2023年中考英语写作高分技巧课件

中考写作高分技巧一、考查形式（体裁）：中考英语考查形式多样：看图（表）写作、书信、通知、日记、记人物等。体裁包括：记叙文、说明文和应用文；二、中考评分标准：作文一律按档给分，与错误个数无直接关系。0-6分；7-11分；12-16分；17-20分

（书面行文2分）词数90左右，不多于100词。

不能使用其他颜色笔、修正液等可被视为标记的工具；绝对不能透露真实信息。影响作文分数的因素：1题目要求、内容要点；2句子准确、通顺；3层次结构清晰；4拼写、语法等错误；5卷面整洁度；满分作文标准：完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，立意高。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标点，大小写正确。最好能有一两个亮点句。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）三、做题步骤：1审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节；2列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容；3写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；4复查：2遍——1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；5誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。*总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称；三思：词汇—>短语—>句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。四、作文一般框架：文章分3段：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。五、常见的作文类型模板：1书信Dear...,

I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter…------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Bestwishes! Yours,

Lucy

a书信开头常用语

Iamverygladtoreceiveyourletter(hearformyou).Hello,Jane.Iseverythinggoing(on)well?…/Howiseverythinggoing(on)?

I’mwritingtoyouforsomeadviceonhowto…

I’mwritingtoaskifyoucan...

Howtimeflies!Ithasbeenmonths/yearssincewelastmet.

Thankyouforinvitingmeto….b书信结尾常用语

Bestwishes(to/foryou).Wishyougoodluck.(Iam)lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.2图表、数字比例型（提出讨论或调查的事实）Lastweek,ourclasshadaclassmeetingon(howto)…Herearetheresults.（表达出不同看法或观点）Moststudentsthink…While…20%ofthemchooseto….Another15believe…Therearealsosome…sayingthat…（表达个人看法）

Asastudent,Iagreeto…3说明利弊型Nowadays…isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Ithasmanyadvantages.First,优点1…Besides,优点2…

However,everycoinhastwosides.Italsobringsusbadinfluences.Ontheonehand,

缺点1…Ontheotherhand,缺点2…

Inmyopinion,个人观点…4不同观点型

Wemadeasurveyaboutwhetherweshould…提出矛盾问题.Differentpeopleholddifferentideas.

Somebelieve…正方观点.First,原因1…Besides,原因2…

Whileothersdon’tagree.Theythink…反方观点.Ontheonehand,

原因1…Ontheotherhand,原因2…

Asforme,个人观点…5解决问题型

Recently,the…problemhasbeenmoreandmoreserious.…shoulddosomethingtosolveit.

Firstly,方法1…Secondly,方法2…Finally,方法3…

Iamsureifeveryonecanmakeacontributionto…,the…willbecomebetterandbetter.六、常用过渡性词语叙事文常用的句子间连接词：Atfirst;atlast;intheend…then/next/afterthat…when/while/assoonas/not…until…atthesametime;attimes;onceinawhile;sothatToone’ssurprise/joyLuckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…inaword/inall议论文常用连接词 表示并列：either…or;neither…nor;both…and;notonly…butalso;表示递进的：besides;what’smore;what’sworse;(moreover);表示原因的：because;for…;becauseof…;thanksto…;(forthereasonthat…);表示结果的：so;asaresult;so…that…;therefore;表示目的的：sothat…;inorderthat…;(inorder)to…;for…;表示对比的：while;ontheonehand+ontheotherhand;Eachcoinhastwosides.;prefer…to…;wouldratherdo…thando…;议论文常用连接词 表示转折的：however;but;表示举例的：forexample;forinstance;suchas…;like…;thatistosay…表示总结的：inall/short;inaword;inbrief/total;lastbutnotleast;last;表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;…havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;sbbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…;befondof…;beinterestedin…;showgreatinterestin…;loseoneselfin…;putone’sheartinto…;begoodat;bepoorat;beweakin;议论文常用连接词 表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeupone’smindtodo;inaway;

议论文常用连接词 表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeupone’smindtodo;inaway;

七、作文万能句式Ihopeyourdreamwillcometrueoneday.Ittakessb.+时间+todo…It’simportant/necessary/useful/useless/common…(forsb.)tov…It’snice/kindofsb.tov..It’stimeforsb.todosth.It’sawasteoftimeto…It’sgreatfuntodo=sb.havegreatfundoingI’m/We’renotallowedto…Greatchangeshavetakenplacein…sthis/arewellworthv-ing.Itseems/seemedthat…Asthesayinggoes,……and….aredifferentinmanyways.too+adj./adv.todoTherearemanydifferencesbetween…and…Ihavemadeupmymindto…Iamsurethat…/notsurewhether/if…Iwouldrather….than…Itdoesn’tmatterif…Thankyouforv-ing.Ifeveryonecanmakeacontributiontotheearth/nature/society,ourlifewillbebetterandbetter.

八、词语锦囊年龄类—age;bebornon;one'sbirthdayis…；15yearsold;a15­year­oldboy…体貌类—身材：tall;short;mediumheight;fat;thin;slim;strong;weak…长相：beautiful;handsome;pretty;lovely;nice;cute;good­looking;ugly…头发：longhair;straighthair;curlyhair;blackhair;brownhair…面部：around/squareface;asweetface;abignose;twobrighteyes;smoothskin…性格类—hard­working;helpful;clever;active;(im)patient;creative;confident;kind;(un)friendly;brave;outgoing;humorous;quiet;silent;serious;(im)polite;careful/careless;(dis)honest;shy;funny…兴趣类—habit;hobby;interest;(dis)like;hate;prefer;ratherthan;love;enjoy(doing)…；begoodat…

环境类—environment;environmental;pollution;clean;clear;tidy;dirty;litter;rubbish;waste;mess;noise;noisy;peace…

灾难类—disaster;earthquake;fire;flood;smog;smoke;fog;snow;wind;storm;typhoon…行为类—protect;takeaction;callon;cutdowntrees;sendoutsmokeandpoisonousgasesintotheair;pourwastewaterintotherivers;destroy;recycle;pollute;throwrubbish;clearout;putout;takeashortershower;plantmoretrees;savewater;keep…awayfrom;turndown;breakdown;separate…from…；turnoff…

学科类—course;lesson;subject;Chinese;Maths;English;Physics;PE;Chemistry;History;Geography;Science;Art;Music…

人员类—headmaster;teacher;student;teenager;classmate;monitor;groupleader…

用品类—book;notebook;dictionary;map;picture;(school)bag;pencilbox;pen;pencil;rubber/eraser;paper…学习类—study;learn;read;understand;translate;train;thinkabout;writedown;getreadyfor;go/lookthrough;practise;payattentionto;workhard(at);workout;goover;makeprogress;catchupwith;doasurvey;do/tryone'sbest;language;grammar…

活动类—sport;match/competition;game;basketball；football;volleyball;tennis;playchess;swim;goswimming;after­school/outdooractivities…

人身安全类—personalsafety;schoolrules;foodsafety;obeyrules;behavewell;respectone'steachersandparents;breaktherules;pushin;waitinline;fightwithsb;goswimmingalone;callthepolice;reporttotheteacher;choosefriendscarefully;makefriends;becareful…

交通安全类—trafficsigns;drunkdriving;runaredlight;obeythetrafficrules;crosstheroad;turnleft/right;keeptotheleft/right;slowdown;atthesecondcrossing;atahighspeed;safetybelt;payattentionto;trafficpolice…

假日类—weekend;festival;holiday;vacation;goonholiday;theSpringFestival;NationalDay;MayDay;theMid­AutumnFestival;Mother'sDay;Children'sDay;Teachers'Day;Christmas;Halloween…

交通类—transport;traffic;onthewayto;atthecrossing;onfoot;fly;sail;bycar/coach/taxi/train/ship/underground/air;rideabicycle/bike;drivesbto;turnleft/right…出行类—setoff;goonatour;gosightseeing;takeoff;waitfor;cross;takephotos;climbthemountain;gotothebeach…

情绪类—relax;relaxed;relaxing;exciting;interesting;wonderful;special;havefun/haveagreattime/enjoyoneself;boring;terrible;feelbored…

烦恼类—haveproblems/trouble;havetoomuchhomework;alone;feellonely;bestrictwith;feelbored;sleepy;betiredof;nervous;worried;havetroubleindoing;feelstressed;angry;shame;sad;unhappy;afraid;beafraidofdoing;beafraidtodo;drivesbmad…

愉悦类—happy;happiness;glad;excited;love;enjoy;beproudof/takepridein;pleasure;bepleasedwith;amazing;becrazyabout;laugh;smile;cheer;surprise…表达类—express;expression;feel;feeling;sense;worryabout;beworriedabout;besurprisedtodo;toone'ssurprise;Whynotdo…；Whydon'tyoudo…；What/Howaboutdoing…；lookforwardtodoing…

饮食类—food;diet;beef;meat;pork;fish;chicken;rice;noodle;junkfood;hamburger;bread;sandwich;hotdog;cake;chocolate;begoodfor;helponeselfto…

蔬菜、水果类—fruit；vegetable;apple;banana;pear;peach;orange;eatmorefruitandvegetables;Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway…

疾病类—illness/disease/sickness;ache;stomachache;toothache;headache;cough;harmful;fallill;catchacold;feelsick…

保健类—fine;fit;keephealthy/fit;haveabalanceddiet;eathealthily;keeponeselfhappy;dosports;doexercise…

观点态度类—expected;curious;active;inactive;incorrect;up­to­date;seriously;impatient;pleasure;personal;matteroffact;(in)formal;befor…；beagainst;worried;humorous…

常用表达类—Ithink/believe/hope…；Ontheonehand…，ontheotherhand…；Firstly…；Secondly…；Inmyopinion…；Thanksto…

计划类—plan;makeaplan;plantodo;hopetodo;begoingtodo;wouldliketodo;decidetodo;makeadecisiontodo;makeupone'smindtodo…

活动类—goswimming;gocamping;goonapicnic;goforawalk;flykites;goonholiday;gotovisit;haveagoodrestandrelax;gosightseeing;travelaroundtheworld…

愿景类—cometrue;dreamtodo;inthefuture…

行动类—express;communicatewith;invitesbto;takepartin/joinin;discusswith;encouragesbtodo;allowsbtodo;share…with…；geton/alongwellwith;growup…1.是否有大小写错误(capitallettersorlowercaseletters)

是否有拼写错误(spellingmistakes)

是否有标点错误(punctuationmistakes)4.是否有语法错误

(grammarmistakes)

主谓是否一致动词的时态语态的使用是否正确词组的搭配是否合乎习惯

…九、CommonErrorsinEnglishwritingLanguageerrorsingrammar语法错误1.be多余或缺少I’menjoystudyingEnglish.2.时态错误Atthattime,theyalwayshelpmewithmyEnglish.(helped)3.非谓语动词错误Ilikedosports.(doing)4.副词位置错误Iverythankher.

（Ithankherverymuch.）5.代词错误Theyaregoodforusbody.(our)6.缺介词或介词错误

Ithankhimverymuch⋀helpmestudyEnglish.(thank..for)Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealthy.

IhaveevergivedupEnglish.(单词错误)(动词P.P.错误)health.given7.其他错误It’goodformyhealth.Notonlymakemebrave,butalsomakemebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itimportantforyoutotakeanhourtosportseveryday.It’sgoodformyhealth.Itnotonlymakesmebrave,butalsomakesmebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itisimportantforyoutospendanhouronsportseveryday.（缺主语）（句型错误）实战演练请根据要点提示，用英文写一篇简要介绍四川汶川大地震中舍己救人英雄谭千秋老师的短文。字数100词左右。内容要点如下：1． 谭老师个人简况：1957年生于湖南；大学毕业后，2． 在四川德阳一所中学教书；外表严肃，3． 对学生要求严格，4． 深爱学生。5． 谭老师英雄事迹：汶川地震时，他在上课。教学楼坍塌时刻，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身，4名学生得救。6． 你的感受及愿望。参考词语：1.graduatefromauniversity,大学毕业2.bestrictwith…,对……严格3.theWenchuanearthquake,汶川地震4.collapse,坍塌5.deeds,事迹三段式：首段：正文：结尾：谭老师的个人简介谭老师的英雄事迹作者的感受和愿望列出7个内容要点：

1）外表严肃；2）对学生要求严格；3）深爱学生；4）地震时在上课；5）教学楼坍塌时，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身；6）感受；7）愿望。Helooksserious.He’sstrictwithhisstudents.Heloveshisstudentsdeeply.Hewasgivinglessonsatthatmoment.Whentheteachingbuildingcallapsed,heprotectedfourstudentswithhisbody.Ifeeldeeplymoved.I’lllearnfromhim.连句成文：TanQianqiu