十年上海中考英语作文

十年上海中考英语作文2011年上海中考英语作文题：Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"I’mamemberof”.以“我是~的一员”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格子。提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的一员，或者作家庭，班级，社区的一员，写出你的经历，感受等。Usethefollowingpointsasareference.Areyougladtobeamemberof ?Whatdoyoudoinit?Howdoyoufeelassuchamember?例文+点评：Itha§been2year与 Ibecameamember口fthegroup"AnimaIIthasb鸵n+时间段+sint息+过去的时间点whichIfeeldIw白白ndproudnfmyself-Notonly非限定性定语从句 Notonly...but业。倒装句，用法请参见我其他的帖子dowecollectinformationabouttheanimalsindangerbutwealsoposttheinformationontheinternet.Inaddition,weoftenspend逻辑词ourweekendsorholidaystakingphotosofthosebeautifulanimals.Itisinthiswaythatweattractmorepeopletoloveandprotect强调句animals.IhadneverfoundmyworksomeaningfuluntilIjoinedthisgmup,Nrve「willIgEtoutofit.(95w)Never的倒装句2010年上海中考英语作文题:I'mproudofmyself1、Whatkindofpersonareyou?2、Whatmakesyouproudofyourself(Giveanexample/examples)3、Whyareyouproudofyourself?要求：至少60字范文：Iamaboyoflessconfidence.Ialwayshaterunning.Butasweallknow,ThestudentsofGradeninehavetotakepartinthesportsexam.Atthatmoment,Ijustwantedtogiveup.butmyparentsencouragedme:“impossibleisnothing,”“youcouldchallengeyourself!”sowiththeencouragementofthem,,Itriedmybesttorunandinsistedonrunning.WhenIgottothefinishingline,Ifeltproudofmyself,thoughIdidn,tgetthegoodmark,Iknew,Iwon.IcreatedamiracleformyselfandIwassoproudofmyself!满分作文+点评：Likethosemanyteenagersyoucanseeinthestreet,Iamjusta定语从句commonstudent,nothingdifferent.Iamstillproudofmyself,however,forIamtryingtogetbettereverydayEarlytobedand活用谚诂earlytorise,Imakemyselffullofenergyalldaylong.Iseldomwasteanyminuteduringtheclasses,whichhelpsmetobehighly~非限定性定一从句efficientwhilestudying.Besides,Ialsokeepmyselfhealthyby省略句takingexerciseeveryday.Tosumup"nevergiveupimprovingdSHdoi砥民通过做B事达到假A事的目的,初中英语必会语法myself,andthatisthereasonwhyIamproudofmyself.(98w)定语从句2009年上海中考英语作文题:Iwanttodosomethingformyschool以“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool（我想为学校做一件事）”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。学生习作：Iwanttomakeschoolclean.Youmaythinkitisverysimple.ButIdon'tthinkso.Ourteachersaid,"Schoolisyourhome,youshouldkeepitclean."ButIhaveneverdoneanythingtomakeschoolclean.Forexample,Ihavenevertoldmyclassmatetopickuprubbishafterhethrewitontheground.Ialsothrewtherubbishontheground.SoIwanttomakeschoolcleansothateveryonecanforgiveme.Duringthissummerholiday,Iwillgotoschooltomakeschoolclean.Ofcourse,Iwilldoitwithmyclassmates.Wewillmakeschoolcleaneveryweekendsnexttermaswell.Now,doyouthinkitissimple?点评：此文分三层，先提出自己的观点，然后写出自己怎么做的，最后写了我可以让我的学校变得干净让每个人宽恕我，结尾紧扣全文，写出我会怎么做。全文立意新颖，区别于传统的作文，有自己的生活背景，写出了从我原来是怎么做到现在的转变过程，没有重大的语法错误，是一篇值得参考的好文章。例文：Myschoolisinthecentreofthecityandtheairaroundisnotfreshenoughbecauseoftheheavytraffic.Ourschoolhasn,tnoticedit,soIwanttoplantmoretreesinmyschooltotakeinpollutedgases.Iwillusemysavingstobuysomeplantsandseeds.Inaddition,IwillcallonmyschoolmatestoberesponsibleforthemwhenIgraduatefromschool.Ihopethatmyschoolwillbecleanerandprettier.2008年上海中考英语作文题：网络上有两个版本：（1）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“AStoryaboutMyParent（s）”.以“爸爸/妈妈的故事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。例文：Mymumwasborninasmallvillage.Inherfamily,thereweresevenpeople:mum,sparents,mum,stwobrothersandtwosistersandmum.Whenmumwasyoung,herfatherwasadoctorinthesmallvillageandhermotherwasjustaworker.Atthattime,forlackofTVandcomputer,everydayafterschoolmumalongwithherbrothersandsisterswouldgohometohelpedtheirmotherwiththehousework.Forexample,theyhelptomakesupperorwashclothes.Mumtoldmethatthoughthelifeatthattimewasveryhard,shefelthappy.（2）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Lovearoundme”.以“我身边的爱”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。（总分16分）Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.（短文须包含下列要点）Isthereanylovearoundyou?（Giveoneortwoexamples.）Howdoyoufeelwhenyougetlovefromhim/her/them?Whatareyougoingtodotoshowyourlove?范文：Mylifeisfulloflove.Myparentsalwaysgivetheirlovetomegenerously.WhenIwasintrouble,theyencouragedmeandstayedbymysideallthetime.Theyaskedmenevertogiveup.IfeelwarmandthankfulwhenIgetlovefromthem.Inreturn,I'mdeterminedtowinstillgreaterprogressinmystudiesandtobeagoodperson.Iknowthisisjustwhattheywantmost.2007年上海中考英语作文题:Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“ThingsIHatetoDo”.以“我不喜欢……”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。段文开头已给，所给部分不计入字数。一Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.（短文须包含下列要点）Whatarethethingsthatyouhatetodo?Whatdoyouhatedoingmost?Why?（Giveatleasttworeasons.）ThingsIHatetoDoMostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.…范文（1）：MostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.Forexample,Ihatetogoswimming.IamabletoswimbutIthinkitisdangerous.Ihatetoreadghoststories,too,becausetheyarenotonlyfrighteningbutalsoboring.Besides,theyteachmenothing.Infact,Ihatetellingliesmost.Apersonwhotellsliesisdishonest.Ifyoutelllies,nobodywillbelieveyouanymorewhentheyfindoutthetruth.SoIhatetotellliesmost.Iwanttobeanhonestperson.范文（2）：Ihatetokeeppetsandtelllies.ThethingthatIhatedoingmostissmoking.Asweallknow,smokingisnotonlybadforourselvesbutalsoharmfultoothers.Whenevermyfathersmokes,Ifeelrathersick.Besides,itisawasteofmoneytosmoke,Ithink.What,smore,smokingpollutestheair.SoIhatesmokingmost.2006年上海中考英语作文题:Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“IHaveaDream”.以“我有一个梦想”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。Sentencepatternsforreference（以下句型仅供参考）Mydreamistobe…/todo…/togo…Ienjoy/like/prefer...Tomakemydreamcometrue,I…Ifmydreamcomestrue,…例文：Iamanordinaryperson,Ihaveanordinarydream:Isadoctor.Becausedoctormaylettheseexperiencepersonallythehumanwhichtheindispositionsufferstogetridofthepain.Mayletthehumanchangethehealth.Atthesametime,Ibelievedthat,willhelpothers,ownalsotobeabletoobtainjoyfully.Therefore,IhopedfutureImightbeadoctor.2005年上海中考英语作文题:Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Growingpainsandgains”.Thepicturesbelowareforyourreferenceonly.以“成长的烦恼与欢乐”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。以下图片仅供参考。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。学生习作：IthinkIhaveahappylife,thoughIcannotdothethingsIlike.Forexample,Ilikereadingdifferentbooksinmysparetime,especiallysomedetectivestories.Butmymumalwaysasksmetopractiseplayingthepianoonehoureveryday.That'sboring.Ilikehavingpartieswithmyfriendsduringtheholidays.ButIhavetodolotsofhomeworks.Teacher