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【2023年】吉林省白城市大学英语6级大学英语六级模拟考试(含答案)学校:________班级:________姓名:________考号:________

一、1.Writing(10题)1.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicABoominContinuingEducation.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.图表所示为某城市1989、1994、1999、2004年参加成人教育(或继续教育)的人数情况,请描述其变化

2.请说明产生这些变化的原因(可从社会发展及竞争能力方面加以说明)

3.请预测我国成人教育(或继续教育)的前景

ABoominContinuingEducation

2.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTestforNationalCivilServants.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.近几年兴起了一股国家公务员考试(TestforNationalCivilServants)热

2.产生这种现象的原因

3.我的看法

TestforNationalCivilServants

3.1.目前社会上存在着迷信文凭的现象

2.造成这一现象的原因

3.我对此的观点

IsaDiplomaEverything?

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteaninquirylettertoafriend.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

假设你有一位居住在美国纽约的好友(DavidJohnson)。你写信告诉他你已被录取为纽约大学的研究生,即将在今年9月赴美学习,向他询问有关事宜。信件内容要求如下:

1.问候朋友并告知自己的好消息

2.询问关于在纽约留学的生活情况,如能否在学校附近找到住处,以及朋友有何生活上的建议等

3.希望他早日回信,并盼望在不久的将来能和他在纽约见面

AnInquiryLettertoaFriend

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicClassSkippinginColleges.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.目前大学生逃课现象很普遍

2.分析大学生逃课的原因

3.你对这一现象的看法

ClassSkippinginColleges

6.CollegeReadingRoomPhenomenon

1.描述图表中的两个循环(cycle)所反映的问题

2.分析引起该变化的原因

3.你的结论

(Sept:newtermstarts,Jan:vacation,June:exams,July:vacation)

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOntheImportanceofEnvironmentalProtection.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.人类面临的环境问题越来越多,如气候变化、环境污染、生态失衡等问题

2.但许多人仍然不懂得去保护环境

3.我的看法

OntheImportanceofEnvironmentalProtection

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicALettertoaSchoolmate.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

假设你是李明,你有一校友玩网络游戏成瘾,请给他写封信,劝告他戒掉这种游戏。

你的信应包括以下内容:

1.你得知他玩网络游戏成瘾的渠道及你的感受;

2.过分玩网络游戏的危害;

3.你对他的建议或忠告。

AlettertoaSchoolmate

9.Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteashortessaybasedonthefollowingnewsextractedfromanewspaper,commentingonwhathadhappenedandgivingyourownunderstandingofit.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandgiveyouressayanappropriatetitle.

"香港著名影、视、歌三栖明星张国荣四月一日从香港某高层数纵身跳下,自杀身亡......"——《新民晚报》

10.Forthispart,youarerequiredtowriteacompositionbasedonthefollowingoutlinegiveninChinese.Thesuggestedtitleis:PrivateSchoolsinChina.Youshouldwritenolessthan150wordsforyourcomposition.

1.私立学校在中国的兴起。

2.私立学校可能带来的好处。

1)人才市场的需要;

2)培养一流人才;

3)提高全民族科学、教育水平。

3.更多的孩子会上私立学。

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10题)11.ManyruralregionsinEurope,suchastheGreekvillageofPrastos,areplaguedwithenvironmentalhazardsasmoreandmorefieldslayunattended.

12.

Yaleiscomposedof______colleges.

13.

Sportsstadiumsnowbecomesasourceofnoisepollutionbecauseof______.

14.

Freudbelievedthatinchildhoodsomepeopleexperiencedeepfeelingstheyarcashamedofandthesefeelingsoftenfadeawayintotheunconsciousmind,butmayreturnindreamsinlaterlife.

A.YB.NC.NG

15.

Itisnecessarytomakefrequent______readingrateadjustment.

16.WhatdoestheauthorsayaboutthecrazeforAuto-TunewhichtrendyCherstarted?

A.Itfadedsoon.

B.Itlastedformanyyears.

C.Itmadeengineerslazy.

D.Itharmedpeople'screativity.

17.HowSATSWork

Testsareafactoflifethroughoutourschoolcareers,butoneofthemostimportant,and,tosome,thescariest,ofthemallistheSAT—thatthree-hourexamthat'ssupposedtomeasureahighschoolstudent'schanceofacademicsuccessinthefirstyearofcollege.SomecollegesconsiderSATscoresmajorfactorsintheiradmissionprocess,whileothersviewhighschoolacademicperformance,alongwithrecommendationsandextracurricularactivities,equally,orevenmoreimportantly.Nomatterwhereyou'reheaded,ifyou'reahighschoolstudent,theSATisimportanttoyoubecausemostcollegesrequirestudentstoreporteitherSATorACTAssessmentscores.

WhatIstheSAT?

Firstofall,SATnolongerstandsforScholasticAptitudeTest(学术性倾向测验),theoriginalnameofthetestwhenitwasintroducedin1941.Althoughyoumaystillseethatnameoccasionally,theCollegeBoard,thenot-for-profiteducationalassociationthatsponsorstheSATS,decidedtolettheacronymstandonitsownasawayofaddressingcontroversyaboutthemeaningoftheword"aptitude".TheCollegeBoardalsorejectedthealternative"ScholasticAssessmentTest".(Englishteachersprobablypointedoutthatthisnamewasredundant,sinceassessmentmeanstest.)

TheSATImeasuresverbalandmathreasoningabilitiesthatyou'vedevelopedthroughoutyourschoolyears.Themultiple-choicetest,developedbythenot-for-profitEducationalTestingService,isintendedtoletstudentsdemonstratetheirverbalandmathabilitieswithoutregardtothekindofschoolingthey'vehad.AccordingtotheCollegeBoard,thetestlooksforastudent'sabilitytounderstandandanalyzewrittenmaterial,todrawinferences,todifferentiateshadesofmeaning,todrawconclusionsandsolvemathproblems—allskillsthatarenecessaryforsuccessincollegeandtheworkworld.

TheAmericanCollegeTesting(ACT)Assessment,whichwasintroducedin1959,isanalternativetotheSATthatvirtuallyallcollegesanduniversitiesnowaccept.Developersofthetesttoutitforitscurriculum-basedquestions,sayingthattheirtestismoredirectlyrelatedtowhatisactuallytaughtinhighschool.

What'stheSATII?

ThenewerSATII:SubjectTests,formerlytheCollegeBoardAchievementTests,areintendedtomeasureastudent'sknowledgeofaparticularsubject,suchasEnglish(writingorliterature),historyandsocialsciences,mathematics(variouslevels),sciences,andlanguages(Chinese,French,German,modernHebrew,Italian,Japanese,Latin,Spanish,English).SomecollegesrequireoneormoreSATIItests,buteveniftheyaren'trequired,SATIItestsscorescanhelpyoupresentamorepersonalizedportfoliothatillustrateshowwellyouwouldfitataparticularschool.MostcollegesuseSATIIscoresnotforadmissionpurposesbutforprogramplacementandcounseling.SATIItestsaregivenonaslightlydifferentschedulefromtheSATI.Generally,SATIItestsarconehourlongandconsistofmultiplechoicequestions.Thereareexceptions.Forexample,theWritingTesthas40minutesofmultiple-choicequestionsanda20-minutewritingsample.

Todecidewhichsubjecttestshouldbetaken,first,,makealistofallthecollegesyou'reconsidering.ThenreviewtheircatalogsorwebsitestofindoutiftheyrequireSubjectTestscoresforadmissionand,ifso,whichones.Useyourlistofcollegesandtheiradmissionrequirementstohelpplanyourhighschoolcourseschedule.Forexample,acollegetowhichyouplantoapplymayrequirealanguageSubjectTestscoreormightexemptyoufromafirst-yearcourserequirementifyoudowellonalanguageSubjectTest.

Inaddition,theCollegeBoardwebsitecanbesearchedforinformationaboutSubjectTestrequirementsatspecificcolleges.

WhenIstheSATTaken?

General

A.measurewhetherastudent'sabilitycanbesuccessfulinthefirstyearofcollege

B.evaluatehighschools'educationqualitythroughoutthecountry

C.helpimprovetheeducationincollegethroughoutthecountry

D.measurehighschoolstudents'chanceofafruitfullife

18.

Theauthordoesanassessmentofallhigh-riskurbanareasintheU.S.

A.YB.NC.NG

19.

TheicetonguegrowingoutfromtheGreenlandcoastusedtorejectsaltbackintothewater,making______heavierandhelpingittosink.

20.

Whatthehistoriansdoin"UnsolvedHistory"islikedetective'swork,sotheirtheoriesarenotveryscientific.

A.YB.NC.NG

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10题)21.(35)

A.Two.B.Twenty-six.C.Twenty-eight.D.Thirty.

22.【B1】

23.(36)

A.Tobepatient

B.Tobepunctual.

C.Tebetolerant

D.Togettoanappointmentearlier.

24.(29)

A.Manknowswherethesocietyisgoing.

B.Peopledon'twelcometherapiddevelopmentofourmodernsociety.

C.Thespeakerisworriedaboutthefutureofourmodemsociety.

D.Mancandonothingabouttheproblemofpollution.

25.听力原文:Weknowthenthatinthe,US,it'sthejobofCongresstoproposenewlaws,whichwecallbills,andperhapstomodifythesebillsandthenwriteonthem.ButevenifthebillispassedinCongress,itstilldoesn'tbecomealawuntilthePresidenthasachancetoreviewit,too.Andifit'snottothePresident'sliking,thebillcanbevetoedorkilledineitheroftwoways.Oneisbyavetomessage.ThePresidenthastendaystovetothebillbyreturningittoCongress,alongwiththemessageexplainingwhyit'sbeingrejected.ThiskeepsthebillfrombecomingalawunlessoverwhelmingmajoritiesofbothHousesofCongressvotetoover-rightthePresident'sveto.Sometimestheydothat.Often,lawmakerssimplyrevisethevetoedbillandpassitagain.Thistime,intheform.thePresidentislesslikelytoobjectto,andlesslikelytowanttoveto.TheotherwaythePresidentcankillabillisbypocketveto.Here'swhathappens.IfthePresidentdoesn'tsignthebillwithintendays,andCongressajournsduringthattime,thenthebillwillnotbecomelaw.NoticethatitisonlyattheendofanentiresessionofCongressthatthepocketvetocanbeused,notjustwheneverCongresstakesashorterbreak,say,forasummervacation.Afterapocketveto,thatparticularbillisdead.IfalawmakerinCongresswantstopushthematterintheirnextsession,they'llhavetostartalloverwithabrand-newversionofthebill.

(33)

A.HowthePresidentproposesnewlaws.

B.HowabillispassedbylawmakersinCongress.

C.HowthePresidentcanrejectaproposedlaw.

D.HowlawmakerscanforcethePresidenttosignabill.

26.

【B11】

27.听力原文:M:Excuseme,IboughtthiswatchlastSaturday.It'ssupposedtobewaterproof,butitdoesn'tworknow.I'dlikemymoneyback.

W:Icompletelyunderstand,sir.Butusuallywedon'tgivemoneybackonreduceditems.Maybeyoucanspeaktothemanager.

Q:Whatdowelearnfromtheconversation?

(17)

A.ThemanboughtthewatchlastSunday.

B.Themanagercangivemoneybacktotheman.

C.Thewomanwillspeaktothemanageraboutthematter.

D.Thewaterproofwatchwasboughtintheperiodofpromotion.

28.听力原文:W:Ican'tgetoverthewayyoutreatedmeatourowndinnertable.

M:Iwasirritatedatsomethingelse.IsaidIwassorry.Dowehavetogothroughallthatagain?

Q:Whathappenedtothewomantheotherday?

(19)

A.Shewashurtbytheman.

B.Shelosthertemper.

C.Shedidn'tspeaktoherhusband.

D.Shemissedthedinnerparty.

29.

【B2】

30.(31)

A.JohnAugustusRoeblingfellill.

B.Misfortunefellonthechiefengineer.

C.Thechiefengineerwasinshortofmoney.

D.WashingtonRoebfingmetwithanaccident.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3题)31.

Whatdoesthepassagesuggestmaybeagoodthing?

32.

【C3】

33.Amusselgripsahardsurfaceveryfirmlyto______.

A.sealitselffrombeingerodedbyseawater

B.producethewaterproofsuperglue

C.protectitselffrombeingblownawaybystrongwind

D.protectitselffrombeingthefoodofotheranimals

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3题)34.TherearegreatmanyreasonsforstudyingwhatphilosophersS1.______

havesaidinthepast.Oneisthatwecannotseparatethe

historyofphilosophyfromwhichofscience.PhilosophyisS2.______

largediscussionaboutmattersonwhichfewpeoplearequiteS3.______

certain,andthosefewholdoppositeopinions.Asknowledge

increases,philosophybudsoffthesciences.

Foranexample,intheancientworldandtheMiddleAgesS4.______

philosophersdiscussedmotion.AristotleandSt.ThomasAquinas

taughtthatamovingbodywouldslowdownuntilaforcewasconstantlyS5.______

appliedtoit.Theywerewrong.Itgoesonmovingunless

somethingslowsitdown.Buttheyhadgoodargumentsontheir

side,andifwestudythese,andtheexperimentswhichproved

themright,thiswillhelpustodistinguishtruthfromS6.______

falseinthescientificcontroversiesoftoday.WealsoseehowS7.______

differentphilosopherreflectsthesociallifeofhisday.PlatoandS8.______

Aristotle,intheslave-owningsocietyofancientGreece,thought

man'shigheststatewascontemplationratherthanactivity.Inthe

MiddleAgesSt.ThomasbelievedaregularfeudalsystemofnineS9.______

ranksofangels.HerbertSpencer,inthetimeoffreecompetition

betweencapitalists,foundthekeytoprogressinthesurvivaloftheS10.______

fittest.ThusMarxismisseentofitintoitsplaceasthephilosophy

fortheworkers,theonlyclasswithafuture.

【S1】

35.

【S8】

36.

【S9】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3题)37.

【S7】

38.

【S8】

39.

【S6】

参考答案

1.ABoominContinuingEducationFromthegraphweknowthestatisticsoftheContinuingEducationparticipationandtheincreasingnumbersoftheparticipantsinXcity.In1989therewereonlythirtythousandpeopletABoominContinuingEducationFromthegraph,weknowthestatisticsoftheContinuingEducationparticipationandtheincreasingnumbersoftheparticipantsinXcity.In1989therewereonlythirtythousandpeoplet

2.TestforNationalCivilServantsNowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareattendingdifferentexamsorganizedbyauthorityorganizationstoacquiremoreskillsandqualifications.AmongthemthereisagrowingtrendtositfortTestforNationalCivilServantsNowadays,moreandmorepeopleareattendingdifferentexamsorganizedbyauthorityorganizationstoacquiremoreskillsandqualifications.Amongthem,thereisagrowingtrendtositfort

3.IsaDiplomaEverything?Nowadaysthereisawidelyheldbeliefthatdiplomaiseverything.Somepeoplewillgainahigherdiplomaatallcostsandothersforcetheirchildrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncanbeexplainedbyatleasttworeasons.Ontheonehandpeoplebelieveahigherdiplomacanguaranteeaprosperousfuturesuchassuccessfulcareersandrespectablepositions.Ontheotherhandthediplomapeopleholdisattachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisapreconditionforpeopletodoalmosteverythingforexampletofindajobtohaveadatewithagirl.Inmyopinionitisnodoubtthatdiplomaisimportantbecauseitshowsaperson'sacademiclevelandability.Howeveradiplomacannotproveeverythingnomatterhowhighadiplomais.Ahigherdiplomacanonlytellothersthattheholderhasreceivedthiskindofeducation.Asforwhetherheorsheiscompetentinworkingandwhetherheorsheisvirtuousthesestillremainasquestions.IsaDiplomaEverything?Nowadaysthereisawidelyheldbeliefthatdiplomaiseverything.Somepeoplewillgainahigherdiplomaatallcosts,andothersforcetheirchildrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncanbeexplainedbyatleasttworeasons.Ontheonehand,peoplebelieveahigherdiplomacanguaranteeaprosperousfuture,suchassuccessfulcareersandrespectablepositions.Ontheotherhand,thediplomapeopleholdisattachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisapreconditionforpeopletodoalmosteverything,forexample,tofindajob,tohaveadatewithagirl.Inmyopinion,itisnodoubtthatdiplomaisimportant,becauseitshowsaperson'sacademiclevelandability.However,adiplomacannotproveeverything,nomatterhowhighadiplomais.Ahigherdiplomacanonlytellothersthattheholderhasreceivedthiskindofeducation.Asforwhetherheorsheiscompetentinworkingandwhetherheorsheisvirtuous,thesestillremainasquestions.解析:①由题目可知这是一篇分析型作文,需要运用“描述现象——解释原因—一提出解决办法”的模式。本文按照要求可分成三部分,第一段简单介绍目前社会存在的现象;第二段分析造成这一现象的具体原因,第三段阐述自己对该问题的看法。②在每段的论述中请注意句式的变化,如定语从句、让步状语从句等;注意衔接手段的使用,如however,asfor等。

4.AnInquiryLettertoaFriendDearDavid①Howareyouthesedays?IamwritingtotellyouthatIhavebeenenrolledinthegraduateprograminNewYorkUniversity.IamleavingthisSeptemberfortheUnitedStateAnInquiryLettertoaFriendDearDavid,①Howareyouthesedays?IamwritingtotellyouthatIhavebeenenrolledinthegraduateprograminNewYorkUniversity.IamleavingthisSeptemberfortheUnitedState解析:应用文:书信烦乱。①审题及布局。这篇作文相对来说比较简单,属于信息咨询类书信,同时属于朋友间的通信往来,所以在语言和内容上可以非正式一些。在完成书信格式的要求后,只要根据题目中给出的提纲来展开即可。②语言。本文是一篇非正式文体书信,所以语言要简洁、清晰,更口语化,不需要使用过于生僻的词汇。

5.ClassSkippinginCollegesClassskippingissomethingthatisalmostunimaginableforuswhenwewereinmiddleschoolandhighschool(1)butitbecomesausualphenomenonintoday'suniversities.What'sworsesomeoftheundergraduatesdonotthinkitis(2)atoskipclasses.(3)Therearesomepossiblereasonsforthephenomenon.(4)Firstuniversitystudentsarenotpreparedto(5)liveaself-disciplinedlifeandwhenthisiscompaniedbyaloosemanagementsystemofuniversitiesclassskippinginevitablyappearsandincreases.(4)Secondthesizeofsomeoftheuniversitycoursesistoobig:when(6)morethan100oreven200studentsarehavingonelecturetogethertheattendanceofallthestudentscannotpossiblybeaccuratelyrecorded.(4)Thirdsomeofthecollegestudentsmaynotfindthedirectionfortheirfuturedevelopment.(7)Inmyviewitisnotacceptabletoskipclasses(8)atourownwill(9)letalonetheimportanceofacademiclearningandskilltraining.Ifwecannotbearesponsibleindividualandchoosenottoobeytheruleswecannotmakeourselvesaneligiblecitizen.ClassSkippinginCollegesClassskippingissomethingthatisalmostunimaginableforuswhenwewereinmiddleschoolandhighschool,(1)butitbecomesausualphenomenonintoday'suniversities.What'sworse,someoftheundergraduatesdonotthinkitis(2)atoskipclasses.(3)Therearesomepossiblereasonsforthephenomenon.(4)First,universitystudentsarenotpreparedto(5)liveaself-disciplinedlife,andwhenthisiscompaniedbyaloosemanagementsystemofuniversities,classskippinginevitablyappearsandincreases.(4)Second,thesizeofsomeoftheuniversitycoursesistoobig:when(6)morethan100oreven200studentsarehavingonelecturetogether,theattendanceofallthestudentscannotpossiblybeaccuratelyrecorded.(4)Third,someofthecollegestudentsmaynotfindthedirectionfortheirfuturedevelopment.(7)Inmyview,itisnotacceptabletoskipclasses(8)atourownwill,(9)letalonetheimportanceofacademiclearningandskilltraining.Ifwecannotbearesponsibleindividualandchoosenottoobeytherules,wecannotmakeourselvesaneligiblecitizen.解析:[审题]本题要求写一篇议论文,“逃课现象”是大学生非常熟悉的校园话题,与他们联系比较密切,议论要客观、具有说服力,而不能无理无据地空洞表述。

[思路]

第一段说明大学生逃课的普遍性;

第二段详细论述大学生逃课的原因;

第三段给出自己的观点:不要逃课。

6.CollegeReadingRoomPhenomenonAsisshowninthegraphofthecollegereadingroomattendancethereareroughlytwocycleswithgreatriseandfall.WhenthenewtermstartsinSeptemberthereareabout275studentswhogotothereadingroom.ThenumberincreasesrapidlywitheachpassingmonthtillNovemberandstillincreasesatamuchlowerratereachingthepeakjustbeforetheexamsinearlyDecember.Duringthewintervacationmoststudentsgohomesothenumberofstudentsusingthereadingroomdropstoalmost175.Thesecondcycleinthespringsemesterissimilartothefirst.Afterthreemonthsthenumbergoesupgreatly.ItisonlyafterAprilwiththeapproachingfinalexamsinmindthatmoststudentsstartseriouslyusingthefacilitiesofthereadingroom.Duringthesummervacationstudentsarerarelyseeninit.Theattendancefiguresreflectthestudents'lifeatcollege.Thegraphindicatesthatexamsarethedrivingforceformanystudents.Inthefirsttwomonthsofeachsemesterquiteafewstudentsrelaxsinceexamsarestillfaraway.Theyonlystudyhardinreadingroomafewweeksbeforetheexamsbecausetheretheycaneasilygetholdofallthereferencestheyneedfortheirtermpapersortheexams.Infactstudentsshouldnotstudyforthesakeofexamsbecauseitisjustoneeffectivewayoftestingtheknowledgetheyhaveabsorbed.Thereforeiftheystudiednotfortheexamsbutforacquiringknowledgetheirliveswouldbemucheasier.AsIseeitthekeytorealsuccessinstudyliesinone'swillingnesstoacquireknowledgeandgetgoodcommandofmodernscienceandtechnology.Soifonewantstobeatalentedstudentheshouldattendeverylectureandeagerlyabsorbnewknowledgeinthereadingroom.Thusthegraphabovewouldhaveasmootherorsteadiercurve.CollegeReadingRoomPhenomenonAsisshowninthegraphofthecollegereadingroomattendance,thereareroughlytwocycleswithgreatriseandfall.WhenthenewtermstartsinSeptember,thereareabout275studentswhogotothereadingroom.ThenumberincreasesrapidlywitheachpassingmonthtillNovemberandstillincreasesatamuchlowerrate,reachingthepeakjustbeforetheexamsinearlyDecember.Duringthewintervacation,moststudentsgohome,sothenumberofstudentsusingthereadingroomdropstoalmost175.Thesecondcycleinthespringsemesterissimilartothefirst.Afterthreemonthsthenumbergoesupgreatly.ItisonlyafterApril,withtheapproachingfinalexamsinmindthatmoststudentsstartseriouslyusingthefacilitiesofthereadingroom.Duringthesummervacation,studentsarerarelyseeninit.Theattendancefiguresreflectthestudents'lifeatcollege.Thegraphindicatesthatexamsarethedrivingforceformanystudents.Inthefirsttwomonthsofeachsemester,quiteafewstudentsrelaxsinceexamsarestillfaraway.Theyonlystudyhardinreadingroomafewweeksbeforetheexamsbecausetheretheycaneasilygetholdofallthereferencestheyneedfortheirtermpapersortheexams.Infact,studentsshouldnotstudyforthesakeofexamsbecauseitisjustoneeffectivewayoftestingtheknowledgetheyhaveabsorbed.Therefore,iftheystudiednotfortheexamsbutforacquiringknowledge,theirliveswouldbemucheasier.AsIseeit,thekeytorealsuccessinstudyliesinone'swillingnesstoacquireknowledgeandgetgoodcommandofmodernscienceandtechnology.Soifonewantstobeatalentedstudent,heshouldattendeverylectureandeagerlyabsorbnewknowledgeinthereadingroom.Thusthegraphabovewouldhaveasmootherorsteadiercurve.

7.[1]Wearefacedwithmoreandmoreenvironmentalproblemsnowadayssuchasclimatechangeenvironmentalpollutionandecologicalimbalance.Theseproblemswillultimatelydogreatharmtohumanbeings.Seriousasthesituationismanypeople[1]Wearefacedwithmoreandmoreenvironmentalproblemsnowadays,suchasclimatechange,environmentalpollution,andecologicalimbalance.Theseproblemswillultimatelydogreatharmtohumanbeings.Seriousasthesituationis,manypeople解析:本文标题是“沦环境保护的重要性”,所以尽管outline中提到环境恶化、很多人不注意环境保护等内容,但这些内容似乎都不应该作为重点,而只能是不可缺少的“引子”,作文论述的重点应该还是正面阐述“重要性”。

环境保护问题当然是“老生常谈”,但动笔具体写的时候,却让人为难,可能总是转不出“环境保护对人类的生存至关重要”这么一条理由。如何阐述理由,使这些理由相互关联却又截然不同,显得层次分明,是考生写作思路训练的重点。

Analysis

[1]第一段可以把outline中相应内容简要介绍一下。

[2]前一句中的让步结构(seriousasthesituationis)运用巧妙,而这一句就给出主题句。

[3][4]关于环保的重要性,能够给出什么理由呢?这里只列了两条:环保可以拯救地球——我们生存的家园;只有环保才能让我们拥有健康生存所需要的资源。理由只列两条时,可以使用foronething…foranother的套话引出。注意,这里的两条理由之间没有重复交叉。如果举出四五条理由,只不过分别说环保使我们得到干净的水、空气、土壤、粮食等等,虽然不算错,但内容上是重复的,说服力就不够。

[5]结尾段重复一遍主题是必要的,注意语言上要有变化。本文用到important,importance,significant和vital等不同的词表示“重要”,所以语言就富有变化。

8.ALettertoaSchoolmateDearfriendLasttimeIcameacrossyouIwassurprisedtofindthatyoureyeswereswollenandyourfacewaspale.Ithoughtyoumusthavestudiedlateintonight.Lateroneofyourclassmatestoldmethetruth.YouhavebeenaddictedtoonlinegamingforalongtimeandyouspentmostofyoursparetimeintheInternetcaf.WhenIlearnedaboutitIwasshockedandextremelyworried.AsisknowntousitisveryharmfultospendtoomuchtimeplayinggamesontheInternet.Firstlyitisanenormouswasteofyourprecioustime.Asastudentwearesupposedtoconcentrateourattentiononourstudies.Secondlyitdoesgreatphysicalharmtoyouifyoustayupsooften.Youarelikelytosufferfrombodyimbalanceasaresultofexhaustion.Thirdlyyourmentalhealthwillbeseriouslyaffectedtoo.Ifyoucompletelyimmerseyourselfintheunrealworldanddistanceyourselffromyourclassmatesandfriendsyouwillendupfeelinglonelyandisolatedintherealworld.Ihopeyouwillmanagetocontrolthisproblemandshiftyourattentiontoyourlessons.Trytotakeregularexerciseandcommunicatewithothersmoreoften.Inthiswayyouwillliveamorecolorfulandfruitfullife.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursSincerelyLiMingALettertoaSchoolmateDearfriend,LasttimeIcameacrossyou,Iwassurprisedtofindthatyoureyeswereswollenandyourfacewaspale.Ithoughtyoumusthavestudiedlateintonight.Later,oneofyourclassmatestoldmethetruth.YouhavebeenaddictedtoonlinegamingforalongtimeandyouspentmostofyoursparetimeintheInternetcaf.WhenIlearnedaboutit,Iwasshockedandextremelyworried.Asisknowntous,itisveryharmfultospendtoomuchtimeplayinggamesontheInternet.Firstly,itisanenormouswasteofyourprecioustime.Asastudent,wearesupposedtoconcentrateourattentiononourstudies.Secondly,itdoesgreatphysicalharmtoyouifyoustayupsooften.Youarelikelytosufferfrombodyimbalanceasaresultofexhaustion.Thirdly,yourmentalhealthwillbeseriouslyaffected,too.Ifyoucompletelyimmerseyourselfintheunrealworldanddistanceyourselffromyourclassmatesandfriends,youwillendupfeelinglonelyandisolatedintherealworld.Ihopeyouwillmanagetocontrolthisproblemandshiftyourattentiontoyourlessons.Trytotakeregularexerciseandcommunicatewithothersmoreoften.Inthisway,youwillliveamorecolorfulandfruitfullife.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursSincerely,LiMing解析:[审题]

本文是一封建议信。劝告校友戒掉网络游戏,需要说明沉溺于网络游戏的危害,以及如何摆脱网络游戏。同时,作者需要注意说话的语气。

[写作思路]

第一段:得知校友玩网络游戏成瘾,非常吃惊,同时感到非常痛心。

第二段:分析沉溺于网络游戏的种种危害——损害身心健康,浪费时间和精力。

第三段:劝告校友及时从网络游戏中摆脱出来。

9.IsItaPerfectEnding?Somepeopleheartheirinnervoiceofpursuingperfectionincludingaperfectending.Suchpeoplebecometr

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