作文1对比选择课件

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Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:名校校园正成为旅游新热点校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同我认为……问题字数不够标题的大小写问题

实词：名词、代词、形容词、数词、动词、副词虚词：冠词、介词、连词、感叹词个别词汇短语错误：旅游胜地热门话题touristattractionhottopic/issue表述观点的句型不会运用语法错误Inaddition,ifopen,therewillbeafewunsafefactorsenterintoschoolgate.Shouldtheuniversitycampusbeopentotouristshasarousedwideconcerning.Butiftheuniversityshouldbeopentotourists,hasadvantagesanddisadvantages.…sothatisbenefittoteenagers.Alongwiththeadvanceofsociety,moreandmoreproblemsbroughtourattention.作文类型段落组织模式现象解释型描述段（描述现象）-说明段（阐述原因或影响）-议论段（表明看法）问题解决型描述段（描述问题）-说明段（分析问题的原因或危害）-说明段（说明解决问题的方法或措施）对比选择型1.议论段（提出两种观点）-议论段（分别阐述两种观点）-议论段（作出选择并总结观点）2.议论段（提出两种观点并做出选择）-议论段（论证“我”的选择的正确性）-议论段（总结观点）观点论证型议论段（提出观点）-议论段（论证观点）-议论段（总结观点）作文类型段落组织模式记叙文描述段（描述事件背景）-描述段（描述事件过程）-议论段（谈论感受或获得启示）应用文根据具体文体而定12句作文法提出观点段⑴Whenitcomesto谈论主题，thereisnocompleteagreementamongpeople./Whenasked谈论主题，differentpeoplewillgivedifferentanswers/offerdifferentviews/havedifferentchoices/preferences./Nowadays/Inrecentyears,观点/选择的背景.⑵Somepeopletakeitforgranted/believe/like/choose一种观点/选择/倾向.⑶However,othersmaintain/argue/prefer/wouldrather另一种观点/选择/倾向.对比论证段⑷Thosepeoplewhoholdthefirstopinion/maketheformerchoice/havethefirstpreferencebelieve观点/选择/倾向一的理由一.⑸Inaddition,intheireyes/theyinsist/theymaintain/theypointout观点/选择/倾向一的理由二.⑹However,stillothersthinkdifferent/donotagreethis/havedifferentchoices/preferences.⑺Intheiropinion,观点/选择/倾向二的理由一.⑻Besides,theyargue观点/选择/倾向二的理由二.(4)Thosepeoplewhoholdthefirstopinionbelievethatrefusingtouristsiscontradictinguniversities’proclaimedspiritofopenness.(5)Inaddition,theyinsistthatnouniversityhastherighttorejecttaxpayerstoenteritsgroundsbecauseitispublicland.(6)However,stillothersthinkdifferently.(7)Intheiropinions,toomanytouristswilladdaburdentothesecuritydepartmentoftheuniversity.(8)Besides,theyarguethatthesetouristswilldestroythequietenvironmentandinfluencestudents’normalstudy.(对比论证段)总结观点段⑼Weighingupthesetwoarguments/choices/preferences或其他具体选择倾向，Iprefer/aminclinedto/wouldratherchoosetheformer/latterone或两种具体选择之一./Astome,Itendto/preferto/aminclinedto“我”的选择或倾向.⑽Foronething,理由一.⑾Foranother/Furthermore/Moreover/What’smore,理由二/进一步说明理由一.⑿Consideringthese/Takingabove-mentionedfactorsintoconsideration,we/Imayreasonablyconclude/Isuggest/Ithink重申观点./Inaword,提出建议.例文对比选择型常用句式1.Thereisageneraldiscussionnowadaysontheproblemof...Someargue/holdthat...,butotherssetforthatotallydifferentargumentabouttheissue.如今，…问题引起了广泛讨论。有些人认为…，但是其他人则对此持完全相反的观点。2.Inreactiontothephenomenon/Inanswertotheproblem/Inresponsetotheon-goingsocialchange,somepeoplebelieve...;intheirminds,...Othersmaintain...;intheireyes,...对于这种现象/对于解决该问题/对于该社会变化，一些人认为…，在他们看来…。其他人则认为…，在他们看来…。6.Withthedevelopmentof…,AwillprovetoholdgreatersuperiorityoverB.随着…的发展，A将比B占有更大的优越性。7.Itmaybebrieflysummedupasfollows.简而言之，总结如下。8.Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,wecancometotheconclusionthat…综上所述，我们可以得出结论…。9.Frommypointofview,itismorereasonabletosupportthefirstopinionratherthanthesecond.在我看来，支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更合理。10.Icannotentirelyagreewiththeideathat…我无法完全同意这一观点…。11.Inmyopinion,itismoreadvisabletodo…thantodo…在我个人看来，做…比做…更明智。12.Thiscasehasarousedechoesthroughoutthecountry,withmoreandmorepeoplefollowingitslead,butideasaboutitvarywidely.这个事件在全国产生了反响，也有很多人纷纷效仿，但是人们对它的看法却极不相同。13.Theothersideofthecoinhasvoicedstrongoppositionsayingthat…争论的另一方表示强烈反对，他们声称…。14.Ap