高考英语热点题型训练

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书面表达概要写作

【命题趋势】

提供一篇350以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。

考查要求：

对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；

应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；

上下文的连贯性；

对各要点表达的独立性情况。

【满分技巧】

如何确保要点齐全？【诀窍】

划分段落【不以自然段为单位】

段落数=要点数

说明文的段落划分

L描述某事物的性质功用等：

性质/定义一功用/功能一应用/利好

2.针对某问题提出解决办法或措施：

问题一成因一解决方法/措施

3.介绍某现象及其原因结果：

现象一原因一结果

议论文的段落划分

三要素：论点、论据和结论：

论点一论据1……论据n—结论

记叙文的段落划分

人物、情节(whodidwhat)、时间、地点：

夹叙夹议者：+观点/哲理性推论：

情节1一情节2……情节n一启示

【热点话题】社会热点；学生生活；暑期活动

【限时检测】（建议用时：30分钟）

（2019年浙江省高考真题）

话题：父母鼓励孩子的方式难度：★★建议用时：5分

第二节读后续写（满分25分）

67.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Parentseverywherepraisetheirkids.JennBerman,authorofTheAtoZGuidetoRaisingHappyandConfident

Kids,says,"We'vegonetotheoppositeextremeofafewdecadesagowhenparentstendedtobemorestrict,^^By

givingkidsalotofpraise,parentsthinkthey'rebuildingtheirchildren'sconfidence,when,infact,itmaybejustthe

opposite.Toomuchpraisecanbackfireand,whengiveninawaythat'sinsincere,makekidsafraidtotrynewthings

ortakeariskforfearofnotbeingabletostayontopwheretheirparents'praisehasputthem.

Still,don'tgotoofarintheotherdirection.Notgivingenoughpraisecanbejustasdamagingasgivingtoomuch.

Kidswillfeellikethey'renotgoodenoughorthatyoudon'tcareand,asaresult,mayseenopointintryinghardfor

theiraccomplishments.

Sowhatistherightamountofpraise?Expertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthanthequantity.

Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome,youcangiveitasoftenasyourchilddoessomething

thatdeservesaverbalreward.44Weshouldespeciallyrecognizeourchildren'seffortstopushthemselvesandwork

hardtoachieveagoal,^^saysDonahue,authorofParentingWithoutFear.LettingGoofWorryandFocusingonWhat

ReallyMatters.t4Onethingtorememberisthatit'stheprocessnottheendproductthatmatters.”

Yoursonmaynotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisteam.Butifhe'soutthereeverydayandplayinghard,you

shouldpraisehiseffortregardlessofwhetherhisteamwinsorloses.Praisingtheeffortandnottheoutcomecanalso

meanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehasworkedhardtocleantheyard,cookdinner,orfinishabookreport.But

whateveritis,praiseshouldbegivenonacase-by-casebasisandbeproportionate（木目称的）totheamountofeffort

yourchildhasputintoit.

【写作思路】完成一篇概要写作，需要经过三个步骤，

1.读懂原文，抓住段落主题句。在阅读过程中，需要准确把握文章的段落大意，学会剔除非重要信息，弄

清楚不同体裁的文章的内部逻辑关系以及文章的篇章结构。

2.组织语言，转换表达。在找到主题句明确全文中心的基础上，组织好语言，注重语言表达的独立性和准

确性以及高级性，不全盘照抄原文句子，尽量用自己的语言转换表达，同时要注意篇幅的比例安排，用较

多的文字去表达重要的内容。

3.通读全文，逻辑连贯。要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接，用恰当的关联词去连贯全文。

【参考范文】

Parentstendtogotoextremeswhenitcomestopraisingtheirkids.（要点）Yet,bothtoomuchandtoolittle

praisecanbeequallydamaging.（要点二）Whengivingpraise,parentsshouldbesincereandconcentrateonthe

processinsteadoftheresult.（要点三）Similarly,theyoughttogivepraiseforhowmuchefforttheirkidshave

investedintheworkthey'reinvolvedin.（要点四）

【名师点评】

本次浙江高考书面表达采用了概要写作题型。概要写作是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁，考查的是

学生在实现自由的思维表达之前，对他人的信息在理解的基础上进行概括表达的能力。选材上，提供一篇

350词以内的短文，题材不限，要求考生写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。

B

（2020届江苏南京师大苏州实验学校高三上第一次模拟考）

话题：机器人难度：★★建议用时.：5分

请认真阅读下面的短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Robotswillcreatedoublethenumberofjobsthattheywilldestroy,accordingtotheWorldEconomic

Forum(WEF),buttherewillbesignificantshiftsinthestructureofAmerica'sworkforcethatmayimpacteveryone.

Thereportsaysthat75millionjobswillbereplacedbyartificialintelligence(AI),roboticsandautomation.Butit

alsosuggeststhat133millionnewjobsmaybecreatedasorganizationsshiftthebalancebetweenhumanworkers

andmachines.

Itisawidelyheldbeliefthatroutine,low-skilledjobsaremostatriskforautomation,butthereportshowsthat

manymiddle-classrolesarealsoatrisk.Financialanalysts,accountantsandlawyerscouldallseesignificant

changesby2022.Butmanualworkerscouldbeamongthehardesthit.

Meanwhile,therecouldbeahugechangeinthestructureoftheworkforce,withtheexecutivessurveyedby

WEFexpectingashiftawayfromfull-timeworktoflexibleemploymentwithafocusonproductivity.

Allindustriesexpectbigskillsgaps,statingthatatleast50percentoftheirworkforcewillrequirereskillingof

somedegree.Theaviation,travelandtourismindustrywillhavethelargestdemandforreskilling.

【写作内容】

1.用约30个单词述短文的主要内容；

2.用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：

（1）这一现象产生的原因有哪些（不少于两点）；（2）面对即将到来的“智能时代''你所做的准备。

【写作要求】

1.阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句；

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。

【参考范文】

【概要】

Robotsarereplacinghumanbeingsbutarealsocreatingtwiceasmanyjobsastheyhavedestroyed,bringing

aboutgreatchangesinthestructureofworkforceandrequirementsforreskilling.

【论述】

Behindthephenomenonarevariousreasons.Foronething,greatadvancesinscienceandtechnologymakeit

possibleforrobotstobewidelyemployedinmanyfields.Foranother,productivityhasbeengreatlyincreasedby

usingrobots,whichinturnhelpspromotethepopularityofrobots.Meanwhile,thewidespreadapplicationofrobots

hasgeneratedgreatchangesinthewaypeopleworkaswellastheirchoicesofjobs.

Feelingluckytoliveintheintelligentage,I'dliketoequipmyselfwithrelevantknowledgeandenjoythe

convenienceitbringsus.Besides,Iwilltrytocultivatecreativethinkingandthesenseofinnovationsoastomeet

theurgentneedsofthefastdevelopmentofscienceandtechnology.

（2020届新素养大二轮专题浙京津鲁琼版模拟卷1）

话题：手机摄影大赛+收集难度：★★建议用时.：5分

第一节应用文写作（满分15分）

假如你是李华，获悉中国日报（。初〃4。山/），）将举办“厉害了，我的国”（AmazingChina）手机摄影大赛。

请写封邮件建议你的美国留学生朋友George参加，邮件内容包括：

1.作品要求：展示风土人情，附上作品名称；

2.投稿方式与截止时间：12月30日前发邮件至〃c@

3.表示愿意提供帮助。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

DearGeorge,

Howiseverythinggoing?______________________________________________________________________

Yours,LiHua

第二节阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Whileittakestime,energyandmoneythatcouldsurelybeputtoamuchmoreproductiveuse,thereare

millionsofcollectorsaroundtheworld.Peoplecollectpostcards,chocolatewrappersorwhateverthey

like.Collectingmustbeoneofthemostvariedhumanactivities,andit'sonethatmanypsychologistsfind

fascinating.Manyformsofcollectinghavebeendignifiedwithatechnicalname:anarctophilistcollectsteddy

bears,aphilatelistcollectspostagestampsandadeltiologistcollectspostcards.

Therearepeoplewhocollectsomethingbecausetheywanttomakemoney,andthiscouldbecalledan

instrumentalreasonforcollecting,thatis,collectingasameanstoanend.Theywilllookfor,say,antiques（古董）

thattheycanbuycheaplyandexpecttobeabletosellataprofit.Buttheremaywellbeapsychologicalfactortoo:

buyingcheapandsellingdearcankeepthecollectorasenseofachievement.Andassellingonlineissoeasy,more

peoplearejoiningin.

Ifyouthinkaboutcollectingpostagestamps,anotherpotentialreasonforitisitseducationalvalue.Stamp

collectingopensawindowtoothercountriesandtotheplants,animalsorfamouspeopleshownonthestamps.

Similarly,inthenineteenthcenturymanycollectorsamassed（积累）animalsandplantsfromaroundtheglobeand

theircollectionsprovideavastamountofinformationaboutthenaturalworld.Withoutthosecollections,our

understandingwouldbegreatlyinferiortowhatitis.

Notallcollectorsareinterestedinlearningfromtheirhobby,though,sowhatwemightcallapsychological

reasonforcollectingistheneedforasenseofcontrolandasenseoffulfillment,perhapsasawayofdealingwith

insecurity.Stampcollectors,forinstance,arrangetheirstampalbums,usuallyveryneatly,organizingtheir

collectionsaccordingtocertaincommonplaceprinciples-perhapsbycountryinalphabeticorderorgrouping

stampsbywhattheydescribe-people,birds,mapsandsoon.

【应用文范文】

DearGeorge,

Howiseverythinggoing?IhavesomeexcitingnewsforyouthatChinaDailywillholdamobilephoto

contestnameduAmazingChina”.Iknowyouhaveagreatloveforphotography,sowhynotgiveitatry?

Thecontestwelcomessubmissionsaboutnaturalscenery,attractivefiguresorlocalcustomsofChina.Itwill

bebetterifeachphotoisaccompaniedwithatitle.You'dbettersendyourphotostoac@andthe

deadlineforentrieswillbeDec.30th.

Ibelieveitisagreatopportunitytoshareyourpreciousexperienceswithus.Ifyouareinterested,Vmmore

thanhappytobeyourhelperandoffermyadvice.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyourgreatworks.

Yours,LiHua

【概要范文】

Collectingwinstheheartsofmanypeopledespitethetime,effortandmoneytheyhavetoinvest.Tomakea

fortuneisoneofthereasonsaccountingfbrthehabitofcollecting,whereasenseofaccomplishmentisalso

granted.Itsacademicmeritsarealsoobviousbecausepeoplemayhaveabettercomprehensionoftheworldwiththe

informationtheircollectionsprovide.Actually,peoplesometimesjustenjoythefeelingofdominationand

collectingservesasahobbytoresistinsecurity.

D

（2020届江苏专用增分冲刺卷1）

话题：快餐连锁难度：★★建议用时：5分

请认真阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Asglobalfast-foodchainsandcoffeeshopsbeginphasingout（逐步淘汰）single-useplasticstraws,

McDonald'sChinaintroduceda"strawless”lid（盖子）forcoldbeveragesat10BeijingrestaurantsonNov.1,2018.

Likemanyconsumers,WuYanmei,abankclerkinBeijing,hadneverthoughtabouttheimpactasimplestraw

couldhaveontheenvironment/4Actually,Idon'tlikeusingstraws,butthecupsatfast-foodrestaurantsareall

designedforusewithastraw,“shesaid.'Tdon'tthinkstrawsarenecessary,sothemovesareagoodwaytoraise

people'sawarenessofnotusingsingle-useplasticproducts.^^

However,JiangJianguo,aprofessorofenvironmentalstudiesatTsinghuaUniversity,saidhedoubtssuch

activitiesalonecanhaveamajoreffectontheglobalpollutionproblem/41don'tthinkthemovebyMcDonald'swill

beasuccessbecausepreviouslytherewerelotsofhotelscallingforabanonsingle-useplastics,butitendedin

nothingbecausebusinessescompetebytryingtomakethingsconvenientforconsumers,“hesaid.

写作内容：

1.用约30个单词概括上述材料的主要内容；

2.用约120词谈谈你对“快餐连锁店逐步弃用塑料吸管”的看法，并用2〜3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

写作要求：1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3.不必写标题。

【背诵范文】

【概要】Fast-foodchainslikeMcDonald'shavetakenactiontostopusingplasticstrawsgraduallytobe

environmentallyfriendly,butastowhethersuchamovecanhaveeffectsonimprovingtheenvironment,people

holddifferentopinions.

【论述】Thoughplasticstrawscanaffordpeoplegreatconvenience,Ithinkphasingthemoutinfast-food

chainsisadvisable.First,plasticsareamajorsourceofpollutionbecausethey'redifficulttodegrade.Therefbre,

phasingthemoutisgreatlybeneficialtotheenvironment,suchasremindingpeopleoftheurgencytoprotectthe

environment.Moreover,withoutstraws,consumerscanstillhavetheirdrinks.Sowhymustweequipeachdrink

withastraw?Whydon'twesavesuchresourcesforotheruses?Maybe,somewhere,theplasticssavedcanmake

abigdifferencetothesociety.

Asaseniorthreestudent,IhopealltheChinesepeoplewilltakeanactivepartinthecampaignagainstusing

plasticstraws,whichisofgreatbenefitforourlivingenvironment.

E

(2020届浙江省绿色评估联盟高三10月试题)

话题：英语竞赛+高科技对学生的影响难度：★★建议用时.：5分

第一节应用文写作

假定你是李华，报名参加了“全国中学生英语能力竞赛”(NEPCS)。赛前，为更好地提高写作能力，请给

外教Michael写封邮件，请他帮忙修改一篇作文并提出建议。

注意:

1.词数80左右;

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

第二节阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Nowadays,moreandmorecollegestudentshavenoproblemwalkingintoaclassroomandopeningtheir

laptops.Othersmayspendanentirestudyperiodwithasmartphoneinhand.Somepeoplearguethattheincreasing

useoftechnologycanhavemanyhelpfuleffectsonsociety.Butarecentresearchsuggeststhatusingtechnology

duringclasstimemayharmcollegestudents'abilitytorememberandprocessthesubjectmaterial.

ArnoldGlass,aprofessorinRutgersUniversityinNewJersey4,andastudentresearcherinvestigatedtheissue

ofdividedstudentattention.Thestudyinvolved118Rutgersstudentswhoweretakingthesamelevelcollegeclass.

Thestudentswerepermittedtouseanyelectronicdeviceduringhalfoftheirdailyclassperiods.Duringtheother

half,noonewasallowedtouseanytechnology.

Theresearchersfoundthattheaveragedailyquizresultsshowednoevidenceofharmfuleffectsfromtheuse

oftechnology.However,theaverageresultsofthelargertestsandfinalexamshowedthatallthestudents

performedpoorlywhentheywerepermittedtousetechnologyintheclassroom.Glassarguesthatitshowstheuse

ofelectronicdevicesintheclassroompreventsstudentsfromprocessinginformation.Whenthestudentshearwhat

theprofessorissaying,theymightbebuyingthingsonlineorreadingunrelatedemailsatthesametime.Andthat,

Glasssays,makesitharderfortheinformationtoentertheirlongtermmemory.Eventhoughthestudentsknow

whattheprofessorsaidatthattime,theynolongerrememberitaweeklaterbecausetheymissedtheopportunity.

However,LaurenMargulieux,anassistantprofessoratGeorgiaStateUniversityinAtlantaarguesthatthere

aretimeswhenclassroomuseoftechnologyisunavoidable.So,hesays,educatorsneedtoconsiderthatsomething

otherthantechnologyisdistractingstudents.

Infact,aspecialsoftwareprogramhasbeencreated.Studentscanusetheprogram,whichengagesstudents

morewiththeclassmaterialontheirpersonaldevicesduringagivenclass.Itcanalsobeusedtoobservestudent

activityandpreventthemfromopeningunrelatedpagesandprograms.

【背诵范文】

第一节应用文写作

DearMichael,

IhavesignedupfortheNEPCS.Inpreparationforit,IthinkwhatIamindesperateneedofistoimprovemy

writingability.Wouldyoupleasedomeafavoraboutit?

I'vefinishedanessay,butstillfinditfarfromsatisfactory.I'mnotsureoftheproperexpressionsofsome

Englishwords,whichmakestheessaylacknaturalness.Besides,theremayalsobesomemistakesingrammarand

sentencepattern.SoIwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththeseproblems.

1wouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

第二节概要写作

Arecentresearchshowsusingtechnologyinclassmaypreventcollegestudentsrememberingandprocessing

information.（要点、一）118studentsparticipatedintheresearchwheretheyusedtechnologyduringhalfofclass

periods.（要点二）Theresearchersfoundinthelongrunthestudents5performanceswerepoorwhenusing

technologybecausetheyweredistracted.（要点三）Butanotherresearcherthinkssomethingelseexcepttechnology

istoblamefordistractingstudents.（要点四）Actually,aspecialsoftwareprogramhasbeenmadetokeepstudents

focused.（要点五）（76woids）

F

（2020届浙江省绿色评估联盟高三10月试题）

话题：暑假户外活动难度：★★建议用时：5分

请认真阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Adecadeago,summervacationforcollegestudentswasallaboutoutdooractivities,whethertheytraveled

withtheirfriendsorconductedfieldwork.Nowadays,whiletherearestillstudentswholovetogooutside,the

majorityofstudentsprefertostayindoors.

AccordingtoarecentsurveyonChinesecollegestudents'summervacationactivitiesbyTheDynasty,almost

60percentoftherespondentssaythattheybarelystepoutside.Wakingupnaturally,surfingtheInternetalldaylong

andorderingsometakeoutfoodhavebecomethenewnorm.

Theindoortrendamongcollegestudentshasundoubtedlyraisedsomeconcern.ZhuHaoliang,anassociate

professorofpsychologyatWenzhouUniversity,warnsthatstudents9lackofoutdooractivitiesnotonlyaffectstheir

physicalcondition,butalsoweakenstheirpsychologicalwell-being.

“Humansareborntobesocial.Wegainself-esteemandself-respectthroughsocialinteractions,“hetold

ChinaScienceDaily."Iftheyarespendingtoomuchtimeathome,studentsmayloseinterestinlifeorevensuffer

fromsocialanxiety,lonelinessanddepression,“headded.

【写作内容】

1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

2.用约120词阐述你对“大学生暑假期间宅在家里”的看法，并用2〜3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。

【背诵范文】

【概要】

Nowadays,manycollegestudentsprefertostayindoorsduringtheirsummervacationratherthantakepartin

outdooractivities,whichaccordingtoauniversityassociateprofessor,coulddoharmtotheirphysicalandmental

health.

【论述】

Icouldn'tagreemorewiththeprofessor.Firstly,stayingindoorsmeanstherewillbealackofexercise.Asthe

sayinggoes,"Asoundmindisinasoundbody.,,Thatistosay,one'smindandbodyarecloselyrelated.Ifone's

physicalhealthfails,hismindwillbeverylikelytosuffer.Secondly,wehumanbeingsarecreaturesthatinteract

greatlywithothermembersinoursociety.Withourpersonaldevelopmenthighlydependentontheoverall

developmentofoursociety,withoutsocialinteractions,we'llbecutofffromtheoutsideworld,fallintoloneliness

andevensufferfromdepression.

Therefore,asfarasIamconcerned,collegestudentsshouldgooutsideratherthanstayathomeduringtheir

summervacation.

G

（2020浙江宁波诺丁汉大学附属中学二上期中）

话题：工作难度：★★建议用时：5分

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

WorkisaveryimportantpartoflifeintheUnitedStates.Whentheearlyimmigrantscametothiscountry,

theybroughttheideathatworkwasthewaytoGodandheaven.ThisattitudestillinfluencesAmericatoday.Work

isnotonlyimportantforthesalary,butalsoforsocialandpsychologicalworking,beingproductive.Formost

Americans,theyarewhattheydo.Whathappens,then,whenapersonretiresattheageofsixty-fiveorseventy?

It'seasytoimaginethatretirementisnoeasything.Retireesoftenfeeltheyareunproductiveandnolongerneeded

byothers.

Oncepeopleretire,theymayalsogetintofinancialtrouble.ManypeoplerelyonSocialSecuritychecksevery

month.Duringtheirworkingyears,employeescontributeacertainpercentageoftheirsalariestothegovernment.

Whenpeopleretire,theyreceivethismoneyasincome.Thesechecksdonotprovideenoughmoneytoliveon,

however,becausepricesareincreasingveryrapidly.Afterretirement,theyhavetochangetheirlifestyles.They

havetospendcarefullytobesurethattheycanaffordtobuyfood,fuel,andothernecessities.

Ofcourse,notallseniorcitizensfeelsadwhentheyareinfaceofretirement.Workingforsomanyyears,

theyeventuallyhavetimetospendwiththeirfamiliesortoenjoytheirhobbiessuchasreading,travelingorjoining

someseniorcitizenclubs.Somecontinuetoworkparttime;otherschoosetodovolunteerworklikehelpingyoung

peopletogetstartedinnewbusiness.

Americangovernmentistakingstepstoeasetheproblemsofretiredpeople.Theyarebuildingnewhousing,

offeringdiscountsinstoresandmuseumsandonbuses,andprovidingotherservices,suchasfreecourses,food

service,andhelpwithhousework.Itiswisetodoso.Retiredcitizensareanimportantpartofthepopulationand

theirspecialneedsmustbeconcernedabout.Afterall,everyonewillbeaseniorcitizensomeday.

【参考范文】

WorkplaysanextremelyimportantroleinAmericanculture,sopeoplefindretirementdifficultastheymay

feeluselesswithoutjobs.（要点1）RetirementcanalsobringfinancialproblemsasSocialSecuritychecksdon't

provideenoughmoney.（要点2）However,someseniorcitizensfeelhappyaboutretirementastheyfinallyget

timetodowhattheyreallywant.（要点、3）Americangovernmentissolvingretiredcitizens'problemsand

concerningtheirspecialneeds,whichiswiseandnecessary,becauseeveryonewillgetold.（要点4）

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书面表达热点话题类（二）

【热点话题】垃圾分类、运动比赛、共享单车、手机低头族、科技创新

【限时检测】（建议用时：30分钟）

话题：垃圾分类难度：★★建议用时：6分钟

假定你是大庆实验中学高三学生会主席李华，实验中学被选定为大庆市垃圾分类试点单位，请你根据

以下要点写一篇倡议书，倡议全体同学垃圾分类，内容包括：

1.告知学校要进行垃圾分类；

2.垃圾分类的重要意义：

3.提出倡议。

词数：100词左右；

参考词汇：垃圾分类wastesorting/rubbishclassification可回收的recyclable

Dearfellowstudents,

Thankyou!

Yours,

LiHua

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Dearfellowstudents,

Ourschoolhasbeenselectedasoneoftheexperimentalunitsforrubbishclassification.Differentkindsof

garbagearerequiredtobesortedoutandplacedindifferentdustbins.Papercanberecycled,whileleftoverscan

becollectedasfoodforpigsorprocessedasfertilizerforplants.Aboveall,suchharmfulthingsasplasticsandused

batteriesshouldnotbemixedwithotherwastes.

Theprogramisofgreatbenefit.Wewillbeabletosaveresourcesbymakinguseofrecyclablegarbageand

harmfulthingswillnotpolluteourenvironmentafterspecialtreatment.

Let'sworktogetherforabettercampus!

【写作思路】

这是一封倡议信。写倡议信语言应简洁明了，用词精准，内容明确。根据内容提示可知，写作主要分

为三部分：倡议内容、垃圾分类的意义以及提出倡议。

第1步：审题。确定时态和人称。根据提示：你作为学生会主席，向大家发起倡议。时态应以一般现在时

为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。

第2步：确定关键词（组），提炼写作要点。如：experimentalunits（试点）,sortout（分类），becollectedas

foodforpigs（回收喂猪），beprocessedasfertilizerforplants（被加工成植物肥料），mixedwith（混在一起）

等。

第3步：对写作要点遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美

观的卷面是非常重要的。

【写作亮点】

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。符合英语表达习惯，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

范文内容完整，段落清晰，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。第一段话介绍垃圾分类的内容都是用了

被动语态，阐述的客观准确。第一段第三句话使用while连接了两个并列句，最后一句话中使用了such...as...

词组，提升了语言档次。第二段第一句话使用了"of+名词"短语，第二句话用and连接了两个并列句，而

且介词by与after使用的也很巧妙。本文中前后使用的介词值得大家推敲，供大家以后写作中使用。全文中

没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。且全文语句间过渡自然，为文章增色添彩。

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（河北省承德市2018届高三上学期期末考试）

话题：运动比赛难度：★★建议用时：6分钟

假定你是李华。外教Peter计划于本周日组织你校学生进行一场橄榄球比赛，并委托你以学生会名义用

英语写一则通知，主要内容包括：

1.比赛时间和场地；

2.提前到场以了解规则;

3.准备运动装备，注意安全。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】

NOTICE

ThereisarugbymatchtobeheldthisSundayonourschoolplayground.Everystudentiswelcometowatch

thematchorganizedbyMrPeter.Studentswhoareinterestedinrugbycanjoininthematch.Andtherearesome

importantthingseverybodyshouldpayattentionto.

Firstly,anyparticipantshouldgototheplaygroundontimesothattherewillbeenoughtimeleftforMrPeter

toexplainsomerulesaboutrugby.Secondly,eachplayershouldwearsportsclothesandshoes.Itwillbebetterif

youhaveaprotectivehelmet.Lastbutnotleast,everyplayershouldfocusonyourownsafety.Boysandgirls,let's

moveandjointogether.

【写作思路】

这是一篇提纲类作文。主要考查学生运用所学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能，准确表达客

观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力。

【一】解题思路。1.认真审题，抓住信息点。除了列出的三条要点，还有外教Peter计划于本周II组织你校

学生进行一场橄榄球比赛。2.注意人称，确定时态。本文用第二人称，面向全体学生。现在和将来时态。

3.文体是书面通知。4.恰当运用高级句型和关联词。5.书写工整，卷面清洁。

【二】范文亮点。

Firstly,secondly,lastbutnotleast使行文层次分明。

whoareinterestedinrugby,everybodyshouldpayattentionto定语从句

sothattherewillbeenoughtimeleftforMrPetertoexplainsomerulesaboutrugby,ifyouhaveaprotective

helmet.原因，条件状语从句，等高级句型增强了逻辑性

leftforMrPetertoexplainsomerulesaboutrugby过去分词短语作后置定语

(广东省茂名市2018届高三上学期第一次综合测试)

话题：共享单车难度：★★建议用时：6分

近来，共享单车(sharedbikes)成为中国时尚，它因方便、环保而广受好评，然而共享单车也出现了许多

弊病，例如乱停放、人为破坏、非法占有等。假如你是光明中学的学生李华，请你将有关情况反映给政府

相关部门并阐述你的看法。内容要点包括：

1.共享单车的问题；

2.出现问题的原因；

3.解决问题的意见或建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearSir,

Yours,

LiHua

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DearSir,

I'mLiHua,astudentfromGuangmingmiddleschool.Tmwritingtoexpressmyopinionsabouttheshared

bike.

Beingconvenientandenvironmentallyfriendly,sharedbikeshavealreadybeenpopularthroughoutChina.

However,withitsrapiddevelopment,itbringsaboutmanyproblems.Insomeplacessharedbikesareleft

everywhereandsidewalksareoccupied.What'sworse,somepeopleevendamagethemortakethemjustastheir

ownpossessions.

Inmyopinion,it'sthelackofpublicawarenessandrelatedlawsthatresultsinsuchphenomena.Tosolvethe

problems,measuresmustbetakenrightaway.First,thegovernmentshouldmakesomestrictlawsandrulesto

regulatetheoperationandmanagementofthesharedbikes.Second,thepublicshouldraisetheirawarenessof

usingth