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TaskCoherenceand没有因果关系连接词：becausethussotherefore,会出现先后顺序：after19xxthen同时：atthesametimemeanwhilesimultaneouslyFirst,second,thirdasfor ,itsprice……intermsofHTC,itsprice……InWhenitcomes最好不要写：whatismoreLexicalGrammaticalrangeandChicken1979140g2004250gTheconsumptionofchickenwas140gperperweek(140g/p/w)in1979anditroseto250g/p/win2004.Theconsumptionofchickenrosefrom140g/p/win1979to250g/p/win2004.Thereexisted/wasanincreaseofchicken’sconsumptionfrom140g/p/win1979to250g/p/win2004.Thetime,rangingfrom1979to2004,witnessed/sawanincreaseofchicken’sconsumptionfrom140g/p/wto250g/p/w.Anincreasecouldbefoundintheamountofchickenconsumedbypeoplefrom140g/p/win1979to250g/p/wafter25years.Chicken1979140g每人每周上升2004250g2010年又下降到200g每人每周。Theconsumptionofchickenrosefrom140g/p/win1979to250g/p/win2004but/whileitdecreasedto200g/p/win2010.Theconsumptionofchickenrosefrom140g/p/win1979to250g/p/win2004,(whichwas)followedbyadecreaseto200g/p/win2010.Theconsumptionofchickenrosefrom140g/p/win1979to250g/p/win2004,withthefollowingperiodwitnessingadropto200g/p/win2010.Increased(from…to…ORto…)(anincrease)Rose(arise)Wentup(anupwardboomed(aboomingtrend)grew(agrowth)Decreased(adecrease)Declined(adecline)Dropped(adrop)wentdown(adownwardtrend)fell(afallingtrend)reduced(areduction)some MaintainedthesamelevelReacheda大的bigConsiderable/considerate=ursosweetline会有一组有个极值（如果极值出现在开头or结尾，无视之Peakedat/reachedapeakHitthebottomA跟B1980chicken的消耗量超过lamb1989年超过beefIn1980,theconsumptionofchickensurpassedthatoflambandin1989overtookbeef’sagain.TheairinruralareasismuchbetterthanthatofurbanA跟BThepriceofandHTCwereequalbetween19xxand19xxwithXXXXThepriceofwillTheprice isexpected/projected/predicted/estimatedtoThebarchartillustratesthreedifferenttypesofephonecalls’timelengthintheUKbetween1995and2002.Thesetypesarelocal-fixedline,nationalandinternational-fixedlineandmobiles(allcalls).Asforlocal-fixedline,itstotalnumberofminutesrosefrom70billionminutes(70b)in1995to90bin1999whichreachedapeakforthewholeperiodamongthreecategories,withthefollowingperiodwitnessingadropbackto70bagaininIntermsofnationalandinternational-fixedline,thereexistedanincreaseofitstimelengthfromnearly40bin1995toapproximate60bin2002gradually.Besides,thetime,rangingfrom1995to1999,sawaslightgrowthofmobiles’totaltyofminutesfrom3bto13b;subsequently,anenormousupwardtrendcouldbefoundinitstotalminutesuptoaround40bin2002.Overall,local-fixedlinetookthedominantpositionamongthreetypesconcerningaboutthetimelengthforthewholeperiodinquestion.Thegapamongthreecategories’timelengthwashugeinitially,butastimewentby,thisgapbegantoshrink.1970年，已婚的人占总人口的70%In1970,marriedAmericansoccupied70%ofthetotalUSIn1970,70%ofAmericanswereIn1970,thepercentageofmarriedAmericansinAmericawasIn1970,therewere70%ofAmericanswhowere拿到 的人之中10%是女性Therewere10%ofstudentsgettingaSVDwhowerefemales.Therewere10%ofSVDgraduateswhowerefemales.AccountedforTookupThemajority(70%)ofAmericansTheminority(xx%)of……Fourfifthsof……Onefifthof……Threequartersof……HalfAoccupiedthelargest/themost/thesmallest/thelowestpercentage/proportion/partofB.A40%BThepercentageofA(40%)doubles/triplesthatofBThereexistedanincreaseofthepercentageofteachersalariesamongthetotalschoolspendingfrom40%in1981to50%in1991,whichwasfollowedbyadecreaseto45%afteradecade.ThepercentageofteachersalariesamongthetotalschoolspendingroseTeachersalariesoccupied40%ofthetotalschoolspendingin1981andthisproportionroseto50%in1991,followedbyadecreaseto45%in2001.As ,itspriceTheunitofelectricitybycoalrosefrom50unitsin1980to130unitsinCoalproduced50unitsofelectricityin1980andthisamountroseto130unitsinContributeTheaverageofotherwaysoftransportationwhichmaynotbegivenwithdetailsinthegraphalsorose………ConsumersofTurkeyandIrelandspent32.14%and28.91%oftheirexpenditurerespectivelyonfood/drinks/tobacco(F/D/T),whichweremuchhigherthanthatofItaly(15%),Sweden(18%)andSpain(16%).TookupTaskTaskTheThegraphshowstheaveragetimetoproduceavehiclebyfourcarmanufacturesattheirU.S.factoriesfrom1998to2005.Typeof地图题Aisin/on/totheeastofB.In:A如果是，B可以On：A如果是，B可以是广To：A如果是，B可以是在学校的东边是一个操场ThereisaplaygroundintheeastofthisAplaygroundbelocatedintheeastofthisIntheeastofthisschoolisaLookingatthemap,wecouldfindaplaygroundintheeastofthisschool.坐落于Belocated/situated/sitedWhere定在学校的东边原来是个操场，但是现在改成了一个餐厅Acanteenstandsonthelocationwherethereusedtobeaplaygroundintheeastofthiscampus.With独立主在学校的东边是个操场，操场的北边是个Thereisaplaygroundintheeastofthisschool,withacanteenstandingtothenorthofthisplayground.Thesetwomapsillustrateaschoolin2013anditsfutureplanofconstructionin2016.In2013,thisschoolhadacapacityof600students.Inthewesttherewasacarparkandtwobuildingsliedinthecenterofthisschool.Inaddition,intheeastofthiscampusstoodaIn2016,thisschoolwillbeabletocontainanothermore400students.Asfortheformercarpark,itwillnotbechangedbutasecondcarparkwillbeestablishedonthelocationwherethereusedtobetheplaygroundthreeyearsago.Then,aroadwillalsoappeartolinkthesetwocarparksacrossthesouthernpartofthisschool.Intermso