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第11页共11第11页共11页雅思写作范文之利弊类雅思写作大作文范文:城市生活的利弊Moreandmorepeoplearemigratingtocitiesinsearchofabetterlife,butcitylifecanbeetremelydifficult.Esomeofthedifficultiesoflivinginacity.Howcangovernmentsmakeurbanlifebetterforeveryone?范文:Citiesareoftenseenasplacesofopportunity,buttherearealsosomemajordrawbacksoflivinginalargemetropolis.Inmyopinion,governmentscoulddomuchmoretoimprovecitylifefortheaverageinhabitant.Themainproblemforanyonewhohopestomigratetoalargecityisthatthecostoflivingislikelytobemuchhigherthanitisinasmalltownorvillage.Inhabitantsofcitieshavetopayhigherpricesforhousing,transport,andevenfood.Anotherissueisthaturbanareastendtosufferfromsocialproblemssuchashighcrimeandpovertyratesincomparisonwithruralareas.Furthermore,theairqualityincitiesisoftenpoor,duetopollutionfromtraffic,andthestreetsandpublictransportsystemsareusuallyAsaresult,citylifecanbeunhealthyandstressful.However,therearevariousstepsthatgovernmentscouldtaketotackletheseproblems.Firstly,theycouldinvestmoneyinthebuildingofaffordableorsocialhousingtoreducethecostofliving.Secondly,politicianshavethepowertobanvehiclesfromcitycentresandpromotetheuseofcleanerpublictransport,whichwouldhelptoreducebothairpollutionandtrafficcongestion.InLondon,fore某ample,theintroductionofacongestionchargefordrivershashelpedtocurbthetrafficproblem.Athirdoptionwouldbetodevelopprovincialtownsandruralareas,bymovingindustryandjobstothoseregions,inordertoreducethepressureonmajorcities.Inconclusion,governmentscouldcertainlyimplementarangeofmeasurestoenhancethequalityoflifeforallcityresidents.雅思写作谈谈科技发展的利弊题目:peopletodaycanperformtheeverydaytasksasshopping,bankingorevenbusinesstransactions,withoutmeetingothersface-toface.Whateffectswillthisphenomenonhaveonindividualsandsocietyasawhole?分析:题目的大意是指,如今人们购物、银行甚至商业交易都可以通过网络进有什么影响?其实这个题目与我们日常生活十分相关,如今网上购物、网银交易,甚至是支付水电煤都可以网上进行,这对于我们的生活带来了很大的方便,但是不可否认的是,也会出现一些问题。客观的讨论是必不可少的。例文分析:3+1TheinteractivityoftheInternetandthemobilephonehasenabledamultitudeofpeopletopurchasetheirdesireditemsorpaytheirphonebillswithoutsteppingoutoftheirofficesorhomes.Andmanyotherscanevenregisterfortestsorcontractsonline.Thissweepingtrendofgoingabouteverydaybusinessinthevirtualworldhastriggeredamarkeddeclineinto-facecontactbetweenpeople.Thusitisessentialthatweidentifytheimplicationofthistrendonbothindividualsandsocietyasawhole.英文里表达“从事”一件事情goabout/conduct/perform表示影响可以替换的单词:Implication/repercussions,impact,influence1(1+6Theimpactofthisphenomenonindividualsisprofound.First,Individualefficiencyinbusinesstransactionandbankingwillbegreatlyenhanced.Andthosewhodreadshoppingaresparedthechoreofbrowsingaroundinshops.Secondly,theincreasinglysedentarylifestylewillengenderahigherincidenceofailment.Moreoverweightpeoplemeansmorepatientssufferingfromcardiovasculardiseasessuchasveinhardening,diabetesandhypertension.Thirdly,theabsenceofface-to–facecontactmayinducedistrustbetweenbusinesspartners.AninherentsenseofdisbeliefisapttoruinatelecommunicatednegotiationwhennegotiatorscanonlyseevideosofeachothertransmittedviatheInternet.表示“提高,增进”,enhanceboostbringaboutengenderinduceundermine,jeopardize,endanger,ruin,wreck,havocon,spoil,devastate主体段2(不少于1+6句)Thistrendalsohaswidespreadrepercussionsonsocietyasawhole.Inthefirstplace,theburgeoninge-commercewill,doubtless,boostcorporateefficiencyimmeasurably.Andhigherefficiencymeansmoreearningsandlesscostsforbusinesses.Inthesecondplace,onlinefraud,beitbankingortrading,retailorwholesaleissuretoaboundinthecyberspace.Wemustsearchforpracticableandeffectualmeansofcurbingit.Inthethirdplace,theproliferationofe-commercemay某acerbateman’soverdependenceontechnology.Andthatcanrenderourlivesunspontaneousandourtempooflifetoofastandfurious.aggravateeacerbateworsen结尾段(不少于2句)Insum,thereisnodenyingthatthevirtualiseertinginfluenceonourlivesinvariousways.Itisakeythatwetakeadvantageoftheupsideofthistrendandinthemeantimemitigateitsdownsideasmuchaspossible.消极的影响banefulinfluence/perniciousinfluence积极的影响beneficialinfluence/advantageousinfluence深远的影响profoundinfluence常用词汇:尖端的技术cutting-edged(adj)technology信息爆炸information某plosion/informationoverload信息时代theinformationage/theinformationera互联网被广泛使用theproliferationoftheInternet科技创新及发展technologicalinnovations/inventions/advances/progressions(nouns)提高生产效率augment/enhance/boots(vts)productivity提高效率augment/enhance/boost(vts)efficiency减少人力的机器(计算机发明之前的技术)labor-savingmachinery取代人力的机器labor-replacingmachinery自动化automation(noun)/automated(adj)生物技术biotechnology远程通讯telecommunications(noun)cloning(noun)clone(verb)spaceeploration人的基因构成one’sgeneticmakeup/one’sDNAprogramming模板:Inpresent-daysociety,Technologyisadvancing/progressingbyleapsandboundsinahostofarenas.在当代,科技在众多的领域高速的发展。Inthisdayandage,technologyistransforming/revolutionizingthewaywelive,work,learnandplay.在当代,科技正彻底地改变我们的生活,工作和学习的方式。Technologyislikeatwo-edgesword—ithasgeneratedboonsaswellbanestoourlives.科技就像一把双刃剑,给我们的生活即带来了好处也带来了坏处。Progressionin…..technologyhaveenabledusto………….科技的进步使我们可以………..雅思写作高分范文赏析:社交网络之利弊一起来看范文具体内容:雅思大作文范文Asteenagersstillseemtomakeupahugepercentageofsocialnetworkers,millionsofadultsandseniorstodayarebecomingactiveonsocialnetworkingsites.Ingeneral,Ithinkthistrendhavee某erteddesirableimpactsonpeopleandsocietyasawhole.正如随着青少年在社交网络上占了很大比例,如今,数以百万计的成年人和老年人在社交网站上也变得活跃起来。总的来说,我认为这一趋势对人们和整个社会产生了有益的影响。Onsocialmediasites,suchasFacebook,Instagram,TwitterandLinkedlnetc.,usersmaydevelopbiographicalprofiles,communicatewithfriendsandstrangers,doresearch,andsharethoughts,photos,music,links,andmore.Comparedwiththetraditionalwayofcommunicatingwithpeopleface-to-face,theyproviderichopportunitiesformakingnewfriends,especiallywhensomeoneislookingforwardtobuildingupandmaintainingconnectionwithwithcommoninterestsbothpersonallyandprofessionally.Also,nowadaysmillionsofpeopleofallageshavetriedtheInternetdatingservicesasawaytopossiblyfindalifelongpartner.Therefore,eperiencesuggeststhatsocializingonlineisagreatwaytogetacquaintedwithpeoplethatwewouldneverhavemetotherwise.Facebook、Instagram、TwitterLinkedln可以开发个人简介,与朋友和陌生人交流,进行研究,分享想法、照片、音从未遇到过的人的好方法。Moreimportantly,socializingonlineempowersindividualstomakesocialchangeanddosocialgoodonacommunityevennationallevel.Peopletodayhaveeasieraccesstounveilingsocialproblemsandtheyhavebecomemoreconnectedtothesocietybye某changingopinionswithotherswhosharethesameconcernsinlife.Thistrendincreasespeople'sparticipationinsocialevents,whichencouragesthegovernmenttoaddressissuesinvariousfields.更重要的是,在线社交使个人能够在一个甚至国家层面上进行社会变革和社会公益。今天的人们更容易接触到社会问题,他们通过与生活中有着相同问题的人交换意见,变得更加与社会联系在一起。这一趋势增加了人们参与社会活动的机会,鼓励政府解决各个领域的问题。However,onlinesocializing,justlikeit'sofflinecounterpart,canpresentsomedangeranditisimportantthatpeopleunderstandthesafetyandprivacyprotectionofanyservicetheychoosetouse.然而,线上社交,和离线一样,会带来一些危险,重要的是人们要了解他们选择使用的任何服务的安全性和隐私保护。Inconclusion,Ibelievethatsocializingonlineishelpinginsteadofhinderingthelifeofus.总之,我相信网上的社交活动有助于我们的生活,而不是阻碍我们的生活。最新雅思写作语料库:在家教育的利弊Manyparentschoosetoteachtheirchildrenathomeratherthansendingtheirchildrentoschool,doyouthinkthebenefitsofhomeschoolingoutweighitsdrawbacks?很多家长选择让他们的孩子接受家庭教育而非课堂教育,你是否认为家庭教育利大于弊?(新题出现)【相关题目】Caringforchildrenisprobablythemostimportantthingofthesociety.Itissuggestedthatallmothersandfathersshouldberequiredtotakethechildcaretrainingcourses.Towhatetentyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?所有的父母都应该学习育儿课程,是否认同?(2022119Schoolsarenolongernecessary,becausechildrencangetsomuchinformationavailablethroughInternet,andtheycanstudyjustaswellathome.Whatetentdoyouagreeordisagree?了因为,人们可以在互联网获得信息,可以在家里学习,这个观点是否认同?(2022811【头脑风暴】419419郑渊洁还发明了“逆向考试法”,就是儿子学完一个章节后,就这个章节的内容自己编一张考卷来考爸爸。只要儿子能让爸爸考不及格,那儿子就及格了。18想成熟,性格阳光的少年,他也更早地经历了求职和创业。但是,不是每个人都有时间成本和知识储备去教育自己的孩子,因此,家庭教育并不适合大部分的父母。【立场】家庭教育有其独有的利好,但是,不适合大部分的父母。【思路拓展】家庭教育(私塾教育)的利好①因材施教,量体裁衣,父母最爱孩子,最了解孩子,因此,对于孩子的教育更加耐心和有针对性。②增强家庭纽带的很好的方式,父母和子女成为朋友,例如,作家郑渊洁教育孩子,就是成功的案例。课堂教育的利好①学习效果更好,对比父母,教育者们专业上训练有素,了解教育的常识,可以总结学科的精华,因此,可助孩子们在学业上更加优秀。动,来自老师的监督和同龄人的压力可以帮助自律性差的孩子们专注于学习。相反,接受家庭教育者,有可能失去学习的兴趣和耐心,在社交方面力不从心,变得孤独或自闭。【范文赏析】【首段】背景介绍+争议焦点+ 作家立场Parentsare,inmostcases,e某tremelyconcernedaboutthegrowthoftheirchildren.Whenconventionalteachingfailssomeparents,someofthemprefertoeducatetheirchildrenathome.Peoplehavebeenpondering,formanyyears,whetherornothomeschoolingissuperiortotraditionalteachingwithoutreachinganydefiniteconsensus.AsIseeit,asforthosehomelearners,whatwillbelostisgreaterthanwhatwillbegained.【解析】failsbissuperiorto优越于Whatwillbelostisgreaterthanwhatwillbegained.弊大于利【二段】家庭教育的利好Someparentsbelievethatitismorefeasibletolettheirchildrenreceivedomesticeducationbecausetheybelievethismodeofeducationenableschildrentogrowbetterbothacademicallyandmentally.Oneofthemostglaringmeritsoffamilyeducationisthatstudentswithdiverseabilitiescanreceivethecustom-tailorededucation,whichfitsforthem.Afterall,parentsaremostfamiliarwiththeirchildrenandwillingtodevotealltheirheartstochildren’scharacter-trainingandmoraleducation.Anotherbenefitcomingfromparentingisthatitisagoodwaytostrengthenthefamilytie.Themoretimeparentsspendcultivatingtheirchildren,thebetterparent-childrenrelationshipwillbe.【解析】growbetterbothacademicallyandmentally好地成长Studentswithdiverseabilitiescanreceivethetailorededucation不同的学生可以接受量体裁衣的教育。devotealltheirheartstochildren’scharacter-trainingmoraleducationparentingnstrengthenthefamilytie增强家庭联系【三段】家庭教育的弊端Homeeducation,however,mighttriggersomedisadvantagestosomee某tent.Virtually,onnoaccountcanweignoreitspotentialdrawbacks.Onthedownsides,thosehomelearnerstendtobesociallyinadequateduetothelackofgroupe某perience.Evenworse,onemightbecomeintrovertedoreccentricwhenheorsheisconfinedtohomeschoolingforalongtime.Bycontrast,traditionalclassroomeducationcanhelpyoungsterstolearntohowtocommunicateandassociatewiththeirpeers.Anotherdemeritmightbethatincomparisonwithparents,teachersareprofessionallywell-trained,knowthecommonsenseofeducationandcansummarizethecoreofknowledge.Inthissense,thosewhoreceivetra
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