四级英语作文技巧及范文

四英作技及文1文结（120words）Para.GeneralofS2Thesis:thewriter’sattitudetowardsitPara.writerreasonsthisattitudeSupportIDetailIDetailIISupportIIDetailIDetailIIPara.3Conclusion:restatethesis段落特征：统一，完整，连贯常的接段．每的内容要围主题句，保持内容的一致性，并从不同的角度来充分发展段落的主题思想。．使代词来代前提到的人，物或观点．重段落中的关词，短语或句子．使同义词．使转折词语和型：．用于段落开始的词语：all,tobeginnowadays,withthent/invention/progressof…,generallyspeaking,recently,etc.常用于段落开始的句:People’sviews/ideas/opinionson…varyfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplethink…Differentpeoplehavedifferentviews…ItisheldJustas/Asthe…Itiscommonlybelieved…Is….?Answertothisvarygreatly.Somepeoplethinkaskedabout…,differentpeoplewilldifferentopinions.Somepeoplethat…Nowadays,…play(s)importantrolein…/…ispopulararoundLikeingelse,…has/havebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.advantagesbefollows.…Manywayscancontributetosolvingthisseriousproblem,butthefollowingmosteffective.10.aremanyreasons/causesfortincomemajorones.11.Therearemanyfactorsthataccountfor…,thefollowingaretypicalones.．用举例的词语forsuchforinstance,in

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精品文库．举法．定法．比和对比法．因法．分法．叙法．综法词汇变）不的汇达同意，避单，燥重。如：好学生top/gifted/superior/excellent/outstandingstudents损害：haveagreatinjurygreat妨碍：standintheof..;beobstacle/barrier对很要beindispensable/important/vital学习知识：knowledge/skill许多：largeof;a;largenumbersof重视：importance/significanceto..强调：越来越：beincreasinglyontheof..接触新思想bean/someacquaintancewith..接触社会：comeintofrequent/closecontactthe提出观点：withideas作出努力：efforttosth.;takegreatpainsdosth.影响学习：interferestudies;withstudies产生影响：have/exertaprofoundinfluenceonhavedramatic/undesirableeffecton..取代：fortheplaceofsth.;replace采取措施：takeeffective满足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodatedemand补偿损失：forthemakefordamage解释现象：accountforphenomena培养信心：developone’sinterestfosterconfidencein..施加压力：aon..提供机会：anfor抓住机会：献身于：devote/dedicate/committocause/career提高技术，能力sharpen/improve/enhance/boostone’sskill/ability加快，促进发展accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boosttheof开阔眼界：broadenoutlook;expand/enlarge’smentalhorizons充满渴望：haveburningafor..）用一词不词，句中不的分带新性形变。句型变比较句英语通过比较级来表达意思的句子远比汉语.比如:a)Ayoungman’sfirstcarisofthanmonumenttohis欢迎下载

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精品文库discoveryofyouthfulfreedom.youngman’sfirstcarisameansoftransportation,butofyouthfulmuchaoftimingasanythingelse.anythingisac)Noisbasicandnationalsurvivalfood.(Foodbasictoindividualsurvival.)同位句同位语有两种功能:纳和解例:ingredientofcourtesyempathy,qualitythatpersonseeorheartsomeoneButwhateversadepisodesinourpast,weholdpositiveviewofourhistory,hasstoryhopesfulfilleddreamsmade平行比恰当地使用句子的平行排能使文章显得更生更有力e.g.strengthmakeshimstrong;ourdeterminationmakeshimdetermined;makes后置饰运用后置修饰语可以使文章的表达更简.e.g.analmostmagazinesavailabletosatisfyrichvarietyofand插入在正常的句子中插入某些成分也会给句子带来.e.g.Attheendofthetheofcentury,amanhadbeambitious--socialand-inbeattractive“package被动在主动句占绝大多数的情况下被动句能带来一变.e.g.However,littlecontrolcanbetheusedcomestoyoufromtheoutside.倒装倒装句不仅带来句型的丰而且在句子的连贯平衡上也有一定的作e.g.sciencewillcometheexercisedominionover名词句正式文体中,词化句子的运用显得语言表达更成e.g.exposuretoTVwillinterferewithonestudies.toomuchwillaffectyourstudies.)运用折运用破折号不仅对句子变化有帮,且有强调的作.作中见误．时方的误欢迎下载

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精品文库写议论文一般用现在时态。只有举例，提到过去的事才会用到过去时。．主，称违反致方的误写一个句子，乃至一篇文章里人称始终要保持一致，不能一会儿用第三人称，一会儿又用第一人称。．修语位错误a)television,peoplecantinformationwhichpartsofImmediately既以修饰得到迅速各方面传来的消息”也可以修饰速到从各方面传来的消息思含糊不清，所以要把它放到t的面。Toparticipateinclassdiscussionalotbookstobe不定式短语的逻辑主语决不是lotof，为了把逻辑关系表达清楚，要么把不定式短语改成Iftoindiscussion要么把主句改成toreadalotofbooks。．语结平方面错a)Withtheonedoreadat用语法平行结构原则来衡量。前面用形，最后一个用动词原形是不妥的，为了和do保持结构上平行，接下来的一个内容要用。Participatingdiscussionnotonlygoodforpursuitofandthroughitwedevelopouranalyticalskills.同样，在同样的事时，相的句子在语法结构上尽可能要保持一致。后半句宜改为：Itdevelopmentofour。．代用方的错a)Sometimesteacherswillinformofwillmeetwithinstudies.既可以指代，也可以代，明显的是指代不清。其实要把其中的一个名词变成单数he分别代不同的名词就清楚了ateacherwillinformstudentsofdifficultytheywillwithinstudies.havefightingofTVbutitoftenprovesIt指么？指influence，在oftenproves句中显然不通。作者知道it指人们的努力，但effort这个词前面没有出过就不能用it所以要把it改theeffort．可名与可数词面错advice,等是不可数名词，不能用复数many,agreatnumber等能与可数名配用。而aamountof,greatdealof,less,等须与不可数名词配用。．冠方的误a)Bookknowledgeimportant,butwealsothesociety.Iinthehighschool,Ithecollege在没有特指意义时，不能用表示特指的定冠词The。这几句中的the都去掉。c)alotdiscussionintheclass.表示上课等都不用定冠词class,hand,athospital。欢迎下载

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精品文库．句完方的错a)TVnowplaysanroleinlife.Becausecannotwithout中文用“因为”引出的句子可以独立，而文不行，用Because,as从，只能附属主句：liveit。withsociety.example,joiningparttimejobsandhelpthepoor.For引的应是句子Forexamplewejoinandhelpthe而Suchas引出的只能是词或词组立成句asjoiningclubs,takingparttimejobshelpingc)UnlikeTVonpayanyextramoney.tpayanymoney的语是什么？显然不是TV。汉语可以说：电视可以一直看下去，无需再花什么钱主语省去但英语一定要有明显的主语，所以在tneedtoextra前加上。acquire看上去句子有主语：。但这是假主语，因为acquireknowledge主语必须是人。汉语的主语和谓语关系是主题和评论的关系，可以说“读书能获得知识英语不行，一定要有逻辑主谓关系。因此改成：knowledge.．过词面错误isseriouslypolluted,peopleairto中文可以靠意思本身来连接句子英一定要用过渡词来表示因果折递进关系。所以这一句可以是cityissopollutedthathavenofresh或cityseriouslypolluted,peoplefreshairtobreathenow.。语搭方的误a)Westudentslearnmoreknowledgethroughthelecture“学习知识”是作文中常要表达的，但大多数学生总是用错。英语中能和Knowledge搭配的不是而等和traffic搭配不是crowded而是trafficheavy/busy；和speed,price配的不是expensive，是speed/priceoftheishigh.Openyour,youcaneverythingintheworld.Open是打开盖子的意思。打开电脑盖子，只能看到芯片，怎么是everythinginthe，里应用turn。打开信也不能用而用unfold。同时begantoeatmorefood搭也不对副品应是non-staplefoodstuff而总统副经理，副教授，副作用分别是viceassociateprofessors,effects，一定要牢记。11。词方的误c)four,allgraduatedfromcollegesociety.过去时里表示四年后，应用Four，而不是foreyears用于表示将来的四年后，也不用，而是用介词in:Wewillallgraduateinfouryears.likeithasbothanddisadvantages.表示“像Like是介词，这里误用为动词，应是：Likethecomputeradvantagesanddisadvantages.同样，stopifnoelectricity，这里的正确用法应是动名词developing而也是动词，表示没有，英语的动词是或havenot。欢迎下载

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精品文库e)Inmyopinion,Iboththeimproved.Inmyopinion的思已经包括Ithink里一就可以了样Peopletryfindsolutiontoproblem去solve意没有变，但句子简洁多了。f)Thereasonwhymanystudentsthelectureisitlearnquicklymore.句中Reason,why,都指同一意思要掉一个改成Manystudentslikethesystemitthemtomore.．式语达）变的原因有三。（误）forthischangehasthree(正)arethreefor）这我的英语水就提高了。(误)MyEnglishlevelthus(正)MyEnglishthusimproved.）看视能开阔眼。(误)TVcanour(正)WatchingTVcanwidenourmind.）我怕热天。(误)I’mnotafraidofthehotweather.(正)Idonmindhotweather.）我到书越来越了。(误)Ibooksbecomeheavierheavier.(正)heavier超级文式．对选型Somepeopletothinkthat观一Theypointout理由一)Additionally,理由二Acaseinpoint举例)Therefore,小结Oncontrary,therpeopleholdthat观二Theyarguethat理一What’s理由二)Asanillustration,..(举例小AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithink我观)reasonthat理一also…(理由二So,总自己的观点)．说利型Wheneverpeoplesaythat…(题)we’llinstantlyhavetheideathatagood/badthing某题)haveadvantagesto某)Wecantake例)asanexample.Itwillbenefit好处一Inaddition,好处二Inthemeantime,mustrealizethosedisadvantagesof主)Firstof坏一Second,坏二uparguments,Ithinkaproperattitudetowards主)that…(我的观点．问解型欢迎下载

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精品文库Nowadays,tofaceaproblemthat…(问)/Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleareabouttheproblem问)/Itisimportantforusto(问题)Forinstance例一/First,…(原因一)例)/Second,原二)Peoplehavefiguredoutwaystosolvetheproblem./Confrontedwith…(问题weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Firstly,…(解方法一Secondly,解决方法二)ally,believethat…(我方法/Tome,Iamtakingtwowayssolveproblemof问)Onethemis…(的方法)otherwayis我的方法二)Bywayshavebeenworkingperfectlyefficiently结)．阐主型Afamoussayinggoesthat名或谚语Itmeansthat释义)exampleofthiscaseis..(例Anothercaseinpointis例二)Ilikesaying…（名言或谚语,encourages理．图题thegraph,theof..(图概况)Iteasilybeseen揭示含义Theremanyforthisinstance/change,andthefollowingthetypicalones.Forone理由一Inaddition,..(理二Themainreasonthat理由三However,thisgraphnotpredicttheentiresituationtheIbelieve…(前预测/Aboveweaboutproblemandweshouldtryfindsomesolveit.Forthing,..(方法)another方法二Stillanother,方三函作英文书信有信头和信尾，有固定的格式。信头：）不道收信人的:DearSir,Madam,Dear）知收信人的姓，但他并非你的好:DearMr.Jenkins,DearLang,DearDr.Smith,）收人是你的朋:DearSue,DearMichael,结尾：）正公务信件:Yoursveryfaithfully,sincerely,）非式的社交书:Yourstruly,Withbest总的要求：1）内容明确，简洁。不能漫无边际。）措辞恳，坦。不能感情夸张。求职求职信通常分成三部分。）引部分要写明如何获得职位空缺，以及自己的态度。这部分的描写要表现出极的兴趣。）文分主要是证自己有能力胜任这个职位。这部分内容要具体，不要空洞说自己如何好。）结部分主要是客套，如提供的证明文件，希望面谈等。求职信常用套语：欢迎下载

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精品文库开头：1）IamforpositionadvertisedinDailyonApril,1.InanswertoyouradintodayChinaDailyforancomputerprogrammer,Iamwriting…3)haveseenyouradinmorningpaperfor4)wouldlikeconsideredacandidateforthejob5)wouldlikeapplyforpost/positionof…Ibeonlygladtohavesuchachanceto…正文：1）willfromtheenclosedresume,I…2)abouttograduate…Universityin2005,majoringinscience.3)havethenecessaryskillsandabilityforIhavegoodwellsAlthoughIlittleon-the-jobIamconfidenttrainingmehandlejob.IwishinwhichIknowledgecomputerIacquired.Sincecompanyiswellknown…itshouldanidealplaceforme.结尾：1）aretestimonialsuniversityteachersandmypresentIftheseyourrequirements,grantIcanbereachedat12345678IlookingforwardhearingyouandtalkingwithyouIlookingforwardyourconvenience.给编的给编辑的信实际上是一篇小论文：主要是对报刊上某则评论息新闻等发表意见赞成或反对注意在信的开始要具引出所要