高考英语：热点9“应用文”真题分析

热点09应用文（全国卷）命题趋势命题特点以提纲类为主要命题形式，提示内容较为简洁;体裁和题材相对稳定，以应用文为主，选材均与考生学习生活及社会热点相关。命题超势”命题将会保持稳定性，实用类将会成为发展趋势，内容上会灵活多变，加大开放性。试卷年份体裁话题题材全国卷I2021（甲卷）建议信中国传统文化哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友2020参赛短文社会生活身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人2019申请信社会生活画展志愿者2018建议信社会生活餐桌礼仪2017告知语言学习学习计划安排全国卷II2021（乙卷）演讲稿学习生活线上学习2020记叙文学校生活采摘活动2019告知信学校生活球队比赛事宜2018通知学校生活观看英文短片2017邀请信艺术参观剪纸艺术展全国卷III2021（新高考）略2020电子邮件学校生活征求英语短剧的意见2019邀请信学校生活邀请参加音乐节2018告知信学校生活体育活动项目开展情况2017邀请信学校生活邀请外国友人加入校队满分技巧一、解题步骤书面表达分步骤：1、审体裁f审人称f审时态7列要点f谋篇章2、列出词汇和句型一连词成句段落—清晰完美收尾3、检查拼写三核实标点-检查句子结构是否正确—检查要点是否遗漏—检查词数是否符合要求二、实战技巧写好高考“书面表达”绝非一日之功，关键在于平时扎扎实实的训练。但是，在夯实语言基本功的前提下，熟悉、掌握一定的应试技巧，也非常重要。根据‘书面表达”常见错误及评卷要求，建议使用“一式，两头，三写，四关”的应试抢分技巧。具体为：一式写对格式要求记住英语常用文体的格式和应用文体的写作方式和特点。二头写好两头要求灵活运用熟悉的句式和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾结构正确，言简意赅。三写规范三写在高考英语书面表达的评分标准中，正确拼写和使用标点符号及书写的美观程度也是影响得分的一个重要指标，因此考生要高度重视。许多考生只重视书面表达内容的训练和提高，却忽视了卷面规范书写的训练，导致本不该的失分。四关突破四关所谓“四关”是指突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关和习惯表达关。要求内容要点准确全面，行文逻辑通顺严密，语言运用正确得当，表达方式符合英语习惯。当然，在备考过程中，有针对性地背诵一些高分句式，套用合适的写作模块，可以帮助大家在短时间内在书面表达上抢得高分！（2021年全国高考乙卷英语试题）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：.分析优势与不足；.提出学习建议。注意：.词数100左右；.题目和首句已为你写好。Besmartonlinelearners【答案】onepossibleversion:BesmartonlinelearnersNetworklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,Wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.Ofcourse,thesedisadvantagesareasfollows.Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecanttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfustudyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingiforusnottobeaffected.Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.J满分技巧）本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以Besmartonline遂@^^题写一篇发言稿参赛。【详解】.词汇积累充分利用：makefulluseoffmakethemostof扩宽,丰富：broaden—enrich各种各样：allkindsof—varietiesof不完美：imperfection—defect.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvanta；findaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.拓展句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantfindingaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【点睛】高分句型1]Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetw（andthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstud（非n谓语作^状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型2]Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficult:beaffecte（现在分词作状语）(2020年全国统一高考英语试卷(新课标H))上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：.农场情况；.采摘过程；.个人感受注意：.词数100左右；.题目已为你写好。题目:MyWeekendMyWeekend【答案】onepossibleversion:MyWeekendOrganizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.Thefarmissituatedatthefootofamountain,theskyisblueandtheairisfresh.Wewereattractedbythebeautifulscenery.Therearedifferentkindsoffruittreesaswellasavarietyofanimals.Onarriving,wesawredripepeacheshangingonthetree.Usingbasketsandladders,Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.Icouldn'twaittotakeabite,andthesweetjuicewentdownmythroat.Iwasgratefulforthisopportunitytogetclosetonature.NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!____ L—Ji.1满分技巧）L J第一步：根据提示可知，上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括：1.农场情况；2.采摘过程；3.个人感受。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：pickpeaches,issituated,beautifulscenery,fruittrees,avarietyofanimals,Usingbasketsandladders,takeabite,begratefulfor,getclosetonature,feastonthesweetness.第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般过去时。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Organizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.和Usingbasketsandladders运用了非谓语动词；Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.运用了定语从句；NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!运用了连词notonly...but…和倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。（2019・全国卷ni）假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括:.时间；.活动安排；.欢迎他表演节目。注意：1.词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。J满分技巧）【审题谋篇】体裁邀请信人称第一、二人称为主时态一般现在时和一般将来时为主要点1.音乐节举办的时间；2.活动内容安排；3.欢迎他表演节目【提纲要点】.第一段一一点明主题发出邀请，并介绍音乐节的具体内容①点明主题AChineseclassicalmusicconcertwill_be_heldinthemusichallofourschool.②发出邀请I'dliketoinviteyouto_joinme.③活动安排Manymusicmasterpieceswillbeplayedbyafamousband.④欢迎他表演节目Youarewelcome-togiveaperformance..第二、三段——表达期盼，期待回复⑤表达期盼——我将在音乐厅入口等你I'llmeetyouattheentranceofthemusichall.⑥期待回复Lookingforwardtoyourreply!【润色升级】.将①句增加时间细节，并用宾语从句进行表达I'mgladto_tell_you_that_a_Chinese_classical_music_concert_will_be_held_in_the_music_hall_of_our_school_on_November_8th..将②句用非谓语动词作状语表达，并与④句合并Knowing_thatyouarefondofclassicalmusic,I'd_like_to_invite_youtojoinmeand_youarewelcometogive_a_performance..将⑤句用if条件句表达，并增加细节If_itisconvenientforyou,」'llmeetyouattheentranceof_the_music_hall_at_7:00_that_evening.【规范誊写】DearAllen,lfmLiHua,yourChinesefriend.IfmgladtotellyouthataChineseclassicalmusicconcertwillbeheldinthemusichullofourschoolonNovember8th.Accordingtotheconcertposter,manymusicmasterpieceswillbeplayedbyafamousbandKnowingthatyouarefondofclassicalmusic,lrdliketoinviteyoutojoinmeandyouarewelcometogiveaperformance.I'msureitisagoodchancetoperformyourfavoritemusic.Ifitisconvenientforyouflfllmeetyouattheentranceofthemusichallat7;_00thatevening.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua四（2018.全国卷H）你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片GrowingTogether,内容包括：.短片内容：学校的发展；.放映时间、地点；.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：1.词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。满分技巧【审题谋篇】体裁通知人称第二人称为主时态一般现在时为主要点1.短片内容；2.放映时间、地点；3.欢迎对短片提出意见【提纲要点】.第一段——点题：你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片①Recently,anoutstandingshortfilmwillbeshowninourschool.Welcometojoinusandenjoyit!.第二段——主体段落展开：短片内容；放映时间、地点；欢迎对短片提出意见。②短片内容：学校的发展Themovieisadocumentaryaboutthedevelopmentofourschool.③放映时间、地点ItwillbeshowninthelibraryonJune9th.④欢迎参加会后讨论并对短片提出意见Everyoneofyouisbewelcometotakepartinthediscussionheldafterwardsandgiveyourcomments.⑤我们期待你的评论和反馈。Weareexpectingandencouragingyourcommentsandfeedback..第三段——表达期望⑥Ihavetheconfidencethatyouwillhave_a_great_timethen.【润色升级】.句②通过增加定语从句来拓展要点ThenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether,whichisadocumentaryaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschool..句③通过增加具体时间和地点拓展要点Itwillbeshownonthefourthflooroftheschoo]libraryfrom2 : 00to4 :00intheafternoononJune9th..句④和句⑤用非谓语动词作状语合并为一句，实现句式升级Everyone_ofyouiswelcometotakepartinthediscussionheldafterwards,expected…and…encouragedtogiveyour…comments：and…feedback.Boysandgirls,MayIhaveyourattention,please?Recently,anoutstandingshortfilmwillbeshowninourschool.Welcometojoinusandenjoyit!Herearesomerelevantdetailsaboutit.Tobeginwith,thenameofthemovieisGrowingTogetherwhichisadocumentaryaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschooLltisbelievedthatthemoviewillbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting.Besides,pleasenotethatitwillbeshowninthelibraryfrom2:00to4:00intheafternoononJune9th.WhaVsmore,everyoneofyouiswelcometowatchthemovieandtakepartintheheateddiscussionheldafterwards,expectedandencouragedtogiveyourcommentsandfeedback.Ihavetheconfidencethatyouwillhaveagreattimethen.Lookingforwardtoyourparticipation.StudentUnion五（2017•北京高考）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：视频video

【审题谋篇】体裁图画类周记人称第一人称为主时态一般过去时为主要点1.激烈讨论后决定制作视频；2.准备素材，采访拍摄；3.后期制作；4.毕业典礼放映【提纲要点】.第一段——点明主题①毕业在即，激烈讨论后决定制作视频Graduationfinallycame.Aftera_heateddiscussion,weagreedonmakingavideo..第二段——主体内容②准备素材——采访老师，拍摄学校生活Weinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.③后期制作——争论保留什么Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.④典礼放映Thevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony.⑤发表感悟——很有成就感Thatsurelygaveusagreatsenseofachievement.【润色升级】.将②句增加“花费时间”细节，并升级为定语从句Material_collectingtookusawholeweek,during_which_we_interviewed_our_teachers_and_took_pictures_of_everyaspect_of_school_life..将③句增加细节，渲染讨论及效果Wedebatedoverwhat_to_put_into_the_video.Somecompromises_wereunavoidable,butthevideoturnedoutperfect..将④句升级用when状语从句表达并增加“效果”细节Severaldayslater,whenthe_videowasplayedon_thegraduationceremony,_it_was_well_receivedGraduationfinallycame.Myclassmatesand1decidedtodosomething.Afteraheateddiscussion,weagreedonmakingavideotorecordourexperiencesatschool.Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek,duringwh-—ichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.Theeditingpartafterthatwastough.Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.Somecompromiseswereunavoidable,butthevideoturnedoutperfect.Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony,itwaswellreceived.Thestudentsandteacherssharedagreattime.Thatsurelygaveusagreat—se-scofachievement. ,—— 知识梳理第1部分考场作文常见的错误及防范措施一考场作文常见的三类错误考场作文常见的错误主要分为三类：词汇类错误、语法类错误和汉语式英语。——（一）词汇类错误 ——考试时，考生很容易出现单词拼写错误和词形变化错误；而词性不清和词汇用法方面的错误主要还是受汉语思维的影响。其应对措施是在备考时要多注意容易拼错或容易出现词形变化错误的单词，真正用心去体会英语词汇的词性和运用，对一些固定习语更不能想当然地改动。.单词拼写错误误：Bytheway,he'saseniorHighSchoolstudentnamedLihuafromTianJin,china.正：Bytheway,he'saseniorhighschoolstudentnamedLiHuafromTianjin,China..词形变化错误误：Peoplethrowedcans,paper,bagsandsoonintotheriverwater.正：Peoplethrewcans,paper,bagsandsoonintotheriverwater..词性不清错误误：Everyoneinmyfamilyislikethedog.正：Everyoneinmyfamilylikesthedog..词汇用法错误误：Heopenedthelightafterheenteredtheroom.正：Heturnedonthelightafterheenteredtheroom..擅自改动习语误：Nowadaysmostparentsattachmuchimportancewitheducation.正：Nowadaysmostparentsattachmuchimportancetoeducation.J限时检测）''■ _ （限时：10分钟）改正下列句子中的错误Doingapart-timejobalwayseffectsstudy.ThereisnodoubtthatkeepinganEnglishdiaryhelpsyoualotwithwritenEnglish.Inmysurprise,hehasgotthefirstprize.WemustpayattentionourpronunciationwhenwespeakEnglish.⑤Weareallentireresponsibleforouractionsandforourreactions.答案：①effectSTaffects②writen—written③In—To④attention后力口to©entire—entirely——（二）语法类错误 ——一个正确的句子除了用词得当外，语法也应该准确无误。如果语法不正确，再好的构思也难以正确地表达，语法类错误的多少会直接影响作文的档次。英语书面表达中语法类错误主要表现在：.时态错误误：Whenhecameback,hefoundthathiswifehasgonetohed.正：Whenhecameback,hefoundthathiswifehadgonetobed..语态错误误：Childrenwhoraiseinpoorfamiliescangenerallydealwithproblemsmoreeffectivelyintheiradultyears.正：Childrenwhoareraisedinpoorfamiliescangenerallydealwithproblemsmoreeffectivelyintheiradultyears..主谓一致错误误：SomestudentslikebooksthatiswrittenbyLuXun.正：SomestudentslikebooksthatarewrittenbyLuXun..比较级使用错误误：Withthedevelopmentoftransportation,theworldseemstobegettingmoreandmoresmaller.正：Withthedevelopmentoftransportation,theworldseemstobegettingsmallerandsmaller..非谓语动词使用错误误：Theteachercameintothelab,followingbysomestudents.正：Theteachercameintothelab,followedbysomestudents.［限时检测）（限时：10分钟）改正下列句子中的错误①Ifitwon'traintomorrow,we'llgocamping.NotonlyTombutalsoIaretiredofoneexaminationafteranother.Theythinkstudentsshouldhavetheirowntimetostudyanditismorequieterathome.Therearealotofstudentsstandinaqueuetowelcometheoldsoldier.ShesaidshewouldpayavisittoSuzhouinthenextmonth.答案：①won't—doesn't②are—am③more-much或去掉more④stand-standing⑤去掉in——（三）汉语式英语 ——一般来说，英汉两种语言既有许多相似之处，又有许多不同之处。在写作时如果想当然地去写，会出现许多汉语式英语，其中主要包括：.纯汉语式思维和汉语式语序误：Atthisschoolstudying,Ireallyveryhappy.正：Studyingatthisschool,Iamreallyveryhappy..句子成分残缺①误：Therearemanystudentsdon'tsupporttheproject.正：Therearemanystudentswhodon'tsupporttheproject.②误：Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatessittingintheclassroom.正：Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatesweresittingintheclassroom..句子粘连误：Theoldmanhastwosons,bothofthemworkinthesamecompany.正：Theoldmanhastwosons,andbothofthemworkinthesamecompany.正：Theoldmanhastwosons,bothofwhomworkinthesamecompany..主谓搭配不当误：Hehappenedanaccidentyesterday.正：Anaccidenthappenedtohimyesterday..动宾搭配不当误：Theyaretryingtheirbesttoimprovetheirproduction.正：Theyaretryingtheirbesttoincreasetheirproduction..形容词和名词搭配不当误：Wewalkedafarwaybeforeplantingtrees.正：Wewalkedalongwaybeforeplantingtrees..动词和副词搭配不当误：Mygrandfatherverylikesblackteaandhasiteveryday.正：Mygrandfatherlikesblackteaverymuchandhasiteveryday..介词和宾语搭配不当误：Theywillbuildamonumentonmemoryofthenationalhero.正：Theywillbuildamonumentinmemoryofthenationalhero.J限时检测）"「一 （■' （限时：10分钟）改正下列句子中的错误Weareimpossibletofinishtheworkinsuchashorttime.It'sknownthatthecostinbigcitiesisveryexpensive.Hecameheretoattendthemeetingincar.Ihaven'theardfromyourletterforalongtimeandImissyouverymuch.Ihavemanycollectionsofstamps,someofthemaremyfavorite.答案：①Weareimpossible—Itisimpossibleforusexpensive—high③in—by④yourletter—you⑤some前力口and或them—which二防范出现错误的两个措施句子正确是作文得高分的关键和保证，考场上要避免上述低级错误，可采取以下两个措施。 （一*）确定王语 英语句子无论多长都有自己的主语（祈使句省略了主语you）。写句子前首先要确定主语，其次要特别注意汉语与英语的区别。例如：.北京八月多雨。误：BeijingrainsmuchinAugust.正：ItrainsmuchinBeijinginAugust..写得很匆忙，我们发现书中满是错误。误：Writteninahurry,wefoundthebookfullofmistakes.正：Writteninahurry,thebookwasfoundfullofmistakes（byus）. （一0确定谓语动词 英语中没有动词就构不成句子，但动词千变万化，稍不注意就会写错句子。在写句子时应特别注意以下几个方面。.注意及物与不及物动词的正确运用误：Thelivingstandardofthepeoplehasraisedinthepasttwentyyears.正：Thelivingstandardofthepeoplehasrisen/hasbeenraisedinthepasttwentyyears..注意延续性与非延续性动词的正确运用误：Hisgrandmotherhasdiedforfifteenyears.正：Hisgrandmotherhasbeendeadforfifteenyears..注意一些不可用于被动语态的动词或动词短语误：Thatdictionaryisbelongedtothelibrary.正：Thatdictionarybelongstothelibrary.1限时检测）

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吸引眼球的亮点词汇要想写出一篇水平比较高的书面表达，高级词汇的使用必不可少，它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：——（一）使用亮点词汇的四种方法 ——.标新立异“语”众不同在写作时，恰当地使用一些别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会体现出自己的高水平。①Ourteam,besidesregulartraining,willjoininavarietyofactivities.—Ourteam,apart/asidefromregulartraining,willjoininavarietyofactivities.②Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedatthegraduationceremony,itwasverypopular.—Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedatthegraduationceremony,itwaswell-received..多样表达避免重复在写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的单词或短语，要尽量用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。③Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavedifferentwaystodealwithsuchasituation.—Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavevariouswaystodealwithsuchasituation.④We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingandwe'vealsobuiltalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.—We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingandwe'vealsosetupalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe..单词短语短语优先在单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底。⑤ThereisnodoubtthatyoushouldknowaboutthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.—ThereisnodoubtthatyouaresupposedtoknowaboutthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.⑥Firstly,thefinalexamofthistermiscomingsoIambusypreparingforit.—Tobeginwith,thefinalexamofthistermisaroundthecornersoIambusypreparingforit.⑦Ihearthatheisill,andIdecidetovisithimthisSunday.—Ihearthatheisill,andIdecidetopayavisittohimthisSunday.4.用高级词汇取代简单词汇为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出自己的写作水平，应尽量避免反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。⑧IshouldsaysorryforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.—IshouldmakeanapologyforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.⑨Solongasweholdfasttoouridealsandnevergiveup,wearesuretoachievesuccess.—Solongasweholdfasttoouridealsandnevergiveup,weareboundtoachievesuccess.1限时检测）（限时:5分钟）用高级词汇完成句子Ofthetwo,Ithinkthelatterisbetter.—Ofthetwo,thelatter.Quiteafewthingscausedthetrafficproblem.—Quiteafewthingsthetrafficproblem.Wecanlookatthisprobleminmanyways.—Wecanthisprobleminmanyways.答案：①winsmy