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给大家写的新题Fluencyand Avoidhesitation,repetitionandself-Arangeofconnectivesanddiscoursemarkers;Lexicalresources Lesscommon Paraphrase/recementwords(换词性) ticalrangeandaccuracyNobasicerrorsComplexstructures（）Pronunciationloudclear6-7Syllablesounds音标APP (strongform,weakform)Wordstress obviousfinanceConnectedspeechAnewfriendyouhavemadeHowdoyoungpeoplemakenewfriends?罗列动名词thereRefercolleagueblinddate相亲Basically,today’syoungpeopletendtoexpandtheirsocialcircleinvariousways,likemakingapenpalontheInternet(onlineforum),beingreferredbytheirfamilyorfriends,orknowingnewfriendsinwork,studyortravel.Howdopeoplechoosenewfriends?人意见六边Thistopicisquitewell-rounded,butIguesssomerequirementsneedtobemettodevelopForinstance,Itisindispensableforthemtoxxx,otherwise,ortherewillbeaclashwhentheygetalong，theyarenotonthesamepage;Plus,Friendsaresupposedtobe/bemeanttobexxx,withoutthem,Idon’tthinktheirfriendshipwillbelasting;someonewillbehurt;Tothatpoint,itistimeforthemtoThefactorsandincentivesofmakingfriendsaremultiple,yetitisindispensableforthemtofindsomeonewhosharessameinterestsorcommongrounds,otherwise,thetimetheyspendtogetherwillnotbefullofjoyandlaughter,inthatcase,theirfriendshipwon’tlastforalongtime.WhataboutoldpeopleDoyouthinktheymakefriendsthesamewayasyoungpeople?老少对比inmanyaspectsIntermsofSpeakingofTalkingaboutWhenitcomestoRegardingto老年人：Getusedtobeused年轻人：Whileforyoungsters,thereisatrendthatIntermsofmakingcomparisonbetweentwoofthem,Idon’tthinkitissimilartoeachother;sincewhileyoungstersarelikelytomakefriendsonsocialnetworksitesorvirtualworldlikeyingonlinegames,seniorsalwayssticktotraditionalmeans,likemeetingnewfriendsinparks,travelorsociallife.WhichdoyouthinkismoreimportantFriendsorfamily(loveandsupport)?个人意见六边形pathetic的;desperateLikewise/similarly,without/withtheabsenceofxxx/ifthereisnopresenceofIamprettysurethattheimportanceofxxxisasparamountasxxx,sinceifthereisnooffriendsinlife,peoplewillinevitablyfeelxxxandxxx;likewise,ifthereisnopresenceofxxx,oneevencannotxxx,letalonengxxxTruthbetold,twoofthemarenotnecessarilyexclusive,sincefriendscanbeascrucialasfamily;withoutfamily,thereisnowayforustosurviveandthrive,likewise,wewillfeellonelyifthereisnooffriends;that’swhythereismeaninglesstocomparetwoofthem.Whodoyouthinkyoungchildrenneedmore,theirfamilyorIsthereanydifferencesofmakingfriendsbetweencountrysideandcities?个人意见Firstofall,Idon’tconsidergeographiclocationcanbeadeterminant决定因素ofsuchanissue;sincepeopleinbothceswillusesimilarwaysofmakingfriends,likeknowingeachotherontheInternet,orthroughsocialization.Whatcandamagefriendship?举例Specifically,ifthereisnotrustbetweenthem,itislikelytolosefriendship,sinceitistheMoreover,understandingandpatiencearealsokeyandcentral,otherwise,clashandargumenttendtohappenReasonsofcompromisingfriendshipcanbemanifold;forexample,dishonestywillgreatlyunderminedrelationship,sincetrustisthefoundationofgettingalong;morethanthat,gossicanalsoinfluencefriendship,especiallyforpeoplewhoaresensitiveandWhatkindsofpeoplemay egoodfriends件就成为好Thisquestionisratherwell-roundedandcomplicated,butIsupposethattheyaresupposedtohavecommongrounds;additionally,itisalsorelevanttoappreciateeachother’scharactersandtalents,sothattheirrelationshipcanbelasting;inthatcase,Ibelievetheirfriendshipissolid.Howtomakefriendshiplastforlong?罗列题，解决方Aseriesofactionscanbetakenforsuchacause/n/scenario/issueInitially,itisworthtryingforthemtoxxxBesides,ngxxxisalso Aboveall,itwillbeawesome/terrificiftheycandoxxxlovesupport,特别是在criticalmoments关键时AsfarasIcanconcern,severalactionscanbetakentokeepfriendshipfreshandlasting,forexample,itisworthtryingforthemtospendtimetogether,ngactivitiesliketraveling,shop,walkingorchatting;besides,showingloveandsupporttoeachotherisalsomendable,especiallyduringcriticalmomentsinlife;lastbutnotleast,itisindispensableforthemtobehonestandloyaltoeachother.TonamebutaAkindofvegetableorDopeopleinyourcountrylikegrowingntsbythemselves?个No,Idon’tthinkitisquiteprevalent,mainlyduetotherestrictionofourhousingtype,andmostpeoplefinditquitetroublesomeandtime-consumingforthemtontvegetablesathomes;whileotherswhodohavepropergardenswillbeinterestedinntingvegetablesorfruitsontheirown,sinceitcanbeeconomicalandfun.Wheredopeoplegrownts?罗列名Forthosewhoarecapableandinterestedinngso,Isupposeitiscommonforthemtogrowntsinceslikeagarden,potting,rooftoporafarmland;Whatdoyouthinkisthemostimportantntinyour南北方对Inmycountry,therearequiteanumberofntsthataretreatedasstaplefoodindifferentregions,likerice,wheat,potato,soybeanorsweetcorn;forexample,ricehasbeenthemostcommonlyconsumedstaplefoodformostsouthern,whilewheatisviewedasthemostindispensablentfornorthern,whichisthesourcematerialformakingflourandwheatenfood.WhatisthemainntinyourWhatdoyouthinkbeingafarmerDoyouwanttobeafarmerinthefuture?个人意见，六边形Surely,farmersareofparamountimportanceforbothindividualsandsociety,sinceprimaryindustryisthepillarofanyotherindustry;itisfarmerswhoprovidethreemealsandsatisfythebasicneedsofeveryone;withoutfarmingornts,wewilllosethefoundationofAndforme,Idon’tintendtobefarmers,sincemyideallifeistoliveincities,whereIcanfindfacilitiesofallkinds;probablyinthefuturewhenIretire,Imayconsiderbuyingafarmtontandhunt;howoftendopeopleinyourcountrybuyclothing?Alslegitimate合理的写作鱼骨Somepeoplearguethattheearlierstudentsstartlearningaforeignlanguage,thebettertheeffectwillbe,whileothersthinksuchanhasdisadvantages,discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.( 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