2023年江苏小升初题型专项突破-书面表达-真题20篇（Ⅰ）（含答案详解）

2023年江苏小升初题型专项突破书面表达-真题20篇（Ⅰ）学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________一、命题作文1．（2022·江苏淮安）你喜欢自己的家乡吗?你的家乡一年四季气候怎么样呢?在不同的季节你会和朋友及家人做哪些事情呢?请以Seasons为题，写一篇短文。要求：1.条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范，不少于5句。2.不得出现学校、班级以及自己的真实姓名。Seasons___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2022·江苏宿迁）泗阳曾被评为全国十大宜居城市之一，请你以“Welcometoourcity”为题，写一篇不少于40词短文，介绍一下美丽的泗阳吧。要求：1.围绕泗阳天气、美食、风景名胜等方面展开，可适当扩展。2.文中不得出现人名或者校名。3.语句通顺，书写工整。Welcometoourcity__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2021·江苏连云港）每个人都有自己的梦想，梦想或大或小，但我们都在为实现梦想而不断努力。请你以Mydream为题，用英文写一段话。要求：1.条理清晰，语句通顺，表达准确，书写规范；2.短文不少于5句话。Mydream__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2021·江苏·盐城市亭湖小学小升初模拟）我们的国家在日益强大。作为一名中国人，我们万分自豪，请以“WelcometoChina”为题，向大家介绍中国。要求：1.条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺。2.单词拼写正确，书写清晰规范，不少于50个单词。提示：可以从weather,cities,sport,animals,places...等方面介绍。WelcometoChina___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（2021·江苏·南京市光华东街小学小升初真题）金陵中学(JinlingHighSchool)校文学社推出了新海报，标题为“TogetherForTheFuture”(一起向未来)。文学社社长刘方邀请你写一篇文章，作为文学社征文范本。[要求]1.文章不少于80词，不少于6句话。2.涵盖海报所有要点，可适当发挥，全文准确通畅。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。“TogetherForTheFuture”2022isanewstart,whatmakesyouunforgettablein2021?Itcanbeactivities,TVprograms,news,greatpeopleandsoon.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Whenweenjoyourselves,dangerissometimesaroundus.Whatshouldweremembertodoandnottodotoavoidit?In2022,whatdoyouwanttosaytoothers?Writedownyourpassageandgiveittous!_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2021·江苏南通）随着生活水平的提高，人们的健康意识越来越强。如何拥有健康的饮食呢？请你结合所学知识做介绍。注：请做到书写规范、语句通顺，不少于5句话。AhealthydietInahealthydiet,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（2021·江苏南通）怎样做一名好学生呢？请以“Beingagoodstudent”为题，运用你所学的知识，从生活和学习习惯等方面写一段话。要求：1.以第一人称来写。2.条理清晰，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。3.不少于6句话。Beingagoodstudent__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．（2021·江苏·淮安市黄集九年制学校小升初真题）以Aparty为题写一篇不少于5句话的短文，要求书写工整，语句通顺。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．（2019·江苏苏州）学期即将结束，欢乐的暑假悄然而至。暑假你有什么计划？请以“Mysummerholiday”为题写一篇英语短文，至少5句。Mysummerholiday___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．（2019·江苏南通）同学们，你们一定有绚烂多彩的梦想。为了实现梦想，你们将如何做呢？请以“Mydream”为题，写一篇小短文与我们分享吧！要求：1.所写内容不少于六句话，不少于45个单词；2.语句通顺，标点正确，书写工整规范。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．（2019·江苏南京）Whatmustyoudotocrosstheroadsafely?Whatmustyounotdoontheroad?要求：1.根据提示及图意完成短文，信息不要缺漏。2.语句通顺，条理清楚，30~50词。RoadsafetyTocrossabusyroadsafely,wemust_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wemustnot__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．（2020·江苏南京）以“Beingagoodstudent”为题，写一篇短文。要求：1.必须包含图示中至少三个方面的要点，可适当发挥；2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确；3.不少于6句话。Beingagoodstudent__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．（2019·江苏南通）暑假即将到来，你对假期活动有什么计划和安排吗？请以Mysummerholidayplan为题写一篇短文，要求语言通顺，书写规范，不少于35词（不包括首句）。MysummerholidayplanSummerholidayiscomingsoon.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、提纲作文14．（2022·江苏徐州）即将告别小学生活了，想一想，在你的成长道路上，谁对你的帮助最大？请根据思维图提示，写一篇英文短文。注意：1.短文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。2.所写内容需覆盖思维导图中的全部信息，可作适当补充。3.正确使用大小写字母和标点符号，书写规范。4.短文不少于5句话。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．（2021·江苏宿迁）毕业啦！现在的你已养成了哪些好习惯？（比如：生活习惯，饮食习惯，规则意识等），还有不足的地方吗？你又打算如何改进呢？请结合以上内容谈谈自己。要求:1.内容要涉及以上三个问题，可适当发挥；2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确；3.不少于80字。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．（2022·江苏·南京致远外国语小学小升初模拟）我们每个人都会有梦想。即将毕业的你长大后想做什么呢?给你的朋友Jim写一封电子邮件，介绍你的梦想，并简单说一下原因以及如何努力实现梦想。（不少于5句）To:JimSubject:MydreamDearJim,I’mexcitedtowritethisemailtoyou.NowI’mgoingtotellyouaboutmydream.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Love,Youre-friend17．（2021·江苏淮安）请介绍一下你最喜欢城市的天气、风景、美食及相关活动等。要求：1.条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范，不少于5句。2.不得出现学校、班级以及自己的真实姓名。______ismyfavouritecity.It’sin______.Theweatheris______________________________You’ll______________________________You’ll______________________________You’ll______________________________18．（2021·江苏盐城）下面的表格介绍了刘涛的基本情况，根据表格内容以“MyfriendLiuTao”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下刘涛。个人信息姓名：刘涛上学方式：乘校车梦想：将来当医生年龄：13最喜爱的食物：水果、肉类(对健康有利)学校：太阳小学爱好：旅游(今年暑假将去北京)MyfriendLiuTaoIhaveafriend.HisnameisLiuTao.I’mtwelveyearsold.Heisoneyear_______thanme.He_______atSunPrimarySchool.He_______toschool_______schoolbus.Hisfavouritefoodarefruitand_______,becausetheyaregoodfor_______.Helikes_______._______summerholiday,he_______gotoBeijingwithhisparents._______adoctorinthefutureishisdream.19．（2019·江苏南京）Tom是一位英国男孩。下个月，他将来南京的一所中学交流学习。请根据下方的提示信息帮助他写一篇自我介绍吧！Age15SchoolMillHillSchoolLanguage（语言）English,ChineseHobbiesDreamjobSummerholidayplan要求：1.介绍的内容要包含上图中的所有信息，可适当地添加内容；2.语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。3.词数40左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。Hi,I'mTom._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三、图画作文20．（2019·江苏苏州）同学们，我们即将迎来小学阶段的最后一个暑假。你准备怎样安排呢？要求：1.根据思维导图的提示内容，写自己的暑期出行计划。(不少于6句话，不包括已给的开头)2.语句通顺，标点、语法正确，书写工整。3.可适当发挥。MyholidayplansThesummerholidayiscomingsoon.Iwill_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：1．范文：SeasonsTherearefourseasonsinmyhometown.Theyarespring,summer,autumnandwinter.Springiswarm,wecangoonapicnic.Summerishot,wecangoswimminginthesea.Autumniscoolwindy,wecanflykites.Winteriscold.Ilikewinterbest,becauseIcanplayinthesnow.Icanmakeasnowman.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己家乡的四季。然后再阐述每个季节的天气情况即可以做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：spring春天，summer夏天，autumn秋天，winter冬天，goonapicnic野餐，goswimming去游泳，flykites放风筝，makeasnowman堆雪人参考句型：Thereare...；Theyare...；Spring/Summer/Autumn/Winteris...,wecan...2．范文：WelcometoourcitySiyangisabeautifulcityinJiangsuProvince.It’snottoohotinsummerortoocoldinwinter.Soit’sagoodplacetotakeatrip.Therearemanydifferentkindsofdeliciousfoodhere.It’sfamousforsaltedduckandpears.Ithasalonghistoryandthereareplacesofinterestyoucanvisit.MacauCulturalParkisoneofthem.Ioftentakeawalkthere.Peoplehereareveryfriendly.Ifyouhavetime,youshouldreallytakeatriphere.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求以“Welcometoourcity”为题，写文章街上泗阳，可以围绕泗阳天气、美食、风景名胜等方面展开。注意文章为一般现在时态且满足词数要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：beautiful美丽的，province省，summer夏天，winter冬天，delicious美味的，saltedduck盐水鸭，history历史，placesofinterest名胜古迹，friendly友好的，takeatrip旅行参考句型：Siyangis…；It'snot…；Ithas...；Peopleherearevery...；Ifyouhavetime,youshould...3．范文：MydreamEveryonehashisorherdream.AndmydreamistobeanEnglishteacherbecauseIlikeEnglishsomuch.SoIneedtostudyhard.IoftenaskmyEnglishteacherforhelpwhenImeetdifficultquestions.Ialsohavemanyhobbies,likeplayingbasketballandplayingthepipa.SoIcanhavefunwithmystudentsinthefuture.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求写一写自己的梦想，包括有这样的梦想的原因和所付出的努力，句子主要是一般现在时。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：everyone每个人，because因为，studyhard努力学习，ask...forhelp向……寻求帮助，difficult困难的，question问题，hobby爱好，playbasketball打篮球，playthepipa弹琵琶，havefun玩得开心，inthefuture在未来参考句型：Everyonehas...；Andmydreamis...because...；Ioften...；SoIneedto...；Icanhavefunwith...4．范文：WelcometoChinaHello,welcometoChina.Itisthethirdbiggestcountryintheworld.Ithasmanybigcities,suchasBeijing,Shanghai,Guangzhou....ThesportsinChinaarestrongerandstronger.Wegotgoodgradesineverycompetition.Therearemanykindsofanimalsinourcountry.Onlyourcountryhaspandas.Therearealsomanyplacesofgreatinterest,suchastheGreatWall,theSummerPalace,thePalaceMuseum....Iamproudofourcountry.Ilovemycountry.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称和therebe句型描述自己的国家。然后再从城市，运动，名胜古迹等方面详细阐述。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：welcome欢迎，biggest最大的，suchas例如，competition竞赛，placesofgreatinterest名胜古迹，theSummerPalace颐和园，thePalaceMuseum故宫参考句型：Itis...；Ithas...；Thereare..；Iamproudof...5．例文：TogetherForTheFutureIn2022,Iwanttobeabettergirl.Iwillgotobedearly.Iwillputmybooksandtoysinorder.Iwanttobeahealthiergirl.Ilikeeatingsweetfood.Thatisbadforourteeth.SoIwilleatlesssweetfoodandmorefruiteverydayin2022.Ilikeplayingfootballandrunningontheroad.Thisisnotsafe.In2022,Iwillfollowtheroadrulesandstaysafeontheroad!Inaword,weshouldbreakourbadhabits,andbecomeabetterman.【详解】1.该题目是涵盖所给海报所有要点，写一篇标题为TogetherForTheFuture的文章，作为文学社征文范本。时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。注意字数要求，文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。2.参考词汇及参考句型：参考词汇：gotobedearly早睡，putmybooksandtoysinorder把我的书和玩具整理好，healthier更健康的，eatsweetfood吃甜食，playfootball踢足球，followtheroadrules遵守交通规则，staysafe保持安全，breakourbadhabits改掉坏习惯参考句型：Iwantto…；Iwill…；Ilike…；Weshould…6．范文：AhealthydietInahealthydiet,thereismuchfruitandvegetables.Thereisalsoalotofriceandbread.Youcanhavesomemeatandfishinyourmeals.Youcanalsohaveafeweggseveryweek.Milkisgoodforyourbody.Youcanhavesomemilkeveryday.Sweetfoodisnice,butitisnotgoodforyourteeth.Eatonlyalittlesweetfoodeveryday.【详解】题目解读：该题目要求写出健康的饮食对我们的身体很重要。具体要阐述在健康的饮食里，我们都需要吃哪些食物。哪些食物对身体有益处，哪些食物对身体有害处，注意文章为一般现在时并满足句子数量要求。参考词汇与句型：参考词汇：healthy健康的，vegetables蔬菜，isgoodfor对……有好处，Sweet甜的，参考句型：Thereis...；Youcan...；【点睛】7．范文：BeingagoodstudentTobeagoodstudent,Ishouldgotoschoolearly.Ishouldlistentomyteachersinclass.Ishouldkeepourclassroomcleanandtidy.WhenIcrosstheroad,Imustwaitforthegreenman.Imustn’trunorplayfootballontheroad.Ishouldfinishmyhomeworkontime.【详解】题目解读：该题目要求以第一人称介绍成为一名好学生的标准，文章时态为一般现在时，并满足句子数量要求。参考词汇与句型：参考词汇：should应该；cleanandtidy干净和整洁，waitfor等，ontime准时，参考句型：Ishould...；Imustn't...；【点睛】8．例文：Todayismybirthday.MynameisMike.Atmybirthdayparty,Motherusuallybuyssomeinterestingbooksformeandmyfatherusuallybuysapairofbeautifulshoesforme.Ilovemygifts.Myfriendsarecoming.Theboysandgirlsareenjoyingmybirthdayparty.They'relaughingandplayinggames.Whatanicebirthdayparty!【详解】1.题干解读：以Aparty为题写一篇不少于5句话的短文，语句通顺。第一人称。时态为一般现在时。2.参考词汇：friends朋友，present礼物，buy买，happy开心的3.参考句型：Thereisaparty...9．范文：MysummerholidaySummerholidayiscoming.IamgoingtodomanythingsthatIwanttodo.Forexample,Iwilljoinasoccerclub,becauseIlikeplayingsoccer.Duringthesummerholiday,Iwanttogotomygrandma'shouse,becauseImissherverymuch.Iwillstaywithherforseveraldays.ThenIwillhelpmymotherdosomehousework.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己的暑假。具体阐述自己的暑假计划。注意文章为一般将来时并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：summerholiday暑假，Forexample比如，playsoccer踢足球，miss想念，dosomehousework做家务参考句型：Iamgoingto…；Iwill…,because…；10．范文：MydreamEveryonehasadream.Ihaveadreamtoo.Iwanttobepianist.Tomakemydreamcometrue,Ishouldplaythepianoeveryday,Ishouldhavepianolessonseveryweek,Ishouldlistentosomesongs,Ishouldlintentomyteachercarefully.Whatisyourdream?【详解】主要考查学生运用所学词汇、句型、语法等内容进行组句成文的能力，考查学生的综合运用英语能力。这篇作文考查学生一个将来时的用法，语句通顺连贯。内容表达先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次，然后在该档次内评出分数。第一档（5-6分）完全符合题目要求，表达清楚，结构完整，语言通顺，语意连贯，内容丰富，句式有变化，字数达标，基本或完全没有语言错误。第二档（3-4分）基本符合题目要求，表达基本清楚，结构较完整，语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，句式较简单，有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。第三档（1-2分）大部分内容符合，但表达不清楚，结构不完整，内容前后连贯性不强。第四档（1分以下）很少内容符合题目要求，内容凌乱，表达中满是错误，所写内容难以理解。☆书写不规范，卷面不整洁，酌情扣1分。11．范文：RoadsafetyTocrossabusyroadsafely,wemustlookatthetrafficlightsfirst.Whenthelightisred,wemustwait.Whenthelightisgreen,wecancrosstheroad.Wemustn’trunontheroad.Wemustn’tplayonthestreet,too.It’sdangerous.Tokeepsafeontheroad,wemustfollowtherules.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称描述如何保持马路安全。然后再阐述在马路上必须做和一定不能做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：safely安全地，dangerous危险的，follow遵守参考句型：Tocrossabusyroadsafely,wemust…；.When…wecan…；Wemustn’t…12．范文：BeingagoodstudentAsastudent,itisveryimportantforustoknowwhattodoandwhatnottodo.Atschool,weshouldgotoschoolontime.Don'tbelateforclass.Inclass,weshouldlistentotheteachercarefully.Homeworkmustbedone.Don'tcopyother'shomework.Weshouldtakeanactivepartinsportsandkeephealthy.Whenwaitingforabus,wemuststandinlineandwaitforourturn.Don'tpushorjumpthequeue.Don'tlitterthingsabout.It'sourdutytoprotecttheenvironmentaroundus.【详解】题干解读：这是个命题作文，也是个提纲作文，根据所给的要点，可以通过这几个要点来说明做一名优秀的学生的要求。用一般现在时写即可。不少于6句话。参考词汇：ontime准时，belatefor迟到，listento听，copy抄写参考句型：Itisveryimportantforusto...，Weshould...，Don't...，It'sourdutyto...【点睛】13．范文：MysummerholidayplanSummerholidayiscomingsoon.IwillgotoBeijing.Iwillgotherebyplane.Iwillstaythereforaweek.Iwillvisitmyauntanduncle.TherearemanyinterestingplacesinBeijing.Iwillvisitthemwithmyparents.Iwilltakesomephotos.IhopeIwillhaveagoodtime.【详解】题干解读：该题目要求以Mysummerholidayplan为题写一篇短文，注意文章时态并要符合单词数量要求。并要求语言通顺，书写规范，参考词汇与句型：参考单词：gotoBeijing去北京，staythere待在那里，visit拜访，manyinterestingplaces很多有趣的地方，takesomephotos拍一些照片参考句型：Summerholidayis…；Iwill…；Thereare…；Ihope…；14．范文：Hello,I'mLingling.I'mgoingtoleavemyprimaryschoolsoon.Ihaveagoodfriend.SheisMissLi.Sheismymathsteacher.Sheistallandthin.Shehelpedmealotwithmaths.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据思维导图，写一篇英文短文。然后再阐述在成长的道路上谁帮助你最多，他/她是做什么的，他/她的外貌特征，写清楚为什么你认为他/她帮助你最多。注意时态的用法并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：primaryschool小学，maths数学，tall高的，thin瘦的，helpsbwithsth在某事上帮助某人参考句型：I'mgoingto…；Ihave…；Sheis…；She…；15．范文：Ihavealotofgoodhabits.Igetupearlyandnevergotobedlate.Ioftenputthingsinorder.Iusuallyhelpmymumwithhousework.Whencrossingtheroad,Ialwayslookforazebracrossing.Ialsolookatthetrafficlightsandwaitforthegreenlight.ButIstillhavemanybadhabits.Ilikeeatingsweets,cakesandicecreams.Iofteneatalotofmeat.ButIdon'tlikevegetables.Idon’tliketoplaysports,either.SoI’mfatnow.Tokeephealthy,Iamgoingtoeatalotofvegetablesandfruit.I’mgoingtodoexerciseseveryday.IhopeIwillhaveahealthydietsoon.【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己已经养成的好习惯，还有哪些不足，以及打算怎样改进。注意文章时态为一般现在时和一般将来时并要符合单词数量要求，确保书写规范。2.参考词汇与句型：参考词汇：habits习惯，getup起床，like喜欢，vegetable蔬菜，healthy健康的参考句型：Ihave...；Ioften...；Ilike...；Iamgoingto...16．例文：DearJim,I’mexcitedtowritethisemailtoyou.NowI’mgoingtotellyouaboutmydream.Iwanttobeasinger.Ilikesingingverymuch.IcansingChinesesongsandEnglishsongs.Iwillstudyhardtolearnsinging.EverydayIwillsingsongs.Ihopemydreamcancometrue.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写自己的梦想，首先要