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读后续写教学1NewspaperChase

NewspaperChase

Itwasoneo’clockinthemorning.IntheRivesvilletownartgallery,awindowopenedandamancamein.HisnamewasHarryBlack,andhewasathief.Itwasdarkintheartgallery,butHarryhadalight.Helookedacrosstheroomatapainting.“Thereitis!”hesaid.Harrymovedquicklyacrosstheroom.Hestoodandlookedatthepainting.“Amilliondollarsforthis?”hethought.“Idon’tunderstandit.”Buthetookaknifefromhiscoat.Thenhetookthepaintingvery,veryslowlyfromitsframe.Harrywentbackacrosstheroomtothewindow,buthewalkedintoatable.Therewasabeautifulblueglassvaseonthetable.Itfellonthefloorandbrokeintopieces.Heranacrossthepiecesofglasstothewindow.HarryrentedaroominMrs.Allen’shouse.Hewentquietlyuptohisroomandclosedthedoor.Inhisroom,Harrytookthepaintingfromhisbag.Hewrappeditwithanewspaperandputthenewspaperunderhisbed.

NewspaperChaseInthemorning,JennyAllenwasputtingoldbottlesintoabox.OntheTV,areporterwasattheRivesvilleartgallery.Hewastalkingaboutthelostpaintingandthebrokenglassvase.Jennyglancedatthephotoofthebluevase.AtthattimeHarrywasn’tinhisroom.Hewastalkingonhistelephone.Jennywaslookingforoldnewspapers.EveryFridaymorning,shetookthemfromeveryroominthehouse.Thenlater,thenewspaperrecyclingtruckarrived.JennyopenedHarry’sdoorandlookedintohisroom.Shealwaystookhisoldnewspapersorbottlesforrecycling.ShefoundanewspaperunderHarry’sbed.Sheputtheoldnewspapersintoablackrecyclingbox.Thensheranfromthehouseandsawthetruck.“Wait!”shesaid.Andshequicklygavetheboxtooneofthemen.Harrycamebacktothehouse.Hesawtherecyclingtruck,andhesawJenny.“Thenewspaper——！Oh,no!”Harrysaid.Readingforstructure01Readingforinformation02Cluestowriting03Continuationwriting04CONTENT1ReadingforstructurePARTONEfalling

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actionintroduction(setting)conclusion(evaluation)plotHarryBlackwasathief.Hefoundapaintingintheartgalleryatoneo’clockinthemorning.(Para.1-2)Harrystolethepaintingandtookithome.Hewrappeditwithanewspaperandputitunderthebed.(Para.3-6)Jennygavetheboxcontainingapaintingwrappedwithanewspapertothenewspaperrecyclingtruck.(Para.7-9)

NewspaperChaseHechasedafterthetruck.(Para.12)ThenJennycalledthepoliceonthetelephone..(Para.13)HarrycamebackandsawthetruckandJenny.(Para.10-11)2ReadingforinformationPARTTWOHarryBlack&apaintingHewasathief.Harryhadalight.Helookedacrosstheroomatapainting.“Thereitis!”hesaid.“Amilliondollarsforthis?”hethought.“Idon’tunderstandit.”Heranacrossthepiecesofglasstothewindow.Itwasoneo’clockinthemorning.IntheRivesvilletownartgallery,awindowopenedandamancamein.Itwasdark

intheartgallery.Thepaintingwasintheframeandworthamilliondollars.Therewasabeautifulblueglassvaseonthetable.Itfellonthefloorandbrokeintopieces.Conclusion:HarryBlackwasathiefandstoleapaintingfromtheartgalleryinthedarkness.Hereturnedhomewithapieceofglassofabeautifulblueglassvase.NewspaperChaseJennyAllen&anewspaperWhendidithappen?Inthemorning,JennyAllenwasputtingoldbottlesintoabox.OntheTV,areporterwastalkingaboutthelostpaintingandthephotoofthebluevase.Then

thenewspaperrecyclingtruckarrived.WhatdidJennydo?Jennywaslookingforoldnewspapers.JennyopenedHarry’sdoorandlookedintohisroom.ShefoundanewspaperunderHarry’sbed.Sheputtheoldnewspapersintoablackrecyclingbox.Thensheranfromthehouseandsawthetruck.“Wait!”shesaid.Andshequicklygavetheboxtooneofthemen.WhatdidHarrydo?AtthattimeHarrywasn’tinhisroom.Hewastalkingonhistelephone.Harrycamebacktothehouse.Hesawtherecyclingtruck,andhesawJennyWhatwashisreaction?“Thenewspaper——！Oh,no!”Harrysaid.Hechasedafterthetruck.NewspaperChase3CluestowritingPARTTHREENewspaperChaseWhydidHarrychasethetruck?DidHarrycatchthetruck?Whatdidhedothen?WhydidJennysuspectHarryathief?WhatdidJennydo?Whatcanweinferfromit?Harrythoughtthepaintingwasinthetruck.Hecaughtthetruckandlookedforthenewspaperwrappingthepainting.Jennyfoundapieceofglassbelongingtotheblueglassvase.Shecalledthepolice.NewspaperChaseHechasedafterthetruck.Helookedforhisnewspaper.ThenJennycalledthepoliceonthetelephone.Itwasdarkintheartgallery.Armedwithalight,Harry,athief,lookedacrosstheroomatapainting,whichwasworthamilliondollars.Hetookthepaintingandwentbackacrosstheroomtothewindow,runningacrossthepieceofglass,whichbelongedtoabeautifulbluevase.Quietlyenteringhisroom,hewrappedthepaintingwithanewspaperandputitunderthebed.Inthemorning,Jenny,ahostess,tookhisoldnewspaperforrecyclingwhilehewasnotinhisroomandglancedareportercoveringthephotoofthebluevaseontheTV.Whenthetruckcame,shegaveaboxcontaininghisnewspapertooneofthemen.NewspaperChaseUseyourownwordstoretellthisincidentStealapaintingApieceofglassChaseanewspaper4ContinuationWritingPARTFOUR01020304误区1

续写第二段中大量对话来写Harry想通过偷画来帮助穷人，把Harry描写成一个好人。然后一起与警察在垃圾车里找画。误区3

Jenny一问Harry为什么追，Harry就主动承认自己偷画的事实，忽略了上文提供的信息，也不符合逻辑。误区2当警车到来，Harry就坦白。现场记者就报道小偷被抓。

我得出一个结论，有困难应该去找人帮忙而不是放弃自己的生活。误区4

NewspaperChase从报纸里掀开画推断出他是小偷，Heranacrossthepiecesofglasstothewindow，Jennyglancedatthephotoofthebluevase这些信息都忽略了。Overwhelmedbyanxiety,Harrydroppedoneshoewhilerunningathisfullspeed.Drivenbyextremefear,Harryscreamedinadreadedvoiceinanattempttoaskthemenonthetruckforastop.

Desperatelywantingtotakehismillion-dollarpaintingback,Harrykeptchasingcrazily.Seeingthetruckdroveawayswiftlycarryingthemillion-dollarpainting,Harrythrewhimselfheavilyonthegroundwithhisheartbeatingwidely.rItdawnedonHarrythathewasaregrettablefailuretostealthepaintinginthegallery.Finally,Harryfeltregretfulwheninformedofbeingfined500dollars.Heshookhisheadregretfully.Consumedwithgreatregretandshame,Harryadmitted…NewspaperChaseHowwouldyoudescribeHarry’sfeeling?regretfulanxiousdesperaterelievedMuchtohisrelief,thetrucksloweddownandpulledovereventually.Hebreathedasighofreliefwhenthetruckcametoafullstop.Wearingarelievedsmile,heclimbedintothetruck,lookingforhisnewspaper.RealizingthatHarrywaslikelytobethethief,shefrozetherewithhermouthwideopen.Shestoodthererootedtothegroundwithhermindblankandlegstrembling.Armedwithsolidevidence,shetoldwhatshehadwitnessedtothepolicecalmly.Attemptingtorepressherfear,shecalmlytoldthepoliceaboutthepieceoftheglass.r“Goodjob,”oneofthepolicemensaid,“thereisarewardforyou.”HearingthereporteronTV,Jennyfoundherselfcoveredwithgloryallofasudden.Consideredasahero,Jennyreceivedanaward.NewspaperChaseHowwouldyoudescribeJenny’sfeeling?gloriousfrighteningcalmrelievedItwasagreatreliefthatthepaintingwasreturnedtothegalleryingoodcondition.Inrelief,Jennysighed,seeingthepolicetakingthethiefaway.Feelingrelieved,Jennytriedherbestto…NewspaperChaseNewspaperChaseNewspaperChaseNewspaperChaseHechasedafterthetruck.

Bycoincidence,thetrafficlightinthenearestcrossingturnedredwhenthetruckwasonthepointofgoingthroughit.Thetruckcametoafullstop,soHarrymanagedtogetclosetoitandreachedtheblackrecyclingbox.Havingheldthemostexpensivenewspapertightlyunderhisarms,hegotintoapassingtaxi