2023年顾家北雅思作文汇总

顾家北0813精品班作文大作文Maｎypｅoplethinkiｔｉsvｅｒyimpｏrtanｔtｏｐrotecｔthｅenviｒonmentbｕttheymaｋｅnoeｆforttodｏiｔthemｓelvｅs.Whyｄoyoｕthinkｉtisｔhｅｃasｅ？Whatacｔioｎsｃaｎbedonetｏensｕreｔhatindivｉduaｌｓpｒoｔecttheenviｒonmｅｎt？

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ormatioｎabｏｕthoｗfaｍiｌiesiｎanAsiａnｃｏuntrｙspenttheirｍoneｙin1９９8anｄ２0２３．Aglａｎｃeatthechａｒtsｔｅlｌｓtｈａｔexpenｄitureonｄiffeｒｅntgooｄsin20２3overwｅighedthatin１99８eｘｃｅpttｈａtsｐｅnｔonclothｅs.Peoｐlｅgａｖemucｈmoreｐrｉorｉｔｙtospirｉｔｕalenjｏｙmeｎｔwhｉchｌｅadtoahugeｉncrｅaseｏｆｅxｐenｄiｔureonholiday,eａｔingouｔ，readiｎg(nｅwspapｅrsａndmａgazines)anｄgoingtoｃｉnema,rｉsｉngfｒom8％ｔo１5％,６%to１5％，３%to８％ａnd3%to5%respectiｖeｌy.Ｔｈecostsforeｌeｃｔronicgoodsalsoiｎｃｒeａｓedfrom12％to14%dｕringthｅdecａde.Tｈｅonlｙdiffｅrenceｉsexpenditureoncloｔhｅswhiｃｈｗａsｔoｔaｌlyoppｏｓiｔeｔoｔｈemainstｒeaｍ.Thｅprｏportiｏｎoｆitwａｓ10％ｉn19９８;hoｗeveriｔdroppｅdtｏｈalfofitsｏｒｉginalratesin2023.Aｌlｉnalｌ,ｔhepａst１0yeａｒｓwitｎessedahuｇecｈangeofｔheeｘpｅnditurｅｏnvariousofasｐectｓfoｒｈoｕsｅｈｏlｄs.第三篇ThｅｃhａrtｓtellthｅpｒoｐｏｒtionｏfｄiｆferenｔｃategoriesofhousepeopleｌiveｉnｔｈreepartsofAusｔraｌiain2０２3ａnd２０２3.In2０23,Vicｔoｒiaｈad76%ｒeｓｉdentsiｎhｏｕsｅ,１２％iｎseｍi-ｄｅtaｃｈedｈouｓe,11%ｉnapａrtmentｓaｎｄtherestinotｈeｒｔｙpｅs．InNSW，hoｕseａｌsoａｃcoｕnｔedfｏrｔhelargesｔparｔｏf66%,with1０%ａnｄ13％inｄｕplｅｘandflaｔrespｅctｉvelｙ.Andmｏreｐeopleｌｉvedinothｅrkiｎds.Taｓmanｉahａdlaｒgesｔpropoｒtionofｈｏuselｉｖｉngpopulatiｏn,ｗhichrｅａcｈes8８%．Fiveyeaｒslater，ｔheratｅｓfｏrhｏusｅalｌdroppｅｄ2%iｎtheｔｈreeregｉonｓ．Asforseｍi-dｅtachedhoｕsｅ,Victｏｒia,ＮSＷａndTaｓmaｎiasaw１%incｒease,1percentdeｃｒeasｅandsｔabiliｔyreｓpｅｃtｉvelｙ.Theｆigureｓｏfflaｔallhadaｓlighｔｌyiｎcreaｓｅ.Aｎdｆｏrｔhｅｒｅstｕnmentionｅｄｔｙpes,thｅyｒｅmaｉnｅdtｈeｓameat1%eｘｃeptNSWrｏsｅｆｒoｍ11%to12%．ThetaｂｌecｏmparesｆｉｖeEuroｐeancountrieｓinteｒｍsｏftｈeｐropｏrtionsoｆunｅmｐloｙｅｄｐeopｌeasweｌlasthefiguｒesfortｈoｓｅｙoｕngpｅopleoutofwork.Ｐolａndｈadtｈeｈighｅｓｔｙｏuthuｎemｐloymenｔrateａt3７%,ｎeaｒlyfivｅtiｍeｓthｅｌeveｌｉnDenmark.Ｔheleｖelsｏfuｎempｌoymentfｏｒyoｕnｇpeoｐlewｅresiｍilaｒinothercouｎtｒies,ｗiththehigｈｅstseｅninIｔalｙ２3％aｎdｔｈeｌowestｉnGermaｎyａｔ17%.Itiｓcｌeaｒfromｔheｔabletｈatinalltheｓecouｎtｒies,theuneｍployｍeｎｔrａtｅｆorｔｈeｙounｇergｅnerａtiｏnwａshigｈerｔhaｎｔｈeoverallunemploymｅｎtfigｕres．Intereｓｔinｇly,Pｏlanｄ,Ｇermaｎy，IｔalyanｄＨｕngaryｈadsimilaｒuｎemｐlｏymentrates,ranginｇｂeｔweeｎ1５%ａnd18%.TｈeｆigurefoｒＤenｍaｒkwassignｉficａｎtｌyｌoweｒaｔ3％.Overaｌｌ,youthuneｍployｍentwａsmoreｓeriousinPｏlａndtｈａninothercountｒiｅs．Denmarkhadthelowｅstfigｕresforboｔhyouthunemｐlｏymentａndoverallｕｎemｐloyｍｅnｔ,whilｅoｔherｃounｔｒiesｈadsｉmilarfｉｇuｒesfortｈｅｓｅproｂleｍｓ.流程图写作Thｅchartｉllustratesｈowtousｅｃocoａbｅanｓtｏproducｅsｅvｅrａlfoodiｔｅmｓforcuｓtomeｒs.Firstｌy,ｗholｅbeansarｅcarefｕlｌｙpickingbeｆｏrｅdryｉngintｈesｈell.Tｈenｔｈeyaｒepressedｉnｔococｏａliqｕor,whicｈisthｅmainmａterialofthesecoｎｄｓtagｅ.Thｅｎcocoaliｑuorisfurｔherpresｓeduntilｉｔｂeｃomesａcocaｃake，whｉcｈisdirｅctlｙsｅｎｔｔoindusｔｒyｔomaｋｅｃakeｓanddrinkｓorissｏｌｄtothｅｃonsumeraftｅrgrｉnｄeｄintocoｃoapowｄeｒ.Thecoｃoalｉquorｃanalｓoｃonveｒｔｉnｔoｃoｃoａａndｔhｅnbeseｎｔｔorｅｌeｖanｔｉnduｓtry.Cｏcoaｌiquor,afｔeｒfuｒtｈerｒeｆining，mixwｉthｃocoａandsｕgarturnstoinｄｕstrychocolate.Finishｅdcｈocolatepｒoｄuctswillbeｐutoｎtheｓhell,ｂeｆorｅｔｈeｆｉｎalproceｓs.Aｌlｉnalｌ,cocoabeanｓcanbｅｕsｅdtoproduｃecｏcoapｏｗder,cｈocolateｐｒoｄuctsａｎdｉngｒｅｄｉentｓfｏrｒelevaｎtｉｎｄusｔrythｒoｕghthreesimpｌestagesstartiｎgfｒompre-prｏcｅsｓｉｎgrawmaterialｔoｆiｎalpacｋaginｇforselｌ．顾家北Ｔhｅwｈolebｅansarepicｋedａttheｆiｒstsｔageｗｉthｓhellsrｅmoved,anｄｔhenｄrieｄａndprｅｓseduｎtｉｌcocoaliｑuoｒisｃrｅatｅd.Thiｓｍarkｓtｈestaｒｔoｆtheｓecｏｎdｓtage,wｈｉcｈｉnｖoｌvesthreepｒoｃesｓeｓ．Tｈｅcｏcoａlｉquｏrcanbeusedｔoｍakｅｃｏcacakesｉnthｅｆirstｏption.Anotherchoiceisthemaｎufactｕｒｅofcoｃoａ,whilecｏcoaliｑuｏriｓrｅfineｄｉntｈethirdpｒｏcesｓtｏproｄｕceindｕstrialcｈocｏlaｔe．Inthefiｎａlｓｔage，ｔhesematerialsarｅprocｅssｅdfurtｈｅrtoｃｒeatedｉfferentendｐroductsfｏreitheｒｃｏrｐｏrateclｉｅntsoroｒｄinarｙcｏnsumeｒs.Cocacaｋesａｒｅｇrouｎdiｎtocoｃoapｏwｄｅrfｏrinｄiｖiduａｌconsumers,ｏrｄirectlｙｄeｌivｅrｅdtocaterｉｎgbusiｎｅsseswhicｈpｒoｖidedrinksandcakes.Coｃｏａiｎtheｓｅconｄｐrｏｃeｄｕremenｔioｎeｄearlieriｓaｌsoｔransportedtothesebusiｎｅsses.Iｎcｏntrast，thｅinｄustrｉalchocolａｔeｉsｆlａvoｒedwiｔhsuｇａr,ａndfinｉshｅｄｃｈocolateproductsaｒesubsequentlｙavaiｌaｂleｆoｒｃｏnsuｍers.第一篇Thetａbｌeｐroviｄeｓｕsｗｉthdａtaoｆthｅｐｅrｃentagｅofｃｏnｓｕmeｒeｘpenditureoｎｄiｆfeｒｅntiｔemsinfiveｃountｒiesin2023．ThebiggestnumberexｉsteｄinＴｕｒkey,wｈｅrepeｏｐleｓpｅnt３2.14％oftheiriｎcoｍｅｏnｆooｄ，drinkandtoｂａｃcｏ,aｌmｏstfivetｉmeｓthenumberofpercentagesｐenｔoncｌoｔhing(6.63%)ａｎdeiｇhttiｍestheｆiguｒeofperｃｅｎtagespeｎｔonspiriｔuaｌeｎjoyment.ＣｏmingｎextisＩrｅlanｄ,whoｓepｅrcentａgeofnaｔiｏnａlｃonsｕmｅrexｐendituｒeｏｆeaｔingｗaｓ28.91％.Cｏｓtsｆoｒcｌotｈｉngandfｏotwearａccoｕｎtｅdfoｒoｎly６.43%,ｔhreetimesｔheeｘｐｅnｄitｕｒeｏflｅisureaｎdedｕcatiｏn.Sｐａiｎtooｋｔheｔｈｉrdplaｃeｔhoughthepｒopoｒtionｏfiｔsnａｔｉoｎalconｓｕmerｅｘpendiｔuｒｅwasthｅlowest(1.98％).ＥxpeｎｄitureoｆfoｏditeｍsiｎSｐainacｃｏｕntedfor1８．8%，tｈreefｏlｄthefｉgureｏｆiｔsｃlothinｇspｅnding．ItaｌyaｎdSwｅｄｅｎciｔizenshadsmａllperｃeｎtａgesofiｎｃoｍespenｔｏnfooｄ（１6．３6%，15.77%),onlyaboｕthalfｔhefiｇureｏfTｕｒkeｙ.Howｅver,theirclothinｇcｏｓts(9%,5．4%)aｎdspiｒituａｌｐay-oｕｔｓ(３.２%,3．22%)weｒerｅlativｅlyhigh.Ｉnanｕｔsheｌl，thepｅrｃentageｓｏfｎatioｎalconsumerｅxｐeｎdiｔureｂycａｔegｏｒｙin2023varieｄａｌotaｍoｎgtｈefivecｏuntriｅs.Buｔａｌlshａredsoｍesimｉlaｒities,namely,larｇestｐｒｏportionofexpｅnｄｉtｕreｏnfood,drｉnkandｔｏｂaｃｃoandｓmaｌlesｔpercentageｏfｌｅｉsureaｎdｅducatiｏncosts.第二篇TheｂａrｃｈaｒtsshowｔheｎuｍbeｒｏfｍａｒriａgesａnｄdivｏrcesiｎUSAandmａritalstaｔusofＡmｅｒicanａdultsduringtｈeperioｄｏf197０to202３．Tｈenumberoｆｍarriagｅsrｅmａinedat2.５ｍilliｏｎin1970and1９80，aｆterwｈichithadaslightｌydecｒｅａsｅto2mｉlliｏni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nhigh－ｓpeｅｄrａilａndａirporｔmakｅsｇoodtranｓpｏrtationmorecoｎvｅｎienｔ．１3.有了这些设施，城市可以吸引投资，变得更加富裕,人们生活更好。Thｅcｉtycａｎatｔractｍorｅinvｅsｔmentswithtｈesefaｃilｉｔiesaｎdｔhｕspｅoｐｌeｗilleｍbracearichｅｒａndbｅｔtｅrlife.14.相比之下,投资艺术很多时候在短时间很难获得一个好的经济回报。Ontheconｔｒary,invesｔｍentinartｉsｈaｒdtoreceiｖｅａnecoｎoｍicrｅwaｒdiｎashorｔrun.15.因此,我认为即便艺术让我们的城市更加美丽,我认为政府的重心应当是在公共设施上。Asaｒeｓulｔ,eventhougｈartmａkeｓoｕrｃitymoｒeｂeautifｕl,Iinsistｔhatｔheｇｏｖernmenｔshouldｌaｙemphasisonpubｌicｓｅrvicesａｎdfaciｌities．顾家北句1Ｃitiｚenshｏｌdｄｉｆfｅrｅｎtviｅwsaboutｇovernmentsponsorshiptｏwaｒdstheart,esｐeｃiａlｌywheｎfacingｂudgetｐroblｅms.改：这个分词结构有歧义,不大清楚是修饰goｖernmenｔ,还是ｃｉtizens正：Peoplehavedifferentviewsabｏuｔgoｖernmｅntfundinｇfｏｒtheaｒtｓ,esｐecｉallｙwheｎacoｕntrystrugｇlｅｓwｉthｂudgｅtdeficitｓ．句２Irｅｃkoｎthatwｅshoｕldｇiveprｉｏｒiｔyｔｏinfraｓtｒucｔurｅｓandtｈenｔｏinvｅstintheartｗhenｈaｖｉｎgaｓｕrpluｓ.改：toｉｎｖest不清楚是否和前面的to对称，由于前面的to是个介词正:Irｅｃkｏnthaｔwesｈouｌｄgiｖｅprｉorｉtytoesｓentｉａlsｅrvｉcｅsａndinfrastruｃtｕreｓaｎdthenfundthｅaｒtswhengｏvｅrnmentshaveａbudｇeｔsurplｕｓ.句3Mａｎｙpｅopｌｅsｕppｏrttoprｏvidefｕndsoｎarts,wｈichcａnmakeourcｉtiesmoｒeappealｉnｇaｎdａｔtrａｃtive.改：没有supporttｏ的表达;fundson也不是习惯的表达正：Manypｅopｌesupportthepubｌicfｕndsfortheａｒｔｓ，whichｃanmakeouｒcitiesmoreｖisuａllyattraｃtive．句4Thewｏｒkofarｔｓuｃhaｓsｃulｐtuｒes,ｐaiｎtinｇandsｔａtｕesｃanｍakepuｂｌicpｌaceｓlikelibｒａｒｙ，mｅｔrostaｔｉonandevenｂａtｈroｏmｐretty.改:lｉｂrary这些名词都是可数名词,要加复数正:Iｔistruethatartworks，incｌudｉnｇsculｐtureｓ,ｐａiｎtiｎgsandstａtuesｃaｎdecoratｅpubｌicｆａｃiliｔiessuchasliｂｒａｒｉes，mｅtroｓtａtionｓ,oreventoiｌets，andｉncrｅａsetheartistiｃapｐeaｌoftheseｐlａｃeｓ．句5Ifthｅartindusｔrydevelｏpｅdprosperｏuslｙ，ａｎdthediｆferentｂuiｌdｉnｇsofcｉｔiｅsａlsohavetheuｎiqｕestyles.Aｎdfortｈereason,wewiｌlｅnｊｏytheciｔyliｆebetter.改：ｄeveｌoped时态不对;第一句话没有主句,有两个连词，正:Ifthｅaｒtindustrｙprospeｒs,cｉtieｓｈaｖｅａmixｏfdiffｅrentａrｃhiteｃtｕralｓtyｌesaｎdwearemorelｉkeｌytoenjｏyurbanｌife.句６Ifweａreｅｘｐoｓedtｏart,itcaｎdｅcreaｓeourprｅssｕｒeａｎｄｍakeｏurmoｏdwｅll.改:welｌ是个副词,一般makesomethiｎg+形容词正：Exposuｒetoarｔworkscａnrｅdｕｃeｏurpressureａndputusinａgoodmｏoｄ.句７Thoｕghtheartiｓveryｉmporｔant,ｍanypｅopｌeｔhinktｈepublicｆaciliｔｉesshouldｂefocusｅdmorｅａndｓｈｏuldgeｔtｈeｇovｅrnｍenｔsponsｏｒｓｈipfiｒstly.改：focusedmｏre一般不这么表达;假如是art单独写，不需要用定冠词正：Altｈouｇhthｅfｕndinｇfｏrｔｈｅartsiｓｉｍpoｒtanｔ,manｙpeoplｅwoｕlｄarguethatpublｉcfａcｉlitiesdeserｖemｏｒeofpubliｃmｏney．句８Oｒdinarypｅoｐleaｒemoreinteｒesteｄinpｕblicfａcｉｌｉtieｓ(suｃｈasｗateｒandeleｃｔricityｐower，sｃhooｌs,librarｉｅs，ｒoａｄwａys)，ｗhichhaｓadirectimpaｃtontｈeｉrlivｉｎｇｓtａｎdａrｄs．改:一般当你列举几个名词的时候,要用ａnd相连；定语从句的has和前面的名词不一致正：Orｄinaryｐｅｏｐlearemｏreｉnteｒestedｉnpubliｃfaｃilitｉes（suｃhaswａｔeraｎdｅlecｔricｉtｙsupｐlｙnetwｏrks,sｃhｏols,lｉbｒａriｅsanｄroａdｓ),ｗｈichhaveaｄｉrecｔimpactｏntｈeirliｖingsｔａnｄａrds．句9Ｆｏrexamplｅ,ｇｏodｓanｉtat