突破段第五讲食品文化科技类

雅思写作突破Lesson5Jack饮食文化类Inmanycountries,traditionalfoodsarebeingreplacedbyinternationalfastfoods,andthishasanegativeeffectonbothindividualsandsocieties.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2011.6.23//2007.6.28hygienePeopleshouldcaremuchaboutfoodhygiene.nutritiousfatteningfrozenfoodcannedfoodgreasyfoodMydoctortoldmetocutdownongreasyfood.afastfoodjunkie吃垃圾食品上瘾的人carbonateddrinks碳酸饮料dietaryhabits饮食习惯traceelements微量元素Ironandzincaretwoimportanttraceelementsthathumanbodyneeds.haveasweettooth喜食甜食的bemouth-watering垂涎欲滴的开头段Recentdecadeshavewitnessedanobvioustrendthatinternationalfastfoodshavegraduallytakentheplaceoftraditionalfoodsinmanycountriesandregions.Althoughfastfoodsmaybringaboutsomedirectbenefitstopeople'sdailylife,Ipersonallybelievethatthesefoodsexertanadverseimpactonbothindividualsandsociety.让步段Undeniably,fastfoodshavehelpedpeoplesavetimeforcookingandextricatedthemfromthecomplicated/tedious/arduouscookingprocessthatisusedinmakingtraditionalfoods.Thisisespeciallytruewhenweconsiderthefactthatnowadaysanincreasingnumberofpeopleareparticipatinginthelabormarketandundertakinganenormousamountofworkload.主体段2Topicsentence:However,thenegativeeffectsofthesefastfoodsshouldnotbeoverlooked/ignored/neglected,sincetheyare

detrimentaltoindividualsandsociety.主体段2Forindividuals,

theirphysiologicalhealthisdeterioratingbecauseoftoomuchconsumptionoffastfood.Internationalfastfoodshavelongbeencriticizedasjunkfoodbecausetheycontainaconsiderableamountofcalorieswithahighleveloftransfats.Ifpeoplegetaccustomedtoeatingthesefoods,theymaybeeasilystrickenwithsomeseverechronicdiseases,suchashighbloodpressure/hypertension,hyperlipidemia,hyperglycemiaandsoforth/andthelike.Hence,thesefoods

renderpeopleweakincombatingdiseases.主体段3With/Inregardtosociety,theintroductionandprevalenceofinternationalfastfoods,directlyorindirectly,havebroughtsomenegativeimpactsontraditionalcultures.Itisgenerallyacknowledgedthatthecultureofcuisineandfoods

isanindispensablepartof

thetraditionalculture,whichrepresenttheuniqueness/identityofacountryoranation.主体段3Iflocalpeopleprefertoeatfastfoods,therecipesoftraditionalfoodsmaygraduallydisappear.Thus,localresidentsmayloseasenseofculturalidentityandsocialbelongingness.Sothisisunfavorabletoculturalinheritancewithinacountry.结尾段1Toconclude/Allthingsconsidered,althoughinternationalfastfoodsmayprovidepeoplewithgreatconvenience,theyalsoposeaseriousthreattopeople’sphysicalhealthandpreservationoftraditionalculture.Therefore,peopleshouldpaymoreattentiontoamorebalanceddietarystructureandahealthierlifestyle.结尾段2Inconclusion,Iwouldliketorestatemyviewpointthatfastfoodhasbeenposinggreatthreattopeople’shealthandpreservationoftraditionalculture.Theconflictbetweenforeignculinarycultureandlocalculinaryculturehasalwaysbeen,andwillcontinuetobeagreatconcernamongthegeneralpublicandtheacademia;sothisissuerequiresconcertedeffortbetweenindividualsandgovernmentintheforeseeablefuture.大学生找不到工作类Youthunemploymentisaglobalprobleminmanycountriesinrecentyears.Whatarethecauses?Canyougivesomesolutionstoit?WORKjobsecurityjobsatisfactionasenseoffulfilmentfrustrationbraindrainworkexperienceexcessiveworkloadworkplaceanemployee-friendlyenvironmentworkethic敬业精神stress-induceddiseasesthepaceofworkoccupationaldisease/hazardmanualwork/mentalworktiedupatworkjobprospectsglassceilingManywomencomplainabouttheglassceilingthatbarsthemfromuppermanagementinlargecorporations.开头段Recently,therehasbeenagreatconcernastotheglobalyouthunemploymentamongthegeneralpublic.Inthefollowingessay,ananalysisofthepossiblecausesandsometentativesolutionswillbegivenindetail.原因段Threefactorsplayabigpart.First,thelongeconomicslowdown/slump/recessionintheWesthasreduceddemandforlabor,anditiseasiertoputoffhiringyoungpeoplethanitistofireolderworkers.Second,inemergingeconomiespopulationgrowthisthefastestwithdysfunctionallabormarkets,suchasIndiaandEgypt.Mostimportantly,manyyounggraduatesdonothavearealisticgoalabouttheirfuturecareer.措施段part1Themostobviouswaytotacklethissocialproblemistoreigniteeconomicgrowth.Thatiseasiersaidthandoneinaworldplaguedbydebt,andisanywayonlyapartialanswer.Thecountrieswheretheproblemisworst(suchasSpainandEgypt)sufferedfromhighyouthunemploymentevenwhentheireconomiesweregrowing.Throughouttherecessioncompanieshavecontinuedtocomplainthattheycannotfindyoungpeoplewiththerightskills.措施段part2Thisunderlinestheimportanceoftwoothersolutions:reforminglabormarketsandimprovingeducation.Thesearefamiliarprescriptions,butonesthatneedtobedelivered/implementedwithanewvigouranddetermination.Schoolsanduniversities:curriculumreformGovernment:bridgeofcommunicationbetweencompaniesandjobapplicants结尾段Insummary/Allthingsconsidered,thecausesareseeminglyunderstandableyetdeserveourfurthercontemplation/secondthought.Youthunemploymenthasalwaysbeen,andwillcontinuetobeagreatconcernamongthepublicandacademia;sothisissuerequiresjoint/concerted/collaborative/collective/genuineeffortsofindividualsandgovernmentintheyearstocome.sparenoeffort/makeeveryeffort2012.11.24//2007.3.10Thesedays,withthepopularityofmobilephonesandcomputers,lesspeopletendtowriteletters.Doyouthinkletterwritingwilldisappearinthefuture?结构会消失：科技的快速发展现代社会以无法想象的速度在演变evolving信件太慢容易丢失不环保浪费纸张相比之下，手机和电脑就无比方便让步：过度依赖高科技交流会损害人的literacy,缺乏真实的感情交流，辐射如何开头？1.Recently,withtheincreasingpopularityofmobilephonesandcomputers,adecreasingnumberofpeopletendtowriteletters.

2.AsfarasIamconcerned,letterwritingwillnotdieoutinthenearfutureandthisphenomenonis,toalargeextent,abadtrendforthereasonsgiveninthefollowingessay.主体段13.Tobeginwith,theextinctionofletterwritingwilldefinitely/undoubtedlyleadtothedeteriorationofpeople’sabilityofreadingandwriting/literacy.4.Theuseofhi-techdeviceslikesmartphonesandcomputersgivespeoplelessopportunitiesofhandwriting,thusleavingmanyofusunabletowritesomebasicwordsorcharacters.5.Ifthistrendcontinues,people’sliteracymaybecomehistorysomeday.主体段26.Moreover,letterwritingwas,andhasalwaysbeen,anexcellentwayofshowingpeople’saffectionsinceitsverybeginning/advent.7.Comparedwithhi-techwritingandcommunication,lettershavethemagicpowertobringpeoplecloserpsychologicallywiththehandwritingonthepaper/sheet.8.Thisisprovedbymostloveletterswrittenbyfamouspeopleinhistoryormoderntimes,bethemnovelists,artistsorpoliticians.

主体段39.Admittedly,letterwritinghassomedrawbacksaseverythingelse.10.Foronething,itisnotenvironment-friendlyinthatalargeamountoftreesarebeingcutdownforthepurposeofpaperproduction.11.Foranother,itisnotasefficientasmobilephonesandcomputersasitmaytakemorethanoneweekforustoreceiveit,whichisapparentlynotwelcomedasapopularwayofcommunicationinsuchafast-pacedsociety.结尾段12.Inconclusion,letterwritingwillnotdisappearintheforeseeablefutureconsideringtheanalysispresentedabovealthoughthenegativetrendgivesnosignofreversingitself.13.Meanwhile,theresolutionofthisissuecallsforthejointeffortofindividualsandgovernmentauthoritiesforthesakeofourcultureandtraditions.scienceandtechnologyManypeoplebelievethattheincreasinguseofmoderntechnologyatworkandinleisureisreducingpeople’screativity.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?开头段Inrecentlyyears,therehasbeenawide-rangingpublicdiscussionaboutwhethertheincreasinguseofmoderntechnologyatworkplacesandinentertainmentiskillingpeople’screativity.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iopposethisviewpointbasedonthefollowingreasonsandanalysis.主体段1Firstandforemost,scientistsandtechnicianscanmakefurthertechnologicaldevelopmentbasedontheprevioustechnologies.Forexample,theinventionoftelegraphandtelephoneledtothecreationofradiosandmobilephoneswhichareregardedasanindispensablepartofourdailylifeinmodernsociety.Onlinebusinessisanothergoodcaseinpoint.BythisImeanthatpeoplecanaccomplishmanybusinesstransactionsonlineviasomeapplicationsinvented/designedspecificallyformobilephonesorcomputers.主体段2Inadditiontothat,peopleofotheroccupationscanalsoenhancetheircreativeabilitybyusingmoderntechnology.Videogameplayersareabletoimprovetheircreativemindwhentheycomplete/accomplishthemissio