高中英语读后续写自由“八股文”

20+分的读后续写“自由八股文”的手把手示范前言：任何作文，只要是应试作文，就必然有套路，这个不是以人的意志为转移的，否则就无法做到公平公正地去评分。但是套路有高低之分的。高级的就属于个人独有的写作风格了。大部分这个套路只能在大量实践中才能总结出来。今天这个八股文模式，形式并非死板一块，而是非常自由的，同时我做了多次修改，可以说终于达到了第五档（20+）了。虽说是模板，但是此模板并非让你直接填词的哦，必要的思维拓展和用词积累还是必须具备的。希望本文对广大考生有借鉴作用。这个模板中的每个句子都是非常讲究的，请读者看下面的例子，可以说能应用在任何场合下（后面还需要不断润色）。十四个左右的句子涵盖：.无灵主语；.独立主格；.分词作状语；.形容词短语作状语;.定语从句；.what和it句型;.倒装句；.强调句；.状语从句.感叹句理论:见下面链接读后续写的“八”股文模板读后续写作文的续写套路：“三冲突、四途径”2021南京高三学情检测读后续写指导：乌龟的消失自由八股文模式：（每个步骤下面都有相应的高级句型，参考第一个链接）（1）情绪：消极情绪（有时积极）（2）细节：进一步解释描写（3）转折：个人的努力或借助外界（4）转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰（5）失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题（6）新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）（7）结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折（8）总结：点题，呼应前文例子：（2016年10月，浙江高考）夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，迷路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次援救但没有看见她，她感到很失望。Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.续写八股文思路1.Awaveofterrorsweptoverher.（情绪）2.Herheartpoundingfiercelyandherpalmssweating,aninnervoicetoldherthatshehadtofindasafeplace.（细节详述情绪）3.Tiredandterrifiedasshewas,Janepluckedhercouragetofeeltheway.（转折：个人努力）Luckily,itdidn'ttakelongbeforeshefoundacave.Sighingwithrelief,shefeltaglimmerofhope,sayingtoherself,“Tomorrowis（转机：成功，希望来了）

anotherday.6.Withthat,shewenttosleep,inwhosedreamherhusbandkepthercompany.（衔接句）ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.1.Hungryanddisappointed,shefoundnotanyhelicopteroverhead,atalosswhattodo.（主要问题）2.Itsuddenlydawnedonherthatsheshouldfindabigopenareafirst.（突然有了办法）3.Havinggobblingdownsomeblackberries,shecan'twaittosetoff.（开始做）4.Afterwhatseemedacentury,suchanareadidcomeintosight.（成功了）5.Herfacebrightenedup.（感受）6.Whatacoincidencethatmeanwhile,ahelicopterwasflyingtowardsher.（结果解决问题：无巧不成书，欢喜）7.Uponitslanding,outdashedherhusbandwhohuggedJanetightly,tearswellingupintheirheart.8.Itwasatthatmomentthattheydecidednottoquarrelanymorebutlearnedtocompromise.（总结）2.（2018年6月，浙江高考）父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路（"Don'tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon'tgetlost!"）。一路上，风景优美，让人陶醉。Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.续写八股文思路1.Awaveofnervousnesssweptovermeespeciallywhenthehorseranlikecrazy.（情绪）2.Myheartpoundingandmypalmssweating,aninnervoicetoldmethatIhadtocalmdown.（细节详述）3.Thoughinapanic,Ipluckedmycouragetopullonthereigns.（转折：个人努力）4.Luckily,itdidn'ttakelongbeforeIsettleddownthehorse.（转机：成功，希望来了）5.Justatthatmoment,Dadranover,gaspingforair.（衔接句：新问题来了）6.“Boy,wearewayoffthetrack.”Hesaidseriously,alookofconcernspreadingacrosshisface.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.1.Hungryandfrustrated,wetriedtofindawayoutbutinvain.（努力，失败）2.Itsuddenlydawnedonmewecouldrodedowntherivernearby.（突然有了办法）3.Unexpectedly,theriverbroughtustothefamiliartrackatlast.（开始做）4.Afterwhatseemedtwohours,UnclePaul'sfarmhousedidcomeintosight.（成功了）5.Myfather'sfacebrightenedup,sodidmine.（感受）6.Uponourarrival,UnclePaulcouldn'twaittoaskedus,“Wherehaveyoubee（幽默对话）n?Iamjustcalling 9n.7.“ToAlice'sWonderland"myfatheranswered,winkingatmewithabiggrin.8.Whatanunforgettableexperiencewehad!（总结）3.南京学情检测Lookingafterthousandsofturtles,dayafterday,wasnoeasytask.Frommorningtonight,turtlesfed,waterchangedandfloormopped,Albertfeltextremelyexhausted,asifonthevergeofcollapsing.（感受：疲劳）Reducedtobeinghomethewholeday,hepluckedupcouragetofacethefact,oftenclosetotears.Now,evenaglanceofhisbookbecamealuxury.（详细描述感受）“Poorboy,youcanfindawayoutintime,"sighedhisparents,pattinghimontheshoulderandleaving.Alberthadnoideawhattodo.However,oneday,hefoundastrangethingandfeltarayofhope.（问题的解决方法：外界的力量）Withdecreasingtimeoncomputergameswasthenumberofturtlesalsoindecline.（衔接句）WhenAlbertforgotabouthisbelovedcomputergames,theturtlesdisappeared.Heevencouldn'tbebotheredtoaskthereason.Nowhiscuriositygavewaytohisexcitementasifhewasrelievedofahugeburden.（感受）Morerelievedthanshockedwerehisparentswhohuggedhimtightly，tremblingwithdelightandurgedhimtogoout.（父母的感受）Afterwhatseemedacentury,hec