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原文翻译BalletwasawayoflifeinKelly'sfamily.Her

eldersister

Serenawasnowdancingata

topcollege.ThoughKelly'smomalwayswantedhertofollowinhersister'sfootstepsandKellyherselfwasgoodatballet,herloveforballethad

faded

yearsbefore,andshewaseagerfor

anewchallenge.芭蕾是Kelly家族的一种生活方式。她的姐姐Serena现在正在一所顶尖的学院跳舞。尽管Kelly的妈妈总是希望她能追随姐姐的脚步，而Kelly自己也很擅长芭蕾，但她对芭蕾的热爱已经在多年前消逝了，她渴望寻找新的挑战。Onedayatschool,asKellyleftthedancestudio,shewalkedpastthegym,

fascinatedby

boxerstraininginsidetheboxingring.Shewas

deeplyimpressed

byhow

hard

theyhitandhowfasttheymoved.Infact,she'dlongbeenattractedtoboxing.一天放学后，当Kelly离开舞蹈室经过体育馆时，她被拳击手在拳击场内训练的场景深深吸引。她深深地被他们打得有多么猛、动作有多快所打动。事实上，她一直被拳击吸引着。Shepulledapieceofpaperfromherbackpack.OnthefamiliarOakwoodHighSchoolClubSign-upSheetwasthephrase:BOXINGCLUBTRYOUT.Thatwaswhat

Kellyreallywanted

todo.Sheknewher

mom

had

highexpectations

forherwhenitcametoballet.Tiredoftryingtokeepupwithhersister,Kellywasreadytocarveherownpath.她从背包里拿出一张纸。在熟悉的Oakwood高中社团报名表上写着短语："拳击俱乐部选拔赛"。那正是Kelly真正想做的事。她知道在芭蕾方面，妈妈对她期望很高。累了追赶姐姐，Kelly准备开创自己的道路。Thenextday,she

gatheredhercourage

and

toldSerena

abouthernewpassion.Atfirst,Serenadidn'tunderstandandthoughtshewasjustjoking.ButwhenshesawKellywasserious,shereplied,"YouknowMomwantsyoutobeaballetdancer,right?Besides,boxingis

onlyforboys(忽然想到《摔跤吧，爸爸》),andyou'resogoodatballet.Leanintoyourstrength,Kelly.""ButthisiswhereIwanttoputmystrength,"Kellyinsisted,"andwhatexactlydoes'onlyforboys'mean,anyway?Boxingisasportforeveryone!"

Gradually,touched

byher

determinationandpassion,

Serenabegantounderstandandsupporther.Kellycouldfeelit.Hersisterwasgoingto

respect

herdecision,nomatterwhat.Butthatwasnothingcomparedtothepreparationsforthetryout,whereshewasrequiredtoshowherfootworkandpunchingabilitieswithothercandidates.Boxingdidn'tcomenaturallytoKelly,butshehadmadeuphermindto

stick

withherchoice.第二天，她鼓起勇气告诉Serena她的新激情。起初，Serena无法理解，认为她只是在开玩笑。但当她看到Kelly很认真时，她回答道："你知道妈妈希望你成为一名芭蕾舞者，对吗？此外，拳击只是男孩的运动，你在芭蕾方面非常出色。发挥你的优势，Kelly。""但这是我想要展现力量的地方，"Kelly坚称，"'只是男孩的运动'到底意味着什么？拳击是一项适合所有人的运动！"在感受到她的决心和激情后，Serena逐渐理解并支持她。Kelly能感觉到，不管怎样，她的姐姐都会尊重她的决定。但这与选拔赛的准备相比毫不算什么，她需要和其他候选人展示自己的步法和拳击能力。拳击对于Kelly来说并不是自然而然的，但她已经下定决心要坚持自己的选择了。一句话：Kelly的姐姐Serena擅长舞蹈（优秀姐姐光环）分析：本文主题为“追寻自我”，第一段主题为介绍Kelly通过参加拳击俱乐部选拔赛，寻求新的挑战的想法；第二段主题为Kelly决定秘密训练以备选拔赛，并强调了她对拳击的喜爱与决心。Kelly性格坚毅、果敢，喜欢接受新挑战，而她和姐姐的性格有所差异，Serena的角色在本文中起到支持启发的作用，表现了亲情温暖。试水续写：续写第一段：ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Shespentcountlesshourspracticingherfootworkandpunches,oftenstayinglateafterschooltotraininthegym.Shealsosoughtadvicefromhernewfriendsintheboxingclubandwatchedvideosofprofessionalboxerstolearntheirtechniques.Despitethephysicalchallengesandexhaustion,Kellyfoundherselfenjoyingeverymomentofhertraining,feelingasenseofaccomplishmentandexcitementthatshehadn'tfeltinyears（对应原文里对舞蹈已经faded）.续写第二段ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.Withapoundingheart,Kellyscannedthelist,andtoherdelight,hernamewasamongthosewhohadmadetheteam.Shecouldn'tbelieveit.Allherhardworkanddeterminationhadpaidoff.AsshesharedthenewswithSerena与姐姐分享喜悦（姐姐支持）,sheknewthatshehadmadetherightdecisiontopursueherpassionforboxing.Now,shehadtofacethechallengeofbreakingthenewstohermomandconvincingherthatitwastimeforKellytofollowherowndreams,notjustthoseofhersister（舞蹈）.微调版本续写第一段：ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Sheboughtapairofboxingglovesandinstalledapunchingbaginherbedroom.Everyday,afterfinishingherhomework,shewouldcloseherbedroomdoorandstarttraining.Shepracticedherfootwork,punches,andjumps.Shewatchedcountlessboxingmatchesonline,observingthemovementsoftheboxersandlearningtheirtechniques.Afterseveralweeksoftraining,Kellywasconfidentthatshehadmasteredsomebasicboxingskills.续写第二段：ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.Kelly'sheartwaspoundingasshewalkedtowardthebillboard.Shefeltnervousbutexcitedatthesametime.Whenshearrived,shesawhernameonthelistofcandidateswhowereselected.Sheletoutaloudcheer,feelingproudandrelieved.Herhardworkhadpaidoff.Asshewalkedawayf