高考英语写作专题讲解课件

讨论严肃话题TalkingaboutsomethingseriousPartsix:范例引路：MODELWRITING某学校附近准备兴建一座化工厂，现征求师生的意见，师生赞成、反对比例如图。请你以该校学生名义，以“Thereareotherthingstoconsiderbesidesmoney”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，陈述反对在此建厂的理由。反对的理由：1、严重污染饮用水，防范措施不充分。2、造成严重的空气污染。3、侵占学生游戏玩乐的场所。同意的理由：1、可以为本市赚钱。2、提供就业机会

Itisreportedthatanewchemicalworkswillbebuilthere.Certainly,itisagoodideafordevelopingeconomy.Butontheotherhand,italsocausesabigproblem.

Firstly,manypeopledon’tagreetobuildthisworks.Itwillpollutethedrinkingwaterthoughtheyhavepromisedtodosomethingtopreventpollution.

Secondly,thesmokeandthesootwillbringlotsofillness,whichisdangerousforeveryone.

Thirdly,thechemicalworkswillbebuiltwherewestudentsplaygamesandhavesportsafterschool.Ifbuilt,wewillhavenoplaceforfun.

Becauseoftheabovereasons,wehopethatthechemicalworkswon’tbebuiltnearourschool.

五个基本环节Fivebasicstepstodiscusssomethingserious一、开头Starting二、提出观点Givingideas三、强化论点Developing四、提出反驳Arguing五、得出结论Comingtoaconclusion规律总结一、开头（Starting）1、陈述事实式Onceagainuniversitygraduatesstartanewroundofjobhunting.

Nowinthecountryareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool.

2、设问式Rightisright.Right?Butisleftwrong?(IsLeftWrong?)三、强化论点（Developing）1、First…,Second…,Third…Finally…2、Firstly…,Secondly…,Thirdly…Finally…3、Firstofall…,Then…,Next…,Atlast…4、Furthermore…;Besides…;Moreover…5、What’smore,…;Atthesametime,…;Whatisworse,…四、提出反驳（Arguing）1、but,yet,still;however;although…2、ontheotherhand…;onthecontrary…;inspiteof…;eventhough…;Atthesametime…3、60percentofthestudentsthink…andabout10percentgivenoidea,whiletherestofthestudentsarestronglyagainstthesuggestion.

五、得出结论（Comingtoaconclusion）1.Finally…;Therefore…2.Inaword…;Inshort…;Intheend…;

Inotherwords…;Asaresult…;Inall…3.Generallyspeaking…4.AsIhaveshown…;Ashasbeenstated…;

Aswe(you)allknow…某学校附近准备兴建一座化工厂，现征求师生的意见，师生赞成、反对比例如图。请你以该校学生名义，以“Thereareotherthingstoconsiderbesidesmoney”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，陈述反对在此建厂的理由。反对的理由：1、严重污染饮用水，防范措施不充分。2、造成严重的空气污染。3、侵占学生游戏玩乐的场所。同意的理由：1、可以为本市赚钱。2、提供就业机会Themajorityofthestudentsandteachersinourschool,includingme,areagainsttheconstructionofachemicalworksnearourschoolthoughtherest10%doagreetotheplan.Theyholdtheviewthattheworkswillmakelotsofmoneyforourcityandprovidenewjobsforthelocalpeople,butwethinkitwilldousmoreharmthangood.First,thedrinkingwaterwillbebadlypollutedevenifsomemeasureswillbetaken.Ontheotherhand,theairoverthecitywillbepollutedtoo.Worsestill,thesiteofthechemicalworkshasbeentheonlyplacewherewestudentsplaygamesandhavesportsafterschool.Wherewouldwegoifitwereoccupied?Inaword,wehopethefactorywon’tbebuilthere.Themajorityofthestudentsandteachersinourschool,includingme,areagainsttheconstructionofachemicalworksnearourschoolthough

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rest10%doagreetotheplan.Theyholdtheviewthattheworkswillmakelotsofmoneyforourcityandprovidenewjobsforthelocalpeople,butwethinkitwilldousmoreharmthangood.First,thedrinkingwaterwillbebadlypollutedevenifsomemeasureswillbetaken.Ontheotherhand,theairoverthecitywillbepollutedtoo.Worsestill,thesiteofthechemicalworkshasbeentheonlyplacewherewestudentsplaygamesandhavesportsafterschool.Wherewouldwegoifitwereoccupied?Inaword,wehopethefactorywon’tbebuilthere.作业检查：目前，有不少中学生利用寒暑假期间打工赚钱．去年暑假期间，你曾在一家饭店打工当服务员．打工之余，你有如下感受：１．过去常常向父母要钱，现在你用自己赚的钱，心里很激动２．你明白了金钱的价值，也学会了一些与他人相处的方法３．积累了一些工作经验和社会经验，为以后步入社会作了些准备总之，你度过了一个愉快的假期．要求：不要逐字逐句翻译，词数１２０左右典型错误:1.词:thevaluableofmoney;manystudent;aEnglishcorner;theimportantofprotecting…;atMarch12th2.句子：（1)Ifell/wasexciting(2)Thejobwasverytired(3)Igettedmanyexperiences(4)Iwasworkedinarestaurant(5)Ithinkitwillgoodformyfuture(6)It’snoteasilyformyparentstoownmoney(7)IcouldbuysomethingwhatIwantwithmyownmoney(8)IhopeusetheexperiencesinourjobwhenIleaveschool(9)IusedtousemoneywhichfrommyparentsOnepossibleversion:Nowadaysitisusualforusstudentstofindpart-timejobsintheholidays.Lastsummer,Iworkedasawaiterinarestaurant,andIlearnedalot.Firstly,itwasthefirsttimeformetoearnmoneyonmyown,soIfeltextremelyexcited.NowIcanbuywhatIwantwithoutaskingmyparentsformoneyasbefore.Secondly,duringtheperiodIlearnednotonlythevalueofmoneybutalsothewaytogetalongwithothers.Thirdly,Igainedsomeworkingexperienceaswellassocialexperience,whichIfoundagoodpreparationfortheworldoutsideschool.Itwasgoodtomyfuturework.Inaword,Ihadawonderfulvacation.典型病句：1.Everyonehaveagoodtimethatday2.Iwasonbehalfofschoolmetthem3.ItalkedsomethingaboutEnglishcorner4.ManystudentsactivetakepartinEnglishcorner5.Therearealotofstudentsattend/takepartinit6.TheAmericanvisitorswasverypleasedtoseeit.7.Thestudents’lifeareverycolorful8.Itteachedustolearnlotsofthings.Onepossibleversion:MondaySeptember20,2004SunnyTodayI’mverypleasedtohavemetthevisitingAmericanstudents.Thismorningwehadafriendlytalkwiththem.Onbehalfofallthestudents,Itoldthemaboutourafter-classactivities:OurschoolholdstheEnglishCornereveryweeksothatthestudentscanpractisetheirspokenEnglish.InMarch,ourschoolusuallyorganizesatree-plantingactivityinthecountryside.OnNewYear’sEvewehaveaNewYearparty.RecentlymanystudentshavetakenpartintheEnglishSpeechContest.Alltheseactivitiesarewellreceived.Afterthat,Ishowedthemaroundourschool.AlthoughIwastired,Iwasveryhappy.写作要领1细读提示——明白写什么，日记、信函、报导或叙事描写2写全要点——了解核心内容，非重要情节，图画作文应认真分析判断才能分清主次。表格类原则上一个不能少3卷面干净——事先打草稿然后誊改是使文章通畅的关键4书写认真——不求文字隽秀力保规范工整，这是留下好印象的起码条件5层次分明——为使短文令人感到赏心悦目分成2甚至3段为好6承上启下——简而言之是连接词、过渡句他们是组成文章粘和剂，上下沟通的纽带表格型——津、苏、浙、闽、鄂1).津---关于中学生应如何使用零花钱的主题班会；2).苏---写信向加拿大笔友介绍家乡江城所取得的成就及存在的问题，并对发展谈看法；3).浙---写信给加拿大朋友推介《英汉词典》与《新华词典》的特色价格与收词；4).闽---写信向美国朋友介绍你校的规划目的及内容；5).鄂---英语学习的讨论，题目为学习英语要不要从儿童时起，观点不同，未取得一致意见文字型——全国四份及上海1.全1---

北京电视台举办外国人学中文唱中国歌，建议你的外国朋友参加并能提供帮助；2.全2---外国朋友暑期来华，一人住你家，写信表示欢迎并介绍安排；3.全3---美国教授的美国史讲座不能参加，请假并询问是否有录音；4.全4---外国朋友来华学汉语，介绍汉语班的开办日期程度教师资质等；5.沪---一篇日记，内容为老师要求你负责班级墙报工作并征求你的意见，写出你的决定并谈谈想法，文长120至150词练习一:下面几幅图反映的是我们日常生活中常见的浪费现象．请写一篇英语短文，描述这些现象，并就此谈谈你的看法．词数：１１０个左右．Onepossibleversion:

Alotofthingsarewastedinourdailylife.Somepeoplebuymorethantheycaneatandthrowawaytheleftovers,whichcanbekeptforanothermeal.Somedon’tbothertoturntapsoffafterusingrunningwater.Lightsaresometimesleftoneveninthedaytimeandpeopleignorethisasiftheydidn’tseeitatall.

Ihopeeveryonerealizethatit’snoeasyjobforparentstoearnenoughmoneytosupportusandthatourcountryisnotaveryrichoneandmanypeoplearestillsufferingpoverty(or:arestillverypoor).Weshouldnotwaste!Saveonthingsweuseforthesakeofourparentsandourcountry.练习二：假如你正在参加一场英语辩论赛，你是正方辩论者，请你写一篇词数为本１００左右的文章．主题为”Shallaseniorschoolstudenttakeapart-timejobinholidays?”注意：开头已为你写好．Dearfriends,Herearemypoints.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Dearfriends,Herearemypoints.Westudentsoftodayhavetofixourattentiononourlessons,andasaresult,weknowlittleofsociety.Aholidayisthebesttimeandthebestchancetomakeupforthat.Takingapart-timejobisagoodformofsocialpractice.Whatwelearntinbooksandinclasscan’thavethesameimportanteffortonusaswhatwelearnedthroughpersonalexperience.Insocialpractice,wecansurelymakeprogressinbothknowledgeandpracticalability.Besides,takingapart-timejob,wemaygetpaidmoreorlesstohelpourfamily.Thus,Iwillsayaseniorschoolstudentshouldtakeapart-timejobinholidays,ifpossible,ofcourse.Onepossibleversion:高三英语写作专题

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Englishwriting,SeniorThree写作综合练习Parteight:假设你是某中学生英文报的小记者，对中学生课外上网的利弊进行调查采访。以下是学生们对上网的看法。请根据他们的观点写一篇简要的调查，并呼吁正确使用互联网。一、注意：使用互联网的益处1、资源丰富2、节省时间3、方便交流和沟通二、使用互联网的弊端1、内容良莠兼有2、沉迷网络游戏影响学业3、过多使用影响健康1、参考词汇：上网浏览——surftheInternet2、词数：100左右。3、文章开头如下：Withthedevelopmentofcomputertechnology,theInternethasbecomemoreandmorepopular.……最近你校同学参加了某英文报组织的讨论，其中一个话题是：高考前有些家长在考场附近租住宾馆，陪孩子复习，这样做有无必要。假设你叫李华，请根据下表提供的信息给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

75％的同学认为

25％的同学认为

1．不必住宾馆2.浪费钱3．住哪里与考试关系不大4.父母陪伴反而增添压力

1．有条件的还是住宾馆2．适应环境3．节省路途用时4．父母督促提高效率

注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。2．词数：100左右。Whenwediscussaboutwhetheritisgoodtobookaroomforkidsatahotelneartheschoolwheretheentranceexamwillbetaken,wehavedifferentopinions.

Withthedevelopmentofcomputertechnology,theInternethasbecomemoreandmorepopular.Somestudentsregarditasagreathelper.Sincethereisalotofinformationonline,youcansurftheInternetforanyinformationyouneedinashorttimewithoutworkinghardinthelibrary.ItisalsoveryconvenienttocommunicatewithothersbyusingtheInternet.However,otherstudentsthinkthatthereissomeinformationonlinethatisnotgoodforthestudents.Inaddition,spendingtoomuchtimeplayinggamesonlinewillnotonlyhaveabadeffectonstudybutalsodoharmtoourhealth.Therefore,weshouldmakeproperuseoftheInternet.

Whenwediscussaboutwhetheritisgoodtobookaroomforkidsatahotelneartheschoolwheretheentranceexamwillbetaken,wehavedifferentopinions.About75%ofmyschoolmatesthinkitunnecessarytodosoasitreallycostsalot,andactuallyitdoesn'tmattermuchwheretostaywhenwetakeanexam.Atthesametime,wewouldfeelevenmorepressedratherthanrelaxedwithparentsatourside.

Meanwhile,theremainingquarterofthestudentsprefertostayinahotelclosetotheschoolwherewewilltaketheexamifitispossible.Wecangetourselvestosuittheenvironmentandsavethetimewewouldotherwisespendontheway.Besides,withthepresenceofourparents,wewillstudymoreefficiently.Yourstruly,LiHuaWhattoWriteinThisPeriod?Task1:AguidedStoryof100wordsTask2:AnExtendedPassageof30-50wordsQuestions:1.WhatascoredidyougetintherecentEnglishtest?Diditreachthegoalyouset?2.Howmanymorepointscouldyouhavegotforyourphysicsinthetest?Task1.WriteaStoryaboutDamingNotes:Daming(大明）isathirdgraderinsomemiddleschool.

Studythefourpicturesandmakeupareasonablestoryofabout100words.GroupWork:Talkingabouteachofthepicturesingroups,usingoneormo