.人细节：汗---努力、能力、经验、态度等没看见标示---问题所在：“睁眼瞎”、“盲目行事”、“固执蛮干”、“急于成事”等现象高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）评分标准：文章是否扣题----描述与主题一致，自圆其说结构是否完整----三部分内容是否健康----乐观向上逻辑是否清晰----议论要有逻辑性语言是否准确----用词恰当，无语法错误交际是否得体----情境，身份等高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）正确的立意：1、方法决定成功和失败。☆Sometimes,itisthemethodyouapplythatdeterminesyoursuccessorfailure.☆Inmyopinion,thisconveysthemessagethatoneshouldalwaysmakeclearoftherightwaytoreachone’sgoalbeforedevotingoneselftoit,otherwise,youmightgointhecompletelywrongdirectionandwillnotsucceednomatterhowhardyoutryjustasthemandoes.☆Tomyunderstanding,whatholdsthemostsignificantkeytosuccessisthewaywedothings,ratherthanhowhardwethrowourselvesin.☆Fromwhatthepictureillustrates,wecouldrealizethatevenifwetryhardforourgoal,wemaystillfailifweneglectthewaytoworkonit.

☆Anditisfromthepicturethatweknowdoingsomethingwiththewrongmethodcanneverleadustosuccesswedesire,evenifweworkhard.高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）正确的立意：2、有能力没方法无法成功。☆

Althoughwepossessgreatabilities,ifwealwayssticktothewrongmethods,notonlywillitrestrictourthinkingbutitwillpreventourfurtherdevelopment.☆

Thepicturehasaprofoundsignificanceinourdailylife,whichindicatesthefactthatwesucceednotbecauseofourabilitybutourwaystosolvetheproblemsweencounter.高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）正确的立意：3、具体问题具体分析。☆

Peoplesometimesdothingswithoutanyfurtherthinking.4、做事应目标明确方法正确。☆

Thepictureindicatesthatweshoulduseanappropriatewaytorealizeouraimandgoals.☆

Themessageconveyedisthatweshouldalwaysfindthecorrectapproachtothings.☆

Frommypointofview,whatthepictureconveystousisthatbeforegoingforsomethingorpursuingyourgoals,itisveryimportanttomakesurethatwhereyourdreamliesorifyouareontherightwaythatleadstoyourgoals.高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）正确的立意：5、遇事要学会变通，方法要应时改变。☆Inmyopinion,theyshouldnotalwaysfollowtheirpastexperience;theyshouldobservethesituationeachtimeandmakeproperreaction.6、不要急于求成，而应冷静反思。☆

Inreality,wealsoneedtothinkoverbeforewedealwithaprobleminordertofindthebestsolution.7、劲要使在刀刃上。☆Withpersistentendeavor/hardworkintherightdirection,weareboundtomakeasuccess.高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）正确的立意：8、不要盲目自大，要善于听取建议。☆

We,teenagers,shouldn’tmakelightofthesuggestionsgivenbyothersonthewaytosuccess.☆Whatthepicturetendstogetacrosstousisthatweshouldfollowsomeoneelse’ssuggestions.9、认清形势找到正确的方法。☆Thepicturevividlyconveysthemessagethatwheneverwedosomething,wearesupposedtobesensibleofthesituationfirstandthenselecttherightwaytofinishit.高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）

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