2023学年完整公开课版【写作训练】Acontinuationofastory

Readingforwriting—Acontinuationofastory20,000LeaguesUndertheSeaKeypointsReadingforwriting—AcontinuationofastoryCharacters：I(theprofessor;“firstperson”perspective);Conseil(myservant);Ned(myfriend)Setting：OntheseaBackgroundPlotBeginning：Ifellfromtheboatintotheseabecauseofaviolentcrash.Development：ImetConseilandNedwhilestrugglinginthesea;Wewerefinallysurvivedandaboveametal“island”.Climax:Weweredrawnintothemachinebyeightstrongmenthenextmorning.Acontinuationof20,000LeaguesUndertheSeaKeypointsReadingforwriting—AcontinuationofastoryCharacters：I(Narrator/theprofessor;“firstperson”perspective);Conseil(myservant);Ned(myfriend)Setting：OntheseaBackgroundContinuationWewereboardthemachineandquitenervous;Twoseamencametoexamineuscarefullyandleft;NedandConseilwerehopelessandIcomfortedthem;Weweregivenfoodtoeat;Wewerepromisedtobesentbackhomeifwetoldthemhowwefoundthemachine.TheLastLeafKeypointsReadingforwriting—AcontinuationofastoryCharacters：Johnsy(maincharacter;ayoungwomanartist);Sue(Johnsy’sfriend);MrBehrman(aneighbor;adrawer);adoctor;ajanitorSetting:AnapartmentinGreenwichVillageInNovemberBackgroundPlotBeginning:Johnsygotsickwithpneumoniaandmightnotgetbetter;Johnsycountedtheleavesontheivyvineandthoughtshemustdiewhenthelastleaffell.TheLastLeafKeypointsReadingforwriting—AcontinuationofastoryCharacters：Johnsy(maincharacter;ayoungwomanartist);Sue(Johnsy’sfriend);MrBehrman(aneighbor;adrawer);adoctor;ajanitorSetting:AnapartmentinGreenwichVillageInNovemberBackgroundPlotDevelopment:SuetalkedwithBehrmanaboutJohnsyandtheyfoundoneleafleft;Thenextmorning,Johnsylookedoutofthewindowandsawthelastleafwasstillthere.Climax:Thefollowingdays,JohnsysawthelastleafstillthereandshegotbettergraduallybutMrBehrmandiedofpneumonia.AContinuationofTheLastLeafWritingReadingforwriting—AcontinuationofastoryCharacters：Johnsy(maincharacter;ayoungwomanartist);Sue(Johnsy’sfriend);MrBehrman(aneighbor;adrawer);adoctor;ajanitor;othervillagers;…Setting:InGreenwichVillageInNovember/…BackgroundContinuationJohnsyrecovered；ThestoryofJohnsyand