书面表达高分策略

书面表达高分策略NMET书面表达评分原则1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。第五档：21~25分第四档：16~20分第三档：11~15分第二档：6~10分第一档：0~5分语言地道，规范覆盖所有内容要点2、主要内容：内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分3、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。4、词数少于100和多于140的，从总分中减去2分。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。Howcanwewritesuchanexcellentcompositioninlimitedtime?AsampleTipOne:谋篇布局考试大纲中明确规定少写提纲或者篡改提纲是要严重扣分的，因此依据提纲来谋篇布局成为写作的首要任务。“总-分-总”的三段式结构是高考写作的万能结构。TooshortToolongunplannedPerfectTothepointNomistakesClearstructureGoodhandwritingTiptwo:遣词造句

遣词造句是写作的基础。既要注意用词的准确无误，又要注意句式的丰富多变，还要注意语句之间的连接自然合乎逻辑。

在整篇文章中，避免单词简单重复,多使用高级词汇.

●词汇要准1.喜欢，喜爱Inordertoreleasethestress,35%ofuslikelisteningtomusic,45%likeplayingfootball.whiletherestliketurningtoteachers.likeLike,love,adore,enjoy,beinterestedin,befondof,bekeenon,bedelightedin,takedelightin,beinto,Inordertoreleasethestress,35%ofusenjoylisteningtomusic,45%arefondofplayingfootball.whiletheresttakedelightinturningtoteachers.2.一….就…assoonasOn/upondoing,immediately,directly,instantly,themoment,theinstant,thesecond,assoonas,hardly..when,nosooner…than…他一到那里就打电话给父母.____hisarrivalthere,hephonedhisparents.=Hephonedhisparents__________________hearrivedthere.=Hephonedhisparents_________________hearrivedthere.=Hephonedhisparents__________________hearrivedthere.=________hadhearrivedthere______hephonedhisparents.=____________hadhearrivedthere_____hephonedhisparents.On/Uponimmediately/directly/instantlyassoonasthemoment//instant/secondHardlywhenNosoonerthan1.Learningaforeignlanguageisveryuseful.

Learningaforeignlanguageis____________.2.Ithankhimforhiskindnessandconsiderationsomuch.I____________hiskindnessandconsiderationsomuch.3.Iwanttogethelpfromyou.I_______________togethelpfromyou.4.Onhiswayhome,hefoundanoldmansittingbytheroad,lookingworried.Onhiswayhome,hefoundanoldman_______bytheroad,lookingworried.Practice:使用高级词汇替换划线部分的内容ofgreatuseappreciateameager/anxiousseated5.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable._______________thegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.6.Weallthinkheisagreatman.Weall___________________him.7.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.___________hespoke,__________excitedhefelt.Practice:使用高级词汇替换划线部分的内容thinkhighlyofThankstoThemorethemore●句式要变在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句型，要灵活运用各种语法结构。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉并最终获得高分。Whatsb.usetoreleasethestressis…Sb.holdtheidea/point/viewthat…Whatsb.think/believe/supposeisthat…35%ofusthinkthatsportsareagoodwaytoreleasethestress.But45%

believethat

musicisagoodway,whichisgoodforus.Atlast,20%supposewe’dliketoturntoourteachersifconvenient.同位语从句主语从句表语从句1970年，周群飞出生在湖南省一个小山村,她非常聪明勤奋。虽然家里很穷，她却意志坚强。她初中毕业后，不得不放弃学业。从那以后，周群飞来到深圳，在深圳大学旁找了份工作。为了尽量多掌握谋生技能，她白天去打工，晚上去读夜校。自助者天助。2003年，她成了蓝思科技公司的创始人。是她自己的努力和她的团队的合作，使得她终于取得了成功。现在据信她成了中国的女首富。Task:使用较丰富的句式1970年，周群飞出生在湖南省一个小山村,非常聪明勤奋。

ZhouQunfei,whowasborninasmallvillageinHunanprovincein1970,wasverysmartanddiligent.

方法一.把定语从句改为非谓语动词使句子更简洁ZhouQunfei,borninasmallvillageinHunanprovincein1970,wasverysmartanddiligent.虽然她很贫穷，却意志坚强。Poorthough/asshewas,shewasstrong-willed/strong-determined.方法二.使用省略和倒装使句子生动Although/Thoughshewaspoor,shewasstrong-willed/strong-determined.Although/Thoughpoor,shewasstrong-willed/strong-determined.省略倒装方法三.使用名言谚语自助者天助。Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.更多的名言谚语Practicemakesperfect.Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.Knowledgeispower.Romewasnotbuiltinaday.熟能生巧。事实胜于雄辩。知识就是力量。罗马不是一日建成的。Itishereffort/diligenceandherteam’scooperationthatmakehersucceedfinally.

方法四.使用强调句型使句子明朗是她自己的努力和她的团队的合作，使得她终于取得了成功。方法五.使用被动语态，特殊句式据信她成了中国的女首富。ItisbelievedthatshehasbeentherichestfemaleinChina.类似句式Itissaidthat…Itisreportedthat…Itisannouncedthat…Itissuggestedthat…sampleZhouQunfei,borninasmallvillageinHunanprovincein1970,wasverysmartanddiligent.Poorasshewas,shewasstrong-willed.Aftergraduatingfromherjuniorschool,shehadnochoicebuttodropout.Fromthenon,shewenttoShenzhenandfoundajobnearShenzhenUniversity.Inordertolearnasmanylivingskillsas

possible,sheworkedinthedayandwenttonightschooltofurtherstudyatnight.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.In2003,shebecamethefounderofLansiTechnologyCompany.Itisherdiligenceandherteam’scooperationthatmakehersucceedfinally.NowitisbelievedthatshehasbeentherichestfemaleinChina.●逻辑要强从行文需要出发运用恰当的连接词、过渡词可以使文章增色不少。使用恰当的连接词能使整篇文章衔接自然、浑然一体、文句流畅。

1.

表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：What’smore;besides;also;furthermore;moreover;inaddition,aswellas2.表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：高考大纲中常用的连接词：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary;nevertheless3.表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:4.表示条件关系如果，只要:

除非:否则:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;

if;oncondition(that);aslongasunlessor；otherwise

5.表示时间关系

当…的时候:

在…之后:

在…之前:

直到:

一…就…:

后来，然后:

不久:

近来:

自从…:从那时起:when;while;as

after

beforeuntilassoonas;nosooner…than;hardly…whenlater;

afterwardssoon; lately;

recentlysincefromthenon表示特定的顺序关系首先,最主要的:

其次:

然后:最后:7.换一种方法表述换句话说:

aboveall，inthefirstplace,mostimportantofall,firstlysecondly,secondthen;next

finally;intheend,lastbutnotleastinotherwords,thatistosay;8.进行举例说明例如，比如:

9.用于陈述事实实际上:

跟你说实话:

forinstance;forexample;like;suchasinfact;actually;asamatteroffacttotellyouthetruth;tobehonest,honestlyspeaking,franklyspeaking10.

对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:

onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword,generallyspeakingPractice

请填上恰当的关联词或短语。XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet___________heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacar__________Icouldtravelaroundinthewest.3.Itwasnotlong_______thepolicecame.___________heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.wheninorderthatbeforeAssoonas

5.Doyouagreewithmyarrangement?________,dowritetomesoon.6.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends.___________,Isaved$80.7.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth.________,itmaymakeusfat.Ifnot/soAsaresultWhat’sworseTipthree:语法正确文章的语法要求使用正确、准确。文章中存在语法错误必然会影响最终的得分。所以，大家在平时写作时要养成时时提醒自己尽量不犯语法错误的习惯，特别是要尽量避免由于粗心引起的错误.

常见语法错误分析1.句子谓语Thebuildinglikeamatchbox.Helpthemwhentheyareneedhelp.

SomestudentslikethebooksthatwaswrittenbyLuXun.Itisthebusinessman’sdeedthatreallymakepeopleangry.2.主谓不一致is/looksweremakes3.时态错误

AbigcharityisheldtohelpthepoorsickstudentinC1220inourschoolyesterday.was4.短语误用

Toourproud,ourcampusissobeautifulthatitlookslikeabiggarden.pride类似结构toone’ssurprise;toone’ssatisfactiontoone’sexcitement5.冠词误用

WehadgoodtimeintheorangegardenonasunnySundaylastterm.a2015,04,19,ourschoolhappenedamovingthing.Therearemanystudentscomplainthatthehomeworkissoheavy.Tostudents,ownamobilephoneisfashionable.6.中式英语

AmovingthinghappenedinourschoolonApril19th,2015.complainingowningManywho尝试使用高级词汇代替一般词汇增加表现力灵活使用多样化的句型凸显特色添加恰当的连接词和过渡词

使行文流畅尽可能的避免出现语法错误减少失分Homework

Polishyourwriting.

联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：

1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。

2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。

3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。

2）词数：100-120之间。Practice书面表达：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.大家看，这篇书面表达要点齐全，表达正确，但语言平淡，表达方式单一，逻辑性差，它很难在考试的评分中得到较高档次。如果我们能使用一些恰当的连接词，尽量使用较高级、较复杂的语法结构，就使这个平淡的文章有很大改观，甚至会变得更精彩。①用介词短语作定语或用含定语从句的主从复合句。②语句间缺少连接成分。③表现作者对现在乡村的发展的喜悦心情，也起到承上启下作用。④较高级词汇。Ladiesandgentlemen,

Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.

Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,

ithaschangedalotsince1978③

andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.

Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.Nowitistaking

onanewlook.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.

Inthepast,theschoolherewas