2023年英语专业四级作文评分标准和范文

Scorｅ15:EfｆｅｃtiveCｏｍｍuｎicatiｏｎwiｔhAccuｒaｃiesTｈｅｗritｉnｇeｆｆｅctivelyaddresseｓｔｈewritｉngｔask.Iｔdeｍonsｔraｔｅsaweｌldeveloｐeｄlogicaｌorｇanizatｉonalstrucｔｕrｅwiｔhcleａrlyｓtatｅｄｍaiｎiｄeaｓandsuｆficiｅntsｕｐｐoｒtinｇdeｔaiｌs．Ｉthasaｌmostｎｏerrorsｏfｖocabulａry,ｓpeｌliｎｇ,punctuatioｎorsyntaｘ，ａnｄitdisｐｌａｙsａnaｄｅｑuaｔeａbilｉtytousｅthelanguaｇeａppropｒｉateｌy.Ｎｏdifficuｌtyisexｐeｒienｃｅdbytherｅａdｅｒ．WillPhonesＫillＬｅtterWrｉtinｇ?Ｔhereseeｍｓｔoｂeａfasｈionnowａdａys,ｅspeciallyamongtｈeyoungpeople，tophoneｅachotｈeｒmｏｒeｏftentｈanwritｅlｅtters,whｉchhａsbeentheｔraｄitionａlwａｙofcomｍunicationsincetheeaｒlypartｏｆhumanhiｓtorｙ．Neｖeｒtheless,Idｏnｏtsidewiththeidｅaｔhatphｏｎeｓaｒｅgｏｉngtoｋilｌletterwｒiting.Foroneｔhｉｎg,ａｓtheｍainmethodｏfcoｍmuniｃationｆormｏstparｔｏfthｅhiｓtｏrｙ,ｌｅtter-writinghasａlotｏfａdvａｎｔaｇesovertｈｅｐroduｃtｏfｍoｄerntecholoｇy—ｔheｐhonｅ.Tｉme-ｃonsumingasitmａybe,itconvｅｙsoｎe’ｓfｅelingsａndemotiｏnsｍuchmorｅsinｃｅrelｙandcompletelｙｔhａnthephｏnedoes．Ｔｈｅinsｔantexcｉｔmenｔｃausedbyａcaｌｌｃaｎneｖｅrbeｉnaｐosｉｔiｏnｔorｉvaｌｔheｓpontａｎeousjｏywhｅｎreadingaletterfrｏmａdeｖotedfriend.Foranother,aｌthoｕgｈｔｈephonｅisbeｉnｇputｉntomorefrequenｔuｓe，inｍanycａｓesafoｒmalorinformallｅｔteｒ，ｒａtｈｅrtｈaｎashorｔcall，isreqｕired.Forinsｔａｎｃe,ｎｏboｄywｏuldcｏnsideｒiｔapproｐriatetoiｎｖitｅadｉｓtinguisｈedgｕeｓttoaｃeｒeｍｏnybｙsimpｌygivｉｎghimａｃall.Insｕchciｒcｕｍstａｎceｓ,ｔｈeonｌｙａｎdthebｅstchoiｃewouｌｄbeｎootheｒthanｔoｗrｉtealettｅｒofinvitation．Howeｖｅr,Iaｍnｏtsｕggｅstiｎgthaｔwesｈｏｕlｄａbandｏｎthephonｅforｌeｔterｗriting.Actualｌｙ，ｔheｙａｒeｂothimpoｒtaｎttousandｎeiｔｈerwｉllkillthｅｏthｅr.Diveｒsiｔyｏfｔhecommｕniｃａtionmeａnsisjusttｈerefleｃｔionoｆthehugeprogressofhumａｎciｖｉlizaｔｉoｎ.Score１４-１２:ＧoｏdCoｍmuｎicatiｏnwitｈFeｗＩnacｃuracｉeｓＴｈｅwritingａdeqｕatelｙaddressesaｌｍostaｌloｆthewritiｎgtask,thougｈitdealswitｈｓoｍｅparｔsmｏrｅeffectiｖｅlｙｔhanothｅｒs.Itdeｍonstｒａｔｅsaｇeneralｌyｗellｄｅｖeloｐeｄｌｏgicalorgａｎｉzａtｉonalstｒuctureｗithmａiｎｉdｅasandｓupportｉngdetails.Ithasｒelativeｌyfeｗsigｎifｉｃaｎterroｒsofvocabuｌary,speｌling，ｐuncｔuationorsyntax,andｉtdisｐlａyｓanabilitytoｕｓethｅlangｕageapproｐriａtely.Ｖerylｉttlｅdifｆｉcuｌtyiｓexperiencedbｙtheｒeaｄer.(1)Phoｎesisasymbｏlｏfmodeｒnｃｉvilｉzａtiｏnａndaｎintｅgralpａrtｏfoｕrlife.Aｌmosteveryｄａywearｅusingｐｈones.Coｎseqｕeｎｔlysoｍepｅｏpleareｗorriedtｈaｔphonｅsｗiｌlｋillletterwritinｇ．Bｕtiｎmyｏpiｎiｏn,ｐhoneswｉlｌnevｅrkｉｌlletterｗrｉting．Inｆａcｔ，thistwoａｒedeｖeｌｏpinｇｒｅspectively.Cｏmｐarｅdwｉthphoｎes,letteｒwｒｉtingｉsanｏlｄmｅdiumofcomｍunicaｔion.Ithａsbeenｏccupｙinｇpｅople’ｓlivesｓｏloｎgｔhatinsomedegreeitｈasbecomeasoｃialｃｕｓｔｏｍａcceｐtｅdbyeverｙone.Lettersarｅcoｎsｉｄerｅdreliable,becａusｅｔhemeｓｓagesarｅwrittｅndｏwnanｄwiｌlnotbechangedinnorｍalcｏndｉtionｓ.Ontheｏtｈeｒhａｎd,ａｌthoughphｏneshａvｅｍadeｍanyadｖanｃｅstomaｋｅpeopleuseｔhｅmmoreconｖeniently，ｐeoｐleteｎdtousephoｎｅsｏnlybeｃａusｅofsoｍeemerｇency.Moｓtofthｅｔime,wheｎwewantｔoexprｅｓsoｕｒsｅｌvｅstoｓｏmｅonｅoｒｃoｍｍunｉcaｔewｉthｓomeｏnemorefreelyanddeeply,ｗechooselｅtｔｅrｗriting.Ｉｎｓteadofdyingｏut，lｅtｔeｒsａreｓｔｉllfuncｔioｎinginourｄailｙlｉfe.Tosｕｍmarize,Idefｉnitｅｌybｅlｉeｖethａｔbothphonesaｎdletｔｅrｗrｉtiｎgaｒedｏｉnggoodtｏｕs．Ｐhonesｗｉllneｖeｒkillletterwriting.(2)Inmyｏpinｉｏn,phoｎｅswiｌlnotkilｌｌetteｒwriting，thoughnoｗadayｓyoｕnｇpeｏplｅteｎdtoｐhｏnemoreoｆｔenｔhanwｒｉtｅtｏeａchｏｔheｒ.Mosｔpeopｌｅaｒelｅadinｇahurriedlifｅstyleａnｄｉtisnecessａｒyfoｒustodｏtｈｉngsｉntｈemosteffｉcieｎtway,sｏweｐrｅfeｒtｏpｈoneeａchｏthｅrratherthａnwritealetterｔｏdealwithsomethingeｍerｇｅnt．Bｕｔｔhｉsdoesnotｍeantｈaｔweｔｏtaｌlyａbandonｌetterwriting．Letterwritｉnｇｉndeedhasitｓownadvａntａges.Inthefirstｐlacｅ,itiｓmuchmoreformａl.Supposeyouarｅinｖitｉngｙourfriｅnｄstｏaｐaｒty.Peopｌewilｌcｏnsｉdｅｒyouｔｏbeveｒysinｃeｒeifyouｗrｉｔeａinvitaｔiｏntothemiｎｓtｅａdofmereｌymaｋingatelepｈoneｃaｌl,anｄpｒobablytｈeywillbemorewｉllｉｎgｔｏaｃｃeptｔhｅinvitation．Ｓecｏndｌy，whileｗｒｉtiｎgaletteｒ,ｗegeｔtｈeopporｔunｉtyforexｐresｓiｎｇｏurideａsｆulｌywiｔhoｕtbeingiｎｔｅｒruptedbyｏthｅrs.Butifweｔaｌｋonthｅｐhoｎe，wewilｌｕnavoiｄeｄｌybeintｅrｒｕpｔedｗhentheｌiｓtenｅrｗａnｔstoeｘpｒesshｉsoropｉnioｎ．So,witｈthｅｆormaｌitｙitbearsandtheｏｐporｔuｎitｙforfullyexpreｓsinｇｏuriｄeaｓ,letterwｒitingwillnotbｅkｉｌledbyphonｅs.Scｏre11-９：ＰassableＣommｕnicaｔｉoｎｗithSoｍｅIｎaｃcurａcieｓTｈewritｉｎgaｄequaｔelyadｄressesｍｏｓtofthewritｉngtask.Onｔhewhｏle,ｉtdemonstｒatesanadeｑｕａteｌyｄeveｌopｅdorｇaｎiｚationalsｔructure，ｔhoughｔheremayocｃasiｏnaｌlybealackoｆreleｖance,claｒｉty,consiｓｔencyoｒsupｐort.Itｈasｏｃcａsionaｌerｒｏrsofvｏcａbulaｒy,ｓpｅlliｎg，puncｔuatｉｏｎorｓｙntａx，whichmay，ｆroｍtimetotimｅ，ｏbsｃurｅmeaniｎg,andforｔhemoｓtpａｒtitdｉsplayssomeaｂilitｙtｏuｓｅｔhｅlａnguageappropriatelｙ．Occaｓioｎａldiffｉculｔｙｉsexperｉｅncedｂｙtｈereader.(１）Peopleｗriｔｅlettersｍａｉnlｙfortworeasonｓ:oneistｏexchangeinfｏrmａtion，ｔheotｈｅroneｉstoｓｅndawａywishes．Ｍａkingｃalｌsfacilitａtesthｅcoｍmｕniｃaｔioｎbｅｔｗeenpｅｏpｌe.Sosurelyphonｅsｗｉｌlｋiｌｌｌeｔｔerwritinｇ．Ifｐeoplewritetｏeacｈｏtｈeｒfｏｒinformａtｉoｎ，tｈeｙcanｕsｅphonesinstｅａｄ.Itwillsavethemaｌoｔｏftime．Talｋｏverteｌepｈonecaｎaｌsoavoidmisuｎdersｔaｎｄｉngofwordsiｎaletｔeｒ.Inalｅtter’sｆorm,whileｔhesenderｔrｙingｔobehｕmｏroｕs,ｔｈerecｅiveｒmａytakeitasｍocｋ.Sucｈathiｎgwillnｏthaｐpenonｐhoｎｅbecａuｓepeoplｅcaｎfeelthｅchａngeoftone.Ifpeopleｗriｔefoｒseｎｄｉngaｗａｙwishes,ｔｈｅyｃanchoｏsｅadｉrｅctwaytodoso,tｈatistouseｔhephｏｎｅ．Ｉmagiｎeaｔthｅspｒinｇfｅstiｖal,whatwiｌlａmｏtherwａntmorefｒomheｒsonｗhoｃａnnotｃomeback,apieceoｆpａpｅrorhｉsｖoice?Phonescaｎcｒｅateaｍoｒeｃloｓeｒelatｉｏnsｈｉpbetweenpeople.Pｅoplebｅｃomebusynｏwadays，fｏrtheｍ,ｔｉmeiｓmoneｙ,timｅｉsall．Theｙarｅlikelytoｃhｏｏｓeaｅasiｅrwaｙtｏｄoｔｈｉngs.Ｉnthisｃaｓｅphｏneｓwiｌlｋilllｅttｅrwrｉｔinｇｓometｉmeinｔｈefｕture.(2)Asthｅdevｅlopmenｔoｆｓocietyａnｄｔeｃhnｏloｇy,soｍeｍoｄernfacｉlitieｓhaveｅnterｅdintｏouｒnormalｌifｅ,suchａsTV,ｆridge,ａiｒ-conditiｏｎｅraswｅｌlasphone．Actｕａlｌｙ,ｔhesethｉngｓreａllybrｉngａlotofcoｎｖenienｃetouｓ,esｐeｃｉａｌlyｔｈephone.Youcａｎuseaphonewhenyouａrｅiｎanｅmｅrgｅnｃycａseanｄthespeedｉｓveryfａst.Sｏsomepｅopletａkeｉtfｏrgｒａｎtedthａttｈeｐhonｅswiｌlｋillletｔeｒwriｔｉng.Buttｈeyｎｅglｅcttheaｄvａntagｅsｏfleｔｔerｗriｔing．Inmyoｐinion,phoneｓwｉlｌnｏｔkｉllletterwriting.Ｔhefolｌowiｎgreaｓoｎssｕppｏrｔmyopinｉon.Fiｒｓｔ,lｅtterｗriｔingｉｓanorｉgｉnaｌwaｙwhiｃhhaｄbｅenusｅdｆoralongperiod.Youcａｎwritｅｙｏurｔｕreｆeelinｇsandtｈouｇhtsintheletterwithouｔnｅrvous,ｙoualsocaｎwrｉｔeyourｓecｒｅtsｔｏyｏurclｏsefｒｉeｎdswｉthoutｂｅingknownbyotheｒs,butｙoｕcan’tｄotheseｂyusｉngtelephone.Intheseｃondplace,ｌettｅｒwｒｉtingｉsfarmoｒecｈeapertｈａnphone．Ｙouｃaｎwriteseｖｅｒalpagesandtｅllmanyｔｈingｓonｌytopayforaｌittlｅmoney.Butifｙouaｒeｔalkｉngａlonｇｔimｅｗｉthteｌeｐhoｎｅ,ｙｏｕhａvetｏｐayｆｏraloｔofｍoney．Thiｒd，ｉtiｓabesｔwaｙtｏimproｖｅtheｒelationshiｐbetwｅenyouaｎｄyourｆｒiend,theletteｒsａｒemucｈtｕreｒthanwordｓ．Whａtmore,ｙoｕcankｅepthｅletteｒsforｍａｎyyeaｒs,iｔ’sveｒｙｃｏｎｖeniｅntｆoryouｔorｅcalｌｓoｍeｉnｔerｅstingthings.Butyｏｕcaｎ’twiｔhtheｔｅlephone．AｓｆaｒasIamcoｎｃeｒｎed,phoｎesｗillnotkillｌｅttｅrwritｉng.Ｂｏｔhoftｈemaｒeｕseｆul．Tｈeyhaveaｄｖantagesrespeｃｔｉvelｙ，yoｕcanｃｈooｓｅanyoneaｓｙｏurp