2023届高三英语写作专项 读后续写语篇练习（夫妻俩森林迷路）课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习1——夫妻俩森林迷路题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.4续写原文Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.5续写段首语Paragraph1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Paragraph2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写建议第1段：但是没有更多的直升机来了，天又黑了。1.简再一次被扔进了一个黑暗的世界，陷入了绝望。2.那一刻，她只想坐下来好好哭泣。3.但转念一想，她决定找个安全的地方过夜。4.虽然简完全疲惫不堪，但她能够在离空旷的地方不远的地方找到一个地方。5.之后，除了天空中几颗星星发出的微弱光芒外，天完全黑暗了。6.抬起头，她想到了她和汤姆在一起的幸福时光，为吵架感到遗憾。7.不知不觉中，她睡着了，甚至梦见和丈夫一起在湖边散步。9续写建议第2段：简醒来时已是黎明。1.慢慢地，她站起来，蹒跚地走到溪边，在那里她喝了一些水，给自己塞了一些浆果。2.但她并没有在那里呆太久。3.当她走回空旷的地方时，奇怪的想法和担忧又开始涌上心头。4.“如果直升机不回来怎么办？”她喃喃自语，感到沮丧。5.突然，她听到远处传来直升机的声音，令她非常高兴的是，它向她飞来。6.看到这一幕，简疯狂地标记她的黄色衬衫，直到直升机降落在空旷的地方。7.她亲爱的丈夫冲了出来，知道她很安全，她只是瘫倒在地上。10Part3范文呈现11范文呈现Paragraph1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.1.Onceagain,Janewasthrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.2.Atthatmoment,allshewantedwastositdownandhaveagoodweep.3.Butonsecondthoughts,shedecidedtofindasafeplacetostayforthenight.4.ThoughJanewasabsolutelywornout,shewasabletofindaplacenotfarfromanopenarea.5.Afterthat,itwascompletelydarkexceptforthefaintlightfromafewstarsinthesky.6.Lookingup,shethoughtofthehappymomentssheandTomhadtogether,regretfulforthequarrel.7.Beforesheknewit,shefellasleepandevendreamedaboutwalkingwithherhusbandalongthelake.12范文呈现Paragraph2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.1.Slowly,shegotupandhobbledtothestream,whereshedranksomewaterandstuffedherselfwithsomeberries.2.Butshedidn’tstaytherelong.3.Asshewalkedbacktotheopenarea,strangethoughtsandworriesbegantocrowdinagain.4.“Whatifthehelicopterdoesn’tcomeback?”shemurmured,feelingfrustrated.5.Suddenly,sheheardthesoundofahelicopteratadistanceandtohergreatjoy,itflewtowardsher.6.Seeingthis,Janewildlyflaggedheryellowblouseuntilthehelicopterlandedontheopenarea.7.Outrushedherdearhu