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千里之行,始于第2页/共2页精品文档推荐GRE写作如何通过模仿范文来训练GRE高分作文都是怎么练出来的?这4条学习阅历值得共享,快来看看吧,下面我就和大家共享,来观赏一下吧。

GRE写作如何通过仿照范文来训练?详细方法心得讲解

GRE作文仿照预备工作介绍

1.要有可以仿照的文章(最好是带有说理性的文章)。

2.你要理解这个文章,理解它的用词、句子结构、段落结构。

3.这些文章都有正确的中文翻译。同时,文章的长度不能超过500字。

怎么仿照?举个例子:首先要分析文章,分析每一句和上一句是什么关系。US人写作文的一个特点是,通常每段的第一句都包含了整段文字的内容,也就是我们常说的topicsentence。另一个特点是当你写完一个句子后,你要问WHY。你提出一个问题,然后给出一个圆满的回答,这就是一篇优秀的作文。

GRE写作仿照训练要做到这两点

1.抽象的力量(abstract);

2.详细的力量(details/examples)。

详细化并不代表要写一个完整的故事。但是任何一篇文章都要给人一个详细的意向。通过详细的东西来描述才能给人塌实的感觉。详细化只要举出几个地方、几个名字、几件小事就可以了。

为什么好多同学作文中分数很低呢,就是由于,他提出了问题却没有回答。

通过不断的仿照写作,就可以不断的订正语法和词组错误。如何把抽象和详细结合起来是一个重点,如何在一个段落中只表达一个思想,这是另一个重点。US人的判分特点是,假如你在一段中表达了一个以上的思想,那你的分数就不会高了。

分析完一篇文章后,怎么仿照着写呢?就是看着中文的翻译,把上面的英文一字不落的写下来,当你实在想不起来的时候,再看原文。等到写完之后,和原文对比一下,看看是谁写的美丽。我刚刚开头仿照写作的时候,发觉,仿照了几天后,写作水平的确提高了。由于依据记忆学原则,这个单词你背过、读过,它都不能写在你的文章中间。假如一个单词可以常常消失在你的脑子和文章中间,那这只证明白一件事,就是你写过这个字。但是你自己写作你不行能用到这个字,那就只有一个可能,就是你在仿照文章时写过这个字。假如一个结构别人写不出来,你能写出来,那你的分数就会高。

GRE写作仿照训练有哪些好处?

1.你的语法错误会越来越少;

2.句子结构力量越来越强;

3.用词力量大大增加。

通过这样的仿照,慢慢的你会发觉,模板在不知不觉中变成了你自己的,写作力量也就大大提高了。

新GRE写作:达到目标的手段

题目:

Ifagoalisworthy,thenanymeanstakentoattainitarejustifiable.

只要值得,不择手段达到目的是合理的。

范文:

Thespeakerclaimthatifagoalifworthwhile,thenanymeanstakentoachievethisgoalisjustifiable.Althoughtheassertionmakessensewhenweconsidertheunderlyingofthisimplicationisthatwhatevertheconditions,thenaturesoftheendingsdeserveoureffortwholehearted.Butifweexaminethebroadmeaningthatthisclaimcarries,wefindthisthresholdstatementsufferdeficienciesfrommanyaspectsofconsideration.

Firstletdefinetheworthinessofagoal.Howworthwhileandvaluableagoalisliesnotonlyinthesubjectivemeditationandevaluationofanindividual,wemustconsidertheinteractiveinfluenceexertedbythisgoalonothers.Forexample,acountrymayconsiderthegoalofachievingeconomicsuccessandwellbeingofitscitizenstobeworthwhile,butifweknowtheyexploitcheaplaborforcesinthird-worldcountry,utilizescarcenaturalresourcesthatbeingexportedfrompoorcountries,ordumplow-costgoodsinthesecountries,ourmoralsrevealusthedarksideofthegoalandmakeitlessworthwhilethanitseemstobetoitshomepeople.Onapersonallevel,apersonsfoodmightbetheotherspoison,sodidthegoal.Considertheambitionof

Napoleon,hisambitiousgoalistoconquerthewholeEuropeanContinent,whichconsideredbyhimselfandmanyofhisfollowstobethemostgloriousplantheyhaveevermade.Butbyresortingtowars,killings,andbloodshedding,theirsweetdreamturnouttobethenightmareofpeoplehabituatinginthiscontinent.Inaword,sincenogoalissetfromapuredisinterested,impartialperspective,itisnecessarytobeartheinterwovenrelationshipinmindbeforetargetingatacertaingoal.Evenifagoalisworthwhileagreedbymajorityofpeople,weshouldconsidercost-and-benefitsideofthingsinanefforttoobtainingannonbiased,all-aroundpointofview.Mostpeopletodayagreethattheexplorationofouterspaceisaworthygoalconsideringthevaluableresearchmaterialswewouldgetfromforourphysicsandmedialexperimentandweatherforecast.Whatismore,duetothelimitlongevityofearthandtheeverincreasingofpopulations,weseehighcallstofindanotherhabitatforourfuturegenerations.Evenifalltheadvantagesandbenefitsinvolvedjustifytheworthinessofthisgoal,notallmeanstakenwouldbeconsideredassensibleandjudicial.SincemostpressingsocialproblemsuchasAIDSprevention,poverty,environmentalproblemsstillinneedofimmediateattentionandobservation,weneedtoallocatemostofourresourcestotackletheseproblems.Asaresult,evenifonewayofachievingthebreakthroughinoutspaceexplorationwouldbetodevoteallresearchstaffandavailableresourcetothisproject,wehavetostruggleabalancebetweentheworthinessofagoalandtheproperwaytoobtainthisgoal.

Theabovestatementiswelcomedandreadilyembracedbythenewtrendofpracticalitysinceinasocietywherepersonalachievementishighlyvalued,welookmoretoendingthanmeans.Thatistosay,peopletendtoneglectandforgivetheirownwrongdoingsorotherswrongdoingsinasensethattheirgoalsaregoodwill–intendingandworthwhile.Foronething,forapersonal,asociety,orevenanation,eventheyconsiderthingsfromatotallyisolatedorfunctionalperspective,nomatterhowgreatachievementtheyobtain,theyareselfishloserswithnothingtobeaccomplishedfromthephysiologicalpointofview.Inthesecondplace,weobservetoomanycaseswheregoodintentionresultintotalchaosderivenotfromthedirtytrickstheyconstruebutoutoftheimpropermeanstheytake.Sincethefoundingof

PeoplesRepublicofChina,undertheleadershipofChairmanMao,Chinahasundergoneareformintheareaofeconomy,whichistoimplementplannedeconomy.Maosintentionisgood,andhisgoalistorealizecommunalismsinthisnewcountrytoshortitseconomicgapwiththewesterncountryintheshortestaspossible.Butwithoutconsideringthepropernessofthismeansfromtheeconomicandsocialpointofview,hethrewchinaintoyearsofeconomicregressionandstillness.Ideaswentcontrarytoourwillsandintentionsoccasionallyandthusmaketheconsiderationandfullanalyzesofthemeanstoobtaininggoalsevenpressing.

Tosumup,Iamagainstthespeakersassertionsinceheneglectsoneimportantaspectofhowtoevaluategoals.Todevotetoaworthgoalisjustifiableandtheeffortinstilledinthisprocessdeserveouraccoladesinceitisalwaysthispowerthatpushthesocietyforward.Butbyneglectingthemeansofhowtoobtainthesegoals,weputourselvesinanembarrassingplaceoffunctionalistsandopportunists.Asaresult,itishighlyresultedtolookfromdifferentperspectivestofigureourwherethetruevalueofagoalliesandhowtoachieveit.

新GRE写作:冒险与方案

题目:

Successinanyrealmoflifecomesmoreoftenfromtakingchancesorrisksthanfromcarefulandcautiousplanning.

在生活的全部领域中,胜利往往更多的来自于把握机会或者冒险而不是通过认真谨慎的方案。

范文:

Thespeakerassertspeoplearemorelikelytoattainsuccesswhentakingchancesorrisksthanplanningcarefullyandcautiously.However,aftercomparingthecharacteristicsofcarefulplanningandtakingchances,Istronglyholdthattheyareofthesameimportanceinthepursuitofsuccess.

Incompetitivesports,whilemakingappropriatetrainingplansandeffectivecompetitionstrategiesconstitutenecessaryconditionsofwinningthematches,takingrisksisalmostinevitablewhenathletesortheircoachesconfrontasuddenmatterthatmightinfluencethecourseofamatchandthathasnotbeentakenintoconsiderationbeforehand.Inmoderncompetitivesports,itiswidelyacknowledgedthatscientificandeffectivetrainingcontributestoathletes’betterperformanceduringmatches.Goodcompetitionstrategies,ontheotherhand,resultinginthebetterallocationofphysicalforce,betteruseofskillsorthehigherrateinscoring,alsoplayavitalrole.

However,whenthestarplayersofasoccerteamorabasketballteamareoffthegameorfailtoimplementtheirchiefcoachsstrategicintention,leavingthewholeteaminadverseness,thecoachfacesthechoicewhethertosubstitutehe/sheornot.Nodoubtsubstitutingastarplayerwithabenchplayermeanstakingriskbecausethebenchplayermaynotperformasgoodasthestarplayerandmaymakemattersworse.Ifthishappens,thesubstitutionwillincurdiscontentmentoftheplayersandcritiquefromtheteamsfans,mediaandtheboss.Thecapabilityofthecoachmaythenbesuspectedandhe/shemayevenbefired.Nevertheless,ifthecoachdaresnottotaketherisktosubstituteapoorlyperformedstarplayer,his/herteamwillprobablylosethegame.Takingchancesandrisksisreasonablewhenoneisdealingwithsomethingthathasnotbeentakenintoconsiderationpreviously.So,incompetitivesports,planningandriskingarebothnecessary.

Inacademicfields,carefulandcautiousplanningisrequiredforlargeprojectsandapplicationdisciplineswhilerevolutionaryscientificbreakthroughsarealmostimpossiblewithouttakingchancesorrisks.Beforestartingtheresearchprojectonhumangenome,scientistshadalreadymadeplansonthecontentandmethodoftheresearch.Theydidnothavetotakeanychancesorrisksbecausealltheyshoulddohavealreadybeencarefullyplanned.Therewerenotechnicalobstaclesthathadnotbeensolved.Therefore,theyjustfollowedtheplanstepbystepandaccomplishedtheprojectintheend.Asforsignificantscientificbreakthroughs,theyaretheimportantdiscoveriesandtheoriesthatdisaccord,atleasttosomeextent,withestablishedprinciplesorourintuitions,suchastheTheoryofRelativityandquantummechanics.Onehasnochoicebuttotakechancesbecauseestablishedtheoriesmaynotbeapplicableontheboundaryofwhatisknownandwhatisunknown.Onlyafterbeingexaminedthroughexperiments,practicesandobservations,cantheybeconfirmedorbelied.Inaword,planningandtakingchancesorrisksaredifferentmeansfordifferentlevelsofacademicresearches.

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