读后续写：不想做家务的男孩 讲义-高三英语写作专项

读后续写作为新高考英语的创新题型出现，主要考查学生对英语的综合运用能力和创新性思维能力。具体而言，读后续写要求考生在给定的时间内读懂原文，并能把握原文的关键信息和语言特点；在续写部分做到想象合理，衔接连贯，内容饱满；在语言应用上，强调语言使用的丰富性和准确性，要求考生灵活使用高级词汇和复杂句式。在行文逻辑方面，要求考试进行合理的想象，并恰当地使用一定的衔接手段，使行文连贯。俗话说：镜子不擦起灰尘，人不劳动变废人。身为父母，应该明白一屋不扫，何以扫天下的道理，要有意识地采用适当的方法让孩子养成做家务的习惯，这对培养孩子的独立解决事情的能力，责任感，和磨练孩子的意志是大有裨益的，最终达到促进孩子成长和懂得感恩的目的。读后续写材料：Arthurwasmessy.Hedidn’ttrytomakemesses,neitherdidhetrytocleanupmuch.Hissocksnevermadeitintothehamper(洗衣篮).AndheonlypickeduphistoyswhenMomthreatenedtothrowthemaway.Mostdays,MomfollowedArthuraroundthehouseandcleanedupafterhim.Shebrushedthecrumbs(碎屑)intoherhandandthrewthemawayaftermeals.Shepickeduphissocksandmadesuretheygotwashed,driedandfoldedneatlybeforegoingbackinthedrawer.Oneday,MomaskedArthurtopickuphistoytrains.Hewasreadingacomicbookandhewasstillreading,sayingnothing.Thetrainshadbeenonthelivingroomfloorsincethemorning.“Youknowwhat,Arthur?I’mnotgoingtoaskyouagain.I’mdonecleaningtoday.”Andwiththat，Momputherfeetuponthesofaandpickedupabooktoread.Atdinnertime,Arthurnoticedthattherewasabigpileofcrumbsathisplaceatthetable.Afterdinner,Arthur’sfeetfeltcold.Hewenttohisroomandopenedhisdrawer,butthedrawerwasempty.“Mom,wherearemysocks?”Arthurcalled.“Thereweren’tanysocksinyourhamper,soIdidn’twashthem,”Momsaid.Arthurfeltunhappy.Nowhisfeetwouldbecold,unlesshewantedtoweardirtysocksfromthefloor.Hedecidedtostaybarefoot.Whenitwastimeforbed,ArthursaidgoodnighttoMomandturnedtogoupstairs.Arthursteppedrightonhistoytraininhisbarefeet.“Ouch!”criedArthur.“Thatreallyhurt!”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答案卡的相应位置作答。HetunedtomomforhelpHowever,Momwasstillreadingandsaidnothing———————————————————————————Havingputawaythetoytrainhecaughtsightofthedirtysocks———————————————————————————文本解析：主题语境：人与自我中的做人与做事文章大意：通过所给文章，我们不难看出主人公Arthur总是把房间弄到乱七八糟（Arthurwasmessy）而且又不爱收拾房间（neitherdidhetrytocleanupmuch.Hissocksnevermadeitintothehamper）。只有当妈妈威胁要扔掉玩具时，他才捡起玩具。.（

AndheonlypickeduphistoyswhenMomthreatenedtothrowthemaway.）他妈妈刚开始对他这种行为是很宽容的，总是跟在他后面整理东西。（Mostdays,MomfollowedArthuraroundthehouseandcleanedupafterhim.Shebrushedthecrumbsintoherhandandthrewthemawayaftermeals.Shepickeduphissocksandmadesuretheygotwashed,driedandfoldedneatlybeforegoingbackinthedrawer）。直到有一天，他妈妈下定决心要惩罚Arthur，于是不再给他整理东西了。Arthur找不到自己的东西，没有袜子穿，脚还踩到自己乱丢的东西上弄疼了（Arthursteppedrightonhistoytraininhisbarefeet.“Ouch!”criedArthur.“Thatreallyhurt!”）………情节走向：续写第一段的首句：HetunedtomomforhelpHowever,Momwasstillreadingandsaidnothing。看到妈妈无动于衷，按照常理Arthur应该很生气，生气时会做什么呢？会说什么呢？结合续写第二段首句Havingputawaythetoytrain，那么本段最后应该要写他主动收拾玩具火车这个行为，在这个过程中，他会有什么感悟呢？续写第二段的首句：Havingputawaythetoytrainhecaughtsightofthedirtysocks.看到脏袜子后，一个本能的反应是洗袜子。Arthur在这之前，从来没洗过袜子。坐在旁边的妈妈此时会怎么做呢？妈妈洗？还是妈妈教他洗？结合所给文章，妈妈是想给他一个教训，那么极有可能是妈妈教他洗袜子。妈妈看到Arthur的这种变化，会作何感想呢？参考答案：HetunedtomomforhelpHowever,Momwasstillreadingandsaidnothing

Seeinghismother’sresponse,hestoodrootedtospot,hiseyesblazingwithangerandtearspouringdownhischeeks."Whyareyousocold!"Heshouted.Butmomjustclosedthebookstaringathim,statingcalmly,"Allofyourpainresultsfromyourbadhabits.".Onhearingthis,hestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindthem.Afterwhatseemedlikeages,hegraduallycalmeddown.Hethenbentdowntopickupthetoytrainwithdifficultiesandputitinthebox,awarethattheworkwasanythingbuteasy.Havingputawaythetoytrainhecaughtsightofthedirtysocks.

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himthatitwasalsohisdutytodothewashingonhisown

Havingcollectedthesocks,hesanktheminwater,

lockinghiseyesonthemwithoutknowingwhattodo.Justashewasrackinghisbrains,hismomcameoverand