Unit+2+Reading+for+Writing+以读促写课件【知识精讲精研+备课精准突破】 高中英语人教版（2019）选择性必修第三册

Unit2HealthylifestyleReadingforwriting(1)Writealetteraboutyourlifestyle（写信关于想要改变的生活方式）(2)writealetterofproposal（建议信）Lead-inPre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingPart1Lead-in1.流感

flu2.下定决心做某事

makeupone’smindtodosth.3.刺激；激发；促进

stimulate4.头晕目眩的

dizzy5.牙医

dentist6.坚果

nut7.滑板

skateboard8.充满活力的；精力充沛的；动态的

dynamic9.保龄球运动

bowling10.喜剧；喜剧片；滑稽节目

comedy11.每月；每月一次的；月刊

monthly12.提高；增强；增进

enhance13.使恢复精力；使凉爽；刷新

refreshWordReviewPart2pre-writingReading1.Whowritethesetwoletters?

WangLuandGeorgeFielding.2.Whatarethepurposesofwritingtheseletters?Toinformtheeditoroftheirproblemsandactionstheytaketosolvetheseproblems.

Readforgeneralideaswellmanytoothachesflueasilysleepanddizzypassioneatnosugarexerciseregularlyminutesanddidsomethingactivebuyingsweets,biscuits,andsugarydrinksatleast30dynamicandstrongerbothbodyandmindsoundlyincontrolofherownlifesuffersfromfluortoothachesReadfordetailedideasstressedoutwornoutplayingcomputergamesfindotherwaystorelaxtakecontrolofhislifeandhisdadrockclimbingmonthlywithchangehimselfforthebetterenergeticDearEditor,

YoursSincerely,signature___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________bodyReadforstructuresoofaletterComplimentaryclose信尾敬语Salutation称呼Divideeachletterintofourpartsandtrytomatchthemainideasbelowtoeachpart.identifyproblemsconsiderwhattodo describewhathe/shehasdonetochangegivetheresults ProblemDecisionAction(s)Result(s)Problem-solutionpatternReadforstructuresandcontentsPart3While-writing描述想要改变的生活方式Whatbadhabitsdoyouwanttochange？overeating/eatingjunkfoodInternetaddictioncigarettesmokingstayinguplatealcoholabusetoostressedoutAfterreadingthesetwoletters,doyouthinkitisawisechoicetojointhecamp?Nowyouaregoingtojointhecamp.Writealettertotheeditortotellhimyouronelifestylethatyouwanttochange.Writing1:投稿关于要改变的生活方式假如你是李华，正在英国参加交换生活动。你想参加HealthyLife

杂志社组织的第二期夏令营活动。请给杂志社的编辑写一封信，内容如下：1.Whatlifestylehabityouwouldliketochange;2.Whyyouwanttochange;3.Howyouplantochange;4.Whatresultyouhopetosee.常用句式1.

Iamwritingtosharewithyousomethingaboutmylifestyle.2.Iamwritingtoyouwiththepurposeof...3.I’mhavingsometroubleinkeepinghealthy.4.Ican’thaveagoodsleepatnight,andcan’tconcentrateonmystudyeither.5.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,I’mataloss...6.ItisimportantthatI(should)loseweightanddevelopahealthylifestyle.7.NotonlyamIusedtoworkingouteverydaybutalsomyfamilyare...8.Exerciseisbeneficialtoourhealth.We'dbetterrunforhalfanhoureveryday.9.Ihopeyouwillgivemesomepracticalsuggestions.DearEditor,IwaswalkingpastashopwindowtheotherdaywhenIsawmyreflection.Atfirst,Ididn'trealiseitwasme.WhenIsawitwasme,IfeltsadasIwasoverweight.Ididn'trealisehowIlooked,andnowIreallywanttochange.Ireallylikeeating,butIrealiseIeattoomuch,andIdon'teatgoodthings.IwanttochangebecauseIwanttobeabletolookatmyselfandfeelhappywithhowIlook.Ialsowanttobehealthy.Myplanistochangemydietandexerciseregularly.Iwillstopeatingsugar,andonlyeatatmealtimesratherthaneatingsnacksduringtheday.Iwillfocusonhealthyfoods.ThenIwillexerciseeveryday.Iwillwalktoschoolandback,andontheweekend,Iwillgoswimming.Ihaveonlybeendoingmyplanforaweek,butI'malreadystartingtofeelbetter.Ihaven'tlostalotofweightyet,butIfeelpositive.IfeelconfidentthatIwillreachmygoal!Yourssincerely,A.SmithSample1DearEditor,

Iwouldliketoparticipateinyoursummercampasitwouldbeincrediblybeneficialtohelpmeanalysemylifechoices.Myissuesaremultitudinousandcomplicated.Firstly,Ihavedifficultyinwakingupearly.

I’malwaystiredduringthedayandoftenfeelwornout.Thiscausesmetoovereatandsnackfrequently.Iamalsoconstantlylateandhencestressedundertimepressurealldaylong.Intheevening,IneedtorelaxsoIresorttothefallbackofmyiPhonetocheckmessagesandsurfandshoponline.Ioftenlosetrackoftimeandfallasleepintheearlyhoursofthemorningwithmyphone.PurposePresenttenseProblemSample2DuringPrimaryandmiddleschoolIwasagradeAstudent,butnowIamstrugglingtokeepupwithmypeers.Ireallywanttogetmylifebackontrack.Iwanttofindthedisciplinetochangemysleepinghabitsandovercomemyphoneaddiction.Ialsowanttofindahealthiereatingandexerciseregimeandsticktoit.DecisionIwouldliketoattendyourbootcampsoIcantakethestepsnecessary

tofirstly

reducemydependencyonmyphone.Secondly,Iwilladoptamorehealthydietandeliminatecomforteating.Finally,Iwilltrymybesttobecomeabettertimemanagerbalancingexercisewithstudycommitments.TheresultsIwanttoachieveareabetterandmorerefreshingsleepingpattern.Gaintimetofocusonmystudies.Andultimatelyhaveahealthywork-lifebalance.Hopefully,Icanjoinyouandfindabetterself.Yourstruly,LiHuaResultHopeSimplefuturetensePart4Post-writing建议信几乎不

hardlyever要么...要么...eitheror感到昏昏欲睡和头晕feelsleepyanddizzylackpassion

缺少激情激发动机stimulatemotivation下定决心做...makeupone’smindtodosth过去常常...usedtodosthsleepsoundly睡得香甜/好不再nolongersufferfromafluvirus感染流感病毒控制beincontrolof/takecontrolof参与takepartin/joinsbinfeelstressedout

压力大bewornout

感到筋疲力尽的词块积累adjustlifestyle调整生活方式getabsorbed着迷；专心致志对...着迷bemadfor

succeedinquitting成功戒除replaceAwithB用B代替Aenhancethequality提高质量getrefreshed精神振作feelenergetic

感到精力满满的tryoutnewways尝试新的方式changemyselfforthebetter让自己变得更好词块积累letterofproposalWriting2:建议信第一段：写信目的：了解对方的困难，表达建议的意图第二段：内容要点：展开建议的具体内容并说明理由（3条为宜）第三段：表达期望：希望建议对对方有用开头：指出对方问题：

Recently,Ilearnedthat……表明来意写信的目的是为了给出建议：Herearesomehumblesuggestionsforyou.

/

I’mwritingtosharemyideason....../So,Iam

writingtogiveyouahand.主体：建议一Firstofall,whatyouneedtodosth.A建议二

Additionally,ifIwereyou,IwoulddosthB.

建议三

What’smore,IsuggestyoushoulddosthC.结尾：

希望对方采纳：Hopefullyyoucanfollowmyadviceandmakeachangefromnowon./Iamlookingforwardtoyourgood

news.

建议信开头句1.Iamgladtoreceiveyourletteranditismypleasuretogiveyousomeadviceon...2.Havingknownthatyouhavesometroublein...Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.3.ThanksforyourtrustingandnowIamhonoredtoofferyousomesuggestionson...here.给建议的常用句型1.Ithinkyouaresupposedto...2.Itisintelligentofyou/agreatideato...3.You’dbetter/Youmayaswell...4.IfIwereyou,Iwould...5.Itwouldbebeneficialif...建议信结尾句1.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful/beneficial.2.Iwouldappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration/account.3.Iwouldbemorethanpleasedtosee...DearXX，

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavetroublewith...NowIamwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowto....

Mysuggestionsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,itisagreatideato...(建议一)Inaddition,itwouldbebeneficialforyouif...(建议二)Lastbutnotleast,IfIwereyou,Iwould...(建议三).

Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsuseful.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerelyyours,XX建议信模板假如你是李华，在一家报社工作，收到一封读者来信说他朋友陈雷沉迷电脑游戏，希望你能给他一些意见去帮助他戒掉游戏。请根据提示写一封建议信。1.告诉你朋友玩游戏的危害2.培养其他健康爱好3.多参加户外活动注意：字数80左右可适当增加细节，使文章连贯。DearWorriedFriend,I’msorrytohearthatyourfriendChenLeiisaddictedtocomputergames.NowI’dliketogiveyousomeadviceonhowtodealwithit.

Tostartwith,itisimportanttotellhimthatspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonhisstudies.Inaddition,

youmayaswellencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbieslikeplayingtheguitarorplayingbasketball.Lastbutnoleast,whynottakepartinsomeoutdooractivitiestogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgood