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@我是Amy老师写作难点在于……

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@我是Amy老师入门练习1过去的人冬天没有暖气，出门见不到汽车，连吃肉都困难，哪有什么幸福可言？

@我是Amy老师电子翻译？过去的人冬天没有暖气，出门见不到汽车，连吃肉都困难，哪有什么幸福可言？Overthepastwerenoheatinginwinter,outdidnotseeacar,andevenmeataredifficult,sohowhappyisthat?

@我是Amy老师可怕的学生直译过去的人冬天没有暖气，出门见不到汽车，连吃肉都困难，哪有什么幸福可言？Thepastpeopleinwinterdonothaveheatinggas,gooutdoorcanseenocar,wherehavewhathappinesstosay?

@我是Amy老师怎么表达比较好？过去的人冬天没有暖气，出门见不到汽车，连吃肉都困难，哪有什么幸福可言？

@我是Amy老师怎么表达比较好？过去的人冬天没有暖气，出门见不到汽车，连吃肉都困难，哪有什么幸福可言？过去的人们感觉不幸福，因为没有暖气，他们在冬天会感觉到寒冷；没有汽车，难以到达远方；很难找到肉吃，没有营养。

@我是Amy老师Peopleinthepastdidn’tfeelhappy.Theyfeltcoldwithoutradiators;theyfoundithardtoreachremoteplaceswithoutautomobiles;theyweremalnourishedwithoutmeatontheirtables.

@我是Amy老师汉英转化过程中要注意的四个方面一、逻辑表述力求完整

@我是Amy老师入门练习2出国留学可以学习知识，增强阅历，为未来打下基础！Studyabroadcanlearnknowledge,strengthenexperience,plantbasicforfuture.

@我是Amy老师入门练习2出国留学可以学习知识，增强阅历，为未来打下基础！Studyabroadcanlearnknowledge,strengthenexperience,plantbasicforfuture.acquire/gain/obtain,broaden/accumulate,prepare/build,layafoundationfor

@我是Amy老师出国留学帮助我们学习知识，增强阅历，为未来做准备。Studyingabroadhelpsusacquireknowledge,broadenourexperienceandprepareourselvesforthefuture.

@我是Amy老师通过出国留学，我们可以学习知识，增强阅历，为未来做准备。Bystudyingabroad,wecanacquireknowledge,accumulatenewexperienceandprepareourselvesforthefuture.

@我是Amy老师汉英转化过程中要注意的四个方面一、逻辑表述力求完整二、省略的主宾要还原

@我是Amy老师入门练习3越来越多的孩子有网瘾，分数下降的很厉害，身心健康也受到危害。

@我是Amy老师入门练习3Moreandmorechildrenhavenetaddiction,gradesgodownbadlyandbodyandhearthealthisdamagedtoo.

@我是Amy老师越来越多的孩子正在承受网瘾的折磨，这使得他们的分数下降得很厉害，而且使得他们的身心健康也受到危害。

@我是Amy老师越来越多moreandmore

@我是Amy老师越来越多moreandmoreanincreasingnumberofagrowing/risingnumberof

@我是Amy老师使？makelet/allow

@我是Amy老师使？makelet/allowleadto/resultin/giveriseto…

@我是Amy老师这使得他们的分数下降得很厉害，而且使得他们的身心健康也受到危害。whichresultsintheirfallinggradesandpoormentalandphysicalconditions.

@我是Amy老师Anincreasingnumberofstudentsaresufferingfromtheinternetaddiction,whichresultsintheirfallinggradesandpoormentalandphysicalconditions.

@我是Amy老师汉英转化过程中要注意的四个方面一、逻辑表述力求完整二、省略的主宾要还原三、逻辑连接词不能省略

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@我是Amy老师Appreciatingartsandmusicisacharactereducation.Appreciatingartsandmusichelpsstudentsmoldandshapetheircharacters.Appreciatingartsandmusicteachesvaluesandvirtues.

@我是Amy老师坏电影害人；孩子们受够了坏电影；孩子们饱受坏电影之苦；坏电影让孩子生活在水深火热之中；烂片大行其道，孩子不堪其扰；@我是Amy老师坏电影害人；孩子们受够了坏电影；孩子们饱受坏电影之苦；坏电影让孩子生活在水深火热之中；烂片大行其道，孩子不堪其扰；suffer@我是Amy老师Childrensufferfrombadmovies.Childrensufferalotfromthoseimpropermovies.Childrensufferalotfromtheflood/inundationofimpropermovies.@我是Amy老师考砸了，我想死的心都有了；你这馊主意会害人不浅；你磨磨唧唧的，搞死我了都；@我是Amy老师考砸了，我想死的心都有了；Isufferalotfromthelowgradeinmylastexam;你这馊主意会害人不浅；Peoplewillsufferalotfromyourbadidea.你磨磨唧唧的，搞死我了都；Isufferalotfromyourdelayeddecision.@我是Amy老师汉英转化过程中要注意的四个方面一、逻辑表述力求完整二、省略的主宾要还原三、逻辑连接词不能省略四、不可译的内容要解释

@我是Amy老师写作口号！Writingisnotwhatyouthink,butwhatyoumakeothersthink!

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@我是Amy老师如何去除直译造成的chinglish?中式英语Ifhavenoelectricity,wecan’tdoanything.Wecandonothingwithoutpower.语法中式英语Environmentalpollutionhurtspeople’shealth.Environmentalpollutionisphysicallyharmful/detrimental.用词中式英语Ihaveawish,Iwishworldpeace,nowars,thisalsoisthewishofpeopleinthewholeworld.Iwishworldpeace,withoutwars,whichisthewishofpeopleworldwideaswell.Iwishworldpeace,withoutwars,andthisisthewishofpeopleworldwideaswell.口语化中式英语Non-stopstudyingknowledgeisveryimportant.Itisveryimportanttokeepacquiringknowledge.Itisofvitalimportancetokeepacquiringknowledge.地道吗？中式英语Ifyoudonotpayattentiontoenvironmentalproblems,youmustsufferhugelosssoonerorlater.Ifwedonotpayattentiontoenvironmentalproblems,wemustsufferhugelosssoonerorlater.Ifenvironmentalproblemsarenotgivenenoughattention,hugelossisinevitable.学术吗？中式英语Gamestakeuptoomuchtimeofstudents,andignorelearning,sportsande