初二上册比较级写作课定稿

知识目标：能力目标：教学目标情感目标：LearnthreeWritingStrategies.学3种写作策略-问答式、阅读积累式、结构提纲式Publicizeyourpersonalityandlearnfromothers.张扬个性，取长补短。Graspthewordsandexpressions&Comparatives.掌握字、词、句及比较级用法fantasticseriousnecessary形容词outgoinghard-workingsimilar形容词quietlyloudlytruly副词短语makefriendswithbringoutgetgoodgradesbedifferentfrommakemelaughtrulycareabout读一读极好的严肃的必要的形容词外向的勤奋的相似的形容词安静地大声地真正，确实副词短语与…交朋友使表现出取得好成绩与…不同使我大笑真正关心我读一读

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me(真正关心我).That’sthemostimportant.madefriendswithoutgoingtalentedInfactdifferentfromastallasgetbettergradesnecessarybringoutmakemelaughtrulycaresaboutmorehard-working练一练1.Whoisyourbestfriend?2.WhatisMarylike?3.WhatdoesMarylike?5.What’rethedifferencesbetweenMaryandyou?7.WhydoyoulikeMary?4.IsMarysimilartoyou?6.What’sthesayingaboutfriends?在文中快速用数字序号标出问题答案。回答问题。Whoisyourbestfriend?WhatisMarylike?WhatdoesMarylike?What’rethedifferences?Whydoyoulikeher?IsMarysimilartoyou?What’ssayingaboutfriends?MybestfriendisMary.Sheisoutgoingandtalented.Sheisgoodat/enjoysplayingbasketball.I’mquitedifferentfromher.I’mnotastallasher.Idon’tlikesports.I’mmorehard-working.Ialwaysgetbettergrades.It’snotnecessarytobethesame.IlikeMarybecauseshebringsoutthebestinme.Shecanmakemelaugh.Shetrulycaresaboutme.第一段第二段第三段常用比较级句子来描述不同点。请用完整的句子描述答语。回答问题策略一：问答式写作法

问答式写作法，是指写作前，围绕主题提出一系列问题，问题的答案即可组成文章的框架。MybestfriendisMary.Sheisoutgoingandtalented.Sheisgoodat/enjoysplayingbasketball.I’mquitedifferentfromher.I’mnotastallasher.Idon’tlikesports.I’mmorehard-working.Ialwaysgetbettergrades.It’snotnecessarytobethesame.IlikeMarybecauseshebringsoutthebestinme.Shecanmakemelaugh.Shetrulycaresaboutme.第一段第二段第三段回答问题Myfavoritesayingis,“FriendsareGod’swayoftakingcareofus.”Itmakesmethinkofmybestfriend,Linda.Insomeways,welooksimilar,andinsomeways,welookdifferent.Bothofushaveblackeyesandlongblackhair,butI’mlesstallthanher.I’mquietandserious,soit’snoteasyformetomakefriends.However,Lindaisnotsoquietasme.Sheismuchmoreoutgoing.Sheissotalentedintellingstoriesthatshealwaysmakesmelaugh.Althoughbothofusarehard-working,Lindaalwaysgetsbettergradesthanme.Shealsohelpstobringoutthebestinme.Weenjoystudyingtogether.Infact,IthinkIamagoodlistenerandI’malwaystheretolisten.Lindaisatruefriendwhoreachesformyhandandtouchesmyheart.练一练VS佳篇品读任务一：（个人思考）1.圈出文中表述朋友观的句子。2.横线划出总述Linda和I异同点的句子。3.用数字序号标出含有比较的句子。Myfavoritesayingis,“FriendsareGod’swayoftakingcareofus.”Itmakesmethinkofmybestfriend,Linda.Insomeways,welooksimilar,andinsomeways,welookdifferent.Bothofushaveblackeyesandlongblackhair,butI’mlesstallthanher.I’mquietandserious,soit’snoteasyformetomakefriends.However,Lindaisnotsoquietasme.Sheismuchmoreoutgoing.Sheissotalentedintellingstoriesthatshealwaysmakesmelaugh.Althoughbothofusarehard-working,Lindaalwaysgetsbettergradesthanme.Shealsohelpstobringoutthebestinme.Weenjoystudyingtogether.Infact,IthinkIamagoodlistenerandI’malwaystheretolisten.Lindaisatruefriendwhoreachesformyhandandtouchesmyheart.练一练朋友是上帝对我们的恩赐。①②③④appearance外貌Character性格Hobbies特长爱好VS佳篇品读任务二：（个人展示）

What’syourfavoritesayingaboutfriends?.AgoodfriendislikeamirrorFriendsarelikebooks---youdon’tneedalotofthemaslongasthey’regoodMybestfriendhelpstobringoutthebestinme.Atruefriendreachesforyourhandandtouchesyourheart.FriendsareGod’swayoftakingcareofus.Afriendiseasierlostthanfound.朋友失去容易，得来难！张扬个性，取长补短，珍惜友谊！策略二：阅读积累式写作法

阅读积累式写作法，就是从每个单元的阅读材料中找出好词、好句运用到自己的作文中。正如世界上没有两片完全相同的叶子，每个人都是独一无二的。有的人性格外向，活泼开朗；有的人性格内向，文静害羞；有的人友好善良；有的人严肃认真。同学们，你发现自己的与众不同之处了吗？我们一起来分享一下吧！写一写以“mybestfriend”为题写一篇短文。介绍一下你和你最好的朋友之间的相同点和不同点。要求：1.内容要包含所给的信息，可适当发挥。2.不少于100字。

任务一：

口述文章的开头Agoodfriendislikeamirror.MybestfriendisTom.Insomeways,welooksimilar,Insomeways,welookdifferent.Myfavoritesayingis,“Mybestfriendhelpstobringoutthebestinme.”Idon’treallycareifmyfriendsarethesameasmeordifferent.Appearance外貌Character性格Hobbies特长爱好相同点不同点比我高的多性格比我更外向他更擅长打羽毛球我考试成绩更好都长一双大眼睛都很勤奋都喜欢旅游travel喜欢阅读，经常周末一起去图书馆任务二：（小组合作）S1S4：文章结尾S2S3Webothhave…Weareboth…Weenjoydoing…

比较级谈不同开头相同点和不同点结尾Insomeways,welooksimilar,insomewayswelookdifferent.自己的朋友观Mybestfriend结构提纲式写作法，就是写作前采取列表格、画脑图等列提纲的方式将文章的篇章布局和写作重点清楚地罗列出来。策略三：结构提纲式写作法书写（衡水字帖）内容结构完整语法准确标点/大小写/拼写语言丰富(好词好句)Writingtime

Webothhave…Weareboth…Weenjoydoing…

比较级谈不同开头相同点和不同点结尾Whoisyourbestfrien