2023年新高考英语应用文写作专题：基础话题之做人与做事(句式 范文)素材

2023年新高考英语应用文写作提分技能(模板+素材+策略)基础话题之写人与叙事【素材集锦】diligent勤勉的，刻苦的bebornin...出生在.....humorous有幽默感的be/comefromawealthyfamily来自于一个富裕家庭smartbright/clever聪明的independent独立的bebornintoapeasantfamily出生于一个农民家庭patient有耐心的generous慷慨的,大方的enthusiastic热情的a1.80-meter-tallboy一个1.8米高的男孩efficient效率高的overweight超重的intelligent有才智的slim苗条的creative创造(性)的lookyourage容貌与年龄相当capable有能力good-looking好看的，漂亮的qualified符合资格long-/short-sighted远近视的speakEnglishfluently流利地讲英语fashionable流行的，时髦的haveagiftfor有.....的天赋charming/attractive迷人的，吸引人的beskilledin在....方面熟练welldressed穿着讲究的beexperiencedin在...方面有经验warm-hearted热心肠的，友好的befondof/enjoy/love喜欢absent-minded心不在焉的，健忘的beinterestedin对.....感兴趣bad-tempered易怒的，发脾气的loseinterestin......失去兴趣talkative爱多说话的，健谈的becrazyabout......狂热strongwilled意志坚强的betiredof.对....厌倦majorinsth.主修beingoodhealth/shape身体健康winascholarship获得奖学金energetic精力充沛的getamaster'sdegree获得硕士学位wellbuilt身强力壮的winagold/silver/coppermedal获得金/银/铜牌sufferfrom...患.....winfirstprize获得一等奖graduatefrom...毕业于.....◆各介绍人物的生平1.Bornintoapoorfamily,hesufferedalotinhischildhood.出生在一一个贫困的家庭，他在童年时代受了很多苦。2.Sopoorwashisfamilythathehadtodropoutattheageof12.他的家庭如此贫困以至于他十二岁时就辍学了。◆令对人物的评价1.LiHuasetagoodexampletouswithhistouchingstory.李华以他感人的故事给我们树立了一个好榜样。2.Myteacherfilledmyheartwithwarmthandjoy,justasangelsdo.老师就像天使一样给我带来了温暖和快乐。3.LiHua'scourageisbreathtaking.Simplybecauseofhisambition,hewinsouradmiration.李华的勇气是惊人的,仅仅因为他的志向，他赢得了我们的敬佩。4.Owingtothefactthathecandowhateverhehaschosentodowithgreatperseverance,hehasmadegreatachievementsinmanyfields.由于他能够坚持不懈地做他所选择做的任何事情，所以他在很多领域都取得了伟大成就。5.Itishisperseverancethatleadstohisgreatsuccess.就是他的坚持不懈才使得他成功。6.Hischarmingpersonalityliesinasimplefactthatheneverhesitatestohelpothers.他的人格魅力在于一个简单的事实:对帮助别人他从不犹豫。7.Heseemsneverfeeltiredofdoingwhateverheecantohelpothers,whichmaybewhatmakeshimsopopularamongallofus.能为别人做点什么就做点什么,他似乎从不厌倦,这或许是他受我们大家欢迎的原因。8.Althoughhehaswoncountlesshonors,henevershowsanysignsofpride.尽管他获得了无数的荣誉称号,他却从未表现过他的骄傲。9.Bybeingdevotedtowhathedoesnomatterhowboringitis,hesetsagoodexampletous.不管事情有多枯燥，他都会通过专心致志于所做之事，为我们树立一一个好榜样。◆人介绍人物特点1.Shewasquiteoptimisticandenergetic.Shebroughtmealotofhappinessandcourage.Ilearnedsomethingpreciousfromherbeliefinlife.她非常乐观、有活力。她给我带来了许多快乐和勇气。我从她身上学到了一些宝贵的东西一要对生活有信心。2.Shewashumorousandplayful.Shewassoconfidentinthewayshedressedthatshecalledherselfa"fashionqueen"andmadejokesathowlittleIcaredaboutmyappearance.她幽默、有趣。她对自己的穿戴方式是那样地自信,甚至称自己是"时装皇后"，而且取笑我不在乎自己的外表。3.LiHuaalwaystreatspeoplewithrespectandlove.李华总是以尊敬和关爱对待人们。4.Thesetwogirlsshareanattitudetolife:Thefirstthingistorealizeyourdreamandeverythingelseisalessermatter.这两个女孩对生活有共同的态度:最重要的是实现梦想,其他都是次要的。◆事物介绍常用句型1.Behindthestreetliesasmallriver.(表示地点的介词短语位于句首，谓语动词为lie，句子要完全倒装)街道后面有一条小河。2.Itremainsaquestionhowwecansolvetheproblemsconcerningmakingfriendsonline.如何解决与上交友有关的问题依然是个疑问。3.TheproblemsthattheInternethasbroughttousdoexist,butwehavetoberational.因特给我们带来的问题的确存在，但是我们必须要理性看待。4.Everycoinhastwosides,andsodoestheInternet.("so+助动词+主语",是部分倒装结构,表示前面所说的情况也适用于另一事物)凡事都有两面性，因特也是如此。5.Accordingtothenewspaper,it'sagreatmovie.报纸上说，这是一部很棒的电影。6.Asisknowntousall,HongKongisoneofthefinancialcentersofAsia.众所周知，香港是亚洲的金融中心之一。7.Canyoubelieve(that)thisexcellentsongwascomposedbyahighschoolstudent?你能相信这首美妙的歌曲是一-.个高中生创作的吗?8.Thebridgeacrosstheriverhasbeenbuiltwheretrafficisheavy,whichmakesitquiteconvenientforthepeoplearoundtotravel.这座跨江大桥建在交通拥挤的地方，使得周围的人出行很方便。【真题再现】（2020年，全国卷I）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1.人物简介；2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1.词数100左右；2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。ThepersonIrespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】ThepersonIrespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）Asforme；sparesometime；listentomepatiently;第三步：连词成句1.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmostly.2.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.3.Myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因2.表示并列补充关系：Asfor;and;but;So第五步：润色修改【范文点评】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch；非谓语动词：Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents；时间状语从句：WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemoflearninginmystudy,myfathe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